~VeeBa FF~||Ye Bair Ishq||22/6 Ch15 New Update Pg55 - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago
wah rimi wah aur kya bolo main 👏👏👏 it waz a fabulous update aur haan ferrari ki motor aisey hi start karey rakhna😛😛 a big huggy for such a tremendous updated🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally he got to know the truth loved the part
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Posted: 11 years ago
I feel like giving a loong comment for you rimu!!🤗 I had tears in my eyes! The pain veeba felt touched my heart...Baldev and veera hug was very touchy... I feel like giving u a tight hug!🤗 I, from the bottom of my heart love this update!! Can't wait to read more!! Iam really looking forward to more Veeba and AanDev scenes. Btw, after reading this FF, iam loving the name aanchal😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a great b update, full of drama. While reading you could imagine the scenes happening. It was a very good reveal scene. Looking forward to some cute veeba scenes now.


Loving the fast updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnku so much all!!
Thanks muna!! u see, making some1 laugh or cry is very difficult in writing! thnku so much! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
HEY,PLS POST CHAPTER 15...DONT MAKE US WAIT ANY LONGER...AND IAM NOT IMPATEINT OR A BAD GIRL...iam nice...pls update!!!!!!!!!🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow bud...what an amazing update!!!

Loved it...I'm cannot wait to see what happens next!
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Thnkyou so much all of you i love you all!!
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Chapter 15

Baldev was standing in front of Aanchal's school.

She came running to him as soon as her class got over.

A- dev? tum yaha? mera peecha
kar rhe ho tum ?😆
Baldev's eyes were filled with tears.
She was his child. He was her father.

Baldev knelt down and cupped her face.

Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaki thodi si hai zindagi
Jagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi

aanchal was confused. but baldev was emotional. he cudn't control his tears.

Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Yeh lamha kahaan tha mera

he pulled her to him and hugged her tightly! he kissed her forhead trying to give all the love which she was devoid of.

Ab hai saamne
Ishe chhuu loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraaa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraa


Aanchal:- Dev! kya hua tumhe?😕

baldev broke the hug and smiled.😊
baldev:- kuch nai beta..! aapki mumma kaha hai?😊
aanchal pointed at the back. baldev turned to see veera who was watching all this.
baldev stood up and went to her.
baldev:- veera mai.. mai aanchal ko apne saath..
veera:- nahi!! tune aisa socha bhi kaise?? ! vo meri beti hai! sirf meri beti! samjha!
bladev:- veera meri baat toh sun...

veera dragged aanchal with her.
Baldev:- veera ruk!! veera baat sun meri.. veera!!😕

Ranvi was passing by...
he noticed this.
He immediately went to veera and took aanchal along with him to let veeba have some time to talk.

Veera:- dekh baldev! aanchal is my daughter! samjha tu!koi use mujhse alag nahi kar sakta!!😡😭
Baldev saw veera getting hyper and he gripped her shoulders tightly and pulled her towards him.
Badev:- shh!!! shhh! shaant reh bikul! veera.. mai sirf aaj ke liye use apne saath ghoomane le jaana chah raha tha.. aur tu hai ki...😕

Veera stood still.
Baldev left her and both of them sighed.
Veera didn't say a word and left.

At home, Veera was helping aanchal in doing her home work.
Aanchal:- bass mumma ho gaya.. abb mai bahar jau... mujhe dev ke saath video game khelna hai.. u know vo bohot acche games khelte hain! 😳
Veera:- aanchal.. vo...
Ratan came into the room and signaled aanchal to go out and play with a smile.
Aanchal was very happy to see ratan smile at her, she gave her a hug and went out to play.

Ratan went to Veera and sat next to her.
Veera::- beeji. aap itthe?
Ratan:- (joining her hands):- veera.. mainu maaf kar de... mujhse bohot badi galti ho gayi!
Veera( bringing her hands down):- ek hi kar rahi hain aap beeji!
Ratan:- mai kabhi teri maa nahi bann payi veera.. iss kabil bhi nahi ki tu mainu sach bata sakti thi.. mainu tujhe kya kuch nahi kaha veera... maafi ke layak hu bhi ya nahi ye nahi jaanti mai...😭

Veera:- beeji... aap meri beeji ho! aur aapnu mujhse maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai!

Ratan:- jaanti hai veera... ye pind vaale mainu mahaan kehte the.. ki maine tujhe apne ghar me jagah di...lekin tu.. tune toh.. ye jaante huye bhi ki aanchal baldev aur ananya ki bacchi hai, tune use zindagi di...😭

Veera hugged Ratan tightly and cried.

Aanchal was at baldev's house playing video games. Bansuri entered the room with some snacks.
As soon as aanchal saw her, she left whatever she was doing and hid herself behind baldev.
She was afraid of bansuri and her talks which always reminded her of her father no being there.
Bansuri felt guilty.
Bansuri:- aanchal... beta eh dekh.. mai tere waaste eh sab bana ke laayi hu.. dekh..😕

Aanchal didn't care what she was saying.
Baldev gave a taunting look to bansuri.
Baldev:- aap jao beeji.. mai khila dunga ise.
Bansuri left the tray there and went away with a sad face.


It was late night and Veera cudn't sleep. She was sitting and wondering about her life.
Suddenly she felt someone jump into her room.
Who else could it be... Baldev switched on the lights and sat on the bed.
He was in a playful mood.

Veera:- baldev!! eh ki badtameezi hai! 😡
Baldev;- abb tu meri baat sunegi hi nahi toh mai ki karu!!
Veera:- nikal jaa yaha se!
Baldev took her hands in his.
Veera:- eh ki kar raha hai?😡
Baldev:- veera.. sun.. tu .. shaadi karegi mujhse??
Veera:- GET LOST BALDEV! 😡
Baldev:- oye! mai pyaar karta hu tujhse! 😡
Veera:- bakwaas na kar baldev! I hate you! 😡
Baldev:- veera, tu purane vaale baldev nu mujhse na compare kar.. believe me inn 6 saalo ne mainu badal diya hai...😕

Veera:- I.. Hate.. You!😡 chala jaa yaha se!
Baldev pulled her a bit closer.
Baldev:- abb?😳
veera:- i hate you! 😳

Baldev pulled her even closer.
Baldev:- abb?😳
Veera:- kaha na i hate you! 😕
Baldev shifted close to her.
Baldev:- accha?😳
Veera:- hmm.. uh... kya hai! 😕
Baldev:- abb bol na...😳
Veera:- i hate you! 😕

Baldev smirked and slid his hands to hold her waist tightly and pull her closer, such that she had to place her arms on his chest to take support. His nose was brushing her forehead.

Baldev:- itni nafrat karti hai tu mujhse?☺️

Veera gasped.
Veera:- haa 😕
Baldev kissed her forhead.
Veera clutched his shirt.
Baldev smiled and reached her ear pulling her closer such that his lips were almost touching her ear. he had intense passion in his eyes while veera was trying to hide all her emotions.

badlev:- i love you...☺️

Veera closed her eyes at the sense of his heavy breath and soft lips on her skin. she was freezing, melting, sweating, all at the same time.

Baldev slowly moved to her cheek and kissed her.
Veera gripped his shirt even tighter, and finally hugged him.
Veera:- i love you too baldev! ☺️

No precap! 😈
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sorry for the late update!! there were many forces trying to stop me from updating this.. but finally i did it! pheww!!!😆
Hit like and comment if u liked it! 😛
sorry for errors!! 😕 didn't recheck it! 😕

PS:- sorry its short, i lost the original chapter to a virus! 😡
Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
luvd it... end part is awesome☺️☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeah veeba romance!! Great update, wish it was longer 😔 but any update is better than no update. Poor bansuri but she deserves it.

I love how baldev enters veeras room whenever he feels like it. Not only in the fanfics but in the show too.

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