~VeeBa FF~||Ye Bair Ishq||22/6 Ch15 New Update Pg55 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sunny303

Awesome update Rimi!!!

She loves our Sher...and so does he, but why do I get the feeling that he's going to do somethin he'll regret!?

Update soon bud!

😉 good guess sunny!! but no so soon...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: a4aarsh

ohhh rmi,u doesnt have any idea abt hw much i love 'jealous ballu' so well written👏 loved it

thnks dear 😳😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

The precap seems more Cute! Can't wait to read more!! Continue Soon Rimi :)

Thnks muna 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Awww loved it Rimi... Ballu is in love with Veera and here the icing on the cake is that Veera also has developed feelings for him... Would love to see how their passionate story develops!!!
Ballu angry over Akaash holding the shoulder was my most favorite part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

A Big Hug 🤗 and Thanks to the following for liking the previous chapter.

meena_237, shiona12, ElireEli, EVANNAPINKHEART,

Those who still don't like/comment even after they find it good...😡😡😡 i will make it MEMBER's ONLY from next time. So sign up (It's free) and read it and like it...😡
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Chapter:- 3

The next day veera was busy with getting ready since morning.
She was sitting in front of the mirror and combing hair when ranvi enterd.
Veera- haa veer jee kya hua?😳
Ranvi- beeji kab se bula rahi hai? Tera dhyaan kitthe hai?😕
Veera- vo.. Vo veer jee mai tayyar ho rahi thi.
Ranvi- kudiyaan aisi hi hoti hain ki? Tu subah se shaam tak tayyar hi huye jaa rahi hai?
Veera- veer jee mai bass abbi aati hu...😕
Ranvi- theek hai ... Chhetti kar.😆

Veera nodded.
Veera- eh ki kar rahi hu mai! Paagal toh nai ho gayi hu...😡

She got ready and wore a red salvaar.

At the party... She entered and every1 had their eyes on her. Baldev was so mesmerized.😳
She had grown into such a beaitiful girl. What a perfect body she had. What sharp features...

He sighed.😳

Veera- oye kaha kho gaya?😕
Baldev(with a smirk)- tujhme...😉

Veera felt those butterflies again.
Veera- ah...uhhmm.. Uhmmm...😕

She went away widout saying anything while baldev kept luking at her.

During the whole party there was no talking... Only baldev was luking at her.. She was blushing n cudn't make eye contact.

As the party got over, every1 left, but baldev asked Veera to Stay back.

Baldev- ranvi.. Vo veera se scul ke kuch documents ka kaam tha toh..
Ranvi- haa haa koi nai baldev... Bass tu ghar chadd dena veera nu...
Ranvi left. Veera had no idea Why she felt like running away from baldev but at the same
Tym stay close as well.

Baldev grabbed her wrist n dragged her to a lake side.
Veera- ki kar raha hai tu! Aur kaun se documents??
Baldev kept his finger on her lips.
Baldev- shhh!!! Veera...

He removed his finger and Moved his hand down to reach her hand and took it in his hands.
Veera's throat dried up.
He touched her fingers softly and interlocked his fingers with her's.
Veera had never gone through the emotions she was going through that time.

Baldev- veera...

His voice had gone so heavy and sexy... The way he wud call her name was so intense.

Baldev- maine jo tere saath kiya aaj tak... Bura bhala kaha tujhe.. Uske liye ... I m sorry.

Veera- tujhe achanak ki ho gaya hai?

Baldev- pata nahi...inne saal se hum iss pind se door ek anjaan jagah the... Alag the.. Dushman the... Fir bhi ek doosre ka sahara toh the na...
Veera- hmmm...
Baldev- abb chal... Bohot raat ho gyi hai.

He dropped her home. She waved him frm her balcony untill he left.
Veera- eh... Sab ki ho raha hai..!!😳

Veera was unable to sleep. She started surfing the net.

While surfing..
Veera:- eh ki hai?
How to know if you are in love??

She thought fr a while.
Veera- mai kyu kholo ye??
... Kholne me kya hai!!😆
She opened it.
Veera read:- you think about him all day, you dream about him... 😲You feel nervous around him.😲

Veera gasped as her symptoms matched.
She went ahead.
"you can't make eye contact with him.😲
You care for him.
You wanna be with him all time.
His touch pleases you.😲
And while reading this you were thinking about him.😲😲😲."

Veera widened her eyes and closed everything.
She went to sleep, confused and scared...


She was very cheerful n full of joy next morning...She felt unusually happy.

{ here is a song, you can listen to it here if you want.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tarWOj-RJ6E[/YOUTUBE] }

Song:-"yu toh koi gilaa nahi...
Sab kuch tha kya na tha..."


She smiled and got out of bed.

"par fir bhi ek kami si thi...
Jiska pata na tha..."


She came out of the bath and looked at the mirror...

"ye kaun mujhme chhup ke...
Mujhe dekhne lagaa.."


She recalled baldev's words.
"laal rang ne bohot acchi lagti hai tu."
She blushed.😳

"itnaa haseen pehle...
Kabhi aaina na tha..."


She danced around.

"jaane kya baat huyi...
Jaane kya baat huyi..."


After getting ready she went to meet gunjan...

Her eyes searched fr baldev, but he was nowhere. Gunjan was on the terrace drying clothes.

Veera- gunjan didi...
Gunjan- veera!! Aa jaa... Mai bass ye kapde sukha loon, fir bahar chalte hain.😊

They heard bansuri-"gunjan!! Itthe aana beta.."
Veera-aap jaiye.. Mai sukha doongi.😃
Gunjan smiled and went down.

Veera was putting up a red chunri when she saw baldev through it. Butterflies again.

She ignored him. He came to her with those intense and heavy eyes
B- veera...☺️
She didn't respond.
B- veera...
She went here and there with the clothes and he simply followed.
B- veera!!!!
V- haa bol na...🤢
B- aee veera...😳
V- bol!!!!🤢

B- i think... I love you...😳
V- accha...🤢

After 2-3 seconds she realized wht he said.

V- ki????😲😲😲.
B- pyaar karne laga hu mai tujhse...😳

Precap:- Veera is crying hard...😭
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Sorry for any errors.. hope you liked it... plzz don't forget to hit like and comment 😳
Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
what an update dear 👏👏👏

I almost visualized every scene 😳 the pull & the flirt OMG😳😳😆

loved it😛

❤️Sharmi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
aaawww..i hav no words t describe it my dear..phir bhi..chup nahi reh sakti main...😆😆

amg ur evry update is suprising me lyk anything😲...n this one...aaw. u r such a sweet heart...aaj phir se main tumhaari fan ho gayi yaar😳😃..luv u for this...❤️

"His voice had gone so heavy and sexy... The way he wud call her name was so intense."

offo the intensity with baldev calls her name..i can literally see it..😳😳

n d net surfing scene ..dat was so dreamy...n the dreamy part..was


B- veera...☺️
She didn't respond.
B- veera...
She went here and there with the clothes and he simply followed.
B- veera!!!!
V- haa bol na...🤢
B- aee veera...😳
V- bol!!!!🤢


luvng this flirty baldeva..n cant resist his intensity☺️ ..really a flying update..😳😳 👏👏

cant wait for d nxt..😲😕
Edited by princy48 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Awww princy,.. love you too sweetheart!!! 🤗
I am so happy that u felt what i wanted you to feel!!!
and next part jaldi aa jayega don't worry 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Ahan!! so ballu said ,I love u!! wow... update it soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: fary5

Ahan!! so ballu said ,I love u!! wow... update it soon!!

Yah he said it 😳

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