~VeeBa FF~||Ye Bair Ishq||22/6 Ch15 New Update Pg55 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Sounds interesting!!!
Would luv 2 read more!!
Continue soon n plz pm me!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Initial Notes:-

# This FF is a bit different from the serial ( i am sure most of u don't have a problem with that ๐Ÿคข, the show sucks right now)

# Updates can be a bit long. have patience.๐Ÿ˜›

#The FF travels a lot between past and present events. Be careful and if something troubles you then ask me.

#Romantic scenes can get intimate and the story can have mature content.

# I work for each chapter a lot. Day and night i only try to make it good enough for you all to like it. So if you like it then plzz plzz plzz lemme know. Hit liken and comment.
I am prone to getting depressed, sad and disappointed.๐Ÿ˜ณ

# Be patient with my errors. I am THE error queen. ๐Ÿ˜ณ



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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Dark night, cold breezy wind, and Veera (grown up)
is sitting near a building. In large letters it's written "Krishi vidyalaya".
She is sitting and looking at the stars, her eyes were welling up.

A girl (5 yrs old) comes running to her.
Veera:- aanchal? Tu itthe ki kar rahi hai?๐Ÿ˜•
Anchal- mainu na thandi havaa khaani hai.!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Veera- eh koi samay hi havaa khaane ka? Inni thandi hai aur tu bahar baith ke havaa khaana chahti hai? Thand lag gayi toh?

Aanchal- Aap bhi toh bahar baithi ho.. Aapko thandh lag gyi toh??๐Ÿ˜ณ
Veera- badmaash! Chal hurr! Aa rai hu mai...๐Ÿ˜†

Veera giggles as Aanchal runs away, ranvi bumps into her on the way and gives her a kiss then he goes to Veera.
Ranvi- Tu hass rahi hai?? hasaa gayi na tenu kudi??
Veera nodded
Ranvi:- iski aankhe... Bilkul iske papa pe gyi hain.. Hai na veera?๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Veera smiles๐Ÿ˜Š
But soon her smile fades away. She turns her face back to the sky.
Ranvi feels bad about what he said.

*flashback*
Years back when veera was a kid.




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Ranvi was happy; but in tears. His veera was leaving him. He was standing in front of her new school in Delhi and she was going inside. He was so sad, he couldn't even wave her properly.

She was walking ahead but looking back at her veer jee with tears in her eyes.๐Ÿ˜ญ

Soon she was inside and alone.
She was walking in the corridors towards her class when a boy blocked her way.

Veera- baldevv??๐Ÿ˜ก
Baldev (with a smirk)- abb tere veer jee nai aane vaale tujhe bachaane!๐Ÿ˜ˆ
Veera- kisse? Tujhse bachaane?๐Ÿ˜†Khotya! Tujhse nipatne ko toh mere shoes hi kaafi hai! Samjha!

And she pressed his foot with her shoes. He screamed and she walked away giving him cold looks.

Few days passed.

It was lunch time and veera was sitting alone thinking about ranvi.
Tears were rolling down her face.๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

A group of boys came there and started teasing her.

Boy1- ohoo!! Dekho toh.. eh ladki.. Ro kyu rai hai?
Hahahhahahahahah!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Boy2- chalo yaar! Akela chhodo use.. Hostel me rehne aayi hai. Gaaon se hai na...
Hahahahahhahahaha!!!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Boy1- gaaon me kisi ne aisa kiya kya?

And he pulled her plaits.
Veera screamed but did not resist as she was feeling too weak.
He tried to do it again but another boy stepped in and held his collar.
He was baldev.

Baldev- eh ki karr raha tha tu? Haan?๐Ÿ˜ก
Boy1- tu kaun hai be!? Chhodd mujhe!!๐Ÿ˜ก

Few kids separated them.
Baldev- door rahiyo usse. Mere pind di hai vo! Samjha!๐Ÿ˜ก
Boy1:- mai mam ko bata doonga! Tune mujhe maara kaise?!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก
Baldev- tune veera ke baal kaise kheeche????๐Ÿ˜ก

A crowd of children gathered.
Boy 3:- kya kar rahe ho vivek.? Tumhe mam ne bulaaya hai.๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Boy1(vivek):- aaj tu bach gaya๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก .. Aur teri yeh dost bhi๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก...Lekin kab tak bachegi????

Every1 left except boy3.

Veera looked at baldev in anger.
Veera- mai sambhaal leti. Tenu ki jaroorat thi maara peeti karne ki? Mam ko pata chal gaya toh?

Baldev- theek hai meri maa! Abb se bachaane nahi aaonga!๐Ÿคข
Boy3- hello. My name is Aakash!๐Ÿ˜Š
Baldev- toh mai ki karu??๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

And baldev fussed away.

Aakash went to veera and sat next to her.
Veera- mai veera hoon. Aur vo baldev hai.๐Ÿ˜Š

On the other hand, baldev went to his newly found chamchaas, balvindar and jagdeesh.
Baldvindar- Bhai tu uss ladki ke liye uss vivek se lada?๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Here;
Aakash:- tum dono toh hamesha ladte ho? Aaj vo tumhe bachaane kyu aaya?
Veera:- kyuki use lagta hai ki...

There;
Baldev- oye meri pind di kudiyo ki chotti kheechna da hakk sirf mainu hai! Samjha!๐Ÿ˜Ž

At school annual day rehearsals.

Teacher:- ok students abb hum rehearsals shuru karenge ok! I want all the pairs to stand together!

" tu mujhe chain se jeene degiii!?"๐Ÿ˜ก
"apna muh band rakh samjha!! Mai nai kar rahi ye sab!"๐Ÿ˜ก

Teacher- arre arre aree, Veera, Baldev, ye kya kar rahe ho tum log?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Baldev- mam, mai iss bhootni ke saath dance nai karoonga.๐Ÿ˜”
Veera- mai bhi iss bandar ke saath dance nahi karoongi!!๐Ÿค”

Teacher:- lekin tum dono ko hi pair kiya gaya hai. I told u all na, jinke naam ki chits niklegi unhe saath hi perform karna hai? Tum logo ko change kiya toh abhi 2-4 aur students ladna chalu ho jayenge!

VeeBa- but mam!!๐Ÿฅบ
Teacher:- betaa... Tum dono ki jodi abb ban gayi hai.! Final.(thinks) God.. Kaha se in dono ki jodi bana di aapne!!

VeeBa exchanged cold looks and agreed.

Time changed but our VeeBa didn't.

A teen boy (Aakash) came running to his teacher.
Aakash:- mam mam mam!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Teacher:- what happened???๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Aakash:- mam... They.. They..๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Teacher:- THEY?? AGAIN??๐Ÿ˜ฒ

She hit her head with her palm! She ran down to the rehearsal hall...
A beautiful girl turned around while dancing, A charming boy took her in his arms...
Teacher:- oh no!!
And the boy dropped her on the stage.
The gorgeous teen girl n the handsome boy were none other than VeeBa.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Veera- khotyaaa!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก
Baldev- hahahhahahaha๐Ÿ˜†
Balvindar and jagdeesh joined him too.
Veera- mai tera khoon pee jaaongi baldev!!
Teacher- stop it!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Aakash went to pick up veera.

Aakash- tum theek toh ho na?
Veera noded.

Baldev- mam, mujhe iss...

Teacher- i know! Lekin mai kuch nai karr sakti. And vaise bhi, tum dono hamesha final day itna accha perform karte ho ki the whole school loves you both.

VeeBa give killer looks to each other... Every1 there rolls their eyes...

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Precap:-

Bladev and veera (teens) outside the gurudwara in preetampura.
Veera rolls her eyes and turns around to leave, but baldev pulls her back to him.
Baldev (in a whisper tone)- Veera, kyu tu mujhse inna door bhaagti hai?? inni nafrat kyu veera?? mainu accha nai lagta...
Veera is shocked.
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Plzz like and comment if u liked it... more likes more comments.. faster updates... ๐Ÿ˜‰
Pm list, index etc. on page 1

Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Romantic and with mature contents ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒmy kinda of story ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ Hey dear will be waiting for your update sweety with baited breath ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: tamzin43

Romantic and with mature contents ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒmy kinda of story ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ Hey dear will be waiting for your update sweety with baited breath ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿ˜† bass karr rahi hu update.. but u'll have to wait for THOSE scenes ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† its an FF na!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
pm me sanjanatamannah.loved your update!!!!!!!!!your talented.your absolutely fabulous!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Awesome yaar!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ beautifully written!!!waiting to read more so update soon!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Hahaha...an amazing update rimi๐Ÿ˜ƒ..n d precap..oh I'm waitin 4 it...Yaar..intense baldev๐Ÿ˜ณ..he is my fav ...well written ..thanks a lot for considering d idea..n giving it in a wonderful way ..love ya..๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Edited by princy48 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Omg... it was awesome Rimi... Happy to read ur stories once again!!! It was wonderful yaar... No words to explain... Will wait for the intense Baldev and Veera scenes... Actually I already feel like reading it... It was that good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: ..RiMjHiM..

๐Ÿ˜† bass karr rahi hu update.. but u'll have to wait for THOSE scenes ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† its an FF na!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ


Toh phir kaya howa tum asi story liku jismeh asa kuch hai ๐Ÿ˜†

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