~VeeBa FF~||Ye Bair Ishq||22/6 Ch15 New Update Pg55 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: TasrinS

Wow ...I mean the whole update is just perfact...

Eagerly waiting for the next...do update soon nd thanks for pm.
Loved it...

thnkie thnkie 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: manishasatpathy

amazing update
and plzz dont tell me baldev ne ye sb koi badle ke liye kiya hai and that is why veera is crying ballu aisa nhi hai

oh dear... ballu khud doesn't know wo kya karr raha hai 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: monumolu

Awww such a cute update rims... I love this intense baldeva. He is so freaking adorable and he confessed his love for her, I really wish the serial was half romantic as your os yaar

That's so sweet of u dear... thnku so much!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

Oh my even i can visualize the parts!! Love the last part of the chapter! Love baldev's quick confession!! Btw, why is veera crying i wanna know so hurry and continue!

thnks muna 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
He said it...yay!!!
Looking forward to her finally admitting it too:)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sunny303

He said it...yay!!!
Looking forward to her finally admitting it too:)))

Thnks sunny!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
The lake scene was tooo romantic 😳
kudos rimi, it was awesome, and Baldev's confession??
OMG 😊
waiting for the next chap...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Krsna09

The lake scene was tooo romantic 😳
kudos rimi, it was awesome, and Baldev's confession??
OMG 😊
waiting for the next chap...

Thnku so much priyu 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Thank you and a Big Big Big vaala hug🤗 for the following people for liking the previous chapter...😳
surprise!!! Double Update Today 😃


Chapter-4

Veera had no words.
Before she cud run away due to shyness. Baldev grabbed her by her waist.
Veera had no option but to hug him back...

As they heard gunjan come,
They broke apart and veera ran away. And before getting away she said- me too...
Baldev smirked.😉

Days passed and these love birds shared the best of time with each other.
Veera had never been so happy in her life before.
Everything was going perfect in her life.

The day of baldev and veera's last day in preetampura was just one night away.

They got admsn in the same college. They packed up their things and although both were sad to leave every1 in preetampura, they were equally excited for the first day of their new life in college.

That night she went to meet baldev.
She knocked on his room door.
Baldev- haa aaja veera.
Veera- aaj kal tu baat nai karta mujhse ?
Baldev- matlab??
Veera- tu..call bhi nai karta..aur mere calls bhi utha nahi raha..
Baldev- chhadd oye!!🤢

Veera- tu aisa kyu keh raha hai??
Baldev- sahi keh raha hu.
Veera- tu... Tu mujhse pyaar karta hai na?
Baldev- hahahahahah!!🤣 Paagal. Mai ... Aur tujhse?? What a joke!!😆
Veera- fir vo sab...
Baldev- jhooth tha.! Abb teri aur meri kabhi bann sakti hai kya??
Aur tu ye matt bol ki tu serious ho gayi thi.

Veera- jhooth tha?😲

Baldev- yaad hai tune kaise meri farewell party barbaad ki thi... Prank tha bass...🤢

Veera- tune inna badaa dhokha diya mujhe baldev!??😲

Baldev- tu ye kya pyaar vyaar Ko seriously le rahi hai.. Prank
Tha na..!! Aur mai bhi teri tarah sabke saamne tera mazaak banaane vaala tha.. lekin... socha vo kuch zyaada ho jaata...

Veera- mazaak hota hai ye sab baldev!!!😡
Baldev- dekh.. Iss umar me kisi ko sachha pyaar hota hai kya?
Veera- bass kar baldev...!! 😡Tere paas dil hai hi nahi... Tu kya samjhega!! Mai hi paagal thi.. Jo tere baato me aa gyi... Tu kabhi kisi se pyaar kar hi nahi sakta!😡😭
Baldev- veera!! Zabaan sambhaaal ke!😡

Her eyes were full of pain and anger.

How could she not see, baldev was playing with her emotions all the time. He did this only as prank?

Veera:- tujhe kabhi kisi ka pyaar naseeb nahi hoga baldev! Kisi ka pyaat mil hi nahi sakta tujhe!!😭

She stormed out of the room. Baldev felt bad for her but he was always good at overshadowing his emotions for her. He always thought she was his enemy and all he had to do with her was fight!
But why did he feel bad for her? His plan was to ditch her in-front of everyone but then why did he abruptly finish his plan??Finally,He avoided the thought all together.

Veera was shattered. For her this love had gone very far...She was finding it so difficult to believe all this...
Baldev was her first love and she had faced such a great shock with it...She didn't talk to any1 but aakash who consoled her.
Even Ranvi was unable to find out the matter.

Finally in her new college, she tried to be back to life, with her true friend Aakash.

Aakash agreed to go with Veera on the fresher's night as well.


But.. Who knew the future of VeeBa's relation?


When Baldev came to know about veera going with Aakash,he tried to contact her but she was furious n didn't even notice his existence.

Aakash was always at her protection and baldev just cudn't bear it!

Baldev was with friends in the garden.

Baldev- samajhti kya hai apne aap ko!! Mujhse koi pyaar nahi kar sakta? Mujhse!!!😡
Jaggi:- bhai... Aapko kya matlab hai usse abb!😕
Baldev:- mai use dikha doonga.. Ki mujhse bhi koi pyaar kar sakta hai... Harr ladki Uske jaisi nahi hoti!! Akdoo.!!😡
Billa:- bhai.. Aapse pyaar karti toh thi na veera.. Aapne hi toh..

Baldev:- chup!! Vo sab prank tha! Samjha! Baldlaa toh lena tha na!😡

Billa;- kuch zyaada toh nai ho gaya?😕
Baldev- chup reh!!😡
He was really confused. His heart was different from his mind.. his mind was full of anger, and negative feelings for her...

Just then he saw a beautiful girl come to him.

Baldev- yes?😊
Girl- hi, uhmm... Vo professor sharma tumhe kisi kaam se bula rahe hain...😊
Baldev- uhmm haa haa... mai aa raha hu...Chalo.

He went with her.

Baldev- pata hai mujhe.. Zaroor project ke baare me poochne ko bulaaya hoga... Khadoos kahi ka..😡

Girl laughed.😆

After his talks with the professor, he came out with the girl.

Baldev- accha mai chalta hu fir... Btw i am baldev..😊
Girl:- i know... I am ananya... Ananya sharma.😊
Baldev- tum?? Professor ki beti ho!😲
Ananya:- haa khadoos ki beti hu..!😆
Baldev- sorry vo mujhe nai pata tha...😕
Ananya:- its ok...😆

Baldev saw veera with aakash sitting on a bench and discussing something. His jealousy was beyond the limits... but he controlled it.
Baldev :- tum mere saath fresher's night pe chalogi Ananya?
Ananya:- oh why not... Zaroor..😳
Baldev looked at veera and smirked.
He had no idea that he was actually doing all this out of his jealously, his insecurity etc.

Veera and Aakash were talking abt the freshers night when veera saw ananya come to her.

Veera- aa gayi meri room-mate.
Aakash:- kaun?
Veera- Ananya ...😊

Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Chapter-5
{Note:- Check Chapter-1; we were in a flashback.}
**Flashback ends.**
Present.

Veera- aanchal!! Jaldi karr.. School ko late ho raha hai na!!!

Anchal comes running to her.
Aanchal- i m ready...
Veera- haa chal... Jaa.. Jaldi jaa... Bus aa gayi hai.
Ananya kisses veera and runs away.
Ranvi- Veera vo ...aanchal ko hum bahar bhej de? Padhai ke vaaste?
Veera- nai veer jee... Yaha ke schools abb acche ho gaye hain. Aap jabse sarpanch bane ho..Sab changa hai.. Fir ki zaroorat.

Ratan came there.

Ratan- sahi keh rahi hai veera. Aur vaise bhi... Ranvi... Tune kya
Theka le rakha... Logo ke paap ko apna pet kaat kaat ke padhaane ka?

Ranvi:- beeji!! Ye aap ki keh rahi hain?? Aanchal veera ki beti hai!!
Ratan:- haa ... Veera bhi toh apni asli maa pe hi gayi hai na.. Abb uski beti bhi kahi kisi din...

Veera- beeji plzz.. Aanchal ke baare me aisa matt kahiye! Plz

Ratan- khud aisi giri huyi harkat karne me.. Teri maa ko sharam
Aayi thi? Nahi! Tujhe bhi vaisi hi harkat karte huye sharam aayi thi!? Nahi na!!

Ranvi:- veera baldev se pyaar karti thi beeji... Aanchal paap nahi hai.. Sirf pyaar hai.

Ratan went away in anger.


At night. Veera is standing on the balcony and seeing the stars.

Veera:- apni beti ke liye.. Tum aaj kyu nahi ho yaha!!😭😭

She cries. Anchal comes running to her.

Aanchal:- mujhe neend nai aa rai hai mumma..
Veera- accha... Lori sunaaon?😊
Aanchal- haa!!!😃😃
Veera takes her to the bed.
Veera
-
Chandaniya chup jaana re
Chan bhar ko luk jaana re
Neendiya aankhon mein aaye
Bitiya meri so jaaye
Hmm...

Neendiya aankhon mein aaye
Bitiya meri so jaaye
Leke godh mein sulaaun
Gaaun raat bhar sunaaun
Main lori lori

Ho main lori lori

Annchal sleeps off.

Veera- sote huye.. Bilkul tumhaare jaisi dikhti hai baldev...😭

Strong winds blow, and touch her cheeks. She felt it was baldev who was touching her soft cheeks. she cried harder.

"sau.. Dard hain...
Sau... Raahate...
Sab milaa dilnashee...
Ek tu hi nahii..."


Tears roll down her face.

"rukhi sukhi si ye hawaa
Aur sookhe patte ki tarah..
Sheher ki sadko pe. Mak
Laavaris udtaa hua..
Sau raaste
Par teri raah nahi..."


Veera weeps...😭😭😭.
Veera:- baldeevvv!!!!!😭😭

"sau.. Dard hain...
Sau... Raahate...
Sab milaa dilnashee...
Ek tu hi nahii..."

Veera- vaapas aao baldev!! ...(screams)Kaayar!!!😭

Ranvi sees this from his hiding... he was helpless... he couldn't do anything.
She cries like a small baby for Baldev. She is angry at him. She hates him. But her hidden love for him is always in-front of her eyes ... Aanchal.

*flashback*
At the fresher's party...
Baldev was with frnds...
Baldev- yaar billa.. Ye veera ne aaj kuch zyaada short skirt nai pehen lee??
Billa- bhai paglaa gaye ho kya?? Vo Ananya hai.. Veera ne toh kya kamaal ka salvaar suit pehna hai.😃
Jaggi:- koi badi baat nahi hai.. Bhai ko toh aaj kal veera hi veera dikhti hai..😆
Baldev- chup karr...!! Ananya aa rahi hai!

Ananya:- dev, tum mere liye drink le aaoge?😊
Baldev- haa haa abhi laaya...😊
He goes to the drink corner.
Baldev:- oye!! Two half apple
juice plz.!! Aur saath me ek extra glass dena.
Jaggu:- bhai? Ye kya matlab?😕
Baldev:- gadhe! Do half, ek full se zyaada hote hain! Samjha!!

Jaggi made a weird face.😕
Baldev went to ananya and gave the drink to her.
Ananya loved his smile so much. He was so caring towards her. Although baldev was always trying to make veera jealous, but ananya cudn't notice it.

There was a couple dance. So Veera and Aakash paired up.
Whenever veera and aakash were close, he tried to be even closer to ananya. Veera saw this ... it pinched her.. but she didn't respond.

Baldev went to veera when she was alone.
B- veera... Tera aur aakash ka kuch chal raha hai kya?😡
V- chala jaa yaha se! Hota kaun hai tu mujhse ye savaal karne vAla??🤢
B- aur vo aakash kaun hota hai?? Tere se inna chipak chipak
Ke dance karne vaala.😡
V- tujhe inna kya fark padd raha hai?? Haan??😡
B- mujhe koi farak nai padd raha hai! Mai akela thodi hu!! Ananya hai mere saath!
V- ananya meri dost hai.. Usse door reh!!
Ananya and aakash came there.
Aakash- bass bass!! Ladai band karo tum log.
Baldev- tu kaun hota hai beech me bakwaas karne vaala??😡
Ananya:- dev.. Plzz...
Baldev took ananya away in anger.

After the party.
Ananya n baldev were walking.
Ananya:- dev.. I really like u.😊
baldev:- me too...😊
Ananya gave him a tight hug. He saw that veera was watching this so he hugged her back.
Veera walked away with no expression!!

Precap:- VeeBa dance on Kahi toh hogi vo...
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This is it guyz.. how was it?? tell me...😳 "Like button" is waiting for you...😃!!!!!
And i am going out of station for work so it will take time for the next update.. plzz forgive me...😭😭
Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago

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