JAJ SS Dil Kya karein *part 11,Pg-34* updated!! *new part up* - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Priyam 🤗

Ty for explaining. Hehe ik I never watched it so I end up with Qs. 😆
Hope I'm nt testing ur patience.😆 I hv no problem understanding the story other than Qs I asked u before.
Yup my parents moved here long time back.
oh you watched SBS glad u enjoyed it.
Ur exams in April? Mine too.
Had mid terms, then I week off for Reading week. Now back to school.
Cool looking forward to next weekend for next ch. 😃😎



Hey nope! u r not testing my patience.. I love adore such comments for my writing⭐️ I mean ithne long comments milna, it makes the writer happy. N also its way of interacting, so I dont mind as I love making new friends. So yes u r my new friend here🤗

yeah my year end exams actually in april followed by some entrance tests! I need to make it to a good Uni.. so need to put more efforts on that note😳 N hmm NRI, it might be cool living life there in foreign I mean places in US are so cool n lovable n so very tidy! I love them😛 All the best for ur exams.. will hopefully update soon, may be tomorrow!⭐️
n you r welcome.. :) need not thank me for everything! Have a nicee weekend😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey guys!

might update tomorrow! be ready... n have a lovely weekend... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
net crashed, heavy rain today.. will update tomorrow if time permits :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Priyam-

net crashed, heavy rain today.. will update tomorrow if time permits :)

wjere do u live priya?enjoying heavy rain na
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Shamoo--

wjere do u live priya?enjoying heavy rain na



yea unseasonal rain shama... I live in hyderabad, India😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Priyam-



yea unseasonal rain shama... I live in hyderabad, India😊

oh me dubai,uae
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ohh wow... so dubai is ur proper? I mean u r born there? jus asking
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Posted: 11 years ago
Priyam 🤗 ur mine too. I love ur updates so cheerful.
well ya here neat but there r loads of things that can be dirty. Same goes for USA. 😆 Of course in movies they'll show neat and tidy places na.
ya i won't stop asking Qs then. Teacher ji. *sticking tongue out*
I was and am busy with celebration. i was thinking i might miss ur update. But it hasn't happen yet. 😎 ok will wait for you.
Wishing you all d best for preparation for all that you like to do.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Priyam 🤗 ur mine too. I love ur updates so cheerful.
well ya here neat but there r loads of things that can be dirty. Same goes for USA. 😆 Of course in movies they'll show neat and tidy places na.
ya i won't stop asking Qs then. Teacher ji. *sticking tongue out*
I was and am busy with celebration. i was thinking i might miss ur update. But it hasn't happen yet. 😎 ok will wait for you.
Wishing you all d best for preparation for all that you like to do.



Hey Athi.. 🤗thank you! thanks for all the love n appreciation! I'm so glad, I dont have words seriously, I love it when my buddies say they enjoy reading my fics.. feeling blessed😳⭐️ thanks and all the best to u too in ur career n everything!⭐️
ya never been to US, but I guess I might do my MS next year there.. dunno dad's thoughts😆 ya update is ready yesterday, it rained here a lott in hyd n I caught cold, I easily get caught.. get effected by seasonal changes🥱😆 Anyways I hope u enjoy this update.. Have a gala time dear!😊🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

~Dil Kya Karein~

Part 10


"Humara agla kadam kya hoga?" Jhonny asks while moving out of Sghizo's place.

"Angel Jinn ko dhoodhna.."
Jeannie says with a shrug.

"Aur kya kar sakte hai hum. Afternoon tak office mei kaam niptaa dete hai. Uss k baad hum Jinn Land k liye ravaana honge.."
Shizo explains the plan.

"Good idea.."
Jhonny agrees.

"Kaise jayenge hum. Angel jinn k baare mein kaun bataayega waha? Didu ka kya hoga? Agar unhe kuch hogaya tho- Didu k bina kaise hoga Shizo.."

"Hojayega Jeannie hosla rakho.. Jia ko kuch nahi hoga"


The gang reluctantly vanish from the spot to reach PA office.

~ PA office

Jhonny goes to bid good bye to Priya. Now that the joint project ended he would miss working with her.

"Hello Suman ji.."

"Hi Jhonny. Kaise aana hua? Waise- humara project successfully khatm hua. Jald hi iss joint venture k staff recruit honge. Separate office banayi jayegi. I'm so happy. Par.. Humara kaam tho yahi khatm hua.."

She smiles at him, her smile replaced by a frown at the end.

"Haan suman ji. It was a pleasure working with you.."

"Same here Jhonny..." (smiles)

"Uh- Suman ji... ab yaha kaam khatm hogaya tho. Kal se- I mean main kabhi aap se milne aasakta hu na?"

"Nahi.."


Jhonny makes a sad face.

"Arey mera matlab roz mil sakte ho Jhonny..."


Both smile widely. Priya goes on.

"Sach mei Jhonny, tum mere sab se achhe aur sacche dost ho. Aur mere sab se acche dost jo mera humesha saat deta hai, jise meri ithni parwaa hai, ussey main tumhe kaise kho sakti hu? Mera bas chale tho main humesha tumhe baandh k rakhungi apne paas- uh.. I mean.."

"Ek dost ki tara.. I know. Thank you Suman ji.."


He smiles. She smiles back, happy that he'd not let her feel embarrassed not for a moment even.

"Agar main issee tara tumhare saat rahi na, ek din main bhi tumhare jaise banjaungi.." She laughs.

"yeh tho accha hai na, aap bhi dabanng banjayengi. Ek dum meri tarah..."
he laughs as well.

His phone buzzes. Its Shizo.

"Haan Shizo. Conference room.. yeah main aajaunga ek ghante mei. Wahi se nikalte hai.. bye!"

"Kya hua Jhonny?"

"uh- kuch nahi."

"Pareshaan lag rahe ho bolo na.."


"Suman ji humara ek dost hai bohot hi khaas dost. Hum ne unse waada kiya hai ki unki musibat ka saamna, hum unke saat milke karenge. Ab woh waqt aagaya hai Suman ji ki.. uss musibat ka saamna kiya jaaye."

"Kya kya keh rahe ho tum.."

"Aap nahi samjhengi.."

"Mujhe nahi bataaoge? main bhi madad karna chahti hu.."

"Suman ji hum kaise bataaye yeh bohot khatarnaak hai.."

"Come on Jhonny tum meri ithni madad karte ho. tho kya main ithna nahi kar sakti? Bolo na.."


"baat ko samjiye.. aap ki jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai waha-"


His phone buzzes again. He reads Shizo's message.

'Jaldi aajao. Kuch baat karni hai..'


"Suman ji. Hum chalte hai.."


She huffs n pouts. He decides to tell her the truth.

"Sumanji lagta hai humare aapko sach bataane ka waqt aagaya hai.."
"Kya? kaun sa sach?"

"Hum woh nahi hai jo aap sochti hai.."

"kya matlab.."

"hume kuch karna aata hai.."

"Kya?"

"Jadoo.."


"I know. Baaton ka jaadugar ho tum! Acchi baatein banaa lete ho.."

"I'm serious.. Aap jo chahti hai, woh main kar sakta hu. Apni jaadu se. Yu chutki mei.. dekhiye.."

He vanishes and appears again in front of her. She is dazed n a little... scared?

"Yeh.. kaise.."

"Kyu ki main ek Jinn hu.."

"Jinn?"

"Jinn LAnd humari rehne ki jagah hai. waha bohot saare jin-jeannie hai. yaha ki population ki tarah. Aur kuch aise log bhi hai, jo bohot bure hai. Aise bure jinn ka saamna karne k liye humari shaktiyan kaafi nahi hai. JAb hum khud ki raksha nahi karpayenge tho aapko kaise le jaa sakte hai?"


there is a brief silence.

"yeh sach hum kisi ko nahi bataa sakte kyu ki kya pata insaan iss baat ka batangad banaade? yeh baat humne sirf aapko bataaya kyu ki aap humari sab se acchi dost hai. Aur hum aap se kuch nahi chupaana chahte. Ab yeh dosti nibhayengi ya nahi, yeh aapki marzi.."


More silence.

"tum insaan ho ya jinn. Tum mereliye humesha Jhonny rahoge.. "

"Matlab aap humari dosti nahi todengi.."

"Maine aisa kab kaha.."

"O Jinn Lord! thank you Sumanji.."


He engulfs hugs her in a huge dabanng hug. She chuckles when he releases her.

"Uh mera secret.."

"Dont worry. Main kisi ko nahi bataaungi ki tum asal mei kya ho.."

"So sweet of you. Filhaal k liye hume jaana hoga Sumanji.. See you!'"


He leaves her cabin that smile still wide on his lips.
~
Conference room

"Arey yahi pe bulaaya Shizo ne.."

Jhonny is looking around when he receives Shizo's message.

'Sorry dude. Bas kuch aakhri kaam rehgaye. Main aur Jeannu Boss k yaha fas gaye. Thoda wait karo..'


He waits there. The door opens revealing Priya smiling aodringly at him.

"Jhonny.. !"


Is she ongling him? Why?

"Suman ji aap yaha?"

"Jhonny. busy tho nahi ho na?"

"Uh nahi.. kahiye."

" Jinn Land jaane se pehle hum coffee tho pea sakte hai na? Chalo na.."
"haan haan kyu nahi.."


She drags him to cafeteria. After much prodding Jhonny gives up and agrees to take her to Jinn Land. Just for a short while.

"thik hai, bas ek Jinn Land ki ek jhalak.. hum jaldi wapis aajayenge. Fir Shizo k saat milkar mujhe Angel Jinn k paas jaana hai.."

"thanks so much Jhonny.."

~ Vicky's cabin

There Vicky in his cabin is worried for Jeannie. Why is he missing her so much? She has always been his best friend. But why is that he can't see her with that chineese jinn? Why is that he misses her so much, still feels she's close to his heart? Did he love her? May be yes. He does..

"Jeannie.. main tumhe nahi kho sakta. Kyu ki- mujhe thoda-thoda ehsaas ho raha hai, ki kyu.."


~
Later that afternoon


The gang meet in the conference room.

"Mera evil detector laal hogaya hai.. isska mulab khatraa aaspaas hai..."

"Mera bhi laal hogaya hai.."

"Mera bhi.."


The gang notice that detector locket is now red.

"Iss ka matlab khatra iss office mei hai.." Jeannie concludes.

"hum usey dhoondhenge kaise?"
Shizo wonders.

"Shayad mujhe pata hai.. ki khatra kaun hai. Kiss roop mei hai!"
Jhonny exclaims.

Shizo, Jeannie are shocked.

Few minutes later~

Priya enters with a smile. Jhonny smiles back. He does a magic that freezes her in her spot. Jailor from Jinn Land appears behind.

"Mujhe lagaa tha. Ki tum meri dost Sumanji nahi ho. Mujhe tum pe cafeteria mei hi shak hogaya tha.. tumhe kya lagaa tum hume rok logi?"

"Aur Johnny ne mujhe waqt pe aagha kiya. Iss ka asli roop saamne aajaye.."
Jeannie does magic.

All are stunned to see Jwala.

"Bewakuf jinn log.. tumhe kya laga? Tum Angel jin tak pohochoge? Angel jinn tak pohochna tumhare bas ki baat nahi. Tum ne mujhe rok liya. PAr Jinn JAffru Jalal ko rok nahi paaoge! Sab maroge. Sab mitoge!"


Then evil Jwala is bound by magic, covered completely in black clothes n taken into custody by Jailor saab.

The gang breath a sigh of relief. Jeannie panics...

"Guys.. asli priya kaha hai.."

The gang uses magic to trace out Priya. As Jhonny pushes open the door to the store room in the cellar, he is crushed by Priya in a tight hug.

"I'm sorry.. I'm so sorry Jhonny. Woh main nahi thi. Woh- woh mere cabin mei aayi. Aur meri jaisi bangayi. Woh kaha hai woh! Aur tum- tum asli Jhonny ho na.."


She pushes him away getting scared but he hugs her again calming her down.

"Main asli Jhonny hu Suman ji relax. Jwala jaa chuki hai.."


There's a loud noise.

"Woh mujhe bhook lagi hai.."
Priya mumbles releasing Jhonny.

The gang laugh.

"Woh aap k pet ki awaaz hai?"
Jhonny laughs hard.

"Mazak band karo.. pehle kuch khilaao mujhe.."

"guys jadoo se cafeteria pohoch jaate hai. Wohi aagey ki plans banaayenge.."
Jeannie suggests.

Jeannie does magic. Priya is awestruck as all of them vanish from the store room and arrive at the cafeteria.

"Ek minute.. matlab Jeannie tum bhi.. jaadoo kar sakti ho?"

"Aur main bhi.."


Shizo smiles.

They have some snacks n chat a bit.

"That's it guys... tho Jin Land jane k liye tayyar?" Jeannie asks them while getting up.

"Tayyar!"
everyone including Priya shout a yes!

Wait? What makes Priya think she can go on this adventurous trip?😆
~~~~

Next PArt-
The jadooi gang + Priya set off towards Angel Jinn. Vicky too tags along. Adventure begins.
Khabri Jinn says no one can remember way to reach Angel Jinn.. So how will the gang reach the place?? Stay tuned!


sorry for spel errors dint check...

Sumi, Athi, Affs, Shama.. as usual huge thanks to u all!! LOve ya All,.. mmmuaahhh!❤️ Hope u like this part as well... 😊I should have made this cliffhanger 😛😆
Edited by -Priyam- - 11 years ago

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