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Posted: 11 years ago
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Priceless gift
It is based on Yesterday's episode's scene where Baldev gives gift to Veera.

Baldev:Hey Veera sherni...I have brought a gift for you.
Veera couldn't believe it:Gift?For me?
B:Why are you so shocked?Do you think that I a not capable enough to gift you?
V:No no...nothing like that Baldev.I am just excited.
B:Really?Then open my gift and see.
He gave a wrapped gift.

With excitement Veera tried to open it.
Baldev was becoming impatient.
B:Why are you taking so much of time?You are opening slowly as if the gift wrapper would feel pain.Give it to me.I will open it for you.
Veera murmered:The person who gave the gift itself is opening it.Very funny.
Baldev took it from her and tore it to open it.
Veera opened her mouth in 'o' shape.
V:You tore it?
B:So what?It's just a paper.Not the actual gift.
He took out the gift.
Veera couldn't believe her eyes.
They were tools to repair bike.

V:What is this?
B:How is my gift?You liked it?I am sure that you are impressed with my gift selection.When you have these tools you don't have to worry about your bike.
Veera suppressed her laughter.
She took it back from Baldev.
He smiled happily and confidently.
V:Ok I am going.
B:Bye.
Veera walked away.

While driving the bike she thought of the gift scene and laughed.
V:This Baldev is so funny.Do anyone gift such tools to a girl?He is crazy.
Suddenly her bike got stopped.She tried to start it again.
V:Oh!What happened to this bike?Now what will I do?
Suddenly Veera was reminded of the tools Baldev gifted her.
With a smile she took the tools and repaired the bike by herself.
V:If I didn't have these tools with me now I would have suffered as there is no work shop near by.
Suddenly she remembered Baldev.She smiled.
V:When Baldev gifted me these tools I made fun of him.I found him crazy.But actually his gift helped me today.You made my day today Baldev.I need to thank him now.
Veera drove to Baldev.
Baldev was stunned to see her back.
B:You came back?Why?
V:I had to come back.Because...
B:Because...
V:Because when I was on the way I realized that I had forgotten to say 'thank you' to you.Thank you Baldev.I really loved your gift.No one else can give me such a wonderful gift.
Baldev smiled feeling that he was on cloud 9.
V:Baldev...when I came to know that my beeji and my veerji are not my own blood first I was shattered.That time you helped me to control my emotions.The support and comfort you gave me cannot be explained.You cannot understand what you did to me by consoling me.
Unknowingly Baldev became emotional:Why are you talking about that now Veera?
Veera just smiled simply.
V:Baldev...Today you gave me a gift;the price of which you are not aware of.
B:I know it's price Veera.I only paid it's money.
V:No Baldev.I didn't mean that.What I meant is...while giving me the gift you didn't know by gifting me what a big help you were doing to me and while receiving the gift I didn't know that I was receiving a priceless gift from you.

Baldev stared at her in confusion.
B:I don't understand anything Veera.
Veera looked at him emotionally.
V:What I meant is...today once again Rabbji made me realize that you are a priceless gift by him.Other than my Veerji you are the one who gave me solace.Once again I realized that you are also a part of my life.An inevitable part.

Baldev was numb.He didn't know how to react.
Both of them looked at each other silently...A long silence...but their silence spoke a lot about their hidden affection towards each other.
A very emotional eye lock...
Veera broke the eye lock.
V:Ok Baldev.Bye.I am already late.
Baldev simply nodded as he was still in shock.
Veera walked away.Baldev kept looking at her silently.

Baldev recollected the words she uttered to him...He got the flashes of more hidden words he saw in her lovely eyes.Slowly a smile appeared on his face.
While driving the bike Veera blushed thinking of her moments with Baldev.

The End



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Awesome! 😊 very well written.and the pics go so well!
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Sweet OS!!
Lovely pics!!
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So Cute...!!! ❤️
Beautiful pics...Apt for the situation..!!! 😳
Lovely...😳
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It's written v well dear.
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Loved it! Thanks for the PM!
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😭😭 Too cute for words👏👏
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Aww this was super cute! I loved the use of the pictures too:)))


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this is lovely
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gud one,its a sweet os,do continue ur writing👍🏼'n pm me😊(thank 4 the pm)

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