I, Raavi... : drabble #ShiVi Part 3 updated on page 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11
it's beautiful and it's bitter truth. Hope you will write part two of this where Shiva will realize Raavi's true value in his life
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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Good One, I don’t like Raavi getting sidelined

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

It was great 🥰🥰

Would love to read further😇😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

I liked it

Would like to read more


Raavi has been sidelined and know that Raavi thinking about herself wn't ever happen.

I don't even have much expectations bcoz makers can't think more than Bhabhi and her devar


I hope atleast in this

We see Shiva realise that a relationship can't work if only 1 person is putting efforts, he too needs to stand, support her and give her respect it can not be that only Raavi will be doing everything.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Drabble 2 #

Raavi Pandya ka pati,Shiva Pandya


"Ha Shiva kal ahmedabad ja rahi hu.. Fashion designing course me admission lene.. Ye payal aur iske saath di hui Kasam ab teen mahine baad puri karna, jaha itna ruka thoda aur sahi.. Mujhe pata hai jaise maine teri padhai ke liye decision liya.. Mere liye koi aur nhi sochega itna.. Par I hope mera saath dega Tu Shiva.. Subah nikalna hai.. Baaki ghar me aur teri life me toh sab manage ho hi jayega, Dhara di hai na.. Wo sab sambhaal lengi.. Goodnight Shiva & congrats once again."


Shiva just couldn't understand what happened to Raavi.. Why's she behaving like that.. She's not going really, right?

He was observing for quite some time, something was not right.. He could feel that she was quite detached past these days..

It was a very important day for him, he wanted her with him but ma kept her busy in household work & as usual he couldn't just ask her to leave all this..


He wanted to thank her in front of everyone, wanted to give her payal rightfully in front of everyone, but he just couldn't.. Why's he like this? Did she felt bad because of this? But she understands him right? She knows he's not good with all this..


But just then a thought striked him. It's all about him? She should understand him, know him, his family, everything but did he really tried to understand her? When she was behaving detached, did he come to her? He always thinks that she understands & she always does, but did he try to do the same with her?


After business competition, when Dhara bhabhi came to him saying that Raavi was having doubts, he wanted to correct her.. He knows she didn't doubt him.. Only she knows his fears, not just know she feels them with him, he could understand what was going in her mind but once again in front of everyone he couldn't say it, he didn't want to contradict her bhabhi in front of everyone. Bhabhi wanted to hear from him that she still believes him despite whatever happened with Dev & Rishita bhabhi but it's not like she left his side.. So he told her that he knows she'll always trust him.. He saw Raavi's face at that moment & it pained his heart to see her shattered.. But as usual he thought that she'll understand & didn't reach out to her..


Today when everyone was singing his praise, his eyes were only searching for his Raavi, she was the only one who made it happen.. he wanted to shout in front of everyone that I'm here because of my wife.. This victory is hers more than mine.. But as usual he couldn't say any of this..


He was feeling ashamed, he was not worthy of his wife.. She endured so much because of him & what did he do? He couldn't even give him basic respect & her rightful place in the house?


If she wants to go, she'll go.. She'll make her mark.. No doubt everyone at home will have so much to say but this time she'll not stay for anyone else.. She'll persue her dreams, he'll stay like a rock with her, if needed he'll also go with her.. His family need him but just like him everyone else too should understand that he's a husband too now & his wife needs acknowledgement & respect just like Dhara bhabhi.. He'll never leave her alone now.. She's so innocent she'll stay if Dhara bhabhi will make her but this time he'll not let her sacrifice because of others, including himself..


Maybe life has given him one chance to undo his mistakes & he'll not waste it.. Now he'll be Raavi Pandya ka pati, Shiva Pandya

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So I wrote second part of this drabble bcz I believe in second chances

Edited by Yahvi - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

This part shows shiva's inner voice.. And I'm so in love with this part

If he could have said things... Sigh! Shiva it's high time voice your opinion just don't be bhabhima's chamcha..

Lovely drabble

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Such wonderful drabbles❤️❤️

Will you be continuing this series? Because I would love to see Raavi Pandya ka pati take a stand for his wife, support her decisions and encourage her to fulfilling her dreams...❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Such a beautiful writing..

Pls continue this… pls

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Butterflybot

Such wonderful drabbles❤️❤️

Will you be continuing this series? Because I would love to see Raavi Pandya ka pati take a stand for his wife, support her decisions and encourage her to fulfilling her dreams...❤️❤️

I started it as a single drabble but maybe I'll continue

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Yahvi, I love both parts so much!! Raavi's hurt & realisation, her eventual decision for herself, and then Shiva's realisation and his resolve to stand by Raavi - all off it made my heart sigh softly. ❤️

Looking forward to the third one.

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