I, Raavi... : drabble #ShiVi Part 3 updated on page 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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pls do continue.....

i wanna see raavi pandya ka pati, shiva pandya taking a stand for her❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: VNuts

Yahvi, I love both parts so much!! Raavi's hurt & realisation, her eventual decision for herself, and then Shiva's realisation and his resolve to stand by Raavi - all off it made my heart sigh softly. ❤️

Looking forward to the third one.

Thank you Vandana.. Just wrote it during my free hour😆.. It looks so rushed now so maybe I'll write next once thoda shanti se.. Started as single drabble bcz I wanted to rant😆 but I think maybe I'll continue this❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Great ff. Please write more!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you like seriously thank you for writing in this because I have been thinking about this and that’s why was not enjoying much .

It was so needed like you have covered her emotions and feelings so well.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Thank you like seriously thank you for writing in this because I have been thinking about this and that’s why was not enjoying much .

It was so needed like you have covered her emotions and feelings so well.

Thank you so much vaishnavi for liking this❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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outstanding. hope you will write one or two parts more by showing family's perspective on this matter. How will Shiva take stand for his only his Raavi. Hope you write
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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

This is so good❤❤❤ really pissed of with everyone's ignorance towards her specially shiva's.

Raavi's POV is Very nicely depicted in this, 👍👍👍👍

Waiting for another update.......... Want continuation of this series

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

OMG, this is sooooooo beautiful ❤️❤️

Drabble 1: My heart broke for Raavi. Yeah, I don't know how I'd handle if it Choubeys show it that way on screen because they are definitely not capable of showing what you've managed to do in drabble 2 (show Shiva's thought process). You know in the first part when Raavi was like I'm going to go not because I want them to know my worth...my heart broke even more. There's nothing wrong in showing people in your family that you are also worthy and not just some side piece. However, what you have written is 100% like Raavi. So selfless and giving. Never holding grudges against anyone. Finding happiness in other's happiness. Not really caring if she gets any credit or not. The only thing she wanted was having a her rightful place next to her husband. Being part of his joys not seeing him share it with Bhabi while she works. Oh Raavi, take my heart!


And then this Shiva! I am so glad I read both parts together. The fact that he understood her unsaid words for the first time is❤️❤️. Can he undo what he did the next day when the family creates Tamasha? Because the family will create ruckus the next morning when Raavi announced get decision. I hope he acknowledges her efforts and gives her credit to all of his successes and ultimately announces their decision (aka it's not a request for permission, but rather their decision for themselves. Dora/Susu ko bura lage toh lage). I'd love for him to say that it was only because of Raavi that he managed to complete the studies. The only person who understood him and his desires for schooling and worked actively with him to support him. The only force that made it actually happen because others were always there, but could never provide wind to his dreams like Raavi has. Plus she was also the only one who supported him in competition when no one believed in him when he wanted to fill out the form. Everyone supported him after he got selected, but she did even before that and assisted with form and interview. And this time he's going to support her. He will be the force who helps her acheive her dreams. And Cherry on top would be if he actually goes with her like he's planned. I'd love for that to happen. My fav lines were "His family need him but just like him everyone else too should understand that he's a husband too now & his wife needs acknowledgement & respect just like Dhara bhabhi" and, "now he'll be Raavi Pandya ka pati, Shiva Pandya." I can't wait to see Raavi Pandya ka pati Shiva Pandya in action as he supports her in achieving her dreams!


Please update soon! Haha and maybe more than a drable?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Please continue


Raavi is my favourite character for a reason


And for some reason her character is limited to being Shiva's love interest and is never explored coz at the end of the day the show is all about dhara and Shiva


Please continue this. I'm sure we won't get her pov in the show and it's useless to expect either

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Yahvi, love this drabble series. Read both parts in one go

Raavi’s POV- agree 💯 with what you wrote. Her hurt is immeasurable. How I so wanted her to walk away during the 3rd angle track snd the recent divorce kaand but her life took a different turn. But there is still some void in her. I am so glad you are making her do something for herself. This girl has always looked for others happiness and well being and she is forgiving and giving, never thought about herself. Now it is time she does something for herself and doesn’t have to prove anything to anyone. ❤️

Shiva’s realization - Finally! Phew! He has done so much damage in the past, it would take a lifetime for him to rectify all those mistakes. But letting her go and pursue what she wants to do and standing by her is the right direction to go if he truly loved her and want her in his life forever. Hope he is able to tackle his family and support Raavi when they are up in arms against her.


Please do continue. I want to know what happens after 3 months when Raavi is done with her course.


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