I, Raavi... : drabble #ShiVi Part 3 updated on page 5 - Page 5

Love this part…❤️❤️
Raavi ka Shiva is a treat to watch…💕💕

Want more 😭😭

@Yahvi

Gaumbi thinking about nimbu price had me ROFL

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Bhabhimaa worrying about losing her mahaanta status

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Loved your writing style

I really loved how shiva took a stand for raavi . Do continue this. Eagerly waiting for next update

Loved it bro

So happy seeing Shiva standing up for Raavi

Best Nimbu ka price reduced also the tri murti ko wese bhi kaam nahi karna hota hain 😆

So loving this ❤️

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Thanks for the tag 🤗

Res

Thank you di for tagging me💖

I m yet to read this story i will surely read this and will give my two cents thought may be after few days right now occupied with many things😓

I love how finally Shiva has burst out and said what he had to. And how people are unaffected and selfish despite that outburst. Look forward to reading more!

Read all three parts in one go & it's really beautiful.. Raavi is my favorite character in the show.. Only I know how I tolerated third angle & divorce track bcz I just wanted for her to get her happiness back.. Nothing else.. But makers once again are trying to sideline her & it just detached me from the show now..

My heart really broke for Raavi in first drabble.. I really wish we could see that in show but I doubt writers are capable of showing part 2 & part 3 of this series.. Shiva realising Raavi's hurt was so good to read.. I was like phew! Finally!!

Shiva's outburst in front of whole family was so good.. "Is kankar ko shankar banaane wali Raavi hu hai" "Ye mujhe se jalegi? Jo khud meri kamiyon ki aag me jali hai" "Meri insecurities ki kimat mujh se zyada isne chukayi hai.. Aur wo kimati tune bhi is se wasuli hai ma" Some really great lines.. Can you please write for this show 🙏

But best part was how everyone took that outburst..

Bhabhima being insecure about her mahanta status so couldn't manipulate Raavi 🤣🤣🤣

Suman finally understood all her sons are peticot chap just like their father 🤣🤣

Gombi looked at Dhara for getting a hint about what to say 🤣🤣 & then thinking about nimbu price🤣

Three nikammas don't care as it doesn't affect their life at all..

I really love your writing style

Originally posted by: Tzank

Read all three parts in one go & it's really beautiful.. Raavi is my favorite character in the show.. Only I know how I tolerated third angle & divorce track bcz I just wanted for her to get her happiness back.. Nothing else.. But makers once again are trying to sideline her & it just detached me from the show now..

My heart really broke for Raavi in first drabble.. I really wish we could see that in show but I doubt writers are capable of showing part 2 & part 3 of this series.. Shiva realising Raavi's hurt was so good to read.. I was like phew! Finally!!

Shiva's outburst in front of whole family was so good.. "Is kankar ko shankar banaane wali Raavi hu hai" "Ye mujhe se jalegi? Jo khud meri kamiyon ki aag me jali hai" "Meri insecurities ki kimat mujh se zyada isne chukayi hai.. Aur wo kimati tune bhi is se wasuli hai ma" Some really great lines.. Can you please write for this show 🙏

But best part was how everyone took that outburst..

Bhabhima being insecure about her mahanta status so couldn't manipulate Raavi 🤣🤣🤣

Suman finally understood all her sons are peticot chap just like their father 🤣🤣

Gombi looked at Dhara for getting a hint about what to say 🤣🤣 & then thinking about nimbu price🤣

Three nikammas don't care as it doesn't affect their life at all..

I really love your writing style

Wow.. Thank you so much❤

Oh Lord...kitna thandak Mila Dil ko yeh padh ke! Sach sach Batana, kitna sookon tha likhne main?

Haha it was truly a chota packet, bada dhamaka. Kitne bombs phoote aur woh bhi Dil Khush karne wale! Loved Shiva's assurance to Raavi, Raavi having her breakdown and Shiva telling her about her worth. And of course the family drama.

Loved every single thingsm Shiva said about Raavi. Very beautiful dialogues. Raavi's ludo hai aag main so he could nikhar out as a diamond!! Oof. 👏👏 sab ki class li without pointing at anyone. Ayna dikhaye what they've been vs what Raavi has been.

And You totally get all the characters! The vile Susu and manipulative Dora and her "I should always be mahan" syndrome! Like choubeys should show her manipulative thoughts and that's the only way we can make peace with it. Lol the anger I felt when she's like how Raavi's placed next to her, and so she should support. And Gobis nimboo paani shade🤣 and NallaShit's Nallapan shade 🤣🤣

May I add a request in this khayalinoulav that you're managing to bring to fruition?

Please make Shiva stay there for 3 months and see how much they ruin the house and store! A small twist would be that Shiva still has all the money as he didn't get time to invest in it, so his money hasn't gone to waste. Batwara happens in the small store and Shiva can invest all of his money in his new PS store which flourishes! That is simply cause I don't want NallaShit to have 1/4 right to Shiva's money.No pressure though.

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Oh Lord...kitna thandak Mila Dil ko yeh padh ke! Sach sach Batana, kitna sookon tha likhne main?

Haha it was truly a chota packet, bada dhamaka. Kitne bombs phoote aur woh bhi Dil Khush karne wale! Loved Shiva's assurance to Raavi, Raavi having her breakdown and Shiva telling her about her worth. And of course the family drama. Aur sab ki class li! You totally get all the characters! The vile Susu and manipulative Dora and her "I should always be mahan" syndrome! Like choubeys should show her manipulative thoughts and that's the only way we can make peace with it. Lol the anger I felt when she's like how Raavi's placed next to her, and so she should support. And Gobis nimboo paani shade🤣 and NallaShit's Nallapan shade 🤣🤣

MayI add a request in this khayalinoulav that you're managing to bring to fruition?

Please make Shiva stay there for 3 months and see how much they ruin the house and store! A small twist would be that Shiva still has all the money as he didn't get time to invest in it, so his money hasn't gone to waste. Batwara happens in the small store and Shiva can invest all of his money in his new PS store which flourishes! That is simply cause I don't want NallaShit to have 1/4 right to Shiva's money.No pressure though.

Thank you so much for this lovely review 💕

Yeah I totally got sukoon while writing it.. Actually I wrote this series bcz I was feeling like ranting 🤣🤣

Thank you so much for liking it..

Bold: that's a good idea👍

Originally posted by: Yahvi

Thank you so much for this lovely review 💕

Yeah I totally got sukoon while writing it.. Actually I wrote this series bcz I was feeling like ranting 🤣🤣

Thank you so much for liking it..

Bold: that's a good idea👍

A great way to channelize this frustration. It brings peace to us as well. I'll just say thank you for sharing what you wrote!🤗

If you've already written it, then I'm sure it must be a dhamaka.

P.s. haha you read my response too soon. Have edited it to add this

"Loved every single thingsm Shiva said about Raavi. Very beautiful dialogues. Raavi's ludo hai aag main so he could nikhar out as a diamond!! Oof. 👏👏 sab ki class li without pointing at anyone. Ayna dikhaye what they've been vs what Raavi has been."