Chalo Bhag Chalte Hain- ShivVI ss

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Just a silly idea that came to mind during my commute this morning and I decided to write when I came home from work this evening. We are sick of Covid-19 and I truly wish we could all takes turns and get a break from the strain. Anyways let me know if you all want more,

thanks



Prologue:


She had just a few weeks before she had to return to Somanth and start the new project to bring Pandya Store to new heights. She was planning to add onto her family's legacy.

"There needed to be some modernization," Raavi thought to herself.

How would they compete with online retailers if they didn't have one themselves? However she needed to actually skip town and be inspired for decent ideas.

There was one major dilemma. She didn't own a car or really know how to drive long distance. She needed someone to drive her around but also be a good companion while they traveled.

She took her phone to write her suggestion to one true person she could ask. After all he had already signed up to be her partner for life.

"Chalo bhag chalte hain," she typed.

She pondered for one moment before clicking send.

Shiva would not be a happy camper.

She sighed.

But Raavi already knew he had no other choice but to say yes to her suggestion.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey nice. Pls continue

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Just waiting on my cover request then I will write some more thanks you two!

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Seems interesting

Will love to read more

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Shiva was in no mood to deal with nautanki with the Chipkali after working up a sweat in the store. She was in a pretty peppy mood today. In his gut he knew that meant one thing.

She was up to something. Of course he could sense it since they were kids. She was always scheming to please Dev since day one.

Deep within his heart , beneath his strong armor he secretly longed for the attention everyone gave his older brother and Krish for many years. He had an extra soft spot and love for his Dhara Bhabhi because she could always see him for who he really was. She knew he was in need of special TLC just like everyone.

Dhara Bhabhi had to take care of Gombi, Dev, Krish and their mother all these years. He couldn't expect her to baby him all day. Plus now since Rishita and Dev wanted to form a separate identity from their family business , he could not exactly make his wishes known.

Raavi he noticed was coming his way. He quickly snapped out of his reverie. He knew why she was here.

She wanted to convince him to run away with her.

“Chalo bhag chalte hain,” she had texted the day before.

He immediately scowled at her audacity . He knew she wasn’t in love with him.

When Chipaki had an idea it was usually not a sensible one. He knew this truth since they were kids.

“Kya dahi hogeya tera dimag,” he yelled at her when he picked up the phone to admonish her.

She sighed.

“ Arre Bhoonath! I only asked you kyunki mera haaq banta hai,” she retorted.

He rolled his eyes as Gombi and kaka shook their heads at his expressions.

“Paaka Raavi se phir se jagra hora hai,” Gombi uttered to kaka and they continued the inventory.

“Come on Shiva! If I don’t ask you who will I ask?”

“Kis haaq se poochri hai gadhedari?”

“You really don’t know?”

“Mujhe abhi bauth kam hai,” he muttered and hung up.

Raavi wasn’t happy about this.

Of course at dinner when he returned home, he kept avoiding her.

Dhara Bhabhi needed her help, so Raavi was unable to bother him until he had already retired to bed.

Now here she was ready to harass him again.

He groaned inwardly.

But he knew she would not give up until she got a chance to tell him her plan to the fullest.

“Chal Shiva hear her out, then let her to get lost or something,” he told himself.

Raavi came over with the tiffin with food likely prepared by Dhara Bhabhi only some time ago.

“Theek bol. Why do you want to run away with me of all people?”

Raavi smiled .

He had relented much quicker then she expected. She had only been after him to consent for twenty-four hours thus far.

“Mujhe tera saath bhag nah ai kyunki tum hi toh jo mera saath de sakte ho,” she declared.

He looked at her wide eyed.

“ Ek ladki akele kaise bhag sakti hai? Maza ne agaya,” she insisted.

Now her arm and slipped through his.

Shiva looked around to ensure no one was looking at them.

“But why do you want to run away now?”

She looked at him straight into his eyes.

“ I want to be free to get inspiration for expanding Pandya Store. But no one let me go on my own to do my research. I am sick of everyone butting in. This was the only idea I could think of,” she declared.

“ Do you trust me that much? I mean main kaun hoon tera?”

Raavi smiled as she squeezed his hand.

The intimacy of the gesture was something Shiva never expected with her.

“ Ek lauta pati tum ho mere,” she declared.

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Ohh!! It is getting interestingg!!

Loved it ❤❤❤

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Originally posted by: Kfof

Ohh!! It is getting interestingg!!

Loved it ❤❤❤

thanks so much! updates may vary as I work full time and commute 50 miles each way until I can change jobs , I will try to update later today

.thanks again for your feedback!

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Omg loves the update

Its something different

While reading i was like they are may be friends

But in the end when she say because you are my husband I was like oh 🤩

Story has different and very fascinating approach

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Originally posted by: navk

Omg loves the update

Its something different

While reading i was like they are may be friends

But in the end when she say because you are my husband I was like oh 🤩

Story has different and very fascinating approach

thanks I wanted to leave that as a doubt for the beginning of the story when I introduced the concept

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Part Two


Six months since they got married. Dhara Bhabhi had insisted he marry her to save her honor. Dev had decided to marry Rishita after all. There had been mayhem and loads of drama.

Although he had never though he loved her, his heart felt like it was gonna stop when she had hung herself in her Masi’s house.

Of course he had taken her down from the fan. What had followed was whirlwind of emotions and pressure from both ends to make this wedding and now marriage work.

Neither had the time to really know each other. Every day they learned something new about each other. Insecurities crashed to the ground at each turn.

Now Raavi was openly referring to him as her pati , he felt he could start to feel for her in the way he deeply had longed for thus far.

He snapped out of his reverie as she leaned forward closing the remaining space between them.

He yanked her toward the back of the store where they could not be heard or seen as easily.

“ Paagal hogi hai kya?”

“ Kyun? Are you like the rest of society? I am tired of us being forced to do things because of society . We have to do it this way Shiva. I have money saved up . We just need to pick an opportunity and run away.” She declared.

He smacked his face in his hands.

She forcibly removed his hands from his face.

“Batao na!”

“Ok how long Raavi? I have to make sure the store is covered and Gombi nor or anyone else is in trouble because of this silly plan of yours,” he hissed.

She smiled.

“Masi is planning to use every penny my parents left for Anita di’s marriage. Lekin us per haaq mera bhi toh hai. I know she took care of me , but I want to do something for our family, Pandya parivaar ka future,” she declared.

He shook his head.

“ Now why would I have to run away with you in order for this to happen?”

“Arre Bhootnath, we need inspiration! We cannot possibly bring Pandya Store or Somanth to 2022 without proper research! Plus we haven’t had a proper trip just the two of us yet,” she insisted.

Shiva froze for a second and glared at her.

Was she referring to the failed attempts at a honeymoon trip?

What had changed all of a sudden in her mind or heart for him?

“Listen I am no telling you to be romantic. Sab jante hain Somnath mein, ki Shiva Pandya is not a manju,” she declared.

He grabbed her by wrist and pulled her back to land against his strong chest.

His warm breath brushed her neck.

“ Ek baar bhag ke dekte hain, ki main actually kaisa hoon,” he hissed .

She nudged him as Gombi called out for him.

She kissed his cheek.

The tenderness that briefly appeared his eyes in that moment, was not missed by her. Had Gombi Bhaiya not been coming their way, she would have teased him some more.

“ Tumara javab ka intezaar re gaya mujhe. See you later pati dev,” Raavi called out as she ran out of the store.

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