Chalo Bhag Chalte Hain- ShivVI ss - Page 2

Superb update 🥰

Loved it

I liked the transitioning of the story

Loved banter between shiva and raavi

And how shiva gave into her idea

That was so amazing 😁

Also how you portray their relationship Its seriously unpredictable

Loved your writing style ❤

And also the banner is so beautiful😘

Originally posted by: navk

Superb update 🥰

Loved it

I liked the transitioning of the story

Loved banter between shiva and raavi

And how shiva gave into her idea

That was so amazing 😁

Also how you portray their relationship Its seriously unpredictable

Loved your writing style ❤

And also the banner is so beautiful😘

thanks so much, Sevenstreaks made it for me , it came out great!

Part Three

Raavi paced around the house between helping with the cleaning and cooking. Her mother in -law thought something was wrong with her. She would give the typical Suman Ma look as if I know you are up to something just spill.

Raavi would go join Dhara Bhabi or offer her mother in law a massage of her legs or some tea every now and then.

By dinnertime she felt as if she had dodged her acute scrutiny at least for now. If Shiva didn’t answer her tonight, she was going to leave by sunrise herself.

Society had advanced in some good ways and some bad ways. Somnath had not been advancing much, but maybe this town needed a chingari that only she could light.

She stole glances at Shiva throughout dinner.

Suman realized the couple were probably getting closer. But she hated mushiness at the table.

“ Whatever this staring game is , you two need to not bring it to the dinner table ,”she said her usual sharp tone.

Raavi blushed realizing she had been caught trying to get Shiva’s attention.

Everyone including Krish had tried to stifle their laughter.

It was her turn to inwardly groan.

She definitely was leaving by dawn with or without Shiva.

Raavi arrived in their bedroom to find Shiva had found her bag under their bed.

“Oh tu akele jane wali thi chipikali,” he said somewhat dejected.

She crossed her arms and glared back at him.

“ Tera toh 100 percent bharosa nahin tha,” she retorted.

He pulled her close to his chest and looked at her straight into her eyes.

“I spoke to Goumbi . I told him I would handle getting some products we were short on some towns over. I told him we would be gone a week,” he told her firmly.

“You told bhaiya my plan? I mean our plan?”

“ Nahin, I made some excuse so there isn’t some unnecessary drama while we are gone. A week is most I can get to let us both leave without any issues. Will that be enough for what you wish to do?,” he asked.

She smiled.

“It will have to do. After all mere ek lauta pati dev ne plan banaya. Lekin Suman Ma..”

“Gombi will tell her after we leave. Chalo let’s get some sleep,” he insisted.

Raavi was so relieved that she jumped up and down in glee and of course, Shiva had to lean forward and catch her.

They both landed in heap on the bed.

He quickly pushed himself off her. He had conflicting feeling for his wife. He wasn’t sure if Raavi would ever really care for him like a real wife. After all he wasn’t even a consideration for until they had gotten married and then all the incidents that followed after.

She looked at his retreating figure as he went into the washroom to get ready for bed.

How she wished they could be best friends and a true couple sooner rather than later.

Tomorrow would be a start of new journey.

Part Four

It was 4 am. They had hurriedly dressed and grabbed their belongings and approached his bike .

“ Arree Shiva hum is pe kaise ja sakte hain?”

“Kyun ghadedhi ? Aur kaise jayenge? Mere paas koi driver aur limousine nahin hai,” he retorted.

She sighed.

“ You told Goumbi Bhaiya we are getting supplies, how are we supposed to bring it all back here?”

“ Arre Chipakali , you know the bigger distributors have trucks. Somanth does allow trucks in, so we are good. You do your research or whatever, I will negotiate whatever else we need. Chalein?

She nodded.

“ Theek hai mere pyaare pati dev,” she teased.

He shushed her as he worried someone might awaken.

He pushed the bike out to the street ahead of them before starting the engine , as Raavi sat behind him with their bags.

It was nearly 8am when they arrived to their first stop. Shiva had to get some gas, and Raavi decided to stop at a few bigger stores in the town.

She looked at glee with the setup and inquired about if they had a website. She didn’t want Shiva to yell at her for using up the data, so she saved some links for later to review.

She was finishing up at the third store, when he messaged her that her share of breakfast would be gone if she didn’t hurry up and join him.

She smiled to herself.

It was like they didn’t just get married for the sake of society. Maybe he did care for her a lot beneath the surface of his rough exterior.

She arrived in time for Shiva to tell the waiter to bring some chai, but added it must not be too hot, as his wife would murder him if he caused her to burn her mouth.

She rolled her eyes.

He always had to make it about her in a third dimensional way. He would never say directly that he cared about her well being. It was always what would Dhara Bhabi would say or what would Suman Ma get upset about.

She sat down smiled at him.

She was about to comment about her experiences that morning when the waiter returned and accidently dropped chai on her wrist.

“ Aaww!”

Shiva over and dried off her skin with his shirt tail.

He glared at the waiter.

“ Aree pagal kuch ice ya ointment lekar aa, iska haath jal ga!,” he snapped.

He blew gently on her hand.

“ I told him not to bring anything too hot, relax Raavi theek ho jayega,” he assured her.

“ Shiva I am fine, please shant ho jaya,” she soothed.

He stopped for a moment before taking the ice and placing her other hand on top of it.

He fed her a few bites and in between they talked about what she had found out so far.

“ You can look at the sites now. By evening we will be at the hotel, you can use the WIFI as well,” he assured her.

She nodded.

She sat back after she felt full for a moment.

She relished the fact , it was just Shiva and herself for the next several days. They could freely communicate. There was no third person interrupting or confusions.

Maybe they could finally build up their fragile pieces and make a solid foundation for their future.

Later when she headed to use the washroom when he returned to settle the bill and of course to make that waiter literally pee in his pants for the third time this morning, Raavi smiled to herself as they passed each other .

He gazed after her retreating figure as he sat down beside his bike and their luggage. He was starting to see her in a new light. Before there were so many distractions and other considerations.

As he pondered the events up to this day, Shiva realized his Dhara Bhabi had not only asked him to marry Raavi to save her, but because she believed he would be a responsible life partner.

“Before I was only in this marriage because Bhabhi had requested I take care of you, but now I realize maybe you are quite special Chipakli ,” he thought to himself as she emerged from the wash room.

“ Shiva you can go ahead and use the washroom then we can go,” she stated.

“ Like I need your permission ghadedhi,” he muttered aloud.

She glared at him.

“ Sorry, I am not used to speaking to nicely yet. Aata hoon. Don’t let anyone steal my bike, otherwise we have to walk to our next destination,” he retorted .

She shook her head at him as he walked away.

“ Gosh just when I think he is warming up to me, he has to turn back into a bhootnath!”

Part Five

Raavi decided it was best to have whatever she could sent back to their home. She requested the samples be sent the following week, by which she and Shiva would be back home in Somanth.

She sighed .

Yes this was a well needed break. In two weeks, she would inherit the savings her paternal grandparents had decided to give to her. Her kaka having just one child, who had deserted him last year, decided to approach her outside her college last year.

He told her he was ill now too. But he promised her that all her wishes would be fulfilled. Raavi tried not to cry regarding the memory. He had fortunately not witnessed her attempting suicide on the wedding day. He had passed only weeks prior. Her masi had been miffed with them and she had not let her see her paternal grandparents before they passed.

She appreciated her eccentric masi’s attempts to protect her , but she wished she had more time with them. Perhaps she was worth it for them to have lived longer.

Now she would never know.

She inadvertently leaned on Shiva’s shoulder.

Shiva was surprised but continued to drive.

They were going to be stopping over at inn shortly.

He wondered if she meant to hold him close like she was.

He skid to halt as a taxi served around them.

Raavi snapped out of her reverie as Shiva cursed the driver and then turned around to check on her.

“ Tu theek hai Raavi?,” he asked , his voice laced with concern.

She nodded briefly.

He gave her a once over, scanning her from head to toe.

She felt a blush on her cheeks.

She called herself the prettiest girl in all of Somanth, yet when he looked at her with this intense gaze, she did not know how to react or accept it.

Shiva looked away from her, realizing the bike would not get them the rest of the way.

He sat Raavi on the side of the road with their things as he tried to arrange a cab for them.

He found one eventually and they were able to hook his damaged bike to the back . He would have to search for a mechanic in the morning.

They latched the bike onto the holding area. Then he led her inside where they had arrangement to stay that night. Shiva asked about the local mechanic .

He took some things from Raavi’s arms and they headed upstairs. They learned there would meals served in the communal dining room starting at 7am the next day.

They were welcome to use the kitchen after hours, but they would have to clean up on their own.

The bedroom seemed clean and served the purpose for their needs.

“ It seems like we really are running away from home,” he commented.

She looked him surprised.

“ But we didn’t really, You told Goumbi Bhaiya that we were also talking to suppliers right?,” she stated.

He looked at her profoundly.

“ Shiva what did you tell Goumbi and the others?,” she pressed.

He grabbed her wrist and pulled her close to himself.

“ I told him we were going to go on a honeymoon and we would get some new vendors for Pandya store,” he admitted.

He turned his eyes downcast. He wasn’t sure if he wanted to see her look of disbelief or disgust.

After all, their marriage had been forced upon them because of the betrayal of his brother Dev.

Raavi dropped the bag she was holding.

“ Can I confess something Shiva?”

He looked back at her and met her eyes.

“ My feelings for Dev were an infatuation. Tum jante ho, ki in che mahino mein mujhe yeh ehass aaya, ki tum ho mere asli pyaar,” she admitted.

He gazed at her stunned.

She reached for him this time.

“ Yes I wanted to expand the Pandya store with my own ideas, but with you at my side. There are two reasons I chose now. My kaka died before we got married. He left me some money. I want to use it for our future. I don’t want to ever think what is between us is temporary,” she added.

“ Kya chahti ho Chipakali ?”

She grasped him by the collar of his shirt.

“Tuhme, baas tum mere ek lauti pati dev. This isn’t some fancy confession but I want you to..”

He kissed her as he grasped her waist.

When he leaned back to look at her naturally blushed cheeks, he knew there was no going back from his feelings ever again.

Raavi would remain the only woman he would have these feelings for. It did not matter if her masi or anyone else tried to take her away from him.

He wasn’t letting go of her.

“ I love you Raavi Shiva Pandya. Now promise me one thing,” he demanded .

“ Bol Shiva, kya?”

“You are never leaving me ever,” he said before leaning in to kiss her deeply this time.

She muttered agreement.

The circumstances were imperfect but they became one that night. They would only build a stronger bond from here on in.

Beautiful update

Loved it,

Restaurant scene was so awesome 👌

Originally posted by: navk

Beautiful update

Loved it,

Restaurant scene was so awesome 👌

thanks so much

Loved it…

Is the story end here..?? 🥲

no I am adding more lol