NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end

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Rainbow2525

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

both the chapters were amazing and too emotional Mansi

beautifully written👏

loved Kabir and Tammana bonding

waiting for the next chapter..update soon

Thanks a lot for the pm 😊

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mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: -yami
both the chapters were amazing and too emotional Mansi
beautifully written👏
loved Kabir and Tammana bonding
waiting for the next chapter..update soon
Thanks a lot for the pm😊

thanks buddy... I will update soon

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Chapter 2

Yet another beautiful and touching chapter👏👏

Love the short sweet and cute Nibir interactions😊

she felt like ruffling his hair but refrain herself. - This was adorable😳

" I know... m the only one u have almost crushed with ur weight " kabir said with the most serious look. Nisha's eyes popped out as she remembered how she had ran upto someone and hugged him. " m so sorry... I don't know why I did that... m really sorry " she said apologetically. Kabir laughed at her innocence.- This part was really cute😳😃

" tum kya chahti ho ki mai bhi bhookha rahu... " he asked making a cute face. She looked at him puzzled. " are tm nhi khaogi to dolly thodi na mjhe kuch khane degi... " he said making a cute baby face again. " Please khalo na pls " kabir asked. She smiled at his antics and nodded in a yes. He happily got up and brought her soup. - Loved the way Kabir convinced her to have food😳. I can literally imagine Kabir giving that puppy dog look to Nisha😆😆

Kabir fed her like she was a small baby who need his utmost care. Nisha was smiling throughout but yet confused why is she doing so... why can't she say a no to him. - This part was chooo adorable Love the way Kabir is so concerned about her and cares for her soo much😳 Nisha smiling was super cute😳😳

He kept staring at her back but didn't have enough strength to ask her to not cry. " let her cry kabir... once she is done... I will make sure she will not cry again " kabir thought to himself. - Love the resolve Kabir has taken😃 Waise I like the fact that he is allowing her to cry cz crying really helps to get rid of the emotional distress a person is under😊

ur ha please usko koi help chahie ho to kar dena" dolly said. "kya yaar dolly... mai tjhe esa lagta hu kya.." he said making a puppy face. tanu and dolly laughed while nisha smiled. - This was part was adorable😆😳 I was somehow reminded of our Kabir during the Chandu track😆

" nisha..." just her name in his voice breakthrough all her grief she laughed first like maniac but now her laugh got converted into that cry which can tear someones heart apart. she cried harder and harder.- Love the way u depicted the process of Nisha letting her emotions out. That transition from laughter to sobbing was beautifully written👏 Also the fact that it just took Kabir's voice to tear apart her knot of grief and just let her guards down shows the level of comfort Nisha has with Kabir🤗

That part Nisha was describing her home and family to Kabir was penned down brilliantly such that we as readers could connect to her pain at a much deeper level👏👏👍🏼

Love the way Kabir consoled Nisha and gave her the courage and determination to move on in her life 😊

he felt happy... actually happiest seeing her so relaxed. he knew now he don't have to bother as she is free now.. free from the grip of pain which he himself have had for a long time. - The fact that pain which had burdened Nisha had also burdened him to the extent that he felt light after Nisha let go of the pain, just speaks volumes of their heart-to-heart connection

Her wounds were bleeding kabir knew that and these wounds were inside her... only she can tend them. - Loved this line❤️ and the anology of the knot which you used to depict grief👍🏼

All in all, a lovely chapter👍🏼😊

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: arviabhigya
Res again😆
kya karoon mansi, college fest ke kaaran i m really busy yaar😭

mihu yaar... 😆 I will be waiting

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mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: sam_premc
Unres..!!
Awesome update MANSI..!!👏
Luvd it..!!😃
Actually mujhe kuch zyaada hi ninni aagayi to main unres karna bhul gayi😆
Next time isse badaa comment dungi😆

soch hi rhi thi mai ki kahin tu kumbhkaran part -2 to nhi bnane lgi... 😆 thanks anyways kam se kam tu uthi to sahi

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NITI VYAS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Felt bad for nishu par uska apni family k baare mein batana nd kabir ka usko pacify karna yaar .bahut acche tumhare liye ek rose ka paudha gift mein

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mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86
Felt bad for nishu par uska apni family k baare mein batana nd kabir ka usko pacify karna yaar .bahut acche tumhare liye ek rose ka paudha gift mein

awww thanks yaar

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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

awsome chptrs dear...
update nxt part asap
plz pm me

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mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: anu012
awsome chptrs dear...
update nxt part asap
plz pm me

thanks anu I will surely pm u

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Saranya Senan M C

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Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
kab se is res k darshan ka intzaar tha mjhe... dhany bhaag hmare ki aapke darshan hue... mjhe pta tha... saru ka res post aaega jarur aaega 😆

I Blashhh☺️ Unres bhi milenge aa j hi...🤣