NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Mansi I will murder you if you show Kabir having some incureable disease ya usske dil main cheed hai ya uska dil kamzoor hai types something 😡

Isse zyada I won't say anything😆

Aila dhamki... no bhabhi no... abhi mat maro bachhi ko...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Aila dhamki... no bhabhi no... abhi mat maro bachhi ko...😆

Agar story line change karegi toh I will murder you 😡
I DON'T WANT A SAD STORY 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Agar story line change karegi toh I will murder you 😡
I DON'T WANT A SAD STORY 😡

but this one is na bhabhi... story line to vhi h... maine kab badli😭😲
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

but this one is na bhabhi... story line to vhi h... maine kab badli😭😲

Bas toh phir i am not going to read the next updates then... Yeh story yahi khatam hogai for me 🤔
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Bas toh phir i am not going to read the next updates then... Yeh story yahi khatam hogai for me 🤔

niyu bhabhi ab tum esa karogi mere sath... 😭 jao i won't write more😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

niyu bhabhi ab tum esa karogi mere sath... 😭 jao i won't write more😭

I'll read but I will not comment and talk to you.. 🥱

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome👏
tu itne heart touching updates likhti hai😭
Edited by ...Shibu... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 3- Beautiful chapter Mansi👏👏👏
Firstly, love the conversation Nisha has with her parents in her dream 👍🏼
It was very important for her to get closure and move on😊 And u have done that beautifully😃
Love how she realizes that Kabir is the angel sent for her😊
" thank u kabir... thank u for everything... I will never cry again kabir.. I promise... thank u for watever u did for me in past one week and what u did yesterday... thank u for making me meet my parents one last time.. u truly my angel " she said. Kabir took a turn towards her. He looked like a small baby in his sleep... so innocent so carefree. She wanted to place a kiss on his forehead and this time she did what her heart said. She kissed his forehead and ruffled his hair a bit which made kabir smile in his sleep. Seeing him smiling a genuine and happy curve apperead on her face.- This part was cute and lovable❤️ Love how she did not restrain herself and kissed him😳 Also love the fact that seeing him smile she also felt happy😳😳
She was standing on the kitchen table when someone came from behind and scared her. She got dis balanced and landed straight in kabir's arm. Kabir smiled seeing her while she hold on his tee shirt. Nisha opened her eyes and frowned seeing him smiling. " Kabir... paagal..." she said and jumped out of his arms. " ese koi daraata h kya... jaan hi nikal di thi meri " she said catching on her breath. " to ur kaise darate h madam... mjhe to yhi tareeka aata h... " kabir said. " Achha bachhu... abhi btati hu..." she said and threw a glass of water placed near by. " ab aaya na mja..." she laughed as he looked at her in disbelief. She kept laughing while after some time he too joined her. he felt rejuvenated seeing her laugh. - This was so romantic Loved Kabir's dialogue about the darane ka tareeka😆
"shayad do tute hue lgo ko apne khoye hue hisse mil gye.." - Love this line and the analogy❤️
Love how that interaction with Kabir changed her life and she became her usual old self. Loved to see her excitement to go to CCRC and meet the kids and Kabir😳
Love how Nibir kept talking to each other everyday😊
Loved Kabir-Nisha- Tanu's masti at the beach😳 The song sequence reminded me of the song in Agneepath.
He looked at his princess who have fallen asleep in his arms when he felt a weight on his right shoulder. He turned and looked at sleeping nisha with her head on his shoulder.- How can someone be so adorable😳 I m in Nibir dreamland now
Kabir encircled his right arm around nisha securing her while the sea waves touches their feet in a slow rythemic manner making it a blissful moment. Kabir felt so blessed to have two precious girls of his life in his arms. He wanted to cherish this memory of them for a lifetime and more. He slowly put a feathery kiss on tanu's forehead and then at nisha's hair and closed his eyes in satisfaction.- Chooo cute Hayee😳 Love this trio❤️
She walked towards them and found kabir doing a funny dance in front of the kids. He was making faces and doing wierd steps to make them laugh. Nisha saw him and couldn't stop herself from laughing out loud at his antics. Kabir stopped for a moment hearing that musical laughter. But soon a naughty glint arises in his eyes. He pulled nisha in his arms and started rolling her. She was shocked at this sudden act but soon started enjoying. They both danced admist the kids where the small happy beings clapped loudly for them- Adorableness and cuteness overload😳 Lovely❤️
Was a bit worried when read about the chest pain of Kabir. One can make out that Kabir is the sacrificing type one who endures pain but does not wish to trouble others.
But koi nahi, Nishu will manage this aspect of Kabir's personality too😉
All in all, a wonderful and delightful read🤗😉


Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

I'll read but I will not comment and talk to you.. 🥱

why so 😭 to i will nt write then
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Res again 😆

I dont remember maine tumhari stories pe kitne reserve kiya hain but kya karoon jab itni acchi story likhti ho toh comment bhi accha hona chahiye na 😆😉
btw pls dont make it a tragedy mansi😊
pretty pls 😳😳
end happy hona chahiye aur story zyaada sad mat banana kyunki tumhari lively stories ke kaaran kaafi logon ka din ban jaata hai and they just cant stop smiling😃😉
hope this one is also like that 😳
although I hv full faith in u 😉🤗

mihu... i don't know i could keep ur request or not... because i was writing a tragic one... and i don't think think most of k khaandan wants that... ab mjhe doubt hai ki mai iska kya karungi 😔

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