NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Buasi 🤗
Aap toh.. Aap toh... Poori tayyari kar rakhi hai ki apni Bhatiji ko rulake chodengi...😡🤔

Such a Heart-wrenching update was dis...🤔 Really Felt bad 4 Nishu When She explained abt her family to Kabir...😵 Ufff... Sooo Much Pain...😵😵😵

Bhagwan kabhi kisi ko aise dard na de...😵 kabhi bhi...😵😵😵

NiBir Hug... Awww...🤗🤗🤗

I loved the way Kabir made Nishu Understand dat she has to live 4 her family who wl b watching her frm above.. Soo Soothing his words were...😳Awww🤗🤗🤗

@PINK I loved these lines the most...👏

<font color="#FF0099">He kept staring at her back but didn't have enough strength to ask
her to not cry. " let her cry kabir... once she is done... I will make
sure she will not cry again " kabir thought to himself.
</font>

<font color="#FF0099">she laughed hard. she was laughing like there is no tomorrow. kabir
knew the last knot was teared now he just have to be there for her</font>.
kabir came from behind and put his hand on her shoulder. " nisha..."
just her name in his voice breakthrough all her grief <font color="#FF0099">she laughed first
like maniac but now her laugh got converted into that cry which can
tear someones heart apart. she cried harder and harder. her wounds were
bleeding kabir knew that and these wounds were inside her... only she
can tend them. nisha lost her balance and fell down on the floor... her
tears refused to stop. kabir couldn't see her anymore like this and took
her in his arms. they both hugged each other. nisha was crying pouring
her heart like never before. </font>kabir was just at loss of words to soothe
her. she kept crying for an hour or so. finally when kabir heard her
sobs. he cupped her face in his palm.


<font color="#FF0099">kabir took her to her parents room and made her lie down on the
couch. he patted her head as she closed her eyes. once she slept he made
a call to dollly and asked her to keep tanu with her as he will be
late. he came back and picked nisha up in his arms and placed her on the
bed. he kept looking her face which was way more calmer then before..
he felt happy... actually happiest seeing her so relaxed. he knew now he
don't have to bother as she is free now.. free from the grip of pain
which he himself have had for a long time.

</font>
Some K Dialogues were there which was giving some relief in b/w these emotional scenes...😃

<font color="#FF0000">" are tm nhi khaogi to dolly thodi na mjhe kuch khane degi... " he said making a cute baby face again.</font>
<font color="#FF0000">

sorry tmhara pet dialogue h kya... jab dekho sorry bolti rehti ho " kabir said.
</font>
@RED I just smiled at these lines...😆🤣

NiBir r giving eachother the reason to LIVE❤️

Thanks 4 PM😳

Sorry 4 late comments😳

Do Write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

😭... ab tu isse pehle ki mjhe daante... mai bta deti hu ki ye to khushi k aanso h pagli... tera comment padhke dil garden Garden ho jta h mera... ur rhi rone ki baat... to thoda ro bhi le aankhe saaf ho jaengi 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

😭... ab tu isse pehle ki mjhe daante... mai bta deti hu ki ye to khushi k aanso h pagli... tera comment padhke dil garden Garden ho jta h mera... ur rhi rone ki baat... to thoda ro bhi le aankhe saaf ho jaengi 😆



Main nahi rovungi yahan...😉🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan



Main nahi rovungi yahan...😉🤣

koi baat nhi... is story m mai khud hi sabke hisse ka ro leti hu... 🤗
Posted: 9 years ago
😭Res 😆
unress...
awesome story ...
soo emotional & touching... 😕
i know this pain very well...
u made me cry hard...
😭😭😭😭😭😭
i hav lost my father 3 years back...
it pricked my heart reading nisha's condition...😲
m at loss of word now...
Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

😭Res 😆

unress...
awesome story ...
soo emotional & touching... 😕
i know this pain very well...
u made me cry hard...
😭
i hav lost my father 3 years back...
it pricked my heart reading nisha's condition...😲
m at loss of word now...

awww... nehu... m sorry for ur loss... 😭 and thanks for liking it
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Posted: 9 years ago

next update is here guys... ab mat rona koi... ye maine happy likhne ki koshish ki h...🤣



part- 3


Nisha saw light in pooja ghar and a sound of chanting. " Maa.." she said and ran towards it. She found her parents there. " are nishu... tu aagyi... ye kya haal bnaya h beta... " her mother sounds concerned. " maa... " nisha hugged her parents. " Nishu... beta itna kyu ro rhi h... hm khi nhi gye h.. yhi h tere pass... isi ghar m... tu hme dekh nhi sakti to kya hua... jab bhi aankhe band karke yaad karegi hm yhi milenge tjhe.." her father patted her head lovingly. She looked at them pleadingly. " nishu... khud ko aazad kar beta... ese bandh kar mat rakh khud ko...jo tere pass h use sahej... uski kimat samaj... zindgi k har mod par hme nye log milte h... un logo ko apna bna nisha... khush rh " her mother cupped her face and kissed her head. " vaada kar nishu... ab tu roegi nhi... kabhi bhi nhi... khush rahegi... vo hi nisha bnegi pehle wali... bnegi na... vada karegi na poora nishu " her father asked holding het hands. Nisha nodded in a yes and hugged them. " bye bachha... apna khayal rkhna" they said. Nisha woke up with a start and realised it was a dream. A tear wanted to escape through her eyes but she refrain it. " nhi nisha... ab tu roegi nhi... bilkul bhi nhi..." she reminded herself. She looked around and found herself on her parents bed. She caressed the bed and looked at the couch and as she has thought kabir was sleeping there. She tiptoed towards the couch and sat on the floor. " thank u kabir... thank u for everything... I will never cry again kabir.. I promise... thank u for watever u did for me in past one week and what u did yesterday... thank u for making me meet my parents one last time.. u truly my angel " she said. Kabir took a turn towards her. He looked like a small baby in his sleep... so innocent so carefree. She wanted to place a kiss on his forehead and this time she did what her heart said. She kissed his forehead and ruffled his hair a bit which made kabir smile in his sleep. Seeing him smiling a genuine and happy curve apperead on her face.


She stand up and walked towards the kitchen to make coffee for both of them. She was standing on the kitchen table when someone came from behind and scared her. She got dis balanced and landed straight in kabir's arm. Kabir smiled seeing her while she hold on his tee shirt. Nisha opened her eyes and frowned seeing him smiling. " Kabir... paagal..." she said and jumped out of his arms. " ese koi daraata h kya... jaan hi nikal di thi meri " she said catching on her breath. " to ur kaise darate h madam... mjhe to yhi tareeka aata h... " kabir said. " Achha bachhu... abhi btati hu..." she said and threw a glass of water placed near by. " ab aaya na mja..." she laughed as he looked at her in disbelief. She kept laughing while after some time he too joined her. he felt rejuvenated seeing her laugh. " acha madam.. ab aap hasti hi rahengi ki mjhe coffee bhi pilaengi" kabir said. she nodded and started making coffee while he helped himself for a glass of water.they drank their coffee and kabir took his leave from her.


nisha was feeling so relieved and happy after last night. she got ready and prepared herself for her usual daily life before the dreadful incidence. she got ready and goes to her job after a week or two. the day went by but nisha was eagerly waiting for evening to come. as the clock striked 5 she almost ran from her seat bidding a bye to her colleagues who were looking at her in amazement. she took and auto and asked him to take her to the ccrc. as she stepped out of the auto.. two little arms wrapped themselves around her leg. she looked at the adorable kid and picked him in her arms hugging him " hows my little aarav" she asked. " good... nishu di.." he replied. "aww cutie" nishu said and kissed his cheeks. they both chatted while nisha took him inside where other kids came too and started playing with her. but her eyes were searching for someone. " dolly di... aaj tanu nhi aae..." nisha asked dolly. " tanu... hmm... nhi kal uska exam h na... islie vo nhi aaegi.." she said reading her expressions. nisha became sad. " par... par kabir aaega abhi thodi der m.." she said looking at her intently as she saw a smile crept on nisha's face. nisha looked at dolly who was staring her and excused herself. dolly was smiling when saurav entered. "tum itna kyu muskura rhi ho.." he sang. "sauro..." she rolled her eyes at him. "are bta na dolly.." he asked. "shayad do tute hue lgo ko apne khoye hue hisse mil gye.." she said looking at nisha who was laughing at some kid's antics. saurav understood what she wanted to say as he saw kabir coming to nisha with a goofy smile on his face.


Now it was nisha and kabir's daily routine to come to ccrc and play with the kids. They always kept talking to each other despite all the kids fall asleep and then kabir used to drop her home in the night. Slowly and steadily nisha was back to her usual self. She was feeling happy and always looked forward to her evening routine.


" nishu di..." nisha heard her name when she was standing on the sea shore and turned to look back at tanu who was running towards her. Nisha has called tanu kabir dolly and saurav and kids on the beach today. " hi princess... how r u " nisha said hugging tanu close to her. " Ekdum perfect..." she replied. " Hows exams " nisha asked. " Awesome... is baar to first" she said proudly. " Well done princess" nisha said patting her back. " achha tell me where is dolly di and saurav and kids" nisha asked. " doctor has come for kids regular check up... thats why they didn't came" replied kabir who was standing behind them. " oh... mjhe nhi pta tha... varna I would have cancelled this" nisha said. " Isilie nhi btaya un dno ne tjhe..." kabir said. She smiled and shook her head. " To hm to party kar sakte h na nishu di.." tanu asked pouting. "Of course princess... aaj hm khoob masti karenge..." she said tickling tanu to which she laughed.


Aankhon ki nami

Haan teri meherbaani hai

Thodi si umeedon se aage

Aisi kahaani hai



Kabir was watching them as they ran towards the sea and started jumping like small kids on the water.



Aanchal jo udaa

Haan teri meherbaani hai

Thodi si umeedon se aage

Aisi kahaani hai


Nisha and tanu were running here and there picking up seashells and laughing at each other as they got all the empty ones.


Leharon se hai

Saagar se gehri bhi hai

Ye teri meri baatein

Rulati bhi hain

Gham mein hansati bhi hai

Ye teri meri baatein

Ye teri meri baatein..


Kabir's trance broke as tanu splashed a handful of water on his face. " Tanu ki bachhi... ruk" kabir said and ran after her. He picked some water and splashed on her but tanu ditched it in time so that water got splashed on nisha's face. "Hawww... kabir" nisha said and ran after him.



Har saans sunaati hai, tera hi naam

Palko ke chaaon mein, do pal ka aaraam

Kacche ye dhaage hain, kacche hain rang

Chhu loon toh jee bhi loon, kuch tere sang


Kabir asked for time please and sat on the sand breathing heavily while nisha too sat in front of him kneeling, catching on her breath. Kabir admired her as she was laughing closing her eyes.



Leharon se hai

Saagar se gehri bhi hain

Ye teri meri baatein

Rulaati bhi hain

Gham mein hansati bhi hai

Ye teri meri baatein

Ye teri meri baatein..


Nisha and tanu bought a bunch of ballons and let them flew. Tanu clapped happily looking at them while nisha looked at kabir communicating him through her eyes. It was night by then and a very less no. Of people were present on the beach. Kabir sat beside a rock with tanu on his left. " Aao nishu di.." tanu called nisha who had bought ice creams for them. She handed over it to tanu and kabir settled herself on the right side of kabir. " nishu di story sunao na... " tanu asked. " tanu... mjhe koi story nhi aati... kabir u tell her a story" nisha said. " Ha mere bhaiyu ko sab aata h" she replied. Kabir ruffled his princess's hair and started narrating a story.



Main neend bulaata hoon, haathon mein haath

Chaadar ke kone mein, reh jaati baat

Khwabon ki nishaani hai, aasmaan ke paar

Jis raat ke seene mein, chhalka hai pyaar


He looked at his princess who have fallen asleep in his arms when he felt a weight on his right shoulder. He turned and looked at sleeping nisha with her head on his shoulder.



Aankhon ki nami

Haan teri meherbaani hai

Thodi si ummeedon se aage

Aisi kahaani hai


He looked at her innocent face admiring her beauty in moon light. She squirmed in her sleep and move onto him some more.



Aanchal jo udaa

Haan teri meharbaani hai

Thodi si ummeedon se aage

Aisi kahaani hai


Her scarf fall on his face due to a soft breeze and he can't help but smile at the beauty of the moment.



Leheron se hai

Saagar se gehri bhi hai

Ye teri meri baatein

Rulaati bhi hain

Gham mein hansati bhi hai

Ye teri meri baatein

Ye teri meri baatein..




Kabir encircled his right arm around nisha securing her while the sea waves touches their feet in a slow rythemic manner making it a blissful moment. Kabir felt so blessed to have two precious girls of his life in his arms. He wanted to cherish this memory of them for a lifetime and more. He slowly put a feathery kiss on tanu's forehead and then at nisha's hair and closed his eyes in satisfaction.



Nisha was in her room. This was the best evening of her life. She felt lucky to found kabir. " mera angel sach m mere pass h papa..ur mai use kabhi khi nhi jane dungi... " she said to her father's photo.


Kabir was smiling throughout the drive to his home while tanu was sleeping peacefully in the back seat. " Kabir kya ho gya h tjhe... kyu muskura rha h itna" he asked himself. Suddenly his eyes fell on something and his smile vanished. " mat soch ye sab kabir... isse bhi bda ek sach h..." his conscience told him and he applied the break while a tear tried to roll out of his eyes. "Kya hua bhaiyu..." tanu asked still in half sleep. Kabir immediately controlled his tears and said "kuch nhi hua princess... ghar aa gya... " he opened the door and picked little tanu in his arms. He unlocked the door of his home and made her sleep on her bed. Kabir sat beside her patting her head lovingly closing his eyes.


The next morning was the usual one. Nisha got up and prepared herself for the day. She went to work and came back with a bag full of chocolates for kids. As she entered ccrc she found kids giggling for some reason. An unknown smile appeared on her face too.


She walked towards them and found kabir doing a funny dance in front of the kids. He was making faces and doing wierd steps to make them laugh. Nisha saw him and couldn't stop herself from laughing out loud at his antics. Kabir stopped for a moment hearing that musical laughter. But soon a naughty glint arises in his eyes. He pulled nisha in his arms and started rolling her. She was shocked at this sudden act but soon started enjoying. They both danced admist the kids where the small happy beings clapped loudly for them. Dolly was standing at the door and saw the view. Kabir twirled her hard but soon his grip loosen and he lost his balance clutching on his chest. Nisha who fall beside him due to jerk looked at kabir horrified. " Kabir... u ok... kya hua tjhe..." she asked rubbing her palm against his chest. He closed his eyes firmly and one can see his expression and tell that he was having a severe pain attack. " Kabir bol na kya hua..." she asked. Kabir opened his eyes and managed a laugh. " Kuch nhi hua nisha... mai to majak kar rha tha... dekho kuch nhi hua mjhe... " he managed to sit. Nisha looked at him with anger clear evident in them. " Kabir are u out of ur mind... hadd hoti h... tmse baat hi karna bekar h" she hissed and walked inside with kids picking up the bag.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Mansi I will murder you if you show Kabir having some incureable disease ya usske dil main cheed hai ya uska dil kamzoor hai types something 😡
Isse zyada I won't say anything😆
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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B4 commenting on this Update I want to confess something Buasi🤗😳

Mujhe aisa q lag raha hai ki aap KHNK repeat karne ka soch rahi hai???😲 Actually Mujhe yeh dbt tab hua wen Kabir had a monologue on car while returning frm beach..🤔 & The Last part just confirmed my guess... Ek aur baath 😉Niyu Mamma ki comment se main bhi sehmath hu...🤣

Now coming to update...👏👏👏 As usual U racked with ur words...👍🏼
I must say It was a happy Update..😃

I loved the start where Nishu dream abt her parents & U wrote it so well dat it touched me..😳

Mere face par😃 aise hasi aayi wen I watched Nishu smiling luking at sleeping Kabira❤️

She tiptoed towards the couch and sat on the floor. " thank u kabir... thank u for everything... I will never cry again kabir.. I promise... thank u for watever u did for me in past one week and what u did yesterday... thank u for making me meet my parents one last time.. u truly my angel " she said. Kabir took a turn towards her. He looked like a small baby in his sleep... so innocent so carefree. She wanted to place a kiss on his forehead and this time she did what her heart said. She kissed his forehead and ruffled his hair a bit which made kabir smile in his sleep. Seeing him smiling a genuine and happy curve apperead on her face.

@BLUE Soo sweet...👏

K panti of Kabira😉 & NiBir happy moments😊 Superb👏

Finally our Happy Nishu is back...😃

"shayad do tute hue lgo ko apne khoye hue hisse mil gye.." she said looking at nisha who was laughing at some kid's antics. saurav understood what she wanted to say as he saw kabir coming to nisha with a goofy smile on his face.

I liked this sentence tooo @RED👍🏼👏

NiBir +Tanu Beach Scenes were such a relief & Plesant to watch...😃

The song added more freshness to the scenes👏👏👏👏

My fav portions frm this part @Violet❤️☺️

Kabir was watching them as they ran towards the sea and started jumping like small kids on the water.

Kabir's trance broke as tanu splashed a handful of water on his face. " Tanu ki bachhi... ruk" kabir said and ran after her. He picked some water and splashed on her but tanu ditched it in time so that water got splashed on nisha's face. "Hawww... kabir" nisha said and ran after him.

Kabir asked for time please and sat on the sand breathing heavily while nisha too sat in front of him kneeling, catching on her breath. Kabir admired her as she was laughing closing her eyes.

Nisha and tanu bought a bunch of ballons and let them flew. Tanu clapped happily looking at them while nisha looked at kabir communicating him through her eyes.

t was night by then and a very less no. Of people were present on the beach. Kabir sat beside a rock with tanu on his left. " Aao nishu di.." tanu called nisha who had bought ice creams for them. She handed over it to tanu and kabir settled herself on the right side of kabir. " nishu di story sunao na... " tanu asked. " tanu... mjhe koi story nhi aati... kabir u tell her a story" nisha said. " Ha mere bhaiyu ko sab aata h" she replied. Kabir ruffled his princess's hair and started narrating a story.

He looked at his princess who have fallen asleep in his arms when he felt a weight on his right shoulder. He turned and looked at sleeping nisha with her head on his shoulder.

He looked at her innocent face admiring her beauty in moon light. She squirmed in her sleep and move onto him some more.

Her scarf fall on his face due to a soft breeze and he can't help but smile at the beauty of the moment.

Thank U Buasi 4 writing these scenes so BEAUTIFULLY...!!!!!!!🤗👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

The Bestest part of this Update Which Made Me Awww☺️ & I had given a KT 4 dat adorable Scene☯️ @Orange☺️ Kabhi nazar na lage 🤗

Kabir encircled his right arm around nisha securing her while the sea waves touches their feet in a slow rythemic manner making it a blissful moment. Kabir felt so blessed to have two precious girls of his life in his arms. He wanted to cherish this memory of them for a lifetime and more. He slowly put a feathery kiss on tanu's forehead and then at nisha's hair and closed his eyes in satisfaction.


Sooo... Sooo... Beautiful❤️ it was to watch such a Swweettt Sceneee☯️ Hayeee❤️

Then Kabir's Selftalk as I told My reaction at the start of the comment & abt last scene too😊

Waiting 4 the Most UNEXPECTFULLY EXPECTED Shackkk

Thanks 4 PM😳
Sorry 4 Superlate comments😳

Do write more🤗 Q ki DMM (Happiness..😆)😳😆🤣


Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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superb update mansi👍🏼

mansi tune promise kia tha ki is baar tu nhi rulayegi...but tune nisha n RL ka covo itna beautifully likha ki padhte padhte hi mete aankh me aansu aa gye n mujhe pta hi nhi chla...superb yr...

loved how nisha promised her father loved her dream n d way u connected her dream wid puja ghar...awsm soch h yr teri loved it❤️

loved d way she said mai kabir ko kbhi apne se dur nhi jane dungi...

jab wo uthi to usne aankh kholte hi apne angel ko dekha usne uske forehead me kiss kia...

loved der coffee wala scene...👏...
nishu ne uspe pani fek dia🤣


loved der beach wala scene d way she slept in her shoulder...🤣 n he encircled his arm around her...u expressed his feelings so beautifully

loved der dance...❤️
lobed d wau dolly said dono k dard ne unhe milwa dia

mujhe aisa kyu lag ra ki kabir ko koi bimari h isiliye wo us samay car me bhi upset ho gya tha
plz kabir k sath kuch bura mat krna
nibir ko milwa dena
update nxt part soon👍🏼
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago

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