NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end

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hi k khaandaan... i know abhi maine ek story start ki h... ur use update bhi nhi kia h...😭 sorry for that... specially nihu 😭... but i couldn't take this story out of my head...😳 so presenting it to you... i hope u like it😳


<font size="3"> Love beyond life and death</font>



" Kabir bhaiya... dekho bhot ho gya... ab baahar aa jao na... please " a girl of 15 was continuously searching her brother in her whole apartment. She was being playfull at first but now she was getting worried as her brother was nowhere to be found. "Bhaiya... please..." she was almost crying when someone came in front of her from behind the curtain. " Booo" kabir scared her. She almost burst out in tears and hugged him tightly. " Bhaiya... pls don't do this again... pls... " she said crying. Kabir was aghast he didn't want to scare her this much... he only wanted to play with her. " m sorry princess... m so sorry... I promise I won't do it again" he said embracing her with love patting her head lovingly.

They are the lovable bro-sis duo... kabir and tammana. Kabir is in his early twenties where as tammana is a teenager. Kabir is her father, mother, sibling, friend everything. Kabir's father has had a small business which now he lookafter. He kept his sis like a true princess despite every difficulty which come in there way. One thing which scares tanu the most is a single thought of losing him.

" meri tanu ko maine dra dia na... u can give me any punishment for it.. I will accept... " he said holding his ears.
She smiled in tears " Promise me... u won't leave me ever". A sad smile appears on his face. " I promise u princess... I would never leave you... but if I ever had to... u will still smile for me" he said looking at her cupping her face. She cried again but nodded in a yes too. He embraced her again with a smile.



A girl of somewhat kabir's age was sitting in a park. The nature's beauty was at its peak with blossoming flowers all around but the magic wasn't reaching to her. She was in tears... she wanted to cry her heart out but something was locking it up and it was paining more. She felt as if a stab was present in her heart but the pain was manifold because that knife was still there deepening her wound every time. She was nisha... a girl who had lost what she considered her treasure. She lost her family in an accident who were on their way to meet nisha after a month.


From somewhere a small kid appeared in front of her. " didi aap kyu ro rhe ho... aapka toy gum ho gya h kya " the innocent being asked her with cuteness. Nisha looked at him and just hugged him. " Ha bachha... mera sab kuch kho gya h... kisine chhen lia mjhse... mjhse ur nhi saha ja rha... mjhe sab kuch waapas chahiye... mere papa... meri maa... mera bhai... sab kuch... " she cried her heart out. The kid didn't know what was happening so he just hugged her back. After some time the kid broke apart from her and wiped her tears with his tiny hands. " didi... aap to itte bade ho na... dekho mai to abhi kitta chhota sa hu... fir bhi jab mera toy toot jata h na to mai rota nhi hu... kyuki hmari dolly di kehti h ki jo cheej chali jati h... vo kisi ur ro... ro... ro.." the kid stammered. " Roop..." nisha completed his word. " Ha roop.. vo kisi ur roop m waapas aati h" he said. She smiled at him and felt a little better. " chalo na didi... dolly di k pass chalte h..." the kid pulled her and dragged her towards a bungalow. Nisha looked at the gate which read " CHILDREN'S CANCER REHAB CENTRE". Her heart squeezed painfully and she saw that happy chirpy kid beside her. " tum yha rehte ho... " she asked and hope to hear a no. " ha didi... chalo na... mere ur bhi friends h ander... di bhi h" he said and dragged her inside. " are aarav... kha chale gye the... mai kab se tmhe dhund rhi hu... u know na u r not allowed to go outside without any elder.." a girl in her mid twenties was scolding aarav. " Sorry dolly di... par ye wali didi h na wha ro rhi thi to mai islie baahar gya tha " he said pointing towards nisha. He then immediately ran away from further inquiry. " hi... m dolly jain " she said extending her hand towards nisha. Nisha smiled and shook hands with her. " m nisha... " she said. " I hope aarav ne koi badmashi nhi ki h aap k sath " dolly said. " Nhi... he is very cute " nisha said " aap yha kaam karte h " nisha asked. " nhi ye mera center h... ise mai ur mere husband mil k chalate h... " dolly replied and gesture her to come with her. " yha ye saare bachhe rehte h... jo cancer patients h ur jinke parents ya to nhi h ya treatment afford nhi kar sakte... " dolly continued. Nisha didn't said anything just walked beside her while dolly noticed her tear marks. " nisha... can we be friends... " she asked. Nisha looked up at her and smiled sadly at her saying " friends ". " To ab apni dost ko btaogi nhi ki kyu ro rhi thi tm " she asked. " kuch nhi... " nisha replied. " nisha... tmne suna h na... ki dukh baatne se kam hota h... to please mjhe btao kya hua h " she asked softly. It reminded nisha of her mother who always had said the same thing. " maa bhi yhi kehti thi... " she said. " Matlab" dolly asked. " meri family... kuch din pehle... ek car accident m... " nisha couldn't complete her words when dolly hugged her and let her cry out. She patted her back soothingly because she knew what it meant when someone who u consider ur part dies. " nisha... shant ho ja..." dolly whispered. " mai... mai ab kya karungi dolly di... mai... " she sobbed. " nisha I know... I know how it feels... I have lost my child nishu... " dolly said tears rolling through her eyes. Nisha broke the hug and looked at her in disbelief. " ha nisha... mera chhota sa ansh... mjhe chhod ke chala gya... cancer tha use... par dekh aaj mere kitne saare bachhe h... bilkul mere ansh jaise... " dolly said looking at the kids playing. " nisha... agar jo chala gya h use seene se lga k baithi rhogi to jo aane wala h... use kaise accept karogi.." she said holding her hand. Nisha looked at her with tears. " rona band karo nisha... unhe bhi achha nhi lgega na... tm chaho to yha aake in bachho k sath apna dil behla sakti ho... achha lgega tmhe..." she squeezed her hand assuring her. Nisha smiled at her and they both sat on a bench seeing the kids laughing and playing.

" Tanu... kabir... kha ho yaar..." saurav shouted. " Are aa gye bhai... kyu itna chillata h" kabir said. " To tu itna time kyu lagata h ur vo hmari miss world kha h... " he said. " Aa gyi mai sauro bhaiya... mai bachho k lie chocolates laane gyi thi.." she said beaming. " Dekha... how sweet my princess is.." kabir said proudly. " Are ha ha... tu ur teri behen... ab chalo bhi..." saurav said and they sat in saurav' s car.

The car screeched to the halt outside CCRC and the trio went in. Kids came running towards them. " tanu di... meri chocolate lae ho na" aarav asked cutely. " Ha my jaan... ye rhi..." tanu bent on her knees and kissed his cheeks. She distributed the chocolates while kabir and sauro looked at the kids. After the distribution ceremony tanu and saurav walked towards dolly who was sitting with nisha while kabir was busy playing with the kids. " hi dolly di... " tanu said hugging her. " hi princy... how's your school.." dolly asked. " Boring as usual" she said. Dolly laughed. " nisha... meet tanu oh sorry tammana meri choti si but samajhdaar friend ur saurav mere husband " dolly introduced nisha to them. Nisha's trance broke with her voice and she did a hi to both of them. Dolly signalled them to come with her through her eyes " nisha u stay here... mai abhi aati hu " nisha nodded and again slipped into her thoughts.

" dolly... ye ladki kaun h " saurav asked. " Ha dolly di pehle to kabhi nhi dekha inhe " tanu asked curiously. Dolly then told them the incidence and her talk with nisha. " she is in a very bad state sauro... I fear khi vo kuch..." she said and stopped. " kuch nhi karegi vo dolly... agar use kuch karna hota to kab ka kar chuki hoti... par bus hme uski thodi help karni hogi... " saurav said. " Ha dolly di... sauro bhaiya is right... " tanu said. " Hmmm " dolly said. " Ur mai janti hu ki ye kaun kar sakta h " tanu winked at them.

Nisha was still in her thoughts and didn't knew when tears started flowing through her eyes again. She was crying and cursing god for so much of pain. " nishu jab dil m bahut dard bhar jata h na... to bhagwan hmare lie ek angel bhejta h... jo hmse hmara saara dard chhin leta h... hme khushi deta h... tera angel bhi aaega nishu... tjhe har khushi dene..." her father's voice ringed in her ears. She look up through her tears to see someone coming towards her. She felt a tug in her heart. Her heart screamed that her angel has came to snatch away the pain. She didn't think further and ran with whatever is left in her to him. She couldn't see properly his face but hugged him tightly clutching on him for her dear life. She cried... cried like never before. That stabbing knife disappeared in his arms. The wound was still there but constant pain was gone.

Here kabir who had came to pick the ball was in a shock. But this girl was crying like anything and suddenly he too wanted to cry with her. Her pain was causing equal pain to him too. She was affecting him like no one has. He wanted to cure her pain and take away all her tears and make her smile asap. He didn't know when he hugged her back as tightly as he could. He crushed her unto him and started patting her back gently stroking it in circles. He didn't realize when he too started crying with her. Suddenly he felt her grip loosen and a weight on his chest. He pushed her a little to look if she was ok. But she has fainted. He got all worried for her but somewhere his heart admired her beauty at that time.

Kabir picked her up in his arms and took her to the kid's room. He made her lay down on the bed and asked aarav to bring a glass of water. His attention divert towards her again when she pulled his t- shirt clutching on it that's when he realised that her face was pale. The tear marks, the pain so evident that his heart squeezed painfully. He wanted to kiss away all her tears. He shifted a bit and was going to put a kiss on her forehead when aarav came in with a glass of water making kabir realise what he was going to do. He pulled himself back and took the glass of water from him.

" kya hua ise... " dolly entered all worried for nisha with saurav and tanu. " Kuch nhi hua di... ye wali didi na faint ho gyi... to kabir bhaiya na unhe apni god uthake yha le aae " aarav explained. " dolly... kaun h ye... ur itna kyu ro rhi h..." kabir asked her pain evident in his voice. " Nisha... nisha h iska naam kabir... baki sab sauro bta dega tmhe... " dolly said and sat beside nisha patting her head. " Kabir... " saurav called him and they both were out of the room in a minute. " tanu... ise thoda paani pila... mai bachho ko dekhti hu ur doc ko phone kar deti hu vo aake dekh jaenge... " dolly said. Tanu nodded and made nisha drink some water and began to think what they just saw from the window. The care and concern in kabir's eyes when he was with her was making tanu to think over it.

" sauro... vo..." kabir said feeling choked. " Kabir... vo nisha h aaj hi dolly se mili thi... aarav lekar aaya use jab vo ro rhi thi park m akeli..." he said. " hua kya h use.." kabir asked. Saurav told him nisha's story. Kabir was at loss of words, he knew how it feels but he had tanu with him. Here nisha didn't have anybody with her. Saurav can see a change of emotions in his eyes. He knew what he was thinking. Saurav put his hand on Kabir's shoulder and turned him. " Kabir..." saurav can see tears brimming in kabir's eyes. He just hugged him.

Here dolly came back to nisha who was still sleeping due to injection. Doc has examined her and told them to take care of her as she was very weak and stressed. " Tanu kya soch rhi h..." dolly asked still patting nisha's head. " kuch nhi dolly di... vo kabir bhaiya..." tanu said. " kabir thik h tanu... sauro hai na uske sath... tu itta stress mat le..." dolly said to which she smiled.

Kabir and saurav came back to the room. " tanu... ask all the kids to be in tv room... its dark outside now and make them eat something too " saurav said to which tanu obliged. " sauro I have to talk to u... kabir can u please take care of her " dolly said. Kabir nodded and sat beside nisha. Saurav and dolly left the room. Kabir kept looking at her angelic yet saddened face. Nisha stirred in her sleep. Kabir just held her hand and started stroking it gently. He can very well see her pain soothing. He kept looking at her confused. What he just felt haven't happened before. He sat on the stool beside the bed and kept thinking about how strange life is. Everyone has its share of happiness and sorrow but sometimes the pain outwits the happiness. " I didn't know why but I will make u smile nisha... and I promise that " he said.

Dolly and saurav came back to see nisha still sleeping but she had clutched kabir's arm in hers and here kabir was sleeping on the stool with his head on the bedside. Dolly and saurav smiled seeing them. " sometimes pain gives u what happiness can't " saurav said. " may be this tough time will gift them something precious " dolly replied. " I hope for the same dolly both of them badly need someone..." they both agreed to each other. "Mai in dno k lie kuch khane k lie rakh deti hu... kabir ne to kuch khaya h nhi... ur nisha ki haalat dekh k lagta h ki ye itti aasani se nhi khaegi... " she said. " Hmmm tanu ko tm apne sath le jao... mai bachho k paas rahunga" saurav said.

</font></font>ok i know its so abrupt... but i can't help it... m feeling too low to write more...😭



index-
part 1 above
part 2 page 7
part 3 page 17
part 4 page 25
part 5 page 32
part 6 page 39
part 7 page 46
PART 8 page 53
part 9 page 60
part 10 page 68
part 11 page 75
part 12 page 90
part 13 page 97
part 14 page 106
part 15 page 116

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Buasi😡😡😡😆 Wat is this????😕 Pehle aapne mujhe PM nahi bheja.. 🤣 Aur ab toh yeh stry pesh karke mujhe Rulane pe tule huye ho🤔 jo Saru ki reputataion kharab kar dega...🤣🤣🤣

Awesome Title...👏👏👏 Wen I read it I thought U wl say NiBir's Stry after death😆🤣 But jab padha toh I felt like it Squeezed My heart🤔 Yaar Aise rulane ka kaam q kar rahe ho???🤔

Buasi As I always said U had a gud Writing skill & Ur Use of words r just too PERFECT that it can touch HEART😳 Same Happened here too...😳

I was Aww ng at Kabir-Tanu Bond...

I was feeling sad With Nishu's State...😔

I was Shaccked at the Revelation of Cute Aarav's Truth & Dolly's Ansh😲🤔

I felt Soo Overwhelmed & Relieved When Nishu Hugged Kabir & @RED this para was my most fav..😳 It just Just My Heart🤗

She look up through her tears to see someone coming towards her. She felt a tug in her heart. Her heart screamed that her angel has came to snatch away the pain. She didn't think further and ran with whatever is left in her to him. She couldn't see properly his face but hugged him tightly clutching on him for her dear life. She cried... cried like never before. That stabbing knife disappeared in his arms. The wound was still there but constant pain was gone.

Here kabir who had came to pick the ball was in a shock. But this girl was crying like anything and suddenly he too wanted to cry with her. Her pain was causing equal pain to him too. She was affecting him like no one has. He wanted to cure her pain and take away all her tears and make her smile asap. He didn't know when he hugged her back as tightly as he could. He crushed her unto him and started patting her back gently stroking it in circles. He didn't realize when he too started crying with her.



I m happy dat Nishu ko Kabir ke roop main uska Angel mil gaya...🤗 Waise Mujhe ab bhi dbt hai Y Kabir said to Tanu Dat Agar Kair ko usse door jaan apade toh kabhi dukhi math hona... Pls Nishu ko badi mushkil se Kabir ke roop main apne dard batne ke liye ek ANGEL mila hai.. ab usse yeh aakhiri umeed bhi math cheen na... same is 4 Tanu too.. She loves her bro so much.. dnt broke this bro-sis bond...😊

Waise Saurav ne teekh bola hai.. @BLUE👏

" sometimes pain gives u what happiness can't " saurav said. " may be this tough time will gift them something precious " dolly replied. "


Kuch bhi Kaho Buasi... This Story was too much heart-wrenching...🤔 and it proves ur Magical power to play with words aur vo bhi baariki ke saath shabdom se khelthi ho aap...👏👏👏
Pls... Aage se Iss Story main Senti ko thoda rest de dena..🤣 aur phir Khushi ki dastak de dena..😳 I badly want NiBir, Tannu, All Children & DoSa to SMILE😃

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: Agli baar PM zaroor bhejna.. 😆SYS??😈
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res😆
unres😉
sorry for late comment...
mindblowing story mansi...👏
just got carried away with it...
all the emotions beautifully portrayed...kabir felt nisha's pain...
they both need each other...kabir ko nisha se mat chinna...
the bro-sis bond is soo beautiful...loved it😳
update soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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u r too good with the use of words mansi 👍🏼
nisha's pain n sadness was well portrayed 👏
kabira cares for nisha awww so sweet
dolly Saurav kids tanu all are perfect charecters each n every word u used was perfect
it's beyond perfection
this story is just amazing
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mansi loved it...
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It nearly made me cry 😭
You've conveyed the emotions so well 👏
Loved it to the core 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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isilie tujhe pm nhi bheja 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its my new favourite story.. I am going to read it when ever I feel like crying 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update Mansi n thx for the pm. Very well written
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Originally posted by: Niya_789


Its my new favourite story.. I am going to read it when ever I feel like crying 😊

awww niyu... thanks... it was written when I was feeling the same
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mansi yeh kya tha yaar😭
maine niyu ki ek episode mai bahuth roya tha uske baath phir se kuch padke ro raha hu😭
please mansi aur likho na chota sa hi sahi par want to see smile on nibir faces 😊please aisa math karo please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
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