NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#931

Originally posted by: luvmishri

exms went good 😃 hope rslt bhi acha aaye , first clg exms the nd evryn is scaring me😔
all the best fr ur exms😃 u r a medical student na
hehe but i m more greedy fr ur stories 😉
BTW wll wait fr this to get published

i will wait too 😆

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: arviabhigya
Warning: This time I m not quoting my fav parts or lines cz I m a bit pressed for time and energy. Have sorted of only mentioned the parts like a summary so sorry to disappoint u 😉
As usual I m again at a loss for words to describe this chapter😆Yaar Mansi I never get the correct adjectives to describe your chapters😆
Chapter 4- Heart wrenching chapter yaar👏🤗
You feel the pain in Nibir's hearts❤️
Love Dolly-Kabir's bond😳Love howDolly urges him to tell the truth to Nisha and how she assures him that Nisha will be strong enough to handle what Kabir tells her😃
Love that part where Dolly says that she wont reveal anything to Nisha cz only he has d right to do so👏
Love his convo with Saurav😳
achha thik h... nhi bolunga par tu bhi mjhe daantega nhi... vo kaam teri biwi achhe se karke gyi h" he said making a cute baby face.- Kabir bhi na😳kitna cute hai😳
Love how concerned both husband-wife are for Nibir😃
Love that part where she realizes she is in love with Kabir😃❤️
That Nibir part in d lawn was so beautiful and lovely😳Love how she thinks she is hallucinating and is lost in his eyesLove how she turns red when she is caught by him😆Also love how she tries to be angry with him but cant. The care they have for each other and the unspoken parts of their conversation was wonderful👏👏
Love how she is so restless to meet kabir😳
Loved how Dolly supported Nisha and assures her that Kabir is not angry with her.
U feel bad for them when Kabir decides to avoid Nisha in order to avoid giving any pain to her. He cares so much about her yaar
Waise love the way u have penned down Nibir's thoughts about each other👏👏👏
" ha... nisha..." her musical voice soothed his aching heart. He closed his eyes getting him sink in that soft music. But soon his mind registered what he heard and he jerked up to look at the most beautiful girl of his life standing right in front of him holding a water bottle and a candle. He again got lost in the beauty of her face when she splashed the whole water bottle on his face.- This part❤️ loved this😳love how they both keep dreaming of each other❤️pehle nisha aur ab kabir😳and the way she splashed water on his face was hilarious😆🤣
And that mini confrontation in the end👏⭐️
Love how she started beating him and ended up sobbing😊The pain in their hearts at this moment is beautifully conveyed Mansi👏👏
" Perfect she is " his heart screamed.- My favorite line❤️Love how she completes him, his unspoken words, his feelingsThey are soulmates indeed❤️
Felt bad for Nibir in the end
Love how his mind was saying something else while his heart was screaming the opposite😃
Loved the way u ended the chapter on a high with Kabir lying to Nisha that he doesnt love her and her world crashing👏

oh mihu... i surely miss u and ir comments... kaise bhi ho but they never fails to bring a grin on my face... that too subah subah .. 😳 thank u sooo much for this lovely comment and tum kya mai bhi aajkal kuch busy hi hu 😆

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#933

chalo i m glad that they have such an effect mansi😃😳

waise i just checked d time of ur comment and u were online at 6 in d morning😆😆😆

now i get why u said itni subah subah🤣

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#934

Originally posted by: arviabhigya
chalo i m glad that they have such an effect mansi😃😳
waise i just checked d time of ur comment and u were online at 6 in d morning😆😆😆
now i get why u said itni subah subah🤣

the first thing i do in the mng... arrr... not excatly the first thing but yeah.. u get my point 😆

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ashveena

@Ashveena.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#935

Finally read this amazing amazing story*taking a deep breath* 😆 emotional roller coaster ride with lot of twists and turn lots of rona dhona and beautiful beautiful moments which made me go awww😳 gosh I'm crying right now it was so emotional and beautiful loved it totally mansi!!you are an amazing writer you're a gem mansi you've written everything so well every damn emotion and feeling portrayed so well Im in love with this story this story deserves to be appreciated you should publish this story this story deserves much more recognition you're a star mansi I love you mansi ❤️ I have been through the similar thing I know what it feels like I have been through the same pain chemo session fear of dying fear of leaving your family your loved ones behind seeing them suffering waking up everyday with that weird felling of being ill and battling with it hope hopelessness relapse etc etc while reading this story I felt every damn thing reading this story was like going through the flashbacks the best part of the story was where Kabir disclosed about his illness to aarav gosh i was literally crying that part reminded me of the moment when my Maa and my father told me about my leukemia diagnosis I felt as if it's happening again in front of my eyes and when aarav read nibir's letter that part was heart wrenching 😭 😭 nisha choose Kabir over aarav she could have been there with aarav if she would've got the proper treatment but she didn't want to be there without Kabir may be because she knew that she wouldn't be able to live without him 🤔 aarav's angst after knowing nisha's truth and his breakdown 😭 👏 mansi loved this amazing amazing roller coaster ride ❤️ sorry for the late comment 🤗 after my cancer diagnosis i was so sacred that I always avoided reading stuff related with cancer but your story is irresistible I couldn't afford to die without reading it 😆 loved it so much ❤️ ❤️ I'm emotionally drained after reading this 😭 it was much needed nowadays I've become completely weird I don't feel like crying completely emotionless but after reading this story I can feel the ocean of emotions and tears building up again😆 this push was much needed...
You did complete justice to this story mansi you did complete justice to the subject of this story.kudos to you!!!!

Edited by Ashveena. - 8 years ago

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 8 years ago

#936

Originally posted by: Ashveena.
Finally read this amazing amazing story*taking a deep breath* 😆 emotional roller coaster ride with lot of twists and turn lots of rona dhona and beautiful beautiful moments which made me go awww😳 gosh I'm crying right now it was so emotional and beautiful loved it totally mansi!!you are an amazing writer you're a gem mansi you've written everything so well every damn emotion and feeling portrayed so well Im in love with this story this story deserves to be appreciated you should publish this story this story deserves much more recognition you're a star mansi I love you mansi ❤️ I have been through the similar thing I know what it feels like I have been through the same pain chemo session fear of dying fear of leaving your family your loved ones behind seeing them suffering waking up everyday with that weird felling of being ill and battling with it hope hopelessness relapse etc etc while reading this story I felt every damn thing reading this story was like going through the flashbacks the best part of the story was where Kabir disclosed about his illness to aarav gosh i was literally crying that part reminded me of the moment when my Maa and my father told me about my leukemia diagnosis I felt as if it's happening again in front of my eyes and when aarav read nibir's letter that part was heart wrenching 😭 😭 nisha choose Kabir over aarav she could have been there with aarav if she would've got the proper treatment but she didn't want to be there without Kabir may be because she knew that she wouldn't be able to live without him 🤔 aarav's angst after knowing nisha's truth and his breakdown 😭 👏 mansi loved this amazing amazing roller coaster ride ❤️ sorry for the late comment 🤗 after my cancer diagnosis i was so sacred that I always avoided reading stuff related with cancer but your story is irresistible I couldn't afford to die without reading it 😆 loved it so much ❤️ ❤️ I'm emotionally drained after reading this 😭 it was much needed nowadays I've become completely weird I don't feel like crying completely emotionless but after reading this story I can feel the ocean of emotions and tears building up again😆 this push was much needed...
You did complete justice to this story mansi you did complete justice to the subject of this story.kudos to you!!!!

ashu... this would be the best comment on this story i ever got... 🤗 luv u girl... u will be up and alright...