kuch ankahi..Navya ki zubani.updated page 20... - Page 8

Originally posted by: laddoo598

Di how do you do it? Its like you get under Navya's skin while writing..You are like the window to Navya's mind now..👏👏
Especially loved the following lines:

Par iss baat se mujhpar jo bit rahi hai, kisse kahun..

Maine pyar kiya hai, koi galti nahi..ye kisse kahun..

Mera dil to ek hi hai..uske do tukde main bhi to kaise karu...
No matter how many praises I shower on you it still won't be enough..Brilliant job, and do keep writing :)

Hey Tanu🤗..thank you for your lovely and encouraging comments...this words coming from you means a lot to me😊..

Originally posted by: bs8889

I have no words 2 express how much i loved this poem..trust me i cant think of any adjective that'l sufficiently it...👏

Every time i read your poem i'm transported 2 Navya's world..it seems as if i'm navya coz i can feel each n every emotion of her's thru ur words.. literally touches me deep in d heart...

Loved the whole piece especially d last lines...

Par iss baat se mujhpar jo bit rahi hai, kisse kahun..

Maine pyar kiya hai, koi galti nahi..ye kisse kahun..

Mera dil to ek hi hai..uske do tukde main bhi to kaise karu...

so true..poor thing doesnt know wat 2 do now..on one hand she wants win her mom's trust back on d other she cant think of loosing Anant...

PLzz do continue as n ven possible..wil really luk forward 2 it...😊

Aww Sonia..thank you so much for your kind and lovely comments..it was very sweet of you..

Originally posted by: navyaalex8

Very nice and well done again Urmi! I'm glad you decided to continue this poem.I loved these lines:

kya mere iss pyar ko Maa samajh payegi?

kya papa, mujh par naaz karpayenge?

kya dadi, mujhe duniya ki sabe pyari poti bula payegi?

It expresses Navya's fears and anxieties exactly...I'm awaiting the next one already!

Thank you for you sweet reply dear..i am happy you guys liked my decision to continue with this poem..it is becaue of all those lovely and kind comments that i got from all of you, that encouraged me to continue..and also i guess the CV's gave me the oppotunity to express navya's pain and dilemma...

Originally posted by: svkworld2

Very well written, yet again Urmi!! You have captured Navya's emotions very well.

Waiting for the next one...

thank you for your reply Shilpa😊..will defn try to update this soon...

Originally posted by: Newly_Born

Wow! Ossam yaar. Liked it.

thank you for liking it Arvind..

Fantabulous, Urmi...👏🤗.

Urmi...its beautiful...u have written Navya's dil ki baat but some of the lines used to be my dil ki baat...keep writing...

Originally posted by: barbie2011

thank you for the reply dear..

welcome it was really touching

awesome awesome there is no word for ur creativity

Originally posted by: Aanchal15

Fantabulous, Urmi...👏🤗.

You have captivated my heart with these poignant lines...Navya's diffidences have been so aptly surmised by, you..It feels like you are able to interpret the various emotions coz you are a fragment of her soul...❤️👏

Hey Aanchal ..🤗..thank you for your lovely reply...and you said it dear...even i feel either I am fragment of her soul or she is fragment of mine..because i just feel her too strongly...