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barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Reshmi_AnYa
Urmi...its beautiful...u have written Navya's dil ki baat but some of the lines used to be my dil ki baat...keep writing...

thank you for your sweet reply dear...it is so kind of you...i guess navya and her dil ki baat is so close to most of us, that even i add some of my dil ki baat into it easily, I am glad you were able to some glimpses of your dil ki baat too..

thank you dear..

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: rosettablooms
awesome awesome there is no word for ur creativity
u r lucky to have this talent

may b u il bec a poet👏

thank you for your kind and appreciating words dear...

i write poem , when somethings connects to me and touches me deep down..I love writing, but i am not that good to be a poet dear..but thak you so much for your lovely words...

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Siona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

simply marvellous good job yaar

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

its fabulous di i m at loss of words .its awesome 👏

Edited by manojshonafan - 14 years ago

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: kriya17
simply marvellous good job yaar

thank you for your reply dear..

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: manojshonafan
its fabulous di i m at loss of words .its awesome 👏

Thank you for this round of applause manoj...it means a lot..i am glad youl iked it...

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ashakd

@ashakd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Hey Urmi sorry for the delay in replying.Very beautifully written and very well captured. Loved the way u depicted the emotions of navya. Before seeing navya serial, I would never have understood it, much as much as i do understand it now.

Par iss baat se mujhpar jo bit rahi hai, kisse kahun..

Maine pyar kiya hai, koi galti nahi..ye kisse kahun..

Mera dil to ek hi hai..uske do tukde main bhi to kaise karu...

Loved that last 3 lines. She is so lost now, she can do nothing and very difficult to break her heart into 2.

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: ashakd

Hey Urmi sorry for the delay in replying.Very beautifully written and very well captured. Loved the way u depicted the emotions of navya. Before seeing navya serial, I would never have understood it, much as much as i do understand it now.

Par iss baat se mujhpar jo bit rahi hai, kisse kahun..

Maine pyar kiya hai, koi galti nahi..ye kisse kahun..

Mera dil to ek hi hai..uske do tukde main bhi to kaise karu...

Loved that last 3 lines. She is so lost now, she can do nothing and very difficult to break her heart into 2.

Hey asha..i am glad you visited my post again..that was so sweet of you...

thank you for your reply and sweet comments dear...I am glad you liked my poem..

the last 3 lines are one of my favourites too...

NAvya is gng thru unbearable pain..and there is nothing that she or anyone can do to help her...

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nuttycleo

@nuttycleo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Hi Urmi...sorry...just getting the chance to read your updated version...it brought tears to my eyes...the lines on Ma now considering her a stranger & not knowing where is Navya headed...touched my heart...& Navya...how true na..cheated by time!! Otherwise she would have admitted herself...its so heart wrenching!! Keep it up my dear...🤗

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: nuttycleo
Hi Urmi...sorry...just getting the chance to read your updated version...it brought tears to my eyes...the lines on Ma now considering her a stranger & not knowing where is Navya headed...touched my heart...& Navya...how true na..cheated by time!! Otherwise she would have admitted herself...its so heart wrenching!! Keep it up my dear...🤗

Hey Pooja, thank you for your sweet reply dear..yes navya is cheated by time..and now only time can prove its honesty to meeta maa.