Tusi ja rahe ho? Tussi nah jao- Avneil SS~Part 9 teaser on Page 20 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Beautiful update Tia
I hope they will not have divorce
Continue soon
Lots of Love
Zainab

Thankyouu Zainab😊
I myself don't know if they will divorce or not yet😆
Will continue soon😊

Originally posted by: vu1998

I m having goosebumps... It was damn beautiful Tia..

Thank God you focussed that scene... I m in love with this scene...

Neil said Avni while talking... Which is good.. So she don't have any misunderstanding about Juhi...

His every move and word was awesome...

Although Sid interrupted them...

But even then enjoyed it a lot..

Tum tayiyaar nahi bhi hoti to bhi acchi lagti..

Wifey, koi bhi humme dekh sakte hain. I don't care. Tumhare dost tumse chipeke naach sakta hai toh mein tumhare husband hone ke naata se tumse ek quiet hallway ke under chipek hi sakta hoon.

I am in love with these lines..

Please update soon..

Lots of love.. And a wadda wala thank you..

Vihu

You are way too kind, Vihu!! Thankyouu so much lovely, coming from you this a huge compliment❤️
Yeh, I wanted Neel to clarify her name, before she herself got lost in him😉 Otherwise our Avni would have felt guilty about it😆
Mein soch rahi thi ki kaun unko interrupt kare. Sidhant would be the only one not to bring up the fact that they are separated since he didn't know himself, and Avneil's actions don't make it seem like they aren't together😛
haha,Neel had to assert that he still thought of himself as her husband somehow but I too enjoyed writing those lines (they were slightly inspired from the Avni-Neel jealous nok-jhok scene)😉
All the love❤️

Originally posted by: ShailjaShan

Aww!! Kitna cute scene tha..

Sorry not only cute but hot too..

And their little behes that confirm that they are so into each other.. Fir bhi realise nai kr rhe.. Neil toh realise that he loves Avni now it's Avni's turn..

And please update soon..

Waiting for next part..

Hahaha, thanks Shailja😊
Exactly yar, Neel is near his realization. Lekin our Avni will still take a while because she's never thought about the prospect of love and what it entails. She's confused about her emotions
Will do lovely😊

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Superb update
Both are getting jealous
Update next part soon

Thankyouu Gurveen🤗
Thodi jealousy toh pyar mein hoti hi hain😉
Will do😊

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

this was beautiful !

the last line ESP was heartbreaking . kuch din mei hamari divorce papers aa jyenge 💔x

she knew of juhi n thought he was thinking her as juhi . 😲

nice lines tum tayar bhi nahi hoti toh achi lagti 😳

make him find out that she too loves him without her knowledge.

waiting for the next😃 I thought you would mention the ringtone of Neil something clichey😆 or prank type

Thank youu Sri🤗
Yeh, I was going to extend the last line to make it even sadder but then I thought against it. Next chapter will talk about more about the possible divorce.😭
Yeh, they find each other beautiful, no matter what 😆
I was going to!! But I thought I already used too many cliches in the chapter by using the DDLJ line😉

Just bumped into this FF, and fell in love with it right away, the same way I fell in love with AvNeil on the show, quite recently.

You didnt disappoint!! THIS UPDATE WAS AMAZING!!! SO SEXY AND CUTE AT THE SAME TIME!! Please dont make them get divorced. Please make them confess soon!!

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Just bumped into this FF, and fell in love with it right away, the same way I fell in love with AvNeil on the show, quite recently.

I totally love the way you are penning down this story and look forward to the next chapter eagerly! 😳

Thanks Simi.😊
Did you just get into Naamkarann? Watch old Avneil scenes, you'll really enjoy the scenes!😳
Can I just ask, did you watch Ask laftan Anlamaz?😆
Nawww, thanks. I will be posting it soon 😊

Originally posted by: RoshniSahai

You didnt disappoint!! THIS UPDATE WAS AMAZING!!! SO SEXY AND CUTE AT THE SAME TIME!! Please dont make them get divorced. Please make them confess soon!!

Thanks Roshni!😊
I can't make any promises yet because I myself don't know how I'm gonna write the next chapter😆

Originally posted by: Affinity

Thanks Simi.😊
Did you just get into Naamkarann? Watch old Avneil scenes, you'll really enjoy the scenes!😳
Can I just ask, did you watch Ask laftan Anlamaz?😆
Nawww, thanks. I will be posting it soon 😊