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Posted: 17 years ago
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@bubblygurl

Ya me too! 😉 Thanks a lot..

@lrl_01
Thanks for reading..means a lot to me! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Outside the auditorium
(Gunjan and Samrat are abt to go in when Gunjan sees Nupur at a distance, alone and sad.)

Gunjan: (to herself) lagta hai di aur Mayank ki abhi bhi koi baat nahi hui..tabhi itni pareshan lag rahi hai..
Samrat: arey main to yahi hu. Khayalon me kise dhund rahi ho chashmish?
Gunjan: ek minute..main di se baat karke aati hu..
Samrat: (suddenly sees Benji chatting up a cute girl) acha thik hai..jaldi aana..(going closer to her..softly says..) mujhe zyada intezaar to nahi karwaogi na?
Gunjan: uh..nahi..bas aa rahi hu.

(She walks up to Nupur)

Gunjan: kya baat hai di? Ab to mood thik kar lo. Waise bhi kal tumhara dance bhi toh hai.
Nupur: Mayank ne toh kal gusse me kaha tha k wo dance nahi karega.
Gunjan: arey wo usne aise hi kaha hoga. Kaha hai woh? Main usse baat karti hu.
Nupur: wo aaj college nahi aaya. Shayad kal bhi nahi ayega.
Gunjan: tum chinta mat karo. I m sure wo aa jaayega.
Nupur: kaash aisa hi ho..(forcefully smiles) chal tu apni rehearsal kar le. Meri wajah se pareshan mat ho.
Gunjan: thik hai di. Main audi me hu..

(Gunjan leaves. Nupur is still standing there when she suddenly feels a hand on her shoulder. She gets excited thinking Mayank has finally come. As she turns around...)

Nupur: Mayank! Mujhe pata tha tum aaoge..
CJ: kya baat hai..Mayank k muh pe Nupur ka naam..Nupur k muh pe Mayank ka!
Nupur: oh CJ tum..sorry mujhe laga Mayank hai.
CJ: Sorry? Ha anyways! Actually Mayank tumhare saath hi dikhta hai, aaj nahi hai to socha tumse puch lu.
Nupur: (doesn't reply)
CJ: hello? tumhara phir se boxing match toh shuru nahi ho gaya na?
(Suddenly She sees Shukla Sir coming towards them and flees from there.)

Nupur: (to herself) Mayank plz mujhe maaf kar do. Mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi..tab pata hota ki ab itna bura lagega to kuch bhi karke project bana leti. Haye itna bura to kabhi kisi teacher ki daant ka bhi nahi laga jitna Mayank ki baat ka lag raha hai. Kya ho gaya hai mujhe?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Last update for the day..😉

That night
All our 4 lead characters are lost in their own thoughts..some sweet, some not so sweet.

Gunjan: kal talent parade hai. Pehli baar stage pe sabke saamne gaungi..pata nahi ga bhi paungi ya nahi..par Samrat ne itni mehnat ki hai..use niraash nahi kar sakti. Bhagwan..sab thik kar dena!

(Thinks back to when Samrat had listened to her singing in the AV room and how he had praised her..how he had sneaked into her room at night..how he had helped motivate her..She thinks also abt what she had felt the first time he had touched her hand..and how she had started to like this totally anti-Bhavesh and different from her, cool dude Samrat)

Samrat: kal chashmish gaayegi..aur sabka dil jeet legi..Ha! Miss Dia, Samrat se shart lagana bahut badi bewakoofi hai..kulhadi par apna paer maarne k barabar hai.

(Thinks abt how much effort he had put into persuading Gunjan to sing. His thoughts wander to Diwali..the time they had seen the sky light up with crackers..unknown to him , his face breaks into a smile..)

Nupur: (staring at the phone) Yeh phone bajta kyun nahi hai..Mayank itna bhi gussa nahi hoga Nupur! Tu hi phone kar le. (dials his no. but quickly disconnects the call) Na jaane kal kya hoga..Mayank phone karo na plz!

Mayank: (staring at the phone) Maine Nupur ko thik hi samjha tha. Use toh itni bhi parwah nahi hai k mujhe phone karke sorry hi bol de. (does a double take) Aisa nahi hai k sorry se main use maaf kar dunga..par phir bhi! (flashes of their dance rehearsals..time on d beach..Diwali..all go by him..) Main hi kar leta hu. Use bata toh du k main kal dance me nahi aunga. (picks up the phone and puts it down immediately)
Huh..use jo sochna hai sochne do. Damn it. Pata nahi neend kyun nahi aa rahi!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderfully written.....waiting for TP....update jaldi ok
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@bubblygurl

Yes surely will..😊 I've got hooked onto writing dis..😆

@Tanya

Thanks so much for d encouragement..makes a world of difference! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
loved the last part cont soon plz!!!!👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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why Mayank is being so khadoos?anyways its v.nice,I'm enjoying it.plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: debby

@bubblygurl

Yes surely will..😊 I've got hooked onto writing dis..😆



yaaa n ive got hooked onto reading this😆😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cool part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks a lottt all of you..will update today.. 😛

@lrl_01

Lol ya Mayank can be really khadoos at times.. 😛 but I m hopin he gets over it.. 😉

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