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Posted: 8 years ago
what an amazing chapter... and how very beautifully written... 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant!! Absolutely stunning!!
I always wondered if he will know it was his book that gave a lucky pass to Chirag and how he will burn in pain knowing he himself was reason of their separation.. You have done this amazingly!! And can't wait to read the next one..

And sorry forgot to mention.. The paintings scene in the morning was beautiful too!!
Lots of love!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow dr...
An amazing chapter...
Now Ranveer he himself made his path fir their destruction...
Thia is the most excruciating pain in these 8 yrs of separation.
And now Ranveer is out of RV
Ur writing skills made me aww 👏
Waiting for next
Keep smiling 😉
Take care 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
The devastating truth came before Ranveer...there're so many twist & turn in heir life...i hope they will overcome them soon enough & unite for good...ur style of writing story is marvelously revealing their untold stories... A big salute to u sissy...waiting eagerly for next...till then b safe & healthy
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi LM
INTERLUDES ARE HERE🥳
Thanks a lot for updating today i was waiting for it eagerly.😛😛
finally it starts the meet at horizon something long over due and there is green as well😉
I just cannot keep the awe at bay for crafting out these masterpiece the interludes👏👏👏 simply superb and sighting their length a lot of effort from your side have went as well.
Finally it seriously gave a relief to know that she went to check upon him or rather her heart took her only to look out for the loneliness and the beginning of hell in her life.😕
well what is this owner of the house entering her property with bobbypin😆😆 well she loves to reminse her past in whatever way she can and it was 😆😆
her painting their dreams were connected because unconsciously their emotions connected it was the same they felt for each other loving, caring, protecting and healing each other all along😳
hansa parekh in old age abandoned and ishani caring for her well that was bound to happen because she was the only tainted blood in the clan which was not like them😡 the only thing i hope that though their fate had similarity it doesn't end up being the same😕 and when the old lady get the chance of meeting her old servant
Seriously chirag was an idiot to miss the caligraphic quotes i thought he won't be able to have that sign of ranveer🤢 but i need to ask one thing is there anything ishani did which was decent i mean opening locks, climbing trees and entering places stealthily i mean this girl can open her gang of dacoits.😲 but it made me laugh seriously 😆😆
doors blueprint it looks straight out from a bond movie honestly 😆😆😆 seriously her revenge is the most dangerous beating even that of the chirag i mean after loosing everything in life and gaining them back again is toughest job but she can beat even ranveer when it comes to dedication to her goal.👏👏👏
so that call was about the painting of her life i mean chirag isn't he noticing everything and the final day drama is now the most awaited thing😉 i bet she is planning to insult him so bad that he will even think of taking revenge upon himself for messing with ishveer. here she beat chirag in demented maniac fair square for her revenge..😆
Piyush looked like a tennis ball to me which the best players are smashing ruthlessly poor soul he must be wondering kaha se inka case liye dono mental case hai😆😆 but the way ishani caught him was 😆😆. Poor soul i guess with all this happening he himself will get an attack. 3 days leave ha till birthday night she don't want any disturbances😉😉
the scenario of RV and all the ill boding in his heart was awesome.
these both why are they playing these games when they know each other's every move sometimes he out smarts her or she outsmarts him. but this is the real fun to play for winning against the toughest competitor. And now RV is like ghayal sher k muh se nivala chhin liya ishani beta watch it and he got his revenge got to know what he wanted straight from the mouth of the horse but why didn't she said the real reason for that maniac's lunatic revenge. My heart felt sympathy for piyush muft me pitega😆😆
these idiots forget everything when they keep oogling at each other from time to time🤣 the more fun part would have been when the other one knows about it and takes pride in that😉
ishani lost it this time taking the bait and falling in his trap well can't blame her entirely if its the hot dashing RV in front oh you then you are bound to fall in trap🤣
what he does for the evening i mean even ishani isn't there yet🤓 were they really sorry for their interlude in cabin well i dont think so😈
RV felt like a typical sasuma of serial not leaving a single chance to taunt her bahu🤪and honestly grow up kids if anyone would see them fighting then to empire ki lag gayi😳
didn't she changed the tape i mean itne sal se or was it on purpose😲 his eyelocks are melting her letting her emote it would be awesome to see how they are going to heal them.
the best part of interludes is their bickering and response to each other i mean seriously i totally laughed 🤣 each trying to be ahead of the other🤪 and i just love how their old self struggle to come to surface but the push it back
the pain of ishani and all her facade died down was overwhelming😭😭 she has been seriously through the hell for something that wasn't her fault at all😕 and yet again ranveer also wasn't to be blamed for entirely i mean he did everything she asked if only she could have a check upon her emotions and let her follow her heart😒
Finally the truth is out and no wonder what wrath it is going to bring upon them but he should follow the advice of love run towards that light he saw in her eyes and let it go because only these two things will help him survive and then heal themselves and take a revenge upon people who have done this to him harming his most prized phoenix. his dreams were a solution to his problems that occured in her dreams.
ranveer's emotional turmoil was awesome i loved it totally well descripted. and like always this interlude was sheer beauty an excellence of writing described so magnificiantly. how many times is the dhikra going to get close to death i mean you are already planning something bigger cut him some slack😉 the only thing that can help him hope for it is that he was right all along she did love him bas ab khooni khnajar ka bhi pata chal jaye but i just want moment to be intense in every sense you know i am waiting for that LEGEN-wait for it- DARYYY moment.
you are such an amazing writer dear its difficult to decipher for a first time reader to identify that both interludes and epistle are from the same handwork because you change completely the way of expression dear i am totally amazed.
but what else is left with chirag because RV is going to take a revenge which he haven't even dreamt of in sleep and would love to see his mad family also pays the price of supporting him in such thing actually they are the reason he took his revenge so brutally.
i just love when you switch to ranveer ishani from RV and miss parekh depending upon the emotions it gives a whole new look i mean these are tiniest detail but i like that you keep even that in mind.
thnx for pm
waiting for next
and the most important thing about this whole book is LOVE SCARS LOVE SCARS the way you described in caffeinated love same way where love starts and where scars end is difficult to understand with both blending with each other and leaving blood splattered all over.😊
Edited by dvprt418.py - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant chapter. I was in tears reading this, wow exceptionally well written chapter. I was so waiting for interludes and I truly enjoyed reading this. Amazing work!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi ms. Prefect Perfect...Phew...Finally got time to review...Apologies sent for late reply...OK now coming to the interlude...Wow...I mean I was waiting for it from almost a month and finally it came. So now I will start. First the paintings. The whole scenario was so beautiful about ishani's emotions in paintings. And chirag even sold her favourite painting. Gosh what kind of person he is. And The poor soul Piyush was seriously like a punching bag on which both of them were removing their frustration. You know when Ishani told Piyush not to tell anything to Ranveer I felt very sad about Ranveer not getting the truth. But you were a surprise you made it all blurt out from Ishani herself. And the truth was just 3/4. Why didn't she told about the real reason of Chirag's revenge? And the revelation was just wonderful, amazing,spectacular, beautiful, heartbroken...running out of words for it. The way Ishani said all those thing wwas just like a dagger. Ranveer was so heartbroken. He ran all the way. Love is mad. And why did he chose nature instead of her house for the revelation of the truth?
And also their cute childish fight was just beautiful. Ishani can drive.Wow. But now I understood why he wanted to drive. And the song played in the car is one of my favourites. Their Valentine's.Memories. Overall the interlude was worth the wait.
You are just amazing LM. How do you write so beautifully. Your words are truly meaningful. The way you describe each and every sentence with detail, the way you describe their expressions. You know Untod Stories should be published as a book after it is completed. It will surely become a best seller. Also Neapolitan city but it will require two volumes . One which will tell about the story of the ishveer in the serial and second is the Neapoltan city as not all the people are ishveer fans. And your writing skills are too too too too too too too too too too too too good. Waiting for the next interlude...

Ps- Will Book 6 contain interludes or epistles?
Edited by Anne30ishveer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pppworld1

what an amazing chapter... and how very beautifully written... 😭





Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: matsh

Brilliant!! Absolutely stunning!!

I always wondered if he will know it was his book that gave a lucky pass to Chirag and how he will burn in pain knowing he himself was reason of their separation.. You have done this amazingly!! And can't wait to read the next one..

And sorry forgot to mention.. The paintings scene in the morning was beautiful too!!
Lots of love!!




Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ Hehe, yep this was something that he definitely did have to know about. 😉😉 And I'm happy that you liked the painting part too. 😃😃



Thank you so much once again and the next part is here! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Wow dr...
An amazing chapter...
Now Ranveer he himself made his path fir their destruction...
Thia is the most excruciating pain in these 8 yrs of separation.
And now Ranveer is out of RV
Ur writing skills made me aww 👏
Waiting for next
Keep smiling 😉
Take care 😳





Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ Oh yeah, he did kinda make his path for their destruction, but they're on the way to rectifying those mistakes now. 😛😛



Thank you so much once again and the next chapter is here! ❤️❤️

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