#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 37

Hey Morning...And this one was so quick...Loved this interlude.

I have read this one the umpteenth time and still it's essence remains the same. This one is the most caring chapter. I know there were many more caring chapters but I think none of them can match the purity of this one. It's just so beautiful. And cherry on the cake are your words ofcourse whick describe the scenes so wonderfully beautiful.

The first part was so good. Ranveer would have ran more than 5 km. in just one day. And his fear was correct. How can you be calm when your love is torching itself to a unbelievable extreme. And he finally entered the mansion. I just loved the part where you described his memories according to their ages. It was cute.
And actually I had to read those 2 paragraphs twice to understand when exactly he entered her room. I just loved his style of removing his clothes. To be honest I love that man's every action, whatever he does. And also when you said about Ranveer in just shirt and pant with Ishani in nighty, I actually thought that something's gonna happen like it happened in NC. If you know what I mean. Ahem Ahem. But cutting the crap what actually happened was far more beautiful then what I thought

Next one is the scalpel. He finally found about it. Her torture on herself. I can't believe Ranveer witnessed that scene of her in blood pools. He would have got extremely frightened to see her like that. And that girl was not ready to give that scalpel back. And what a word shooting game. None of them was ready to give up. And I am surprised I was not the least angry on Ishani for her stubborn behavior by not giving the scalpel back. Anybody in her place would have done that only. Because torturing yourself is the most easiest yet the most hard method of getting your pain get away from you. But I just loved Ranveer here. He showed his old caring self again today.

And finally their love filled conversation. It literally brought tears in my eyes. I was really crying. It was just beautiful. His way of getting her out from her prison and the best part was when he kept her hand on his chest to show her how much he loved her.
And yes I forgot, HE SLAPPED HER. And also SHE SLAPPED HIM. Now this was surely a surprise . But both of them actually needed it. OK domestic violence before marriage. Hehe. And after that was their hugs ,kisses ,soothing words and never-ending love which can't be described in words. And they slept again in each other's arms. Oh God I am just so much madly in love with ishveer.

And you know this was a Perfect chapter. It was just Perfect. Of course why would it not be, it had been written by Ms. Perfectionist. The power of your words is something which I can't tell. You are a brilliant writer. And I am saying this by heart that if you make a career in writing then success is not far from you.

Waiting for the next one...

PS- Actually I am having my Pre- xams from tomorrow so may be I won't be able to reply to the chapters but I will try hard.Sorry.

Loads of Love. Anne

Hy dr..
This chapter... 👏
Can't express in words.. I read it 2 times still its conflict and reflection... 😭 👏
The painful love they both hold on for each other...
Its so hard for him to see her in selfharming therapy... He slapped her to bring back her own self... Their conversation after that is really true.. If he did it before, there won't be this much 😭
Same towards her...
Now Ranveer and Ishani are back and they try being a solace for each.
Still they knew nothing can get back as before... The never changing fact that didn't leave is their true love... 😊
And it remains...
They were for each other..
Just thinking of ur fact... No fairy tales have a happy ending...
Totally your writing made me awww... Truly adorable you are 👏
Keep smiling 😳
Take care 😛 😉
Eagerly waiting for the next interlude...
😆 😃

Hai LM. After a looonnng😊. Cmnt for interlude 19(sry for late)

Dv, Anne and srp_roy,I've un-reserved my posts on Page 47. 😛

Originally posted by: srp_roy

Wooo... 😉 😉 finally the next chapter is updated, can't curb my excitement of reading it. And I can very easily predict that it is going to be as awesome as the other ones. 😛 😛

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

hi LM.Hope you are fine.
okay i know its a repetition but this whole chapter had only LOVE...SCARS...BLOOD LOVE...SCARS...BLOOD it was spilled all over the chapter now🤔 Outstanding that's the only thing to describe this beautiful work👏
And the biggest thing is i am loving it infact craving to read more of it there is something about your writing girl that have made me love bloody and dark love story so much i mean i just cannot get over the stupefying effect of the spell your writing has caused👏⭐️
you know i was wondering bechare ko jungle me chod ke bhag gayi.😳 this is the fate of the poor soul always keep running.😊😊 bechare ko usain bolt bnana hai 🤓
ranveer is back maimed, brutally bleeding but he is back and he knows that only running behind the light can heal his bruised self.🤔 his dreams are a look into the future he ran in the frest behind that light in his dreams as well.
Ishani is the vice of his life dark black but dark always seems to attract because of the hidden mystery around them and so is the case with him just like the night and the forest ishani also attracted him because of the pure soul that was captured around so firmly by dark.
Idiot he was he knew how emotionally demented she would become in her emotional turmoil yet he allowed what happened years back. I mean his senses were overtaken by alcohol but still🥱
well i want to ask is peach is your favourite to portray ishani in her emotional weakness it was in NC also and there also it resulted in healing and her also.
She walked through the night i mean all those years ranveer walked through it to be her equal and meet her at horizon and in these last four years she covered her distance which was haulted as ranveer and her paths got separated to be his equal i mean she must have understood as to why ranveer left for sydney and now she was compensating for it by becoming his equal.👏👏
what this girl think ranveer as of some kind of punching bag which she will keep on punching in her emotional distress and he will keep coming back😲
but ishani and her pain was😭😭😭 i mean all those people in the society had made her unworthy of everything she just wished was hers forever😭 she wouldn't have resorted to this had she known the depth of ranveer's love i mean this her heart knew but her all the flaws of life pointed by society stopped her from embracing the fact that she can be loved by someone so much and unconditionally🤔 and his love was beyond all the probability and equation though it had got hidden in burden of so much pain but it can breath nonetheless and will always be there with same intensity with same love
so the empire was in the name of ranveer the legal heir of it and ishani made sure that it was handed over to its right owner after restoring it back to that position at which her father wanted ranveer to take over. this impressed me totally👏

"not all fairy tales had a happy ending." why is this giving me some different vibes😳

honestly the portrayal of demented ishani overcoming her grief with her lunatic behaviour gave me goosebumps 😔 it was scary the way she was doing it and what an apt description it was.But i feel sorry for you because this must have caused you an emotional stress as well specially if you write them by putting your heart and soul in the characters nad knowing you it must have taken a toll on you.😲
poor falguni she lived alone and those so called family didn't even once thought of all the loneliness it must have caused to her and disha how come she can leave her own mother.ranveer chun chun k badla lena sabse 😉
removing blazer is understood but waist coat also what he was thinking 😆 loosened tie folded sleeves and panicked ranveer nothing can be more drool worthy than this and honestly this chapter redefined ranveer's love no matter how much hurt he is there is nothing more than ishani no one more than her i am so loving him more now and this time more so for the pain in his heart which he so easily pushed aside to accommodate her pain and heal her😳
all this fight those slaps, blood and pain everything to wish for in dark story and the strange solace it gave 😈😈 their encounter was fierce, intense killing with pain and love both equally balanced. this was real freak show and first time they were honest whether in confessing each other's feelings or blaming or slaping. i so so loved that part i read it thrice. he knew all along yet his bruised ego didn't allowed to let him accept it .
Out of all the characters you have created in this book ishani is certainly the most powerful outstanding of them all. she is weak in front of her love but is strong enough to face any demon that came in front of her love i just so love her character. ranveer is a darling but this time ishani is no less and this whole scenario of her deranged demented behaviour of a suicide maniac was so brilliant dear the best i loved it totally no flaws nothing left to say about that moment awesome it was.
last two paras were my most favourites a hope of a dying heart to breath again a universe contemplating how their universe got completed by being with each other all the stars and sky who were witness of them hurting and killing each other now witnessing their effort to heal each other. And ranveer his pain hasn't came out still because neither he said he loves her nor he denied because he is too numb to feel anything and it will take a while for him to bleed out his pain till that its all ishani. Sounds ridiculous.
Amazing work dear i mean i never imagined myself to love a blood filled love story so much you changed my likings. awesome dear
thnx for pm
waiting for next.

Originally posted by: PrinceAsif

Finally clearing all misunderstandings between them, Ranveer & Ishani r in love again...the depth of their wounds have finally came to an end...waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Anne30ishveer

Hey Morning...And this one was so quick...Loved this interlude.

I have read this one the umpteenth time and still it's essence remains the same. This one is the most caring chapter. I know there were many more caring chapters but I think none of them can match the purity of this one. It's just so beautiful. And cherry on the cake are your words ofcourse whick describe the scenes so wonderfully beautiful.

The first part was so good. Ranveer would have ran more than 5 km. in just one day. And his fear was correct. How can you be calm when your love is torching itself to a unbelievable extreme. And he finally entered the mansion. I just loved the part where you described his memories according to their ages. It was cute.
And actually I had to read those 2 paragraphs twice to understand when exactly he entered her room. I just loved his style of removing his clothes. To be honest I love that man's every action, whatever he does. And also when you said about Ranveer in just shirt and pant with Ishani in nighty, I actually thought that something's gonna happen like it happened in NC. If you know what I mean. Ahem Ahem. But cutting the crap what actually happened was far more beautiful then what I thought

Next one is the scalpel. He finally found about it. Her torture on herself. I can't believe Ranveer witnessed that scene of her in blood pools. He would have got extremely frightened to see her like that. And that girl was not ready to give that scalpel back. And what a word shooting game. None of them was ready to give up. And I am surprised I was not the least angry on Ishani for her stubborn behavior by not giving the scalpel back. Anybody in her place would have done that only. Because torturing yourself is the most easiest yet the most hard method of getting your pain get away from you. But I just loved Ranveer here. He showed his old caring self again today.

And finally their love filled conversation. It literally brought tears in my eyes. I was really crying. It was just beautiful. His way of getting her out from her prison and the best part was when he kept her hand on his chest to show her how much he loved her.
And yes I forgot, HE SLAPPED HER. And also SHE SLAPPED HIM. Now this was surely a surprise . But both of them actually needed it. OK domestic violence before marriage. Hehe. And after that was their hugs ,kisses ,soothing words and never-ending love which can't be described in words. And they slept again in each other's arms. Oh God I am just so much madly in love with ishveer.

And you know this was a Perfect chapter. It was just Perfect. Of course why would it not be, it had been written by Ms. Perfectionist. The power of your words is something which I can't tell. You are a brilliant writer. And I am saying this by heart that if you make a career in writing then success is not far from you.

Waiting for the next one...

PS- Actually I am having my Pre- xams from tomorrow so may be I won't be able to reply to the chapters but I will try hard.Sorry.

Loads of Love. Anne

Originally posted by: srp_roy

Love... Scars... Pain... This is what the entire chapter bled off. This chapter is simply awesome, I can't describe the beauty with which you have written this chapter.

So Ranveer was running, running to save his love, his life, Ishani from her biggest problem, i.e. her own self. This is perhaps what we call true love, when our better half is suffering we get a telepathy, an intuition about it. And it is no surprise that Ranveer can sense it before any trouble befalls Ishani.

So Ishani had started her little show with the scalpel. You know what LM this is freaky absolutely freaky, if Ranveer didn't give her the solace and warmth which her soul was seeking and slap her back to life and reality , then perhaps she would have turned insane. Now only Ranveer can infuse his old Ishani back into Miss Parekh just like the vice versa.

And what was she planning to do, trying to commit suicide or what by slitting her wrist when Ranveer was trying to stop her. That scalpel was blurring her sense of purpose along with the pain. She was forgetting that her revenge was still pending from Chiraag. I can't even dare to throw a guess of what could have happened had Ranveer not reached at time.

Well LM, why do you always say that nothing can be the same between them ever again. I mean, yes many things have been damaged between them, but after all the hell they have gone through, they both deserve second chance. And Ishani definitely deserves to be forgiven, yeah I know I know she had crossed a boundary 6 years ago back and committed a mistake which can't be easily forgiven. But she paid much much more than she erred. And one more thing Ranveer had the support of Rithika in the first place, then his parents and then Finch to share his pain. But Ishani had no one's moral support, not even her parents and family, she was alone absolutely alone.

And now LM please give a bang on face-to-face of ChirVeer. Ab tera kya hogs re Chiraag???😡 😡 I just hope that our dhikra gives a good beating to the main villain of his love story, from left, right and center.
Please update sooon.

Loads of Love,
srp_roy

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy dr..
This chapter... 👏
Can't express in words.. I read it 2 times still its conflict and reflection... 😭 👏
The painful love they both hold on for each other...
Its so hard for him to see her in selfharming therapy... He slapped her to bring back her own self... Their conversation after that is really true.. If he did it before, there won't be this much 😭
Same towards her...
Now Ranveer and Ishani are back and they try being a solace for each.
Still they knew nothing can get back as before... The never changing fact that didn't leave is their true love... 😊
And it remains...
They were for each other..
Just thinking of ur fact... No fairy tales have a happy ending...
Totally your writing made me awww... Truly adorable you are 👏
Keep smiling 😳
Take care 😛 😉
Eagerly waiting for the next interlude...
😆 😃