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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-



Oh. That's like a good girl. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ I was thinking that you might because I have seen that the interval between two books is 4 and a half years or four years. So, I assumes that in the next book, Ranveer would be 22/23 and Ishaani would be 21/22. So, then Chirag would also be there. Um, this was my justification behind my query.



Hehe, no problem. And one more request. Do keep adding excerpts from Caffeinated Love. Because they are of sheer brilliance. *bats eyelids with face thrown in her palms*




Yeah, you make a good point. πŸ˜›πŸ˜› Actually, I did originally think of giving a four-year gap between the books, but then I changed my mind. πŸ˜†πŸ˜† It now goes in the decreasing order, if you've notice - the first leap gap is four years, and the second one is three years. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ The current one will be two years. 😊😊



If it fits, I'll definitely keep adding in the excerpts. 😳😳 I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far! ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi LM how are you? Hope your vacations are going on well.
This girl is mad like seriously blade she ll kill herself someday surely πŸ˜• πŸ˜›
Dreams are back again πŸ˜‰ o with that come her vulnerability her fears she was hell scared 😊
Who is this saxena pestering her like seriously boy thank your stars that she is anticipating another thing otherwise beta tu to gaya πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
So rishi and puneet are the two confidants of her sometime but I was wondering she never tells about her personal life how come she is speaking so much but then comes the bomb blast I agree with rishi here pressure increased twice and they got to know why is she so adamant and nervous over this deals perfection πŸ‘ πŸ‘
OK so she was not ready to let him go seriously when it comes to them she is not ready to separate him even Fir breathing I guess HP knew the exact reason why ranveer wanted to be something and he was supporting him completely πŸ‘
Blue orchids haye her heart flutters at the thought that it might be someone but seriously chiru baba he is always present when he is not required 😑
Thanks for two things for having enough mercy to us buy not making us read a book or chapter on his praise and also for that rain confession although I still hate it that he stole or rather chose the best moment to make her his but still that was far better I thought her fantasy got fulfilled in that part I was like this while reading that whole scene πŸ˜’ 😭
O god this chirag well I admire his passion for revenge πŸ‘ πŸ‘ he lived ranveer's character so well that I don't blame ishani for falling in his trap because she was very innocent and naive when it came to ranveer to acknowledge her feelings for him and chirag was too smart to overshadow that with his same cloak. And also she was her vulnerable best when he came in her life πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ’”
Chirag valet parking seriously he have outdone as a villain this time in your ff 😈 I guess m liking him too much for his negativity
OK so that's his story and how he manipulated her so easily
I like that part where ishani I still kept her diaries jst to make herself a little more resistant to pain πŸ‘ πŸ‘
But what's this chirag's threat given that he is your villain I doubt wheather this was bogus πŸ˜•
O deari so loved that line it had uncanny resemblance of ishveer in it
I like that whole description of she passing out in washroom
I thought we will get to know what happened that night because he already sowed the seeds of doubt in her mind regarding ranveer with him leaving her
Did she never talked to her dad about chirag he would have guided her but when bad times come common sense is the first thing that people distance themselves from.
This whole interlude gave insight about what happened and how now it's just that how it changes henceforth
O she is also addictd to reading her diaries like ranveer had she done this in his absence during their separation because of Sydney tour she may have not fallen prey to such things
Well it's rightly said AKAL BADAM KHANE SE NAI THOKAR KHANE SE ATI HAI ishani I prves it
Thnx for update dear
Waitng for next
Sorry bymistakly this post got posted when I was still reviewing so editing it again o my good luck favour me too much 😑






Thank you so much, darling! πŸ€—πŸ€— I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And I'm doing alright and my vacations are going well too. 😳😳



Coming to the review, oh yes, this girl will go mad definitely if Ranveer doesn't intervene soon. Yep, the dreams are back too. πŸ˜†πŸ˜† As to the Saxenas, ignore karo usko... like you said, if she wasn't busy with Ranveer, woh sacchi uske haathon pit jaana tha. 🀣🀣 And coming to Puneet and Rishi, hehe, bomb toh hona hi tha... 😈😈



Oh yes, she wasn't ready but then HP smacked some sense into her... kaash Chirag ke case mein bhi kar dete... Khair, Chirag babu bas aisi cheezein karne mein hi maahir hai. πŸ˜•πŸ˜• As to the fantasy, it could have been worse but I took a U-Turn from what I originally had in mind. This made more sense. 😳😳 And I'm glad that you're thankful for both. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›



I'm also relieved that you like the whole Chirag scene and understand the dynamics well enough. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ As to her keeping the diaries, you've got that right again. 😊😊 Yes, she needs to start taking Chirag a little more seriously than that. πŸ€”πŸ€” As to the excerpt, this is something I've used from the show again... its and bits. It does have the essence of IshVeer.



And yes, what happened that night is again something you'll come to know in the next set of interludes, but a part of what led to it you'll come to know in the next interlude. 😎😎 And yes, had she stuck to her diaries, her brains and common sense would be more open. 😭😭



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to have the next part up soon! ❀️❀️



Ps. No problem, it's alright. Even I was wondering when I read the half review, but then I thought as much that it must have gotten posted by mistake. πŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi LM
So again dreams are back
This chiraag he should be awarded for revenging
overall a nice chapter as usual keep rocking πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰




Thank you so much, sweetie! πŸ€—πŸ€— I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful

Hii LM,
This update was again a wonderful and mindblowing dear everything perfect...
Omg... Our girl out of mind i mean she alwaye cut her wound only feeling for pain i think oneday she will kill herself and then we all searching a new ishani for ur ff.
So Ishani talk about her presonal life wat a surpries i think only reason for this deal bcoz that's was Hp dream.
Seriously chiru baby ko award milna chahiye "Art of manipulated" ka i mean her reveng 13 year old and he make own self like ranveer shadow only for reveng. he was so smart when ranveer absence and bhudhi baa insult ishani front on everyone and she cried in middle of road then chirkut playing her card and beta ne chance pe dance ka liya this time i don't blame ishani that she falling in love chiru baby so easily bcorz chiru bhai ranveer ka carbon copy ban gya tha 😑 😑 Seriously just 3 or 4 update me hi chirchut bhai ko jhel nhi pate toh pure update ka kya hota πŸ˜”
Well chrikut only reason for ishveer separate and ishani pain i just want ranveer break chiru baby mouth,noise in the 4book
Now waiting for next
Thanks for pm




Thank you so much, dearie! πŸ€—πŸ€— I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️



Coming to the review, yeah, this girl needs Ranveer to set her right. 😳😳 And yes, she only spoke about because it was HP's dream. 😊😊 As to Chiru, oh yes he needs the award... and you've said it all perfectly. πŸ‘πŸ‘ As to seeing Ranveer take pai-pai ka hisaab from Chirag, hopefully you shouldn't be disappointed. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰



Thank you so much once again! ❀️❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aaru, I've unreserved my post on Page 67. 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue




Thank you so much, darling! πŸ€—πŸ€—I'm so happy that you liked it!⭐️⭐️And I'm doing alright and my vacations are going well too.😳😳



Coming to the review, oh yes, this girl will go mad definitely if Ranveer doesn't intervene soon.Yep, the dreams are back too.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†As to the Saxenas, ignore karo usko... like you said, if she wasn't busy with Ranveer, woh sacchi uske haathon pit jaana tha.🀣🀣And coming to Puneet and Rishi, hehe, bomb toh hona hi tha...😈😈



Oh yes, she wasn't ready but then HP smacked some sense into her... kaash Chirag ke case mein bhi kar dete...Khair, Chirag babu bas aisi cheezein karne mein hi maahir hai.πŸ˜•πŸ˜•As to the fantasy, it could have been worse but I took a U-Turn from what I originally had in mind. This made more sense.😳😳And I'm glad that you're thankful for both.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›



I'm also relieved that you like the whole Chirag scene and understand the dynamics well enough.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒAs to her keeping the diaries, you've got that right again.😊😊Yes, she needs to start taking Chirag a little more seriously than that.πŸ€”πŸ€”As to the excerpt, this is something I've used from the show again... its and bits. It does have the essence of IshVeer.



And yes, what happened that night is again something you'll come to know in the next set of interludes, but a part of what led to it you'll come to know in the next interlude. 😎😎And yes, had she stuck to her diaries, her brains and common sense would be more open.😭😭



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to have the next part up soon!❀️❀️



Ps. No problem, it's alright. Even I was wondering when I read the half review, but then I thought as much that it must have gotten posted by mistake.πŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺ


O dear thnk you so much that you took a you turn from your supposed adventure otherwise what would have happened πŸ˜†
And as to the bombs are going to come in installments well say m mentally prepared for the worst but I know you will !master even that 😭
So sorry that was really a silly of me but my tabs superfast working is to be blamed for although it works always when it is not required to.
Well I might sound crazy but I was reading NC yesterday like I do every time I miss reading your writing I came a Ross this death and love conversations their and I realised that they are Intertwined with each other is it something like that which continue here in their f
Dreams also avoid it its nothing but a crazy theory sorry
And MA waiting for your update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey hi LM,
Both the interludes were superb...yet painfull,.
Sorry that I can't give much appropriate review,
Just wanna tell you that you nail led it...

Some points...
Ishani's pain and her way of overcoming it... Something dark...yet marvelous...
Your abilities outstanding.
So the book was with chirag 😑 ,how curious he is beside being revengfull,
I mean he even searched inside matris 😲 ...
So Ranveer made his way easy...

Hey Ishani's dreams are back again...
Means its still to happen,

Ishani's conversation with Rishi and Puneet was really wonder full,
How she made her way, to syllogise the importance of the person they were going to meet...

The next part is definitely going to be some thing most important... If they are to met the next day..

Hey but Ishani has taken out her diary,
Are you going for epistles again, from next update?

Keep rocking
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py


O dear thnk you so much that you took a you turn from your supposed adventure otherwise what would have happened πŸ˜†
And as to the bombs are going to come in installments well say m mentally prepared for the worst but I know you will !master even that 😭
So sorry that was really a silly of me but my tabs superfast working is to be blamed for although it works always when it is not required to.
Well I might sound crazy but I was reading NC yesterday like I do every time I miss reading your writing I came a Ross this death and love conversations their and I realised that they are Intertwined with each other is it something like that which continue here in their f
Dreams also avoid it its nothing but a crazy theory sorry
And MA waiting for your update




Hehe, no the scene is pretty much the same, I just changed a few finer details. It's surprising how much the finer details of a scene can impact the entire scenario. πŸ˜›πŸ˜› As to the bombs, well, like I've been saying, they're less of bombs and more of surprises. πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I just hope that you like whatever I have in mind. 😳😳




And I can understand - all gadgets are the same in this department. Now coming to your NC theory... um, no, I'm not doing the death v/s love thing over here, but yes they're interlinked to a certain extent the same way like in NC. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ The dreams are the concept that I'm experimenting around, so I'm waiting to see how it all unfolds. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰



I'll try my best to have it up soon enough. ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Hey hi LM,
Both the interludes were superb...yet painfull,.
Sorry that I can't give much appropriate review,
Just wanna tell you that you nail led it...

Some points...
Ishani's pain and her way of overcoming it... Something dark...yet marvelous...
Your abilities outstanding.
So the book was with chirag 😑 ,how curious he is beside being revengfull,
I mean he even searched inside matris 😲 ...
So Ranveer made his way easy...

Hey Ishani's dreams are back again...
Means its still to happen,

Ishani's conversation with Rishi and Puneet was really wonder full,
How she made her way, to syllogise the importance of the person they were going to meet...

The next part is definitely going to be some thing most important... If they are to met the next day..

Hey but Ishani has taken out her diary,
Are you going for epistles again, from next update?

Keep rocking





Thank you so much, sweetheart! πŸ€—πŸ€— I'm so happy that you liked both of them! ⭐️⭐️



Coming to the review, I'm glad that you like the way Ishaani's emotions are being put forth. 😳😳 As to Chiru baba, he's just plain nosy and yes, in a way, Ranveer handed over the tips to ruin them both on a golden platter with a bow on it. 🀒🀒 As to the dreams, yes, they're back. πŸ˜›πŸ˜› Moving over to Ishaani's conversation with Rishi and Puneet, it was pretty much fun for me to write as well. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ



The next part is again from Ranveer's POV. Their F2F will happen after Book 4. 😊😊 And yes, the last set of epistles will begin after Interlude 14. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰



Thank you so much once again! ❀️❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Another photo sat beside it of Ishaani having her arms around Ranveer in a side-hug as they both stared at each other passionately as their rings sparkled, a huge smile on both of their faces - hers mischievous, his coy. But their customary smiles that made the others' day. This photo was taken days before he left for Sydney. The photo brimmed with passion.

This paragraph literally broke me down, literally. Like I told you in FB that I was just weeping, I just couldn't stop. 😭😭😭

"I killed him," whispered Ishaani and the two men gasped unconsciously. Ishaani smiled bitterly in spite of herself and continued. "He loved me so much... but I thought I loved Chirag. He lived because of me... for me. I took away his reason to live that night when I pushed him away. I killed him."

And this, again.πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

Like the review for this particular Interlude is going to be really small; I am actually speechless, in literal sense. You have worked so hard to achieve this stage in writing LM. And you literally, deserve more and more. ❀️❀️


Everything was just perfect in this Interlude, LM. Ishani's guilt: Man, you just took the entire feeling of the word to some other level. It just ached and nothing else. The way she is feeling bad for all her wrong doings and stupidity, the suffering which she is undergoing is a way too painful. Her dreams now coming back again and tormenting her, the loneliness </3 </3

And the paragraphs from the Caffeinated Love made me go dreamy! It was so deep and emotional; bring us a lot more from the book he had written. They are so good! I don't know, can't say anything more, I don't know what to say! Now that the Epistles are going to come up after one more Interlude, (I guess) I can seek out my answer for her pet peeve. But the thing I wanted to ask you, are you going give us something about Chirag and Ishani?

NO!!!






Thank you so much, darling! πŸ€—πŸ€— I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️



Coming to the review, I cannot tell you how relieved I am that the chapter touched you so much. 😭😭 Both the excerpts that you have highlighted were heartbreaking for me to write as well. And God, I'm just happy that my work does manage to touch your life. 😳😳 There's no bigger honour for me than that.



Her guilt has probably been the most difficult thing for me to capture because manage both his and her POV and getting the readers to understand how she's feeling and what she's going through with the same amount of effect that Ranveer's POVs manage to spark has been the most difficult task with US so far. 😊😊 And I'm glad that you all have been receiving to her work that well. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›



Yes, if it seems to fit, I might give out an excerpt or two more. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ I'm glad that you're liking it so far, though. They're pretty interesting for me to write as well. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ As to the epistles, yes, you'll get your answer soon enough. πŸ˜†πŸ˜† And like I said earlier too, Chirag will again have an anonymous cameo at the end of Book 4 only now. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ Nothing more than that. πŸ€“πŸ€“



Thank you so much once again! ❀️❀️
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