Originally posted by: dvprt418.py
Hi LM how are you? Hope your vacations are going on well.
This girl is mad like seriously blade she ll kill herself someday surely π π
Dreams are back again π o with that come her vulnerability her fears she was hell scared π
Who is this saxena pestering her like seriously boy thank your stars that she is anticipating another thing otherwise beta tu to gaya π π
So rishi and puneet are the two confidants of her sometime but I was wondering she never tells about her personal life how come she is speaking so much but then comes the bomb blast I agree with rishi here pressure increased twice and they got to know why is she so adamant and nervous over this deals perfection π π
OK so she was not ready to let him go seriously when it comes to them she is not ready to separate him even Fir breathing I guess HP knew the exact reason why ranveer wanted to be something and he was supporting him completely π
Blue orchids haye her heart flutters at the thought that it might be someone but seriously chiru baba he is always present when he is not required π‘
Thanks for two things for having enough mercy to us buy not making us read a book or chapter on his praise and also for that rain confession although I still hate it that he stole or rather chose the best moment to make her his but still that was far better I thought her fantasy got fulfilled in that part I was like this while reading that whole scene π π
O god this chirag well I admire his passion for revenge π π he lived ranveer's character so well that I don't blame ishani for falling in his trap because she was very innocent and naive when it came to ranveer to acknowledge her feelings for him and chirag was too smart to overshadow that with his same cloak. And also she was her vulnerable best when he came in her life ππΌ π
Chirag valet parking seriously he have outdone as a villain this time in your ff π I guess m liking him too much for his negativity
OK so that's his story and how he manipulated her so easily
I like that part where ishani I still kept her diaries jst to make herself a little more resistant to pain π π
But what's this chirag's threat given that he is your villain I doubt wheather this was bogus π
O deari so loved that line it had uncanny resemblance of ishveer in it
I like that whole description of she passing out in washroom
I thought we will get to know what happened that night because he already sowed the seeds of doubt in her mind regarding ranveer with him leaving her
Did she never talked to her dad about chirag he would have guided her but when bad times come common sense is the first thing that people distance themselves from.
This whole interlude gave insight about what happened and how now it's just that how it changes henceforth
O she is also addictd to reading her diaries like ranveer had she done this in his absence during their separation because of Sydney tour she may have not fallen prey to such things
Well it's rightly said AKAL BADAM KHANE SE NAI THOKAR KHANE SE ATI HAI ishani I prves it
Thnx for update dear
Waitng for next
Sorry bymistakly this post got posted when I was still reviewing so editing it again o my good luck favour me too much π‘
Thank you so much, darling! π€π€ I'm so happy that you liked it! βοΈβοΈ And I'm doing alright and my vacations are going well too. π³π³
Coming to the review, oh yes, this girl will go mad definitely if Ranveer doesn't intervene soon. Yep, the dreams are back too. ππ As to the Saxenas, ignore karo usko... like you said, if she wasn't busy with Ranveer, woh sacchi uske haathon pit jaana tha. π€£π€£ And coming to Puneet and Rishi, hehe, bomb toh hona hi tha... ππ
Oh yes, she wasn't ready but then HP smacked some sense into her... kaash Chirag ke case mein bhi kar dete... Khair, Chirag babu bas aisi cheezein karne mein hi maahir hai. ππ As to the fantasy, it could have been worse but I took a U-Turn from what I originally had in mind. This made more sense. π³π³ And I'm glad that you're thankful for both. ππ
I'm also relieved that you like the whole Chirag scene and understand the dynamics well enough. ππ As to her keeping the diaries, you've got that right again. ππ Yes, she needs to start taking Chirag a little more seriously than that. π€π€ As to the excerpt, this is something I've used from the show again... its and bits. It does have the essence of IshVeer.
And yes, what happened that night is again something you'll come to know in the next set of interludes, but a part of what led to it you'll come to know in the next interlude. ππ And yes, had she stuck to her diaries, her brains and common sense would be more open. ππ
Thank you so much once again and I'll try to have the next part up soon! β€οΈβ€οΈ
Ps. No problem, it's alright. Even I was wondering when I read the half review, but then I thought as much that it must have gotten posted by mistake. π€ͺπ€ͺ
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago