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Posted: 9 years ago
And the painting is the same but Ishaani hates it? Erm, this is lot more than what meets the eye.


Also, a line of interlude three came back to me after reading the twenty one year old self. Something about Ishaani and Ranveer being the rulers of the world? (It makes me proud again, ah...) That means them having this business monopoly, right?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Is she going to exchange painting with chirag?
Omg this girl has !mastered the art of manipulation more than ranveer and chirag himself only if she don't allow her heart to take over 😉
Switching paintings drama stage o God what the hell is going on in her tiny explosive brain 😲 😕
Wait did chirag gave her a replica of the painting of ranveer given that he was trying everything that won her heart all thanx to that special book. 😕
Chirag is the best villain possible I myself Felt a loathing towards him at the mention of his name but he is connector of this sadism story 🤬
But how the hell he got the book? Did anyone from parkh clan did he needful? 🤢
Sunny her pet peeve seriously o that was awesome 👏
But her sadness her addiction made me 😭 😭 poor girl just became a pawn her entire life became a game 🤢
Ranveer was the only person made her feel alive and express her feelings like human now that he was gone all she is now a cold lifeless shell.
Now question I have is ranveer going to accept the destruction he caused in her life by his own book or is he going to say that he warned her about it and it's going to be an ego tussle between them just like in their book 3 estrangement phase because here also no one is ready to let down there mask of coldness but that time ishani melted and took the first step and this time also she is making her amendments but is he that easy to get melted this time
Her transformation overcoming her craving and self loathing to the structure cold business women was fantastic 👏 👏
I love that character so much she clearly knows what she want and how to make everyone fall to her needs accordingly.
So that line of coincidence reminded me of something and I guessed something that dreams were connected because the day love died ranveer also died in her dreams!s because someone said that they are alive because of each other and the moment either one will die the other will die and I guess this also helped her during her bad phase preventing her from sccumbing to all the pain and guilt when she was left alone this made her live o I might be totally wrong in my analysis but sorry can't help it.
She is feeling exactly the same way what she felt during her that special birthday loveless hopeless only these things are more prominent this time but the outcome was something astonishng that time is it going to be the same this time 🤓
She is in love with him hopelessly had she realised this before
They both love each other so much and know each other so well but they both are denying it under mask of cold one for the guilt to even think like that and other for the hatred due to all the pain they got.
That whole description of guilt accompanying pain her self loathing her pain her mental tussle between feeling human or cold everything was so fantastically described that I can't even say
I must say dear your interludes are supreme expression of your writing power I love them so much each and everything about it .
Thank you so much dear this chapter was very awesome and you are mastering each day and surprising with your writing skill with every interludes.
Thnx for uploading despite your vacation schedule
Waiting for next
Howz tour vacations going on
I hope you enjoy a lot
Edited by dvprt418.py - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
O after posting it I realised how much blabbering I have done and really sorry for that but dear you are really a gem writer I must admit. I ll shut my mouth before I again make such a long post . sorry
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii LM,
Its was so painful,emotionaly and also so deep...chapter i think ye painting wohi painting hai na when ranveer give her as birthday gift but why she's switching painting even she heartly touch with painting now my brain is not working...Ugh! Chiru baby ko ranveer ki book kaise mili i think disha baby bcoz show me bhi help kiya and she's not like ishani 😕 Poor girl i feel bad for him how much she bear pain and feel guilty chirkut ne kahi ka nhi chor...And finally she realise that how much she loved ranveer but even too late and she more guilt for not trust her best friend the whole moment was so amazed! And the best part was when she said that if he hate her then she will die i think the only reason for ishani alive that she think he still love her and he never hate her. Well the whole chapter was awesome..
Now waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

"Keep an extra seat open. If luck has it, our 250th guest is going to be a very special one," added Ishaani, her voice now betraying the slight flutter her heart felt at the thought of the said guest.


Ahem-ahem. Butterfly response... Ranveer Vaghela. ☺️☺️




Ahem-ahem, this made me blush as well. ☺️☺️




Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

And the painting is the same but Ishaani hates it? Erm, this is lot more than what meets the eye.



Also, a line of interlude three came back to me after reading the twenty one year old self. Something about Ishaani and Ranveer being the rulers of the world? (It makes me proud again, ah...) That means them having this business monopoly, right?





Oh yes, there's definitely a lot more than meets the eye. 😈😈 Oh yeah, the rulers of the world aspect was in relation to this in Interlude 3. 😉😉 The original promise will come in Book 4. 😳😳
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Hi LM,
It's beautifully written


Sorry for getting this much time for review...
Actually I had appointment with neurologist so was busy with that on Monday,
And after that got svere headache so was unable to visit forum...

Coming to the interlude...
Though I'm failing to remember it completely,,
But one thing,
How You get these super ideas and from where..?, I mean you leave me mouth gaped every time...
So ranveer's new found dreams turned out to be his novel...
I mean an amazing idea dear..., what so ever he saw in dream he simply penned it down..,
But still, as the novel was a shadow of Ishani and Ranveer's life...,
So the two in Ranveer's dream could b wrapped up in a bow to be Ishani and Ranveer,

Aaah Ishani Paraikh: an Enigma unvield..., Ranveer's fancy...
And he did it...
Just hope Ishani may have gotten the rough copy, which Ranveer left behind and do not find on returning...,
But she might have discussed it to him, if she'd ever found that...

Finch and Ranveer's friendship..., is a kind of relief dear...
He knows it that Ranveer still loves Ishani...
I just hope he'll be doing his job in patching them up..
But it will happen itself, when they will meet and Ranveer will come across the reality...

Hey the title got cleared at the end...(if I got it rightly),
The conflict of personalities...
Ranveer on the one hand is the weakest person in the world, whose love is making him hollow...
While on the other hand he is the strongest person.. Who can suppress his pain under the shelter of work...

Now he turned to be the second one...
Let's see what will happen now..

Keep rocking





Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you like it. ⭐️⭐️ And sweetie, are you alright? 😲😲 Please do take care of your health and don't apologize, your health is first. 😔😔


Coming to the review, I'm so happy that you liked the idea. 😳😳 Oh yes, there's a shadow of Ranveer and Ishaani in Ben and Sarah and the story also has the essence of IshVeer's story as well. 😛😛 As to the book on Ishaani, well, you'll come to know what happened about the rough draft in the next interlude. 😊😊



Finch and Ranveer are again a dynamic that I love exploring. 😃😃 Yes, Finch does know the truth but when he knows the full picture about Ishaani's life, he's definitely trying to play cupid. 😆😆 As to Ranveer... there's a lot of that coming up in the Interludes after Book 4. 😉😉 As to the name of the chapter, you've explained it brilliantly. 👏👏



Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Is she going to exchange painting with chirag?
Omg this girl has !mastered the art of manipulation more than ranveer and chirag himself only if she don't allow her heart to take over 😉
Switching paintings drama stage o God what the hell is going on in her tiny explosive brain 😲 😕
Wait did chirag gave her a replica of the painting of ranveer given that he was trying everything that won her heart all thanx to that special book. 😕
Chirag is the best villain possible I myself Felt a loathing towards him at the mention of his name but he is connector of this sadism story 🤬
But how the hell he got the book? Did anyone from parkh clan did he needful? 🤢
Sunny her pet peeve seriously o that was awesome 👏
But her sadness her addiction made me 😭 😭 poor girl just became a pawn her entire life became a game 🤢
Ranveer was the only person made her feel alive and express her feelings like human now that he was gone all she is now a cold lifeless shell.
Now question I have is ranveer going to accept the destruction he caused in her life by his own book or is he going to say that he warned her about it and it's going to be an ego tussle between them just like in their book 3 estrangement phase because here also no one is ready to let down there mask of coldness but that time ishani melted and took the first step and this time also she is making her amendments but is he that easy to get melted this time
Her transformation overcoming her craving and self loathing to the structure cold business women was fantastic 👏 👏
I love that character so much she clearly knows what she want and how to make everyone fall to her needs accordingly.
So that line of coincidence reminded me of something and I guessed something that dreams were connected because the day love died ranveer also died in her dreams!s because someone said that they are alive because of each other and the moment either one will die the other will die and I guess this also helped her during her bad phase preventing her from sccumbing to all the pain and guilt when she was left alone this made her live o I might be totally wrong in my analysis but sorry can't help it.
She is feeling exactly the same way what she felt during her that special birthday loveless hopeless only these things are more prominent this time but the outcome was something astonishng that time is it going to be the same this time 🤓
She is in love with him hopelessly had she realised this before
They both love each other so much and know each other so well but they both are denying it under mask of cold one for the guilt to even think like that and other for the hatred due to all the pain they got.
That whole description of guilt accompanying pain her self loathing her pain her mental tussle between feeling human or cold everything was so fantastically described that I can't even say
I must say dear your interludes are supreme expression of your writing power I love them so much each and everything about it .
Thank you so much dear this chapter was very awesome and you are mastering each day and surprising with your writing skill with every interludes.
Thnx for uploading despite your vacation schedule
Waiting for next
Howz tour vacations going on
I hope you enjoy a lot




Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And my vacations are going on well so far and it is fun. Please don't thank me for that, you're always going to be welcome. ☺️☺️



Coming to the review, hehe, there's a lot more to the painting that meets the eye. 😉😉 Hehe, life's taught her the art of manipulation in the worst way possible and has made her adept in the best way possible. 😛😛 That tiny explosive brain of hers is concocting a lot of drama. 😈😈 And no, Chirag didn't gift her the painting... well, you'll come to know all about it when the time comes. 😆😆



This compliment made my day about Chirag. 😃😃 This is the first time that I've written like a mainstream villian and I'm so, so happy that you do feel that loathing for him. 😳😳 As to how he got the book, you'll come to know about it in the next interlude. 😊😊 And her pet peeve, you'll come to know how she gained the name of Sunny in Book 4.



Coming to her sadness, I was so, so afraid about the emotions and whether you guys would understand her point of view after Ranveer's, but I'm relieved that you liked it so much. 👍🏼👍🏼 Again, as to how Ranveer is going to react and whether he's going to accept his mistakes will all come in the future chapters so I cannot say anything about that right now. 🤔🤔



Every time someone tells me how much they love Ishaani in this FF, I feel like a proud mommy because this was always how Ishaani was meant to be in my mind till the CVs made her... dumb. 🤬🤬 Coming to your point of co-incidence, you make good amount of sense in it and it is true to a certain extent. 😎😎 But coming to the connection between the dreams, I'll reveal that when the time comes too, since there are quite some tiny symbolisms attached to them. 😳😳



Um, whose birthday are you referring to - hers or Ranveer's? Because both of them were astonishing so I'm curious. 🤡🤡 As to them hiding their love again, brilliantly put, like always. 👏👏 I'm happy that you liked the whole mental tussle and the way her emotions were penned down. 😳😳 Like I said, I was so worried about it that your review was like a balm for me. 😃😃



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next chapter soon! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

O after posting it I realised how much blabbering I have done and really sorry for that but dear you are really a gem writer I must admit. I ll shut my mouth before I again make such a long post . sorry




Sweetheart, your reviews are the ones that I always wait for the most eagerly and the longer they are, the more I enjoy to read them. ⭐️⭐️ So don't apologize for the long reviews because I really love them! 🤗🤗 And the love and praises you all shower upon me is what keeps me going and helps me grow as a writer as well. ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful

Hii LM,
Its was so painful,emotionaly and also so deep...chapter i think ye painting wohi painting hai na when ranveer give her as birthday gift but why she's switching painting even she heartly touch with painting now my brain is not working...Ugh! Chiru baby ko ranveer ki book kaise mili i think disha baby bcoz show me bhi help kiya and she's not like ishani 😕 Poor girl i feel bad for him how much she bear pain and feel guilty chirkut ne kahi ka nhi chor...And finally she realise that how much she loved ranveer but even too late and she more guilt for not trust her best friend the whole moment was so amazed! And the best part was when she said that if he hate her then she will die i think the only reason for ishani alive that she think he still love her and he never hate her. Well the whole chapter was awesome..
Now waiting for next
Thanks for pm




Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️



Coming to the update, yes this was emotionally challenging for me to write as well because both Ranveer as well as Ishaani have got very complex emotional structures. 😕😕 But I'm so happy that you liked it. 😳😳 And coming to the painting, there's a lot of mystery to that, but its for the future chapters. 😉😉



As to how he got the book, I'll be revealing about it in the next interlude. 😃😃 But yes, her guilt is too much and I'm really happy that you liked the way it was done. 😛😛 And yes, that part was pretty much amongst my favourites as well. 😊😊



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next chapter soon! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Phew!

This was just <3 <3 Ishani and her guilt is something everyone wished to see in the show. Beautifully penned, darling! <3 <3


"Keep an extra seat open. If luck has it, our 250th guest is going to be a very special one," added Ishaani, her voice now betraying the slight flutter her heart felt at the thought of the said guest.

Ranveer! Yay! I cannot wait! I cannot wait! This made me blush so much and you can never imagine! *Daydreams!* Well, having said that Ranveer had mastered the 'art of manipulation', it's now Ishani's turn. *Grins evilly*

And wait, about the painting... Erm, there's something more in this. :-/ :-/ How much is going on in her teeny brain! Ishani here is just like the one we wished. Those days were just love! Only if the CVs decided not to make her dumb! Who would ever call the dumb a law student? xD xD But then, your Ishani is simply WOW!

Chirag is just a loather! Cannot give him a better name as of now. Reading the book written by Ranveer! --_-- But how did he manage to get it? But then, all my anger just melted in a fraction. All thanks to the letter written by Ranveer for her! <3 <3 And Ishani is just feeling numb and frustrated with life. </3 </3

Now, I was actually expecting the scalpel back for a long time now, and yes, it's back. She feels the pain getting ebbed when she drives the scalpel through her skin. Cannot get painful anymore. Her life has just become nothing now. She was just gambled by life and there's nothing for her which can go better. Sigh.

I can expect Ranveer soothing her heart, but will he? He himself is heart-broken. But then, since they are for and by each other, I can expect.

And her pet peeve! :') :') Sunny! <3 <3 Wondering...I'll get my answer in the next book :P :P

Ishani, why didn't you realize your love for your childhood friend earlier? :'( :'(

Update the next one soon, darling but before that, don't forget to enjoy your vacations. <3 <3

Hugs and love,
Aarushi
Edited by Bloomfield - 9 years ago

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