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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bubulswt

amazing update

madhav and parth meeting with people of indraprasth
they are right on there place
but krishna and arjun handles them very well
arjun is still feeling guilt for not able to save her krishnaa
ladies are so sweet
they ask arjun to take care of panchali

Thanks for appreciation. It is not possible to describe their great friendship.Madhav Parth are unique. But some perverted writers are connecting Krishna with others which is unpardonable.
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Posted: 9 years ago
It is past mid night. Arjun could not sleep at all.He rolled on the bed this side and that side.He looked at Krishna who is in deep sleep. He got up and walked towards the inner apartments which were once occupied by all the wives of Pandavas.All the wings were kept the same way as they used to be thirteen years back,at the time of Rajasuya.
He walked towards the northern wing where his warrior wife Alli used to be. He entered into her chamber and looked around. What must be passing in Alli's mind.He married her but hardly took care of her. He did not know whom she begot. She left immediately after Rajasuya. Did she get twins as it was predicted? He did not bother to get information. He was in Exile,then incognito then war...
Suddenly he heard the noise of Payal. He looked back and shocked to see Alli there.

Alli walked towards him as if in trance.Arjun was spellbound. How could Alli be here at midnight?
Alli touched his cheek and smiled." Finally you got time to think of me.Not fair,Rajkumar Arjun,"She complained.Arjun just looked at her beautiful face.Alli continued." You know your son exactly looks like you. And your daughter ,she is like me.
Alli pouted and pulled him closer." I know you love your Krishnaa too much. All these years your whole life revolved round her only.Now that she got peace and living happily,you remembered me.
Alli clasped his neck and admitted." But I loved you sincerely. That is why I came to you when you thought of me. I love you Arjun...
Arjun closed his eyes and thought it is not his dream. Alli is here.
He then opened his eyes and found himself alone.He looked around but Alli was nowhere.
Arjun was confused. Must be his imagination He thought.

Arjun walked towards the chamber where Chitra used to be. He entered inside. It looked like still
Chitra is living there. The attendants kept everything as it is.
Arya,finally you came to me? You still remembered you married Manipur princess?
Arjun could not believe his eyes. His Chitrangada is standing so nearer to him Arjun tried to touch her.
Chitra did not allow him and said.' Don't you want to know how I endured all these years of separation?
Ulupi always told me you loved your Krishnaa so much. But I never bothered.
Arjun was in shock. Chitra seemed so real to him. Her anger,her attitude she is real.
Chitra slowly moved very close and placed her hands round his waist.
I am angry with you still I love you Arya Arjun...
Arjun closed his eyes. He should not disappoint Chitra. She deserves his love.
As he opened his eyes he understood again he was deceived...

Arjun touched the Veena strings with his forefinger. It sounded perfect.
The Veena looked perfectly in sruti as if Rekha is playing it regularly all these years.
Suddenly he felt someone bending beside him and playing the veena with great skill.
He looked at the intruder and found his wife,Vasuki's sister Rekha smiling with her eyes.
How did I play Veena? Not as good as you I know. But you didn't teach me also.
Arjun stared at her feeling her presence.
Rekha took his hand and made him touch the Veena strings.
Play it for me Arya. All these years I waited for this moment.
To listen to you to see you touch the Veena strings..
Arya Arjun your Rekha waited for you with love and hope.
Arjun looked into her eyes with intensity,He knew Rekha's love is true.
He should not disappoint her. Arjun played the notes on Veena closing his eyes.
After five minutes he opened his eyes to find the security guard gazing at him with surprise.
Arjun looked around and smiled sheepishly. The guard saluted him and left.

That is the chamber where his Naga Kanya stayed during Aswamedha.
Arjun stood at the window feeling the silence around .
Finally at peace with yourself?"Ulupi's voice is heard from behind.
Arjun turned back and found the Nagakanya looking at him with the same love and passion
That she exhibited years back in neck deep Ganga waters.
Ulupi placed her hand on his shoulder." Don't regret for anything Arya Arjun.Be calm and composed.
Still you have your trials ahead. But you should always win at the End.
I would never let anything happen to you. I pledge on my love for you.
Ulupi has tears in her eyes. Arjun felt bad.He always neglected Ulupi but not now.
Arjun stretched his hands to take her in his arms. He found emptiness.

The Worship place and Durgaa Maata were shining with the same splendour like thirteen years back.
As he walked inside he saw someone standing with Aarti Thali.Who is she?
Arya turned back and smiled. She approached him and placed Tilak on his forehead. She touched his feet.Arjun pulled her up." Arya, You are worshipping Durga without sleep?He asked.
Arya replied. " Yes Arya. For you only. You won the war.Durgaa Maata graced us.
I always worship her. You also bow before her.
Arjun touched her head affectionately and bowed before the Goddess.
Arya Now it is time to rest. Let us go.
Arjun raised his head. He was alone. Durga Mata smiled at him.

Arjun walked towards Subhadra's chamber.The chamber is looking as it is His Abhi's small bow is kept
In a corner.All his things were there in their places. The small armour that he and Krishna gifted him is still there.Arjun took it in his hands and touched it with tears.
Why did you gift him armour? He is obsessed with it.He did not leave it till ...
Arjun looked back and saw Subhadra.
Bhadra...Arjun stammered. Subhadra took the armour and threw it away.
Arjun looked bewildered.Subhadra hugged him closer.
Their tears rolled down and merged as one stream.
Subhadra said in a broken voice." Dont shed tears. I also wont.
We got our Abhi back in the form of Parikshit.
But don't gift him an armour like you did to Abhi. Promise me.
Arjun nodded his head and stretched his hand.He felt the armour but not Subhadra.

The jasmines invited him. The moonlight also.The chamber of the queen of Indraprasth
Still has the blue lotus fragrance of Yajnaseni. Arjun walked inside and observed everything just perfect. He stood near the Jhoola in which his Kirti and Pragati used to sleep.
How obsessed Kirti is with his mother? Too much. Panchali used to get angry when he
taunt her not to do so much pampering.
But he left me forever. You need not taunt me. I can't pamper him anymore.
Arjun turned back and found his Krishnaa looking at him with pain filled eyes.
The lotus eyes are trying desparately to keep the tears inside but invain.
Arjun took her in his arms and wiped her tears with his lips.
Krishnaa clasped his waist and stammered." Arjun. Kirti got angry with me.I am not a good mother.
Thirteen years I left them alone. So they left me now.And Kirti he was a baby when I left him.
Arjun,no one should have the pain I feel now."
Arjun took her to the Balcony and made her sit on the jhoola. He sat at her knees and placed his head on her lap.He then looked up into her eyes." Krishnaa don't stop your tears. Let them ease your burden . Krishnaa compose yourself.Everyone has to leave. Abhi and Kirti left early. But we also will go one day and meet them in another world. If I went before you..." Panchali closed his mouth from uttering more." Arjun,You will never leave before me. Your Krishnaa will go first and welcome you there.Dont say that again."
Arjun smiled and assured." I accept your word. But now you wont grieve for Kirti. Promise?
Panchali smiled through her tears. Arjun tried to take her in his arms. He heard Krishna's voice from behind." Parth, Done with your dreams? Or someone still left? Just say it I will let you dream."

Arjun turned back and saw his Madhav smiling mischievously. He did not look at the Jhoola again.
He knew now. His Krishnaa is a dream.




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Posted: 9 years ago
all d updates were so heart touching... amazing update di
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
arjun imaging his each and every wife
I like his every wife except chitragta
too much proud and attitude always
i am the best attitude
mathav is pulling leg of his parth 😆
Edited by bubulswt - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
by the way which writers are connecting Krishna with others 😕
in epic krishna was friend with Arjun Draupadi and Sudama
only na

Edited by bubulswt - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetka

all d updates were so heart touching... amazing update di

Thank you Sweetika. The memories at Indraprasth haunt him which is painful. Life is a mixture of both.Joy and Sorrow.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bubulswt

by the way which writers are connecting Krishna with others 😕

in epic krishna was friend with Arjun Draupadi and Sudama
only na

Did you watch Suryaputr Karn? Their Krishna hardly bothers about Parth but calls Karna Mitra. It was a torture of sorts.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Did you watch Suryaputr Karn? Their Krishna hardly bothers about Parth but calls Karna Mitra. It was a torture of sorts.

yes only one episode and I must say it was totally crap
so poor acting specially Draupadi and Bheema
even i found Aaham sharama batter Karan then Gautam Rode
and story was total fiction
in that episode Karna was helping pandavs in going to exile
when did that happen in epic
that was my first and last episode
Edited by bubulswt - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
read all d updates in one go
n really n truly enjoyed every piece u hv written..
so much emotions n all r amazingly portrayed
no words to describe how incredibly dey r written..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Satya beamed with joy." Did I not tell you? They will win the hearts of Indraprasth citizens.It is not a big deal at all." She stated.Panchali lied back on her cushion relaxingly. It was sleeping time for Hastinapur.Panchali just returned after finishing her daily routine. She visited her motherinlaw as is her habit. Kunti asked her what message Arjun send that evening.
Panchali told her." The citizens reconciled Mata. They accepted the explanation given by your son.Govind also made them understand the circumstances."

Kunti had a satisfying smile on her face." I know they will achieve. Govind has that Devine aura.
And my Phalgun? Who will not oblige him if he stands before them? He is the gift of gods for me and Maharaj Pandu.When will they return?
Panchali nodded her head." Not clear Mata. They did not specify anything."
Suddenly Pragati rushed inside like whirlwind and lied besides Kunti clasping her neck.
Kunti asked her " why are you here? You are sleeping with your baby Parikshit daily. What happened?"
Pragati admitted in a pampered tone." Because I miss you Dadi. I have this habit to sleep with you only."
Kunti pinched her cheeks." Don't tell lies. May be Pari has slept early today."
Pragati laughed." How do you know? Yes. Pari slept. Uttara Bhabhi also slept already.
And Subhadra?" Kunti asked. Pragati answered." Choti Mata is writing a letter to Pitasri elaborating Pari's cute antics."
Panchali turned her back and said." Pragati don't go on talking. Let your Dadi sleep well. You also sleep.It is already late."
Pragati stretched her hands to Draupadi .The mother went nearer and gave a peck on her cheeks.

Panchali,What are you thinking about? So lost in your thoughts?" Satya called her.
Draupadi raised her head and smiled." Nothing. Thinking of Pragati's words. Subhadra is writing a letter to him about Pari.Tomorrow messengers are going to Indraprasth."

Satya asked." Why didn't you write anything?"
Panchali asked the same." What about you? Don't you write to Govind?
Satya answered with a smile." No I don't believe in putting my thoughts into words. I believe in action"
Panchali laughed." So Govind should be prepared for your over whelming reception."
Satya proudly admitted." He should anyway. You wait and watch. I will just make him a captive and won't allow him to go to Arjun."
Panchali laughed."Try as you may but you won't succeed."
Satya stopped laughing and seriously asked." Shall I ask you something? Don't feel bad. Just out of curiosity."
Panchali took her hand and assured." Satya. I never felt the need to tell you. But I want to tell you now. No one ever became this closer to me like you did.You can ask anything."
Satya asked looking hesitatingly into her eyes." Is the one year rule still implemented? If so whom do you belong right now?
Panchali kept silent for a while. Then she said in a low voice measuring her own words." Long back when we went to Exile we stopped following the rule. All of us were in pain and tension that we forgot anything about leading a normal life. I did the duties of a wife. I helped Dharmaraj do those homas and yajnas. I cooked tasty food with whatever is available and satisfied Bheema's appetite . I served them attended on them.Till now I continued that way of functioning only. With the loss of children Pandavas became like they lost the zeal to enjoy life.
Satya asked." What about the other wives ?"
Panchali nodded her head." I don't know. I never put any questions regarding their equation with their wives.Not even now."
Whose year was it when the Dice game happened"
Panchali answered sharply." Arjun's . The irony of life. I got to spend my years properly with the other four. But I never got to spend my due time with the man who won me in the Swayamvar.He went for twelve year Exile,then he went for various conquests.
Satya had a concerned look on her face." And now he went to Indraprasth.
Panchali smiled feebly." After return he will go,to,fetch the treasure then for one year he has to be away taking the horse of Aswamedha.
Satya questioned." Don't you get angry with his wandering. Spirit?
Panchali answered." I used to get angry. But as time passed I understood. Without him nothing will move ahead for Pandavas. Nothing.
The twelve year Exile he went on his own. He intentionally broke the rule to move away from me.
But all other Expeditions were done for Pandavas only. The Rajasuya conquests,who would have won that much treasure other than him?
The various battles he fought benefitted our Kingdom only.
And his Five year trip to heaven that was for Pasupat and Divyastras.
And now who would have convinced Indraprasth people other than him?
And the Aswamedha campaign. Did you hear what rule Dharmaraj imposed on him?
He should not kill any king. He should achieve everything singlehandedly without army loss."

Panchali gasped for breath. Satya gave her water to drink and teased." You and your unmistaken love. Arjun is lucky The most beautiful woman dotes upon him. By the way Swami told me that Arjun has to use all his charm to convince you that Urvasi's curse did not effect him at all and will happen only in incognito. Right?
Panchali blushed reminiscing her desperation and her Arjun's frustration to make her understand the fact. The full moon night with him in the yacht really is one of the most memorable moments of her life.
Yajnaseni smiled at Satya and closed her eyes as if to feel the moments again.

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