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brilliant update
both beat friends are sharing
facts of there life
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

read all d updates in one go
n really n truly enjoyed every piece u hv written..
so much emotions n all r amazingly portrayed
no words to describe how incredibly dey r written..

Thank you Sruti for making time to read the parts.Happy to see your comments always.
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brilliant update

both beat friends are sharing
facts of there life

Yes. They share a unique bond.
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What did my sister write that you look so blissful? Krishna asked Arjun.
Arjun smiled." Bhadra wrote the daily routine of Parikshit minute by minute. Your sister is so sweet.
She knew I miss Pari. So she took a lot of trouble to write everything. Madhav, Pari is like Abhi only.
Subhadra says our Abhi came back with another name.
Krishna took the letter and counted the pages." Six pages. Superb Parth. Bhadra is unique. That is why I was in a hurry to send my Yogmaya with you lest Bhrata will offer her to Duryothan.

Arjun became alert." What did you say? Yog Maya? Subhadra? Can you explain how?" He asked.
Krishna nodded his head." Just a slip of tongue. Don't go by my words. But one thing I want to say.
Subhadra is that means through which Chandra Vamsh flourished and moved ahead.Because of her your clan got the flag bearers."
Arjun agreed." I know Madhav. I am fortunate enough to have her All our sons perished but Pari is there due to your grace."
Krishna looked deep into his eyes." Bhadra has Pari to preoccupy herself. She will reconcile with her fate. But think of Krishnaa. She lost all her sons.Yes there is Pragati. But she will get married and leave her mother.She is so noble that she doesn't want to rob the moments of bliss from Subhadra. She willingly stays back and let Subhadra enjoy her grandson.

Arjun nodded his head." I know Madhav. My Krishnas always faced trials with a brave heart. I wish atleast one son of her stayed alive.
Krishna pressed his shoulder." Parth, every one will come to this world along with their fate.Forgot what I told you?
Arjun ruffled his hair desparately." You said you will remind me once again.I await your words.
Krishna patted him affectionately." First finish your work here. I will definitely enlighten you then."

Chitra approached Ulupi." You know our messengers brought information that Arya Arjun is in Indraprasth.Shall we go there? I will ask Babhru to make arrangements."
Ulupi prevented her." No Chitra. By the time we reach there he may leave for Hastinapur.
Let us wait till the Aswamedha happens.
Chitra got disappointed." You know you just could not understand how desparate I am to meet him.
I feel like yugas gone by since we met him. All these years I suppressed the thoughts of him as he was facing Aranya vas and Ajnatavas.Now They are settled at Hastinapur .I can not wait now.

Ulupi tried to change her mood." Chitra. I am sure Arya also will feel great to meet you. He loves you a lot. He himself proposed marriage with you. You are lucky my friend."
Chitra 's face shone with Arjun's thoughts.It is true that he himself chose to marry her.But she doesn't want to degrade Ulupi's love for him. She smiled at Ulupi and taunted." We crossed that age where we can enjoy such talk. But I still want to remind you Ulupi,you are the luckiest of all. He enjoyed conjugal bliss with you first. You out scored his lotus eyed Panchali also."

Ulupi laughed heartfully. Chitra won't change.She always wants to taunt Panchali. But She doesn't want to realise where Arjun's heart lies.Anyway she successfully stopped Chitra from going over to Arjun. Right now she should groom Babhru to stand firm and face the best archer of Aryavarth.

Babhru came and touched her feet.Ulupi blessed him and asked." How is the practice? How many vidhis of archery you learnt . There are five you know?

Babhru answered with a smirk." Only two Jyesht Mata. The third one also I may learn. But the last two no one knows here.
Ulupi proudly said." The last two are known only to your father. Swayam Mahadev instructed him Do you know?
Babhru was spellbound." How fortunate he is to get Mahadev as his teacher? I envy him Mata."

Ulupi smiled and enlightened him." Arya Arjun came to this world for a special purpose. That is why he got the best of everything. His teachers are Kripa,Drona,Agnivesha,Mahadev and Sri Krishn. Babhru,
You do your best. Don't compare yourself with him. You will get intimidated by him.Just try to live up to your identity as Arjun's son.

Chitra took her son on her lap." Babhru. Don't get tensed up hearing your Jyesht Mata's words.
You have Arjun's blood. You will prove yourself very soon. Right?

Babhru smiled at his mother and nodded his head.





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Posted: 9 years ago
interesting update Di ...superb wr8
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loved d update..
uullupi is very understanding
n chitra is still d same-childish..
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Panchali stood at the mirror. After the war she hardly cares to dress up well or adorn herself with ornaments suitable for Maharani of Hastinapur .She will just arrange her hair mostly in a knot and wear whatever her hands lie on. Her loyal maid Malini got married and still makes time to attend to her though she won't stay through out the day.
Priyamvadha also became weak she is of the same age as of Kunti. Panchali asked her not to attend to any regular work. She asked her to be with Kunti and Gandhari and relax without getting stressed up. But Priyamvada just could not stay away from Parikshit. She takes pleasure in nourishing the baby doing every thing she can. She is the one who literally brought up the five Upa Pandavas. She went with them to Kampilya when Draupadi went to forest. Often Panchali observed her crying her heart out going to worship room. She will call the names and blame the Almighty.

Panchali tried her best to console her." Masi. Though I am the mother you are the one who nourished them. I can understand. But please take care of your health. Your grief is genuine. But think about this unfortunate mother who also has to bear with it. We both should reconcile,and survive." Priyamvadha hugged her and sobbed." How cruel our fate is Princess. The light of our lives had gone. God is cruel.
After all the troubles you faced you deserved to be happy with your kids. "
Panchali said in a grim tone." Masi,It is not in my destiny to spend my life with my kids. God has specially made me to test my forbearance."

Panchali untied her hair and thought,What she told Priyamvadha is correct.She is created for a special purpose.She looked at her image. Every one says that she stopped ageing.Satya also said so.
Panchali took her hair in her hand and started combing. Her maid came and offered help. But she denied. Maid went off leaving her alone. These days she did not relish attending the assembly everyday.She still manages the finances but will submit them through her officers.
Yudhishtir informs her to attend the session if any important thing is to be discussed.

Panchali finished her hair and threw her long plait back with force.She looked into the mirror. Saw her image but who is that behind her catching that long plait with his left hand. Her mirror image looked back and saw the third Pandav smiling at her .When did you come? She asked.
Arjun replied playing with her plait." When did I go?"
Draupadi tried to pull back her hair." Don't fool me Arjun. You went to Indraprasth with Govind.
You even sent message couple of days ago. Your Bhadra wrote a very big letter also.Pragati told me."

Arjun smiled and asked." You did not write a letter to me .By the way why are you not bothering about yourself nowadays? See your eyes? They are lotuses but your tears washed them so much Krishnaa.
Arjun bent down took Kajal and applied to her eyes.
Panchali stared at him.When did he come back?
Arjun in the mirror took Lattuka Ras and applied to her lips. Now they look beautiful. Your natural pink lips should get protected by this. You know These are not for the sake of enhancing your beauty. Your natural beauty doesn't need them but you need them to keep yourself hale and healthy.
Panchali listened to him,mesmerised,unable to say anything.
Her mirror image is smiling coyly at Arjun unable to control the sudden surprise given by Arjun.
She asked again." When did you come? "
Arjun bent over her and replied with his usual naughtiness." I told you. I never went.I am present here."
He kept his head on her heart.
Panchali could not believe what she is witnessing in her mirror.
She wanted to turn back to find out if Arjun has come really.
" Queen Prince Sahadev wants permission to enter your chamber." Panchali came out of her trance and looked at the mirror. Her image stood alone. Where is Arjun? She wondered.

Sahadev came inside and took his Aasan. Draupadi looked at him with suspicion.What news did he bring? Is it about HIM?
Sahadev answered as if he understood her mind." Yes. He is coming back. Just now messengers came from Indraprasth. By next week they will be back. Four days after their arrival Eldest,Bhrata Arjun Myself will start for Himalayas to bring Treasure. Bhrata Bheem and Nakul will look after Hastinapur.Govind and Satya will go back to Dwaraka as they have to come back again for the inaugural ceremony of Aswamedha. "

Draupadi bit her lip and retorted." So they are coming back to go for Treasure Hunt. After that The Aswamedha campaign. Very well planned I must say."
Sahadev gazed at her. He remembered the new bride Draupadi at Hastinapur who sulked whenever Arjun went for wars.Years passed. But the situation remained the same.His Bhrata Arjun always moved away from them for the sake of the kingdom and the Emperor.Now also. His Kartavya never allows him to remain stable among his brothers,nearer to his mother and above all within the loving premises of Draupadi's heart
." Sahadev smiled with concern." My brother is the Eternal wanderer Panchali.We all have to cope up with that fact. He is the flag bearer of Kuruvamsh. He is our redeemer.You know it no one can replace him in fulfilling the destiny of Pandavas. He leads us we have to follow. He is the cherished friend of Govind.Where they both are there victory happens.

Panchali did not say anything. But as usual her eyes failed to hide the disappointment of her heart.
Sahadev observed her and asked." Can you imagine any one of us winning over Indraprasth people?
Draupadi nodded her head.She knew the facts. But she is helpless she can not bear his separation.

Sahadev stood up to leave.Panchali tried to ask.Your Bhrata Bheem could not accompany the king to bring back the treasure? She did not ask. Sahadev suddenly turned back. He softly said." Vyasa Dev
asked Eldest to go with Bhrata Arjun.I don't need to explain the reason to you."

As Sahadev walked off Panchali stared at his vanishing figure. 'Yes She knew the reason. Arjun symbolises victory.So his presence is needed."


Edited by ltelidevara - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

loved d update..
uullupi is very understanding
n chitra is still d same-childish..

Thanks Sruti.You are right.
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Posted: 9 years ago
brilliant update Di...keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
so both madhav and parth are coming back to hastinapur
ulupi is wonderful woman
and chitra is as usually irritating
and taunting panchali
Draupadi is imaging arjun and missing him
draupdi and sahadev conversation indeed make us
remember her initial days in hastinapur
her sulking face
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