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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

the two updates were suoerb, amazing, wonderful..
d 1st one having segments of arjun n krishna jugalbandi n dere moments of pulling each other legs was incredible..
i was laughing n giggling...
n d 2nd one was beautiful wid satya n panchali's togetherness...

Thanks Sruti for enjoying the write up. The Epic has this Indraprasth trip of Krishna and Arjun before Aswamedha.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetka

wonderful update Di.. m so sorry Di itne dino se busy thi studies meh so reply nhi kar payi

So nice of you Sweetika,You are busy still you are so regular here. Even I miss you if I don't see your comment.
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Indraprasth welcomed the friends with aloofness and detachment. They were cordial they stood in the streets showered flowers on them but the glow on their faces is missing.
Arjun remembered how they used to dance with joy whenever he came back after his expeditions.
If Krishna arrives the. People used to fall at his feet not letting him move further.
Now they just folded their hands courteously bending their heads.

They entered the Royal palace where the great Assembly used to gather on every Wednesday and Friday. Arjun gazed at the Throne of his Eldest which used to be the pride of Aryavarth.
He then looked at the sideways where his mother and Panchali used to sit . How nice and eventful those days are. He thought and felt depressed.
They then went to the Mansion of Draupadi that surpassed every other palace in Indraprasth.
There they saw their old attendants who are now caretakers of that wing.
Krishna enquired " How is everything here? Did Duryothan visit Indraprasth frequently? With his family?"
The attendant replied" He never came here my lord.He was afraid of people's outburst as he committed a sin against Maharani Draupadi.Prince Vikarna came twice in these thirteen years."
Arjun 's face became pale . The disgrace that happened at Dyut Sabha would definitely follow wherever they go."
Krishna continued his conversation Arjun walked towards the balcony where he spent beautiful moments with his fire born.The jhoola is still there the jasmines are there. They nodded their heads as if they are asking him where their dear Sakhi is.
The night is shining with stars and full moon.Arjun sat on the jhoola and felt his Krishnaa bent down on his shoulder from behind. She wore a beautiful lite pink lehenga with blue choli. She has the Mang Ka teeka and waist band.She smiled and gave a peck on his cheek.

Arjun stared at her in surprise. She looked so real. He stammered." Krishnaa when did you come? You reached before us?
He pulled her into his lap and she pouted." I came with you only. When did I leave you ever?"
Arjun looked at her mesmerised and bent down to kiss her.
Now, You already started dreaming of Sakhi? Parth. Look at me. Krishnaa was back in Hastinapur. But she is also here with us.Come to reality." Krishna's words brought Arjun from dreams.
He got up from the jhoola and covered his embarrassment by turning his back.
Now stop talking in riddles . You say she is here and you say she is not here." Arjun complained.
Krishna smiled." She is not here in person. But she is present in soul.When is she away from you ? Never."

Krishna and Arjun were served delicious tasteful dishes for dinner in Indraprasth's Royal dining Hall.
Arjun identified Bheema's Chief Cook who became old and weak. He still is cooking food for Administrative staff just the way he learnt from Bheema.He enquired about Bheema and praised him for fulfilling his vows of killing Duryothan and Dussasan." They ill treated our Maharani the most noble lady of Aryavarth. They deserve such deaths only." He declared.

Arjun looked around and expressed his feelings." Madhav. Why did Duryothan do all that to us? How happy we were in Indraprasth.He robbed us of our happiness and he himself lost his life."
Krishna patted his back." Control yourself. I told you destiny can not be changed. Never."



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Posted: 9 years ago
it was beautifully written
really those were beautiful n precious days for pandavas in indraprasth
but as krishna said all happens as per written in destiny
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update Di..
or wr8 skill is beyond any words
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update
sweet memories of indraprasth
when they were happy
people were happy
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Indraprasth Royal Garden became the open air assembly hall that day. The wide and spacious lawns accommodated thousands of citizens and administrative staff who eagerly awaited The Third Pandav who sent a request to all of them to gather there.
They were miffed and hurt to that extent that they don't want to listen to any explanation .

After a while they saw Krishna Vaasudev and Arjun walking towards the temporarily constructed Dias .
There is pin drop silence all around .Krishna walked to the edge of the stage and addressed the gathering." On behalf of the Emperor we are here to assure you peace,happiness and security.
It was unfortunate to be away from all of you for thirteen years.But fate can not be averted by anyone.
Better to let go the past happenings.But I am sure now onwards your security and safety will be the prime concern for Pandavas.Now Parth would like to speak his heart out.

No one dared to say any thing when. Krishna delivered his speech.But as soon as Arjun got up much noise is heard from every corner.A middle aged man stood up and asked." Forgive our interruption. But Rajkumar Arjun. You should have spoken not here but in the Dyut Sabha when your Eldest staked Indraprasth you did not say anything. How come you want to say now?"

Another one stood and shouted." Probably you Pandavas forgot that Indraprasth is not that was created by Maya . It is the people who matter. You staked the kingdom means you staked us all.

Krishna took Arjun's hand in his.Arjun stood silently waiting for more...
A soldier who was trained by Arjun stood and expressed his feelings." Raj Kumar Arjun we The Indraprasth Army was trained by you thirteen years back.But ironically we all fought against you at Kurukshetr.Most of my companions were killed in the battle.Very few of us remained alive.
Tell me Sir, Why were we forced to fight on Duryothan's side?If your Eldest lost the game why should we be the sacapegoats?
The old man who saw the friends earlier stood and said." Duryothan became our new master.He did not harass us. He did not disturb our lifestyle.But we felt like strangers in our own place.We lost the mental tuning that we used to have with Indraprasth's royal family.
Now again you got the power. We feel more unrest and insecurity.
No words of you can change our mindsets.We feel cheated.

Arjun had moisture in his eyes. He stared at the gathering and folded his hands.He spoke in his calm soothening voice." I agree with each and every word spoken by you.We don't deserve to enjoy your faith.But still I request you all to bear with me.The Dice game was pre planned.Sakuni cheated Eldest with his fake coins.We lost everything including ourselves
Eldest staked Indraprasth but he never considered you all as slaves.
How pathetic it is to be a slave we understood in incognito.

We did the crime of staking you all we endured the punishment in this life only.
The twelve years of Forest life and incognito made us suffer every minute with the guilt.
But now after everything is over,please don't think we will do the same mistake again .
I promise we will protect you at the cost of our lives.
I lost my most precious son in war. Abhi. That is the greatest punishment for my crime of not standing by you and by my wife. I admit I am at fault. Forgive me and give another chance to serve you all."

There was silence around. Krishna stood and said." People of Indraprasth are magnanimous I know. Surely they will forget everything and bless the Pandavas again."
Every one looked at the charismatic Krishna Vaasudev and their Rajkumar Arjun who faced so much in life with courage and nobility.
The old man stood and raised his hand." Hail Krishna Vaasudev,the Vishnu incarnate.
Victory to the greatest warrior of Aryavarth,our Raj Kumar Arjun.
Long live Pandava Empire."
The whole of Indraprasth pledged their support unanimously.
Krishna smiled at his Parth." The miracle happened again."



Edited by ltelidevara - 9 years ago
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Most of the citizens left the place. But then a group of ladies who are waiting side ways came before the Dias and folded their hands. Arjun identified them. They were all Indraprasth's housewives who actively participated in all the functions. They all loved Draupadi like their own daughter or sister.
One of them by name Charumati looked straight into Arjun's eyes and said." Kunti Putr Arjun,,We all want answers from you.
Why were you silent when our Maharani Panchali was staked by your Eldest? Isn't it your duty to protect your wife whom you won by your valour? Did your Eldest take your permission to stake her in the dice game?
Arjun looked bewildered.
The lady continued her attack." Rajkumar Arjun, as far as I know she sacrificed herself to keep your mother and Eldest's word. She accepted her fate with dignity.But how could your brother treat her like an object? And you kept quite? Your loyalty towards your brother dominated your kartavya towards your wife ?
Arjun's face became pale.Krishna looked calm and serene.
Charumati continued her onslaught." You are the greatest warrior of Aryavarth.You won so many battles.But you failed in the most crucial battle of your life.
Why did you let that innocent princess of Panchal face such humiliation? Prince Arjun, Every one knows how much she loved you and stood by you.
We don't think you could forgive yourself for what you did to her."

Krishna stood and raised his hand." You are right Charumati.Parth failed to protect her. But sometimes every one will become helpless due to fate. That fateful day was the base on which Kurukshetr battle 's seeds were planted.
Panchali was staked. Humiliated.But she proved herself as Sakti .
As for Arjun he was bound by his commitment towards his Eldest which could not exempt him from his failure to protect his wife. But both Arjun and Panchali had faith in me.
That is the reason why they could go through that most crucial moment of their life successfully.
Eldest was at fault. Pandavas were at fault. That is why they endured severe punishments in this life itself.They lost all their children."
Arjun folded his hands and admitted." No explanation is enough to cover up my failure towards her.
I admit I sinned . I couldn't stand up to my innocent wife who faced so much because of me,
No punishment is enough to purify myself. I am ready to face whatever you ask me to do in the form of punishment."
Charumati looked at the other ladies . She then stared at Arjun's tear filled eyes filled withguiltyness.
She said softly." Rajkumar Arjun We all love our Maharani so much. If we hurt you we know she will feel bad.Anyway you yourself realised your lapse. Your guilty feeling is enough to torture you for a lifetime. But promise us you will take care of her and keep her happy. She lost all her son's and Abhi whom she loved more than her sons.She needs your love and concern. Atleast now be with her and share her grief."
Arjun nodded his head and stammered." I promise. I will"
Krishna took his hand and walked away.

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
madhav and parth meeting with people of indraprasth
they are right on there place
but krishna and arjun handles them very well
arjun is still feeling guilt for not able to save her krishnaa
ladies are so sweet
they ask arjun to take care of panchali
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Now stop brooding over the past. Your Indraprasth people understood you Parth. Get rid of your guilty feeling." Krishna said. Arjun still had the gloomy expression on his face. Both of them are sitting on the Royal terrace enjoying the cool rays of the moon.The attendants arranged a wide range of drinks on the table placed in the middle. The friends liesurely reclined on the couches holding the Goldenjars filled with excellent tasteful drinks.
Arjun stammered in a low voice." Issue is not their forgiveness. Whether I can forgive myself or nor that is the point.And I can never forgive myself you know it."
Krishna retorted tongue in cheek." My Sakhi forgave you .Isnt that enough for you to redeem yourself?
Surely she proved herself great by doing so. "
She is always great I know it. Madhav, Indraprasth is the treasure of old memories. My kids played here. My Abhi flourished here. Panchali's Kirti doted on his mother here only. Golden days will never come back. Who is more unfortunate than me? I got back the kingdom but not my children. Irony of life.I now understood why you told me on the first day of war that I am only a tool in the hand of fate.
No. I am a tool in your hand. By the way I could not remember everything you told me on that day.
Can you repeat it for me? " Arjun asked earnestly.

Krishna stood up,walked towards Arjun and hugged him closer.He scolded him with affection.
" Parth How could you be so careless then? You know it is Gita,the essence of Spiritual knowledge.
Even I can not repeat exactly what I told you then. But still I will elaborate the essence of Gita for your sake.It will be called Anugita. Before we go back I will instruct you I promise."
Arjun folded his hands with gratitude." Your grace over me is unlimited.Probably I did something good in my previous birth."
Krishna clasped his hands and separated them." I told you already. There is no difference between us both.We are the same.




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