OS ||~shared pain~||

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello! this is my first ever post here. I follow this show and has been a silent reader of this forum, since y'day am having an urge to write an OS! this idea came to me when I saw Krishn looking at Abhimanyu when all were welcoming Abhimanyu. OS didn't turned out like i wanted Reading this tell me hows this and should i write more?
~Shared Pain~


When the dark cloud hits, sky seems inked with blue black colour, cloud seems heavier all set for a downpour yet it hold back. Why? Because if calmness vanishes from him then chaos can never be controlled and peace can never be restored. It is his calmness that gives hope to others, that make rest of the world a reason to move on, a reason slash back, a reason to fight injustice and brings back truth, justice and prosperity. His smile is divine so is he, he conveys through his way making all the correction and also letting things fall the natural way. He ought to rise to root off the evil! He gets pain? No one ever thought, to know what proceeds and yet remain calm? Yes that is why he is not like me or you, yet...

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Each day since his birth, I knew what his fate was, his destiny is inevitable, he like all is born for a cause and his birth will accomplish it. It was the written destiny that made Subadra sleep when I was teaching her about chakravyuh and i knew it, i know how his death is written and he have to die that way, it is fact written before your birth yet when he came to this world there was joy, I was elevated to an ethereal happiness like Subadra, all knowing about him yet so happy. He played with me, he learned from me, I was his teacher and he was more than my nephew. The way he teases me and brother Balram, the way he seeks forgiveness, the way with which he earnestly listens to me all flashed in my as I saw him now smiling, laughing and playing with his brothers. A tinge of pain irked in me as I saw his smiling face and the aura of happiness around. Few more months and there will be a parting, an eternal parting. His smile, his craziness, his pranks all will vanish like they never came. Pain is inevitable so is fate. As Abhimanyu's mama it pains me but as Ishwar of the world I know the secret and purpose of everything.

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A drop of tear came to His as Abhimanyu playfully rushed and hugged behind His back hiding away from others.

~~xxx~~

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was cute and painful yaar..loved your style of writing...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its beautiful ! I always wished someone wrote something in krishna pov!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Archu-

It was cute and painful yaar..loved your style of writing...👏

thank u dear 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: srishtisingh

its beautiful ! I always wished someone wrote something in krishna pov!

thank u so much! 🤗 now a days am thinking a lot from krishna's pov 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is wonderful dear!!
Govind would've been in pain!!! real pain!!!! 😭

awesome piece dear!!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This very cute dear keep writing in kanhas Pov...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

this is wonderful dear!!
Govind would've been in pain!!! real pain!!!! 😭

awesome piece dear!!! 👏


thank u so much! 😳
i knw.. wen i saw krishna looking at abhimanyu wen abhi was hugging (nt remembering who), i felt pain in his eyes..😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: frappie

This very cute dear keep writing in kanhas Pov...

thank u so much! will defo write more 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!! This is another beautiful piece of writing Gayathri!! You've depicted Lord Krishna's pain nd helplessness so beautifully..Its not easy to write something relating to Indian Mythology.. But you- my friend, conveyed Kord Krishna's emotional turmoil so well.. Brilliant!! Thanks for ths wonderful piece of writing!! I would defo like to read more.. Pls do continue..

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