RM FF: Entwined - Thread II (Chapter 32 POSTED) 6/04 - Page 30

i'll do it if u want to, am free for the next hour or so anyway

hahah Cool so do i Just look for typos and grammar? Tell me what to look out for too please

Unres - FINALLY!!!

Hahah okay let's just get the small thing out of the way before i jump to the main package of this update! Nah actually who am i kidding...my mind is just 'Rudra, Rudra, Rudra!' right now...so lets just jump into it 😆

Okay Flashback -10 Years back

U knw...through the conversation Yuv and Rudra were having, our conversation kept coming to mind...so i am taking that u have put in some real life experiences, which i guess just is a reason why the scene just seems real. He's in a terrible place and u can just tell by his 'whatever' attitude, where he doesn't give a single damn about having friends or even just well wishers. He want's to be left alone and to tend to himself...and i am guessing this is because during this time he was loosing Aditiya, and he hadn't reached out. So self punishing, guilt and just the need to feel was driving him to this danger. And even with the need to feel..it's not just any feeling such as compassion, love or the feeling u get from friends. He wanted hate, loathing and anger to be inflicted onto him. This says a lot about the person really, because u only feel that when u know u have messed up...that u have wronged and just gotten away with it. It's the guilt which drowns that person.

Yuv, again here seems to be a nice guy who cares about his well being and is the reasonable one. He know's how everyone else envy's him..and no one really cares for him..he is that friend trying to reach out and get him on the right path...and well u told me who this Yuv is and what his end will be so won't say much 😆

I really loved that last scene of the flashback. The way he lost himself...and made peace with his mind in that one moment...drowning everything out👏 And that last sentence though..gave me chills!! The fact that he only lets darkness and pain get to him...touch him instead of happiness or gentle moments..fabulously written!!😳

And that scene right after the flashback where he is the room and its raining...girl the imagery was amazing!! There was so much loneliness which could be felt, yet there was a storm engulfing it. The composition of that scene again was just point on!

Alright next came the Bittuji household scene. I like how Meera is so much better..and alive. Yes she's still hurting but she'll heal😊 And Maya and Bittuji moment..i find it weird when i think about it that he knows that this is his 'Bhabiji', but he's now a father figure to her. And i find it cute..they have an innocent bond, specially from Maya's part as he is the closest to a real father she has had.

Viraj just keeps growing on me, Chapter by Chapter. He's a true friend, who understands what she is going through, advises her and just lets her know that he'll be there supporting her no matter what she decides on. He really wants the best for her and as long as she'll be happy he would be too. I am really gonna miss him once he goes back. Hopefully he'll come back soon too...well seeing that Rishaan and Meera aren't happening...and once Meera has got herself back together then i am hoping he will be back. He's an adorable friend.

Back to Rudra now. Damn he really is a wrecked mess. With every paragraph it just grew more and more intense! He was losing his mind...constantly remembering both moments, when Aditya became Rishaan and when Rishaan went back to being Aditya. A broken mess. He lost his brother twice...and this time he really left. Rudra is a mess, but he needs to reach out..we learn from previous mistakes...but Rudra just doesn't seem to be understanding his lesson. And in the process he's not just killing himself but others who care for him too..even if he overlooks them.

And then when he did drugs..he became desperate! The need to feel...especially pain. U had me so gripped throughout that part..and then when it got to him running to his bike in the last possible desperate attempt to feel...dude that was freaking awesome! And i think i told u this before too but anyway that last part with Maya and Rudra! That was the Rudra we were introduced to...the reckless one..and then the tie in with the past life. I got goosebumps..because well it was just so epic and grand! As i had said..i thought Maya would remember during this part so u had me glued to the screen..heart racing and then nothing happened 😆 But yh u said u have something Grand in mind for her so looking forward to that.

And finally! Maya and Rudra's love story kick starts!!! About time 😆 but nah..i had forgotten about them...all i cared about is Rishaan but oh well...i will miss him for the couple of chapters that he will be missing from...but we get it..he needs time and space (even from us readers 😆) But yh i still look forward to how these two will help each other heal now...as much as i love dark and broken characters...i love their healing process too because that evolves them as a person😳

Sorry for the late unres, but hey i at least done it right 😆