RM FF: Entwined - Thread II (Chapter 32 POSTED) 6/04 - Page 31

Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane

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Yh I don't care that i haven't unresed my other comments yet because i can't wait right now. I need to get out these emotions i am feeling right now after this chapter! I'll unres the rest whenever i get time and i am honestly so sorry that i haven't done them yet but I've just been having a very hectic month, with my best friends surgery, then recovery which just isn't working out and if all this wasn't enough my other best friend went and broke his arm! I am telling u, boys r trouble so stay away from them (in my case they r medical trouble 😆 ) And I had to go to Germany due to some emergency, so again i am really sorry Maria.

No need to apologize. It's alright. I hope your friends are doing better now!

So anyway over to the update! Tbh i don't even have the slightest idea how to reply to it..but believe it or not, this has to be one of the few written pieces that i have ever read that managed to bring tears to my eyes. Right now i can only think of two pieces who have managed that till date, this will be my third. And as surprising as it might sound, it wasn't during Maya and Rishaan's scene, I always knew that was coming so i was prepared. But it was during Meera and Aditya's scene. Rishaan has been my fvrt character in this story and u knw that; so during Maya and his scene, you made my heart bleed; Meera and Aditya's scene, you crunched it, ripped it up and then sew it back together leaving scars; and then Rudra and Rishaan/Aditya's scene u just ripped it out again and stomped on it! 💔

Oh my! That makes me feel... flattered... I am sorry... no.. it makes me feel bad... 😆 .. what were the other two pieces? Do tell! 😆 And you make me sound like Hannibal Lecter! 😆 But I would take it as a compliment... so thanks.. 😆

Woman, ur actually ruthless that I love it! You should definitely turn this into a book! Not even kidding, i would buy it the moment it would get published! Hell, I would even love to write a screenplay on this story, obviously some parts would then need to be altered then due to it having a different style and format but this is just such a thrilling and power packed story!!

It means so much to me that you think it is good enough to be published! Thank you so much!

Moving over the characters, Meera finally got a kind of back story!! She's been here since the beginning and all we ever learnt about her that she is smart, daughter of Bittuji, her best friend is in love with her and that she is in love with Rishaan! And we never even learnt how she came to love him, was it for his looks? love at first sight? his attitude? status? Did she fall for him whilst working for him? Which i kinda doubt as they never had any 'moments' together. So finally finding out from where it started and how was perfect! I kind of even feel proud for her, she took charge of her life, started living it on her own terms. Yes she got hurt, very hurt, but hurting is a part of living, which she didn't feel before. She was just frustrated at how perfect and planned out all seemed to be, making it boring even kinda, she got her adventure, one that ended up breaking her, and now she's starting a new one for which i wish her all the best for.😳 And it was an amazing ending/closure u gave on her part, her story might not be over but that love sick, always shedding girl definitely will be left behind i hope, with new shades and characteristics to appear and explore 😃 Wonderful Job done👏

Thank you so much. Glad I was able to do justice to her story. Meera... as Rishaan said... a beautiful person. She is ordinary... she has no dark pasts or skeletons in her closet... yet her journey is far from ordinary. She was drawn to Rishaan... who is an enigma... he was supposed to be just an adventure for her... but she kind of wanted to make it her life... so yes, she brought it upon herself... the heartache and everything but still... at least she took charge of her life and have now found a new confidence in herself and a new respect for the things she first thought were mundane in her life... And yes... she has definitely changed.

There wasn't much of Viraj so i'll just combine him with Maya. Now he's a true friend and my heart goes out for him! Gosh why did u do this to me😭 I want Meera and Aditya to happen (and they better do *evil look*) but then I love Viraj too, and i don't want him to be hurt either He's such a sweet soul, bless him, and now he has more hope than ever which just breaks my heart..

And Maya, poor her, she ended up breaking a heart, that too of the person who i think is the only one he could call a friend (well now she has Viraj too, but he doesn't count). Everyone knew it was coming, yet it hurt. You wrote the whole scene so beautifully, managing to grasp every bit of emotion and detail, gosh i hate u for breaking his heart😭😭 (not really of course 😆 just kidding, hehe)

Haha! Should I tell you? Ummm... I think I should... it's not really a spoiler... because it's all there ... Meera and Aditya are not gonna happen. 😆 So, yeah...

About Maya... yeah... I feel bad for her... 😛😆 ... and it's okay.. you can hate me for that... 😆

Rishaan aka Aditya! This whole chapter was his! Him trying to find closure and move on which is heartbreaking but i am happy for him actually. He needed all those moments, telling Maya how he feels about her, but yet he couldn't tell her that his name was Aditya, so that kinda surprised me when he told Meera. He trusts her and has let her affect him more than he would like to admit, or show. And he kinda just ended up answering her question from 7 years back, when he had said that someday she'll know his name and now she does. That sequence of them bonding, just made me ship them more than i ship Rudra and Maya..because well, he found a friend in her, a new friend after he left his old one behind. A friend that loves him, loved the Aditya she had met years back and the Rishaan too and yet again accepts the Aditya and wants to be a part of his life, making her own decision this time again. I can't praise the way u wrote that scene enough..but i still have goosebumps when i think of it.

The whole chapter was Rishaan's monologue in a way! He couldn't tell Maya that he is Aditya.. but he had told her when he first met her... it just came naturally to him at that moment. He wanted her to know him as Aditya... but now he couldn't admit... he was almost ashamed. But Meera he wanted to tell... he wanted to vent.. and he wanted her to listen because he knew she would... he also wanted to tell her how impossible it is for him to reciprocate her feelings... I am so happy you liked that scene!

And that Rudra and Aditya/Rishaan scene was just brutal! One begging his brother to stay, and the other adamant that he doesn't have anything left there. I really wan to know their linked past, but Rudra just lost him again. He should have reached out whilst he had the chance, he was too late this time. And he was right after all i guess, Rishaan really was dying, and now he's gone, leaving this broken human behind who needs his own space and time to heal now. But i want Rudra to keep trying, he might have left the mansion, but he shouldn't let his friend, his brother leave and break their bond. He needs to mend it, and for that he needs to try rather than wait and let Aditya reach out.

Rudra is... he is a mess... let's see what he does... his mind is a very dark place... There are many things he should have done and he should do.. but it hardly ever goes that way...

Overall, it was an amazing update and i loved every single bit of it! Song selection was perfecto! Just added more feel into the whole setting. Every character has seemed to reach a special point now, Rudra lost his brother, the one person who he wanted to keep with him; Maya lost her friend, her mentor, just someone she cares real deep about; Meera letting go and trying to move on from here; and then Aditya, one with a haunted past, yet again broken and letting everything go, to set himself free..

I am really happy you liked the chapter because this chapter drained me emotionally... and yes... let's see what becomes of these characters...

Love the way everything seems to be shaping up, not sure if Aditya/Rishaan will continue his Superstar career though? Is he just moving in another property or moving away for good? And i don't knw but with the way the chapter ended, r u thinking of taking a small leap or something? And again sorry for not having unresed my previous comments..

I was thinking of a leap but it would have been a cop out... too easy and unfair for character development... I would have missed an opportunity to explore Rudra's darkness... and what goes on in his mind... which is extremely relevant...

Oh... please stop apologizing... I understand...

P.S. So i was really curious what ur UN meant, searched it and found "All Men must Die" 😆 Very Creative hahah, and then saw it's a GoT reference and if I remember correct ur a ASOIAF fan 😆 I would have never guessed it was from there hahaha

Hehehe! I am a huge fan of ASOIAF yes... and this came naturally because I so believe it! 😆 You need to read those books! 😆

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Hey loved the update nice written thanks for pm