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RAONE8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

Amazing update!!!!!

Rudra is in so much pain

loved how Aadi came to his rescue

thank god maya was able to reach out to him...hope finally we get to see their bond building

eagerly waiting fr d mystery regarding d brothers past to unfold...

thanks fr d pm

cont sooon

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silverfire

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Read 31st n 32nd chapters in one go.

Omg! My throat is closed up n my eyes r tearing.😭 My thoughts r haywire. I don't know how to comment on these chapters.

will read it again n comment.

Rishaan confessed. He wants to be free. I think he has an idea that Rudra is RK. Rishaan n Meera scene was mind blowing. I don't think Rishaan n Meera will ever happen. He got a good friend in the end.

Viraj... How can a person be so selfless n

loving. If Rishaan n Meera r not on the cards then surely I would like to see Meera moving on with viraj. I can't see him broken forever.

Rudra...he cannot give up on Rishaan. He already lost him once but not again. He wants to kill himself. Guilt is eating him up. Never thought he will go the drugs way. 😕 When is the past going to open up? Maya thinking of going back to Canada. Maybe she'll stay back now to take care of Rudra.

Loved the updates.

This is one of the finest stories I have read in this forum. I don't have words to describe ur writing . its mind blowing. 👏

Very emotional updates.

Thanks for the pms.

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flowing_river

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Posted: 9 years ago

#313

SORRY..for late replying...

read all the updates in one go...

i cried...chuckled..cried..and cried...

i am so overwhelmed..

i don't know what to say u...

love you for giving me such a superb story...

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Å½eljka StojanoviÄ‡

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Posted: 9 years ago

#314

Fantastic update loved it 😊

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: aravindam100
I was waiting fr d update fr d past two dayzz lik maniac. And nw it s here, but phir bhi i m acting lik maniac. Watzz all dis yaaarrr. Itz full f suspenz miseryy. Ohhh God, i m confused. Likd meera- aadi confession. Heartbrkng Rk-Aadi part. But in b/w dis der s a lot missing. Waiting d misseries to open up, and i get my ansrs. 👏

Haha! Sorry about that... everything will be revealed at it's own time. I know my answers are all always the same. I hope I am not annoying you. But really that's all I can say. 😆

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou
Awesome update. Though it was sad, still hope rudra reaches out for aadi. Meera rishan viraj, im still confused with them n got more confused after this. Will rishan call her back? Waiting for aadi n rudra scenes n maya rudra confrontations. Thanks a lot for the pm. Do update soon.

Thank you so much. Yeah let's see what Rudra does. He is a slave to the darkness and the vacuum inside him.

About Meera, Viraj and Rishaan... well it is all very clear. Rishaan gave Meera the closure she needed. And now she will move on but they agreed that Rishaan would come to her when he needs her... as a friend... Viraj is also giving Meera the much-needed space and time for moving on.

Maya and Rudra... I know. I am sorry but I needed the characters to be in a particular state of mind... and at a certain place in their character development/life before focusing on the growth of their relationship (however, the bond has always been there... we have seen it). And now they are there.

Will try my best to update soon.

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: Anny90
From last few updates you made us feel sadness with the way you have written their feeling and everything happening around them.

Today's update made me cry. Everything is falling apart. Why did he leave mansion? And did he really like really love Maya. Both brothers are in love with same lady.
He really did his work nicely. He confessed his love to maya. He could not love back to meera but made sure to give her moment of happiness to remember and made her to accept that she will move on. This is the rollercoaster ride of emotions feelings.

I am sorry I made you cry... but I am also kind of glad you could feel the connect with the characters. Cannot ask more from a reader as a writer.

Yes, Rishaan really does love Maya. And agree with you... he provided closure to all three important people in his life... as much as he could... before he could move away from them...

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Really appreciate it.

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
WOW!! outstanding chapter...I loved all the scenes and it's very difficult to choose which one is my favourite...Starting from rishaan's confession , it was heart breaking for maya to say the truth how she feels about him...She lost her mentor , her only true friend...Will she go back from where she came ? ...or like Rishaan said that Rudra will take care of her...Maya-Aadi scene was sad , but I loved the honesty of rishaan...It was marvelous...Last scene was expected...Rudra was late to reach out for aadi...Finally he left , but I want him to keep trying to bring him back...

Thank you so much. I am so happy you liked the chapter. This chapter was very special to me.

Yes... even I would want Rudra to reach out... but he is Rudra... he has a mind and reasons of his own. Let's see what he does.

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: Tinku2015
v emotional update now waiting to see what turns takes place in everybodys life...i pray for happibess of everybody n hope rudra n madhu get together for they deserve togetherness after so much trauma...hope to see lovely moments of them...

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Let's see what happens...