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Posted: 18 years ago
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"bol...khali fukat kyu bulaya apun ko yahaan..."
huda turned to look at aalekh but wat aalekh saw had him dumbfounded...
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"yes major...it was naina..itne dinwo hi thi....well naina tum mere saath aao i need to discuss a few medicine..aur meine orderly se keh diya hai..he will take away the food tray.."

{NAVEEN V/O}
raj ke chehre par achank aayi khushi jo use is baat se hui thi ki itne din naina ne uska khayal rakha...gayab ho raha tha...

kyunki agar naina yehi thi...aur woh bhi tab jab woh neend mein tha to yeh baat raj ko kuch uncomfortable kar rahi thi..kahin...kahin naina ko woh pata to nahi chal gaya..jo woh janti nahi thi...ya fir JISE woh janti nahi thi..

shayad agar yeh baat pehle ki hoti to raj ko koi problem nahi hoti...par ab na jaane kyun raj nahi chahta tha...ki naina ko uske un yaadon ka pata ho....

uski yeh na chahne ki wajah shayad naina ki aankhen thi...jinpe aajkal use...kuch alag se jazbaat nazar aa rahe the....
sirf use hi nahi..mujhe bhi meri behen badli si lag rahi hai!!!...


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"ma'am rajveer sir ki halat ab kaisi hai..is he out of danger.."
"naina my dear..jab se tumne unka khayal rakhna shuru kiya hai..the major has already crossed the danger phase…haha..dnt worry naina..he will be fine now..bas kuch aur dino ki baat..then he will be perfect..actually mein unhe ek ..do dino mein bhi chod sakti hun..but u know him..thik hote hi..unka hectic schedule unpar havi ho jataa hai so I want him to take total rest and be fi…"

"hello doctor.."
"good morning sir.."
"and cadet naina singh..no surprises there"
"good morning sir.."
"well cadet aap to officer se nurse ban gayi hai.."
"well no offence sir lekin mein to yehi jaanti hun ki KMA ki training mein medical management bhi shamil hai aur..army hospitals mein bhi trained officers ki hi zaroorat hoti hai.SIR."
"as usual..jo sari FEMALE cadets karti hai..training ke baad army medical hospital join karna.."
"sir..yehi to baat hai FEMALE CADETS mein jo hume MALE cadets aur OFFICERS se alag karti hai..kyunki waqt aane par jung ladne ke saath saath hum jung LADNEWALO ka poora khayal bhi rakh sakte hai…we can HURT and we can HEAL sir!!"


"absolutely right naina..isn't it major nair!!..aapko to yeh sab pataa hi hoga.."
red in face the major didn't know wat to say..
"well doctor ..as u know "aapke patient"…KMA ka hissa ab nahi hai..to mein exactly janna chahunga unhe hum kab discharge ya fir shift kar sakte hain.."
"well woh..recover kar rahe hain lekin kuch din aur lagenge unhe poori tarah theek hone mein sir!!.."
"well I guess jab who recover kar hi rahe hai..to we may very well shift him..good day doctor.."

"huff!!waise well said naina…tumne to band hi bajaa di..unki.."
"hmm!!thnk you ma'am.."
but there was something else that occupied naina's mind now..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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rajveer was in a half seated position on the bed still lost in his thoughts..

[NAVEEN..V/O>
rajveer ko shayd ab yeh samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki achanak itne dino baad woh ek chehra kyun nazar aa raha tha use..


{through his mind again flashed the sight of a bubbly girl running into his arms..
"oh rajveer…we did it!!..hum jeet gaye..oh I love you…"
and then it changed..
"kyun ???.why…kab tak rajveer…nahi..ab aur nahi..bahut ho gaya.."
"mein bhi yehi keh raha hun..lekin kya hum bina lade ise.."
"bina ladein..oh u r impossible.."
the sound of breaking glass..and thru each broken piece a fragment of his fatigued face..}

akhir ab kyun who lamhe yaad aa rahe the..kya iski wajah naina ke liye phir se jaag rahi uski man ke jazbaat the..kya yeh naya ehsaas ……wapas la raha tha purani yaadon ko??…
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"hello?sir mein cadet naina singh ahluwalia bol rahi hun..mujhe aapse ek madad chahiye.."
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it was late afternoon and the exercise grounds were nearly empty..

"aa gaya tu…to bol kaidi..kya sach hai..kya jhooth.."

"dekh huda..apun yahan tere ko sach aur jhooth ka bhshan dene nahi ayaa hai..apun bas yeh kehne ayaa hai ki kahin koi galat famy ki jagah hai ich nahi…tu jantaa nahi hai kin halaaton mein humne rajveer sir ko bachayaa hai.."

"18 ghante kaidi???..18 ghante lagte hai..??"

"apun ko ek baat bata ..18 ghante ke liye to apun bhi gayab tha..apun bhi rajveer sir ke saath tha..aur han doctor shalini bhi thi..to phir naina hi kyun..bol…aur agar baat ladki hone ki hai..to dr.shalini kyun nahi..apun logon ka shuk naina par hi kyun jataa hai.??."

huda dint have an answer…

"eh ..ek baar tune ich naina ko kaha tha na..ki tum dono kabhi dost nahi ban paaye…sahi kaha tha..tu kabhi uska dost nahi ban payega...bada ayaa…jawab mangne walaa.."

aalekh left huda standing alone..thinking..and wen he turned to leave wat met his eyes was..


"phoolan??.."
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
jaldi jaldi update karo
I am waiting.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
re yaar plz update soon .waiting!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"may i come in sir.."
"yes doctor .."
"aap ne mujhe yun achanak bulaya.."
"well doctor.."aapke patient.."

now this was getting on dr.shalini's nerves..

"mere kai patients rehte hain sir..if u cud plz specify.."

major nair was pretty annoyed at the curt reply..nevertheless
"i mean humare..MAJOR rajveer.."

the odd stress on major made dr.shalini chuckle in her mind..{"yes..yes..he is ur equal now....yipee!!!"}

"yes sir..."
"mujhe nahi lagta ki jab woh KMA ka hissa nahi hai to unhe yaha rehna chahiye...and i will see to it that if he is fine then he will b back on duty..ya phir unhe shift kar diya jaega yaha se.."
"lekin sir..woh.."
"doctor shalini..meine yahan aapko yeh baat BATANE ke liye bulaya tha..aapki ray lene nahi!!..aur.."

TRRRRIIINNNNGG!!
"hello..major nair here....YES SIR!?"
dr.shalini watched as the major's expressions changed....
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"phoolan tu yahan??"
"han mein yahan...kuch aur poochna hai tujhe.."
"dekh...mein nahi janta us din wahan kya hua.."
"to phir hum jo keh rahe hai..us par..aur hum par BHAROSA kar huda.."

"bharosa hai...lekin..."
"lekin kya..??"
"lekin dar bhi hai naina.."

this was one of the few times huda had called out her name...
her expression softened..she knew this was one person who was always just a call away for her...
she walked to him...

"hum kabhi dost nahi ban paaye na..."

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Posted: 18 years ago
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raj was in a slumber in his room...finally his mind had got some rest...but maybe dats not wat someone wanted...

in the corridor..
"aap??????????"
"yes...."
"eh aalekh woh dekh..naya...nahi nahi...humara purana sms...SIIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"oh hello cadet pooja...."
"aap yaha???...achanak??"

"well .."
"inki entry bhi ab achanak hi ho gayi hai..."
"absoluetly right CADET aalekh...!!!"

"ab kya..."he gestured forward...
"yes sir!!!"

he dint bother to knock at the door...

"hello...kaise hain aap???"

rajveer woke up suddenly...
"huh???areh..aap???..phir se..achanak.."
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
hey too good

pl continue soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey jivs


pl contrinue soon where are u?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx a ton all of u...
will continue ..today..

in some time!!!
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huda looked at her in surprise...

"huda..sach hai..shayad hum dost ban hi nahi paaye...kabhi jhagde beech mein aa gaye...kabhi rajveer sir...hai na??.."

"rajveer sir ko mein beech mein nahi lana chahta..."

"par tune kiya aisa hi hai..."

"phoolan mein..."

"huda...pyaar ki shuruat dosti hoti hai..."

he turned suddenly...

"lekin...pyaar ki manzil bhi dosti ho...yeh hamesha to nahi hota...{she walked closer..}..waqt ...haalaat ..rishton ko badal dete hai..."

"waqt.....han...rishtey waqt se pare nahi hote...aur na hi..dil par zor chalta hai....yehi kehna chahti hai na tu..."

"huda...i hope...ki tum sab(she tilted her head backward...for she knew that all her frnds were present there now..)aur khaaskar TU..mere aur rajveer sir ke rishtey ko samajh payega..."

"naina...mein tere sath hun..chahe koi kuch bhi kahe..."
"i know pooja...lekin{she looked at huda..}..."

he looked like he was in a turmoil...naina cud sense he was in a tug of war with himself....

"huda...hum kabhi dost nahi ban paaye..yehi kaha tha na tune...lekin aaj mein kuch poochti hun..."

he looked up...

"jo nahi ho paya tha....kya woh...aage bhi aisa hi rahega..."

saying this naina left.....

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rajveer was just about to greet hi guest wen another unexpected and uninvited personality stepped into his room...

"oh!!..aap jage hain...kaise hain aap major...???"

"mein thik hun..par aap yaha major nair??koi zaroori baat.."

"han..aapko...headquaters se KMA mein aapki purani post par wapas rakha gaya hai...u r again a faculty member of KMA...bas yehi batanaa tha...good day..."

"good day major.."

and then his guest spoke up..

"aajkal kafi unexpected guests aa rahe hai aap se milne..."

"ji han bilkul....jaise...aap????"


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