WAQT....updated (360 degree Review) pg14

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friend forever

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

nice,When will u post the next update???

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*pooja**

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

Its really very good.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......update the next part soon..........

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Arushi.

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

hey jivs u werew as awesome as always
will be waiting

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yoginisahakari

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

hey too good

rumela

pl continue soon

it sounds Exciting 👏

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osheen

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

plz plz plz cont ... waiting ...

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colours_endless

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

will continue soon...

in abt a day or two...!!

thnx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 😃

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Nishttha Nath

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

amazing...cant stop giggling. Update soon, plz....

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sherlock_holmes

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Posted: 18 years ago

#38

Hi friend,can i suggest you something.You have a very bright future in story writing.This one is simply brilliant,amazing,extrordinary,great,splendid,awesome,cool,s weet, 👏 .Hats off to you. Please do update more often, i'm dying to read what happens next.Please please update soon

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colours_endless

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Posted: 18 years ago

#39

😛 😛 thnx a ton...evryone!!

heres ur update..two mins!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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colours_endless

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Posted: 18 years ago

#40

.."oye oderly ek cup coffee la..."
"yeh le.."
"tu??"
"han apun.."
"meine orderly se kaha tha...tujhse nahi..."
"koi fark padta hai..."
he looked up at aalekh....
"sach kaha...mere kisi baat se kisiko kya fark padega kaidi....meri fikr hai kisko..."
"tu fir se shuru ho gaya na...."
"kya shuru ho gaya aalekh...tujhe dikh nahi raha hai..ki KMA mein kya ho raha hai..."
"kuch nahi ho raha hai...bas tu hi soch raha hai...apne bheje ko itna mat uljha.."
"oye kaidi ...jis baare mein janta nahi hai.."
"apun ko sab kuch pata hai....bas tujhe hi dekhna baaki hai...
aur agar itna samjhane par bhi teri khopdi mein yeh baat nahi aati ki naina rajveer sir ko kya samajhti hai to phir apun yeda nahi hai ki jo samajhna nahi chahta use apun baithkar samjhaye..."

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knock..knock..
"can i come in!!..."
"to major how r u feeling now..."
"i m good now doc...a lot better thnx to you..."
"no major all thnx to this soup jo un haathon ka kamal hai jinhe aap is waqt pakde baithe hain!!!..."

"huh???..."
"wat???haath...pakde...hands.." she pointed at their hands wich were still in each others..
"oh!!no..doc..woh actually...woh soup.."
"pata hai...and precisely...YEH soup....its magical major..."
"it indeed is..." he looked at naina who smiled in return..
"hmm...well aap kafi behtar lag rahe hai..thnx to naina..and..yes her soup...bas ek chck up karni hai...naina??if u.."
"yes ma'am "..she moved out of the way as dr.shalini went up to check rajveer..
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"eh kaidi... ruk!!...matlab kya hai tera..jo ho raha hai bahut accha ho raha hai.."
"apun ne kaha na apun yeda nahi hai..aur han..yeh mess hai.."
aalekh walked away but huda got up to go after him..

"aapki coffee..." it was the orderly
"tu pi lena..kaidi..!!"

huda cornered aalekh in the corridor but not before dashing into yudi in the mess..
"hey bro??..hey!!...ise kya hua..??"

"KAIDI..."
"kya hai..?"
"ab bol tujhe lagta hai jo raha hai..thik hai??"
"eh...huda..yeh corridor hai..aur han..apun ko to corridor mein khade hokar apne lafde public mein discuss karne ka shouk nahi hai..."
"thik hai..mein milta hun tujhse....kahan yeh to janta hai...aur aaj lunch ke baad class nahi hai....aur shayad tujhe koi kaam bhi nahi hai..."
huda left..

"hey chief!!!!"
"ek gayaa...to ek aur ayaa.....bol...ab tujhe kya problem hai...?"
"problem??..u mean huda had some problem??..."
"nautunki....ja yaha se.."
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"welll welll welll..jaisa meine socha tha...nearing to perfect major...!!very good..and..
{she walked up to naina..}very good naina!!...tumne bahut hi acchi tareeke se itne din major rajveer ko sambhala hai...gr8 job.."

"itne din???..u mean itne din..mere saath kamre mein naina thi???..."

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