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Posted: 18 years ago
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It was time when the students had retired in their rooms to get dressed up for the party....Dr.Shalini had been too secretive about her plans, although she had promised a bit of fun, in this serious party.

Slowly people started gathering in the lobby, eager to examine one another. The boys and the male faculty were in casuals. No blazers, but just shirts and Tees, and jackets. Pooja came down, to Ali's pleasant amazement, in a pink saree, she looked so good, that Huda walked up to the staircase to escort her to Ali.

"Hai Panjaban......tu is boring se usool ko ek din ke liya chod nahin sakti?"

"Kya bakwaas kar raha hai Huda!"

"Kya dhamaal lag rahi hai tu! Tu roz saariyaan hi pehna kar!"

She gave him a bemused look and met her friends, as she smiled at Ali.

Other girls stared walking in.........but by now, the whole group of students had started walking towards the ground.

Naina came down in a beautiful white saari. Her hair in a half pony. She as expected, stole 'awes' from everyone. She walked down and walked to Pooja, who was signaling her that she looked wonderful.

The grounds looked very well kept and the whole academy was decorated. The decoration clearly indicating that, it was not a celebration, but an official sort of army celebration.

Pooja and Naina stayed back as Surijee had asked Pooja to do something. Pooja and Naina walked towards the mess when they met Surijee.

"Kya Surijee....."

But Surijee was staring at them....wide eyed!

"Oye Kudiyon! Badi sundar lag rahi ho! Aur Naina puttar, tu ittni sundar dikh sakti hai yeh maine soch nahin tha.....", Naina smiled.

".....Par problem yeh hai ki.....main confused hoon......her time jab main tyaar hota hoon.......Lolitajee kuch na kuch.....i hope u understaaand!"

"Isme darne ki koi gal nahin, hum aapko finishing touches de denge....fir to Lolita ma'm ki bolti hi bandh ho jaayengi!", Pooja said cheerfully!

Surijee indicated them to wait in the mess, as he would join them, dressed, in a few minutes. The girls walked into the dark mess.....the lights were out there....Pooja walked in to look for the switched....while Naina moved around trying not to collide with anything.

"Yeh aise nahin milegi Pooja", she said finally," tu ruk, main orderlu ko bulati hoon!", and she walked hurriedly towards the door......

........when she collided hard with someone......but she felt herself being held.....in firm hands......from falling..........

click!

just then a zero lamp was lit, and Naina could see the face of that someone who had been holding her.....and feel the blood rising in her cheeks.......Pooja attempted to urn around......not to disturb the moment........
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.......and he looked at her.......as never before.......at her, not as a cadet.......but as someone beyond beautiful.........as someone, he loved..........

Wind blowing in that little mess, and the little light that the zero bulb supplied in the dark room, he could not miss the sparkle of shyness in her eyes.......
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They all, now joined by Pooja, Naina & Rajveer, walked into the grounds. At the entrance, they saw Shalini with a couple of people, tying a ribbon tightly on everyone's finger.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"ma'am yeh ribbon kis liye..?"
"naina is ribbon mein ek number hai...and aisa hi ek aur...and sirf ek aur hi ribbon hai jo tumhare dance partner ke paas hai!!!"

"dance partner..??"
"yes cadet ghai..dance partner..!!"

the two amused cadets walked into the KMA hall...

"WOW...NAINA KYA DECORATION HAI...!!"
"han pooja sach...!!"

they looked around the hall...the subtle shades around were adding tranquility to the atmosphere..it reminded you of the serene waters of a lake or maybe ..the cool white sands of abeach...or the feel of snow on mountain tops...

the drapes in silvery white...blue..lavender..with tinges of rosy light pink...

and ballons...confettis..it was splendid..!!

the lights suddenly went out...
and then occupying the centre stage were..

"arreh naina yeh to poore woh trimurti jaise lagte hain..."

"bilkul punjaban...!!"

"arreh aa gaye tum sab...!!?"

"CADETS AND FACULTY ..."

"aa gaya tau humara..."

"WELL AAP SAB KO TO YEH PATA HI HOGA KI YEH PARTY KIS LIYE HAI...HUM APNE GUESTS KO WELCOME KARTE HAIN....
MAJOR ANSHUMAN RAI
COLNEL PRIYA GILL
MAJOR KABIR AALAM
LT.COLNEL NISHANT GOENKA"

"hey bro...yeh kya naam hai???...huff..hum to inhe address hi nahi kar paenge yaar!!!"
"abeh nautunki..tereko kaun sa inhe naam se bulaana hai...apun ko to woich..sir aur madam..bas..."

"WELL I NOW CALL UPON CL.PRIYA GILL TO PLEASE ADDRESS U ALL.."

"aa gayi ab degi bhashan...oye phoolan samne khadi ho ja...kahin mein so na jaaun...aur fir gir na jaaun.."

the lady who came up to speak however...caught everyones attention...
dignified and elegant would be the right adjectives used for her...

dressed in a black sari she looked like a goddess..

"WELL THANK YOU BRIGADIER...HELLO CADETS..PEHLI BAAT...AAP SABKO SHAYAD YEH JAANKAR ACCHA LAGEGA KI MEIN BHI KMA PAAS OUT HI THI..AND I MUST SAY IT FEELS SPLENDID TO BE BACK...
WELL AS FOR INSTRUCTIONS...AAP LOGON KE YEH PYAARE MUSKURATE CHEHRON KI HASI MEIN CHHIN NA NAHI CHAHTI ...LETS PARTY TODAY...BUT TOMORROW...WELL U WILL KNOW SOON...ENJOY THE CELEBRATIONS CADETS"
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Posted: 18 years ago
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NOW FOR THE SURPRISES!!!!
.."arreh wah yeh to kuch zyada boli hi nahi..aap bhi na huda bhai...khamakhan..."

"WELL CADETS...."

"shalini ma'am?"

"oye yudie aish hai...!!!"

"OK CADETS...ITS TIME FOR THE DANCE...THE OPENING BALL DANCE...SO WAT ARE THE NOS ON UR RIBBONS...."

"3....naina tera kya hai...???"
"1!!???.."
"huda??"
"8.."
"i am 6 yaar... "

"apun 4"

"aur hum 15..."

"yeh kaise nos hai yaar...pooja kya lagta hai tujhe..."

"kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai naina...sunte hain..."

"WELL TO AAPKO APNE NOS MIL GAYE HONGE...SO I CALL THEM OUT...AUR AAP YAHA..NEECHE IN ORDERLIES KE PAAS AAENGE..AAPKI AANKHE BANDHI JAENGI AURPHIR AAPKO APNE PARTNER SE MILWAYA JAEGA...SO THE FIRST 15..."

they came to the orderlies..who tied up their eyes..and they stood in long files...through the eye cover ..they could ..feel the change in lighting..and then wen the eyes were finally uncoverd...

pooja seemed she wud melt...

"hay mera ranjha...' she thought...(though there was a sinking feeling abt ali not being around...)

in pooja's case ...it was her partner who was more tenst..but for the other six..well....


"sir aap???"

"yes cadet singh..mein..y is there a problem.."

"no...(problem????yeh to toofan tha...naina aur...BC!!!)"


YUDI AS USUAL RELIED ON HIS SHALINI MA'AM AND TRUSTED HER COMPLETELY ONLY TO FIND...

"areh baap re...damn it..."

"come again cadet??!!"..(do i need to say...well humaari lolia ma'am of course..)


"oye kaun si janaani hai "
little did huda know of the changing expressions of the face in front of him...he opened his eyes to find himself facing none other than...

"colnel priya gill???"
"yes cadet..."

shalini stood smiling looking at the cadet in front of her who was longing to get the cover off his eyes...
not bcoz he wan at the cadet in front of her..but bcoz it was irritating him...
and finally..
"cadet aalekh..patience...!!!"

on the other hand ali was as red as a beetroot...

good lord...she was an unknown young girl...and he ..cadet ali begh was suposed to dance with her..!!!!!!!!!!!!
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well all of u keep guessing the consequences.
cheers!!..lotsa luv..!!
rumela
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well........tht was a long one....thanx yaar...
next update..jaldi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Not bad, not bad at all, Cadet.....Sharma....", a smooth voice welcomed Aalekh as his band was opened.


"Simran....Ma'm...."


"Good.....tell me you are good at dancing!"


"Apun ko thoda kuch.........

"Eeeeeshhh.....never mind!"


Aalekh and Simrankaur fidgeted over dance.....his clothes.....and almost everything!


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Shalini walked towards Pooja, grinning.....Pooja was hoping to see Ali as her band was removed, but a louder shriek escaped her lips, as her band was removed.......


"Hayee........Shahrukh!!!!!"


"Ex.....cuse me, Cadet Ghai?"


Pooja was staring wide eyed at her dance partner.....when Huda walked by......pushing her slightly........


"Oye Punjaban.................hosh main aa..........."


Pooja didnt budge.....neither her body, nor her
lips....and not even her eyes........


When he, snapped his fingers in front of her......bemused......


"Cadet Ghai.....aap.....theek to ho?"


"Huh...main....reportin.....kya.....shahru.....nahin....", she fumbled, finally biting her tongue, "...theek hoon sir!"


Everyone started laughing, as Pooja went red in embarrassment, and so did Rajveer!


"Yeh achha hai sir, finally Veer-Zaara ek saath.....",
Huda commented, but one look of Raj silenced him.


"Oye nahin oye jat.....main koi Zaara nahin hoon............woh to....."


"POOJA!", Naina yelled, saving herself from the embarrassment of being teased in this filled hall,".....waise Pooja, theek se dance karna, tumhare partner bohot achhe dancer hai......"


"Aap to humare guru ke saath hai Cadet Singh......', said Rajveer, still looking at her,"....carefull to aapko rehna hai!"


At once naina looked tense...she looked at him as if to say..."r u serious..??is it that bad..."


rajveer merely smiled and his eyes went on to his foot..nainas gaze followed and she understood that rajveer meant..put the correct foot forward...!!!!



and then began the music...


it was all instrumental..after all a formal army function wasnt supposed to have any bollywood songs...aur KMA mein..BC ke saamne...hehehe.....no chance!!!!


and so here are our hero and his love...dancing with...her best frnd..and his so called .."BOSS!!"


naina remembered and put her correct foot forward..but as BC took her face...she became lead still...


it wasnt that the brigadier wasnt nervous...lekin humaari bechaari naina..she turned red...
dekhna to door...BC ke saamne woh apne palke hi nahi utha paayi...leikn har jagah scenario kuch aisa nahi tha....


"cadet aalekh sharma..u will make a fine army officer..hold my waist properly..."


"ji??"


"meine kaha..mujhe theek se pakdo..."



under his breath aalekh cud only mutter.."yahan is sarphiri ke saath apun ki vaat lagi hai..aur ise pakadne ki padi hai..."


"so yes...mein keh rahi thi..u will make a fine officer..cadet sharma...a great presence..a fine body..{her hands slid to his shoulders..
and aalekh's instant reaction was as if a cockroach was crawling over his back..}"


"ji..ji..apun samajh raha hai..."



CHANGE


"so ur name cadet..."


"mein??..huda..amardeep huda..."


"attitude????..kyun??ladkiyan impress hoti hai??"


"ji woh meri personality hi aisi hai..{huda kabhi flirt karne ka mouka nahi gawaata}"


"aur yeh baat aapse kisi ladki ne kahi..."


"areh woh to sharmaati hai...lekin huda ko pata hai..."


"hahaa!!...woh..sharmaati to hai..or rather..i shud say..jhooth bolne se sharmaati hai...mr amardeep 'attitude' huda...", that put a seal to hudas mouth for the time being....


CHANGE


"tumhe dance karna nahi aata kya??..."


"ji..ji woh hum...woh..aap kisi aur ko dhoondh lijiye..hum woh..nahi kar paenge..woh humaare usoolon ke khilaaaa....areh.."


the girl had pulle dhim close...


"mujhe aise embarass mat karo ...dance..."
"hum..lekin..."


...


"cadet gupta...aap inke saath dance kijiye...plzz...". it was the always on time...dr.shalini..lekin ali ke liye...yeh partnership bhi kuch khaas nahi thi...

....aur doosri taraf naina ki halaat kuch bigad rahi thi..but this time not because of BC...BUT.....


"to meri janai...dance??.."


"hay...!!shar???...SIR??????"


"kya hua cadet ghai...???"


"aapne abhi abhi...mujhe ek miss call mila..."


"yeh miss call nahi...sms hi tha..now if u plzz...."


rajveer elegantly took pooja's waist...and pooja was swooning....oh how she loved that look......


"waise kaafi acchi dancer hain aap...beautiful.."


"hay mera sharukh...{and then a sharp gasp as she noticer
rajveer's raised eyebrows..}...HUH!!!!!"


naina who was beside them suddenly missed a beat..and..


"soory..sir..i..."


"its ok cadet...mera pair itna bhi kamzor nahi..lekin apki heels kafi sharp hai.."


naina gave a forced sheepish grin..."huh..hah..huh...", and the disaster situation arose with...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"cadet yadhuvansh sahani is it...???",they were dancing...well so it seemed to be..with yudi barely holdin lolita ma'ams waist..and lolita ma'am nearly clutching his collar rather than shoulders...


"wat kind of dress sense is this..aapko pata nahi... a man should dress elegantly...not like..like a vagabond.."


"NO WAYS..!!!!"


"come again cadet..."


"i mean ma'am meine vagabond ki tarah dress nahi kiya hai..its just casuals..."


"CASUALS??..hairband ladkiyan pahenti hai cadet...aur................."..........aur.................. .....and the bickering continues....


lekin mujhe to laga tha dance party hai...waise kuch alag hi dance kahin aur ho rahi thi


"so apne bataya nahi cadet huda...aapki yeh personality ka raaz kya hai??..."


"ji..woh...ji..."


"i shut u up for good isnt it??...haahaha...hey cadet...apni yeh personality...aise hi kahrh karte rahoge..to jab zaroorat padegi...tab yeh purani ban chuki hogi...keep dat in mind..."


CHANGE


"cadet begh aap to ab bhi sharma rahe hain..."


"ma'am woh dance..."


khair yeh janaab to badalne se rahe..lets c wat our leads r up to

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"sharukh???intresting...to yeh zaroor aapke inbox se aya hai..."


little did raj know..naina's eyes followed him closely...


"aapne to kafi jaldi signal pakadliya sir..."


"areh..aapka signal aur hum na pakde..."


pooja turned swiftly..and as directed by raj..fell gracefully into his arms..


naina dint know why she had the sudden desire to yell..at whom???..well....we can gues...


"siganl to mein pakdati hun..."


"cadet singh??"


"sorry sir??.."


BC was pretty bemused...


pooja laughed as raj flirted wid her...her hair fell on her face..and raj(dnt tk this gesture in a wrong way..)..slowly moved it away...


nainas grip on BCs shoulder tightened..{i personally thnk BC's stars..that in the academy u r not allowed to have long nails...}


BC however..the dignified general dint say much...


pooja turned again...


"wise..sharukh ke alawa bhi koi naam hai mera..."


[nana's personal thought was pooja looked ridiculous blushing in front of anyone...........................................................................well ali is exceptional....]


pehle to saari ..upar se naina ki aankhon ke samne yeh scene...she stumbled nearly and to make situations worse...BC supproted her fal...so now she was facing...


"cadet is there a problem..aap dance karna nahi chahti then u r welcome to take rest..."


"ab to mein dance hi karungi..."


"wat????"


she was knocked to her senses..


"i mean..no problem sir..."


the blushing pooja ther replied...


"sharukh khan ko mein ..apne ranjha kahti hun...to aap ko...."


"hmm...ranjha??....to aaj se aap hui raanjhe ki heer..."


pooja let out a sigh...and this time as she turned both her hands came to rajveers shoulders...and suddenly a small soft yelp escaped nainas lips...she cudnt move ..her face was red...and...


"cadet singh aap ruk kyun gayi???"


naina had already heard the conversation of raj and pooja...and then this had followed..{lekin this wasnt the only reason}...


so her annoyance on the flirts..{u know who}
and her pain..{u will know why...}made her reply rather curtly...through clenched teeth..beacause..


"sir aapke pair mazboot hai..aur meri heels sharp..lein aapke boots..PATTHAR hai...jo filhaal mere pair ko kuchal rahe hai....HATIYE..."


BC was rather taken aback by the annoyed naina...he wudnt deny he was though not enjoying...but not even minding this dance....he backed off immediately...


but the "HATIYE"..wasnt missed by rajveer...who..for reasons unknown to him..felt his eyes lower and a sheepish grin on his face wen naina looked at him in anger....


however to save the trio{and a few others too....u very well know who...} from further embarrasement..came the cool voice of...smiran ma'am


"WELL WE END THE CEREMONIAL DANCE HERE...AND NOW FOR SOME EXCITEMENT FOR THE CADETS AND FACULTY..................................................... .........."



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"WELL WE HAVE A MASKED DANCE.....
AAP SABKO MASKS DIYE JAENGE...AUR AAPKE PARTNERS KO BHI...AND I DO NOT MEAN UR CURRRENT PARTNERS..{u cn imagine our cadet's relief...}AUR PHIR AAp KARENGE...SO HERE WE GO..."

well someone in the crowd however wasnt very haap abt the idea...

"yah allah...yeh sab..kya hai..."
"oye mere sharmile..."
"pooja aap??"
"chal..tujhe mein hi mask pehnaati hun.."

in the midst a feminine figure slipped into the hall and joined the cadets...

naina was loOking over at the masks..she carefully selected hers..and then was walking towards the crowd...there was a particular person she was eager to meet tonight...{do i need to say WHO???}

but i guess the night was full of surprises....

suddenly as the music began..naina felt a strong pair of hands gripping her..and she was draged to the dance floor...

there was an intense power in the moment....

who was it..

naina attempted to speak...

"aap kau..."
"shhhhh....."

the finger brushed against her lips.....

"lets lose ourselves..."...she knew that voice but...

and wat followed was pure magic...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"areh ali...mere saath to dance kar hi sakta hai na!!!!...."

ali smiled..for once he dint mind the company of a girl..

"chaliye pooja!!!"

"oyeh??hehe..chal..."
pooja was happy...happier than b4 also...


aalekh dint know who it was behind the mask ..but that dint stop him guessing..and finally her one move..made it clear...

"to aa hi gayi tu..."
"tujhe ya laga...mein tujhe..yaha in sab ke saath chodungi...???"



"hey whoz dis???"
"who do u think??..."
"SHALINI MA'AM???...."

the magic unwound with the song...

mujhse yeh har ghadi mera dil kahe...tum hi ho iski arzoo...

mujhse yeh har ghadi mere lab kahe...tere hi ho sang guftgoo...

baatein teri teri..itni..hassen..ke yaad inko....jab karta hun...phoolon si aaye khushboo.....



the song changed...but the magic prevailed....

"Kuch na kaho....
Kuch bhi na kaho.....
Kya kahena hai....
Kya sunana hai.....

Mujh ko pata hai, Tumko pata hai.....
Samay ka yeh pal.........

........Tham sa gaya hai........"


Naina wa numb.....something told her that whoever she was dancing with......made her melt.....he emotions.....her reserves.....made her break off all the barriers...........of time......of feelings........of expression.......

Aur is pal main,
Koi nahin hai,
Bas ek mai


he loved evry moment of having her in his arms...
the mystery darkened....little did naina know..that this untimely stranger knew perfectly well who she was....

her dark hair ...as deep as the night..sparkling in the light of the hall...

her brown eyes..questionig...engulfing him into the waves of unknown deires...

she was close...and may it always be so....
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THATS IT FOR TODAY..I WANT LOTS OF RESPONSES THIS TIME !!!

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