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Posted: 18 years ago
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She looked at the mirror......looked at herself.....how had she changed.......Naina......the petite who loved wearing bright and happy colours.......and would shop for hours.......till bhaiyya or her friends dragged her out of the mall............had changed..........completely............

'Kya yeh main hoon?.....agar main hoon.....to main isse pehchaan kyun nahin paa rahi hoon?.......aur......kya main apni zindagee ko kisi booj tale kaat rahi hoon.....?.....bhaiyya to hamesha mujhe muskurate dekhna chahte the!.........kya main hasna.....muskurana.......mazak karna.......khus hona...........sab......bhool gayee hoon?'

And she turned back....but Naveen wasnt there.........she got her reply..........


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The door of solitary confinement opened.....and a brand new Naina walked out! Something in her.....that had changed.....was noticed pleasently by Dr.Shalini......and then all the other cadets......as her grace.....he body language......her spirits had altered.....as she sprinted towars.....the infirmary......where Rajveer was admitted!


"Sir, ko hosh aaya tha....."

"Haan....."

"Too....."

"Cated, woh tumhara aur Naveen ka naam le rahe the......aur....."

"Phirmujhe unhe tranquilizers deni padi!"

"Hmmm......"

"Ab kisi bhi waqt hosh aa jayega......"

"Par unki chot?"

"Hmm....Cadet Singh....nothing serious....par unhe rest lena padega....kam se kam do hafte tak........."

"Sure ma'm!", she was waking into the room.....

"Cadet....."

"Jee Ma'm!"

"Ek favour chahiya thee...."

"Woh, Captain ki dekh bhaal ke liye koi chahiye tha.........he is known for running away and having action scenes in the hospital.....fogetting his medicines.......to...nurse ko to woh aasani se ulloo bana denge..", she grinned,"....toh main sochti hoon....ki.....will u please volunteer for that?.....unko achha bhi lagaa.....koi apna saath hoga to....."

Naina experience a wierd feel....'apna'.....she was happy to be called so.....and also shy.....

"Sure Madam....magar Major Nair?"

"Woh unko main samhal loongi....i mean....I will do what is needed!"

"Ok ma'm", and she slowly tiptoed into his room, Rajveer in peaceful slumber!

the doors closed behind naina and she walked silently...softly upto the handsome young man...he slept peacefully..a smile adorning his lips..
it was true naina had been overcome by a sort of guilt since rajveeer had left KMA but this smile seemed to drive away all inhibitions..
this was the true mark of rajveer....he had always smiled through evrything..during every difficult time naina remembered his reassuring smile...wich was there always...for...for her..!!

"ah...ah..paa..paan..paani.."
"huh??" naina rushed to the table ..filled in a little water into the glass and held it to his lips...
rajveer was still weak..he drank a little of the water but some spilled out..and
"wheres the .."
there was nothing visible to wipe away the water ...except..

naina fingers wiped away the water and as her soft fingers felt the touch of his lips...suddnly..naina felt tingled and had to hold back an odd feeling..wich arose suddenly...
a feeling to...to...kiss him???.....

rajveer coughed suddenly..and naina jerked awake from her heart's desire..
"sir??"
his coughing stoped and a peace spread over his face agn...
naina now shook her head..."naina??!!! wats wrong??!!"

{IMAGINE NAVEEN'S VOICE}

meri choti si aur ab kuch badli si chuhiya ko yeh ajeeb lag raha tha..ki jis rajveer ko usne apna sir kaha..shayad hamesha apne bhai ke baad dekha uske liye uske mann mein pyaar jaise khayal aane ki wajah kya thi...
han yeh baat shayad mujhe bhi kahtak rahi thi...kya akhirkaar meri behen mere hi dost ke saath....

rajveer ke khaylon mein bhi kuch aisa hi nazaraa tha...

"rajveer sir???rajveer sir..??..."she came running down the corridor..and dashed into his rooom...

"mamma rajveer sir mera saath denge.."outside the door rajveer became tensed...

"sir..aap mere saath hai na.." she looked up to him..into his eyes....in her eyes was hope..

"rajveer sir...mein..."
"rajveer sir..."
"sir aap jante hai na.... sir...woh... sir... rajveeer sir.."
wat was this feeling...was it love...
love???....the thoughts changed...

a young girl...smiling bubbly...running into his arms..."RAAAJVEERR!!!!!"
"OH RAJVEER.....RAAJVEER....I LOOVE YOU.....I LOVE YOU RAJVEER..."


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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
very nice.the emotions are too good.next part update please
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Posted: 18 years ago
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too goood yaaar i wish lrl mein bhi naveen naina ki dil ki baat bolta 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey jivs sorry dear

just caught up with ur FF
it is excellent

pl continue soon.

Edited by yoginisahakari - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi jivs are u angry for less replies???????yaar update soon.kitne din aur intezar karoooo............????????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kya ho gaya????????????????update kyun nehi kar rahi ho???? plz update yaar..............
waiting..................
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Suriji...."

"Kuch kaam tha puttar?"

"Haan, woh sir ka khaana...."

"Oh...haan....woh....special meal hai......par....ek choti si vaddi si problem ho gayee hai....."

"Kya baat hai, Surijee?"

"Woh hai na....woh Dr. Shalini ne kuch soup banane ko kaha hai....aur baaki kuch kuch....to woh baaki ka sab ready hai....par yeh soup....ab bana nahin hai...."

"Nahin bana....? Magar Surijee....ab aadhe ghante main mujhe sir ko davaiyon ka doosra dose dena hai...."

"Haanji....par....woh BC.....inspection walon ke saath baithke.....nashte pe nashte manwaye ja raha hai....aur yeh special soup....in khotyon ke bharose bhi chood nahin sakta......kyaa karoon?"

Naina was in a fix....she had to feed something to Rajveer before the medicines....but inadequate meal would be harmful......kyaa karoon?

"Woh Surijee.....aap soup ki recipe de sakte ho?"

Surijee handed her the recipe and Naina glanced at the paper with a wide smile......

"Yeh to.....Surijee?"

"Jee puttar?"

"Kya main kitchen main jaa kar yah soup bana loon sir ke liye?"

Naina saw that most of the ingredients were the same as the 'Magic Drink'[a hot yummy soup> that she and Naveen had invented....as they hated the mixed vegetable soup their mom tried to feed them!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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She ran to the infirmary....and talked out the new recipe with Dr.Shalini.......enthusiastically.............and she agreed to let her make it.....and some novel feeling and vigor carried her feet to the kitchen!

She made the soup.....but today she was grinning broadly in the heat of the KMA mess kitchen. It was like being with her brother....she remembering the happy time she had spent with her brother.........and at the same time.....something new in her....wanted the soup to be really magical today.....worried pleasantly if Rajveer will like it....and if he will then.......

Finally she was done......

She carried the meal to his room.....saw that the door was closed....as she had left it.....she was about to step in.....

"Kitchen main kya kar rahi thee Phoolan?"

"Woh....main.....woh....sir....ke liye soup bana rahi the..."

"Hmm....", he glanced disapprovingly at the soup,"Kyun? mess main koi cook hi nahin tha?"

"Nahin.....waise....kya ho gaya?"

"Dekh Phoolan.....", she knew what was coming....but she had no time for tackling him right now.

"Huda...mere pas waqt nahin hain....mujhe sir ko khana de kar davaiyaan deni hai....bye!"

And she walking straight into he room, and put up a 'Do Not Disturb' sign outside, as Dr.Shalini had directed!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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She enters the room.....

"Rajveer Sir"

"Hmm...."

"Sir....Sir.....Lunch...."

"Hummmm....haan......"

She adjusts the plate in front of him and he starts eating.

"Yeh tranquilizers....."

"Kya baat hai.....are u feeling alrite...."

"Yup....par itna kabhi soya nahin hoon na....."

She giggles....and he looks at her dreamily....

He finishes his tasteless meal....and being scared of how the soup will taste.....he did not even touch it......

"Bass..."

"No.....apko yeh sab kuch kha hi lena hai...."

"Pleeeeez.....yeh soup...."

"Ab sir, Dr.Shalini aayengi to ek aur bowl peena padega.....isse behtar hai......"

"Hay Raam....ekdam apne bhai pe gayee ho.....", both of them smiled....but this time.....memory of Naveen was happy for them.

He takes a spoonfull of the soup.

"Magicdrink?"

"Aap ko......"

"Yeh yahan...KMA main....?"

She stood smiling....and he them looked at her interrogatively.

"Woh...sir.....woh....Dr.Shalini ne....Woh...Surijee....to maine...bana...diye...."

"Naina......thanks....", he reached out to her hand....held them...."...tumne mere liye kya banaya hai....shayad yeh tum nahin janti...."

"Nahin janti...? He he.....aapko kya lagta hai ki Bhaiyya ki saari secrets aap hi ko pata hai...."

Both of them smiled....and he gulped down the soup....his face glowing with happiness.....and had started a speedy recovery.....

.....till he finished his meal, both of them forgot that her hands were still in his.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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NOW.....THAT WAS A LONG ONE...

WAITNG FOR SUCH LOONG RESPONSES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AND THNX FOR THE EARLIER ONES!! 😃



LUV,RUMELA

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