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Posted: 18 years ago
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heelooo!!!!.thnx for the replies...!!!

heres the next part!!

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"AH!!SIR!!!!"
"EH!!!!KYA HUAAA??NAINAA???"
"NHAI.WOH.HUH...AHN..AALEKH..UNHONE SIR KO..AA..WOH.."
"NAINA????NAINA..HOSH ME AA!!"

"huh??..aalekh????tu???sir kahan.."
"woh yehi hain naina..kya sapna dekh rahi thi tu????"
naina looked at the now unconcious rajveer on her lap..
"waise ek baat accha hua..ye teri cheekh ne apun ko yeh to samjha diya ki tu hai kaha...tu hili kyu wahan se naina??"
"woh kuch log...mera matlab hai jo log sir ke peeche pade the woh shayd waha bhi pahuch gaye the..nikalna pada aalekh..."
"hmm..lekin abhi apun ke paas waqt nahi hai..aur shalini ma'am ka ko dimag garam ho gaya hoga jeep main baithe baithe...chal ab..subah hone wali hai.."

"toofan??"
"shayad toofan ruk gaya hai naina..waise tu phikar mat kar...KMA wapas jaakar apun ke liye ek mucho ala toofan intezaar kar raha hoga..."
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Posted: 18 years ago
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[COLOR=GREEN]"Bhagaudo ki ghanti baja hi deti aap, Cadet Singh!", horror struck Naina looked at Major Nair, as he stood by the gates of KMA,"..KMA ko ek gairzimmedar aurat se chhutkara mil jata!"

"Sir....Rajveer Sir...."

"Aap......academy se bahar gayee?"

"Sir woh....Rajveer sir fas gaye the...."

"Jo poocha jaye....ushi ka jawab dengi aap!"

Naina was red in anger......this man she thought, refused to accept the gravity of the situation.......and now is yelling at me.....ohh....how she loathed him!

"Aap KMA se bahar gayee........Haan ya naa main jawab dijiye!"

"YES SIRE!"

"Bina meri permission ke?"

"YES SIRE!"

"Aap ko lagta hai ki yeh koi mohalle ka beauty parlour hai.....jo aap apni marzee se aa-jaa sakti hain?"

She remained quiet.....her eyes fiery!

By this time, most of the cadets were there....staring at a completely drenched Naina and Rajveer.....

"Sir, maine aap ko bataya tha....kal...."

"Ratko teen baje.....!! Ratke teen baje....aapko Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ka phone aaya?....aap yeh kehna chahti hai.....ki yeh trained soldier......saari Indian Army se zyaada ek female cadet pe bharosa karta hai....wah!"

He said the word 'female' with the disgust that Naina couldn't stand it anymore.......

"AAP MAANE YAH NAA MAANE SIR.....MUJHE KOI FARAK NAHIN PADTA.....RAJVEER SIR INJURED THE....AUR MAIN UNHE LENE GAYEE THEE...."

"Poore 18 ghante....?"

Naina opened her mouth to yell back at him.....she did not care......but she felt someone holding her elbow........a weak grip....but warm....reassuring....main hoon na types.........she remain quiet.....

Rajeveer held her hand from the stretcher....as he went to the infirmary.....he stared at her in disbelief.....Naina took all the insult and all the risk for him.....did she still hate him? will she ever forgive him......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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jaldi jaldi next part v likhna suru karo.very nice
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
hey too good dear

pl jaldi update karo long one
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
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bhot badia
contiiiiiiiiinueeeeeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its great please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THANX FOR THE RESPONSE..HERES A LITTLE NEXT PART....



[FONT=BOLD][COLOR=BLUE]"Aap ek din ke solitary confinement main jaayengi.....", and he walked away.

Everyone stood stunned....no one knew what had happened....but everyone knew something.....something that linked their favourite teacher and Naina once again.....that Aalekh was not given any punishment.....where Naina was about to undergo a severe torture.....

"Phoolan?"

Naina walked away.....as when she looked at Huda, she didnt find that friend....she needed.....she saw a man....who disapprove of her having anything to do with Rajveer......
who had a weird expression....accusing look on his face......

the dark walls of the room looming in on her...it seemed to naina she was being captivated in herself..in her thoughts...wich was now..
"rajveer isr...i hope aap thik hai..."

the illuminating darkness and the lonliness somehow calmed naina after some time..maybe because she knew da outside the doors of this room there was a lot awaiting her..
"oye naina..kal raat ka miss call sir ka tha kya..tu akeli gayi kyun naina.."
"naina..aap ne akele jaane ka faisla kyun kiya..aur woh bhi 18 ghante.."
"wazzup naina..are u sure evrythngs fine.."

and finally...

"phoolan...sach ..sach bata..tu akele kyun gayi...aur itni der..kyun naina...kyun.."

"KYUN NAINA.."
WHY..WHY DID U..""
"KYUN..."
WHY NAINA.."
"18 GHANTE...AKELE.."
"AKELE KYUN NAINA.."
"WHY.."
"KISLIYE.."
"NAINA AUR MAJOR RAJVEER..."
"AKELE THE..JUNGLE MEIN.."

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BAS...BAS KARO....BAS!!" [/BOLD][/BLUE]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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[COLOUR=BLUE]"Yeh sab ushi ke saath hi kyun hota hai?"

"Abe, jalti hai to bool de na....zaher kayko ugal raha hai!"

"Tereko kya hai qaidi....tu hi to chhod ke aaya tha na meri Phoolan ko uss....Captain Rajveer ke saath?"

"Kis baat ki akad hai tujhe......sachhai aaine ki tarah saaf hi....fir bhi tereko dikhai nahin deti?"

"Dekh Quaidi....tu isme naahi bol!"

"Guys guys....kya ho raha hai?"

"Chup be chuchundar....."

"Hudabahi....aap apna frustration apne paas rakhiye....Pyaar ki baatein karna ek baat hai....aur nibhana doosri...!"

"Abe e Usool.....tu apni kitaabi baatein apne paas rakh.....tu sikhayega mujhe.....ek Pooja se keh to nahin pa raha...."

"Hudabhai, hum jo bhi ho....magar, aapko dekh kar yahi lagta hai...ki yeh aapka pyaar nahin....ek bachkani....", Huda was fuming...

"....zid hai....", Aalekh completed the sentence.....

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She liked to be there.....she never wanted to come out....and see her friends accusing her.....their disbelieving looks.....their questions......she liked this punishment better!

"Kya ho raha hai.....kyu ho raha hai......jin par bharosa karo....woh bharosa tod dete hain........aur jinke bharose ki ummeed chhod do.....ushi ke bharose saanse chalti hai.....ushi ka bharosa.....anchua rehta hai.....main.....main....kis bhanvar main fas rahi hoon?......kyun......aur kis taraf khich rahi hai...mujhe....yeh dhadkanein....."

Naina was introspecting.......seeing within.....these hours of solitary confinement.....enabled her to meet Naina.....Naina that Rajveer had mentioned during the mentorship programme......then his face floated in her memory......

........Aalekh's firm hand on her shoulder....and Rajveer's grip of her elbow.....Dr.Shalini's reassuring smile.....and Bhaiyya's hug.....were some treasures......that never failed......they, once again gave her a new energy.....new vigor......

"Aap....us Naina ko fir se dekhenge sir....jiss ko apne bhai ko irritate karne main bada maza aata tha....jo apni friends se chidti thi, jab woh use bhai se milti thi, jise sajne sawarne ka shaukh tha, jo jabardasti apne bhai se apni tareef karwati thi......"

.....then she thaought, that every part of that Naina had Naveen.....and now that part is not there......

"Bhaiyya........kahan ho aap......."

"Oye Chuhiya....."

She turned....and shocked to see Naveen.....sitting on the same bench where Rajveer had seen him. ..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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[COLOR=BLUE]"bhaiyya??!!!"

"mere pagal dost ke baare mein soch rahi hai??.."

"bhiyaa mein...mein....i am sorry..."
naina dint face him...her giult overcame her...how cud she have no trusted this man...why..why did she do it..now she cudnt face rajveer's best frnd...but..

"rajveer ke dost se na sahi....apne bhai se to aankhen mila naina..."

naina slowly raised her head...her eyelids and she looked into those determined eyes..

her breathing became heavy...she ran to his arms...the comfort ...the safety in them...the joy..was unexplainable...

"naina....dil ki sun...abhi abhi jo kuch bhi tune kaha..wohi hai teri awaaz ..use sun...meri behen..apni zindagi jiyegi...kisi bhi bojh tale kabhi mat dab janaa naina...shayad tune jo kiya...koi aur bhi wahi karta..."

"bhaiyya mein...meine rajveer sir ko.."

"mein apne dost ko janta hun naina...usne tujhe samjha hai...aur ab.."

he held her shoulders and made her face him...
"ab tujhe ....use samajhna hoga..."

"han bhaiyya...i promise..mein ab jiyungi...usi tarah jis tarah aap....aap ....chod gaye the.."

"janta hun...meri behen hai to meri chuhiya...lekin uska dil....kisi sherni se kam nahi...han naina...tujhe wahi naina banna hoga...mere liye....aur usse badkar..APNE liye...aur han....raj ke liye..."
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WAITING AND HOPING FOR GOOD RESPONSES!!!!!!!!!1

CHEERS,
LOTSA LUV,
RUMELA!!

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