FF: KUCH LUV JAISA - LAST pt pg-72 NOTEpg-75 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
very sweet update...aww dutta concerned abt her safety wen she was out visiting mandirs..thts reali sweet...it wud hav been awesome if u showed sum mishap happening while she was out...waiting 4 tasha 2 visit a mandir..wud b cool 2 c wt they ask 4... haha dutta stealin 2 modaks was so cute n funi...the very 1st time we saw a child in him... hpe naku brings mre of tht hidden dutta in him...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update..Loved to see Dutta being so concerned for her...he is slowly falling for her...and the modak scene was so cute :)
Waiting for the next update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey rose lovely sweet and absolutely wonderful update ...paan ek complaint ,,,, bahooot chotu tha,, it started and completed in a blink ,,,,,,
loved Dutta ,,,pacing the floor waitiing for nakku ,,,
loved his feeling worried seeing her sleeping so uncomfortable at the table
and then the ghee scene was like sone pe suhaga ,,
and also loved dutta picking the modak and walking off hehehe ,,he is so adorable 😳
waitign for next updeate and hoping it is a looong one 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good one! Rose! It was so cute when nakku even after being admonished gives him the prasad, very much in character. Kadoos Dutta, is not interested in knowing what nakku is wishing for when she is lighting akhand jyoth😕, then he does something which confuses again like tryin to fill up the diya with ghee so tht it doesnt extinguish when he is not a believer himself in the rituals so much. He is yet to feel anything for her except that since she is married to him, she is his responsibility, otherwise he is not showing any feelings for her. He is curt nd aloof yet at the same time concerned, wonder what will change him?
Edited by brvr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Dear Rose🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful update 🤗iam sowiee iam late to comment 😳...But it loved it 😉
Awww gadha is concenrnd about naku"s safety ...that was so sweet ..
Omg naku with her famous "aayi kehti hai" irritating him😆,,,,haila dutta stealing the prasad😉Cute ...loved it all ...thanx ,,,,will wait for the nxt part ..jaldi update karna ...
Love and hugs
suhana🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just read all the 5 ch. in one go.Tasha are very much similar to their characters they played on screen...throughout the updates there was a consistent tasha essense even with a not-so-tasha storyline. each intimate moment was so pure, so divine just like tasha.I love the way how dutta is falling for naku willingly/unwillingly through small small things like arti, puja,food. I mightn't be able to comment on regular basis bt try to catch up this one and also your other works have only read your STM which was my first ff on this forum and was again brilliant.Thanx 4 d updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
On chapter 4:

Baaji, what a thing to say! 🤣 I'm sure besharams like me enjoyed that line. I'm surprised Naku hadn't choked on this too. Or that Dutta didn't give him a kick. Now, Rose I am just drooling here thinking how I'd love to see your ff actually played out by MR and MV. You should have been a writer for LTL! And one more thing...for someone who doesn't want to stay married, Dutta seems to be quite enjoying things, right? 😉 ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago

@ bluepal ..yah dutta was worried about her afterall he has so many enemies around ...thanks for enjoying the scene where he steals the modak n gets caught

@ spandy ..hi dear how r u ..yes i am back with the updt and glad u liked everything from dutta getting mad at her , from nakku waiting for him and saying sahab when he touched her, then filing the lamp with ghee to dutta stealing the modak and getting caught too ..lol..ya agree with u he will never change ..afterall he is our cute little gadha ..hmm me too wish he takes her to the temple soon ..thanks a lot for ur lovely comments
@ ranjana .. agree with u dutta's body guards are good for nothing so he should take her to the temple himself ..i hope he does ..thanks for liking the updt so much
@ jagruti ..yes nakku should realize that now she is not an ordinary girl , she is Mrs. DSP so she should act with caution . dutta's anger was justified ..lol..he didnt come up with sarcastic replies nor did he break anything ..that happens when he is cheated ..lol.. nakku is naive she doesnt know how to take advantage of his good mood ... still there is a certain amount of hesitation in her when it comes to asking him something fo herself ... she still feels she doesnt have that right over him ... agree with u nakku will continue to wait for him for dinner even though he has told her not to do so ... hmm lets see if he takes her to the temple or not ..yes he will get to eat more modaks then ..lol.. thanks so much for such beautiful comments
@ ramya ..glad u enjoyed the updt ...thank u
@ sinak ...thanks as always dear
@ warda ... oh no need to be sorry ..its fine ...atleast u read n replied thats enough for me . i know nakku did manage to make a place in that house very soon as a result even dutta couldnt stop himself from caring about her . ahem ahem so u loved the rain scene and its after effects i am sure the after effects must have been more enjoyable ..lol..
dutta was indeed worried about nakku going out without the guards he does consider her as his responsibility . thanks for liking the diya filing and modak stealing scene and without any doubt his smile is always a treat to watch .
@ nakusha ... thanks for ur appreciation
@ mlshe .. dutta is extremely protective about his family and now she is part of it so his concern and anger was justified. somethings never change and one of them is nakku's famous dialogue " meri ayi kehti hai ..." lol ..now dutta should get used to hearing it often. she did manage to bring out the naughty side of him when he stole those modaks and even got caught ... glad u liked the scene ..thanks a lot dear
@ yuvika ..thanks so much for appreciating duttas concern over nakkus safety and his stealing the modaks. nakku is slowly breaking the ice between him . had something happened to nakku in the temple he would have not spared her for sure ...poor girl would have then seen the most angry side of him but nice suggestion thanks.
Edited by stranger2rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rose loved the updates, read it much earlier could not comment.
Nice to see Dutta slowly changing his attitude towards Naku.
Very well thought out and written.👏👏👏👏
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago

*hiding behind the walls* to save my self from rosys tight glares''how can be I so late'..iam so sorry rosy *mujhko rosy ji maaf karna galti mhare se ho gayi*😃😃😃I know me so late in updating my comment'.but don't get naraz haaa'.meri problem to sunlo'''.isss badkismat ka kismet ne saath naa diya or tumhari gunahgaar ko late kar diya''..destiny not accompanied me since two three days 'on Friday I wrote my comment but it got vanished becoz of one dushman of mine '.computer was hanged yaara ''kya karti'..after that on my computer connection get failed that's y super duper late'''''..

lovely roses for lovely rosy 😊

so sorry rosy'.

ab to maaf karde rosy...ab b nahi ...k now a smile from our sher himself

😃😃😃😃 i know ab to rosy apne aap ko rok he nahi paayegi...yipeee finally sari mushkilo ko paar karte huye 😃😃😃 iam here to update my comment'.:😊

So here it is

Superb update rosy'.just mind-blowing👏

So nakku loved to visit in various temples from childhood''.and now too she wanna go to the temple with roops.

Awww dutta got panicked when he doesn't found nakku in the room😳😳''..thats so sweet'.iam mean he always try show rude behavior toward nakku but in reality he really cares for her'..in his deep heart he have a lovable place for her''''..thats why as the minutes passing he had getting more and more tensed.

so finally nakku arrives from temple '.*sigh*'.now nakku be ready to face duttas angriness (I loved😊😊 the scene when dutta shouts at nakusha as there was a kind of affirmness that dutta cares for her wife and somewhere he believes that nakku is her life partner'*here iam talking about a life partner not contracted partner*'')he shouts at her with a right of a husband'

OMG what dutta had said " nahin itni bheedh (crowd) main tu sirf guards hi nahin balki tab jayegi jab main bhi saath saath main hoon."'. *hugz rosy for this line''just loved it.

Super liked👏👏👏 the scene where dutta get wandered or can I say shocked after seeing the bed empty'.and just went up and was searching for her 'oh so nakku illuminated the akhand jyoth'.awww again "meri aayi kahti h" wala

dialogue by nakku but she stopped in middle as in previous night dutta get irritated becoz of her the same "meri aayi kahti h"'..

Oh ho nakku is not feeling good in keeping herself in the house whole day and get dejected and gloomy'.and being a nice sister in law roops noticed that *so cute naa* and wanna ask abt it to dutta on nakkus behalf.

Awww that's so so so sweet😊😊😊 that nakku waits for dutta on dining table even after knowing that he will be late''.and slept on the table

Aaye haaye finally our dutta came back'he jagaoing his sweet wify but she'.hmmm I think she had slept ghda bech k lolzzz that's why even after duttas call she was in her dreamland hahahaha'.

And after that the whole scene u created is mind-blowing'.bestest part of the whole update 'really awesome yaar

The way he moves the hair strand frm nakkus face😳 and tada naku waked up by murmuring "saab"'..and after having their meal duttas faint smile'.haaye that was most awaited as u know naa dutta ki smile aasani se nahi milti''.awww he was filling the diya and drop huge amount of ghee in it but nakku stopped him and said not to pour much more and how sweetly he replied " woh maine ye sab pehle kabhi kiya nahin'bachpan (childhood) mein AS hi saari puja karti thi."😆😆😆 'oh ho so he keep standing on his aayis side in the childhood only for laddoos Now too he keep standing on the sides of laddoos lol'awww he churaofying modkas from the plate 😛😛😛'.and so sweetly just like a child popped one in his mouth and other one in the pocket so that nakku can not noticed that but nakkku ne chori pakad li hahahahaha'..😛

Lovely update rosy'''👏👏👏

Lookin forward'''..

Love u😊

Edited by MishalsFAN - 13 years ago

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