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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Loved it...poor naku can't take the spicy food totally get it... and awww he is caring in his own way...oh DSP u r changing and u have no idea that she is changing u slowly..

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Rose, the update was awesome! Dutta unknowingly falling into the trap of nakku's luv nd devotion. Dutta cannot but admire how nakku had taken over her responsibilities in such short span. He silently approving her but will remain silent. Aww! he could not control his anger when she could not eat the spicy food, it is nothing but caring for her. Buddhu will take time in realizing it. Baji will leave no opportunity go by to pull his bhau's leg, Dutta choking on his food hearing the truth in front of everyone. Ofcourse! he is busy with his wife every evening these days nd will remain so forever😉. The rain sequence beautifully written Rose. See, Baji was right, bhau busy in the evenings, hahaha!!!!!!😆

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Lekz

@Lekz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Great updates Rose.

Like the way its progressing. Am reminded of an ol' tamil movie somewhat on the same lines.

👏👏👏

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Hello there, thank you very much for this update, did read it when you first posted it but never got a chance to reply. As ever an amazing update, let me go through my highlights in some chronological order.
So Dutta/baaji return home some time late in the evening, having AS at the table was a nice touch - straight away puts naku in duttas good books( cleaver girl!😉) And then the food, they do say the way to a mans heart is good food so that wasn't a bad idea either. To be honest i preffer my food spicy too, but come on nakusha that is one of the basic rules of cookery..side mein thoda nikal do naa! (aw well next time.) Loved duttas reaction, it was kind of his way of saying did you not think of yourself before cooking. It all makes for stuble romance which is nice..
haahha😆.. baaji line totally makes for embarrassment! its because both nakusha and dutta know that hes right and all the reason to be more embarrassed. Bitchari nakusha..dutta can just play the ek ghuma ke dunga line but nakusha...i guess all she can do is sit and blush. 😳
nice touch though!
Now for there romance, nicely done i must say..it wasnt at all forced..the moment just fell into place which was nice. Dutta is falling for her weather he knows it or not.
But i like the way in which there is an silent understanding between the two of them..even though i think this relation means a lot more Naku then it does for dutta..they both balance the situation out really well. And so they have there romantic moments, got to compliment the fact that you have written with so much taste that even though frankly there circumstances or not pleasant there relationship and interaction still is.
One thing i noted was..is that the first time nakusha..has said his name (saab..) after there marriage? Anyways amazing chapter..even the aarti moment, all i do want to say is that there moments are amazing..simple yet filled with emotion from every angle so looking forward to more of them, im liking this slow and silent movement in there relationship..
anyways thank you very much for this really did enjoy reading and thanks for the pm.
jagruti

Edited by jagrutid - 13 years ago

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

awesome update rose

amazing dear👏

love it😛

so nakku take care of AS properly and AS too like her 😊

dinning scene lovely dutta looking at her and like food but nakku don't eat spicy and give her water kitni chinta hai dutta ko apni wife ki and then give curd to eat and drink from same glass which nakku use😉😆😛

bajji and roops teasing tasha lovely😆

dutta love the food made decide not to miss again😉

dutta thinking about nakku and checking her out and before that he was thinking nothing gonna change him but will love to see how he gonna stop nakku after a year😉😳 😆and gonna express his love for her😆😛

rain scene lovely😛

aarti wali scene lovely 😛

😆
superb dear

thanks for pm

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

@ rrs ... nakku performing the duties of a wife and a daughter in law with so much ease that even dutta couldnt help being impressed by her. thanks for liking baaji's teasing and the rain scene.

@ priyanka .. lol i am sure if dutta offers u any kind of deal u will accept it without giving it a second thought . ye lo updt na karo toh problem ab karo toh bhi problem ..lol..ok read n comment later i will wait till then .

@ krishaa ...yah dutta ko kuch kuch ho raha hai ..lol..thanks to nakku and baaji's teasing the poor guy is having a tough time around .

@ maria ..thanks for enjoying the way baaji n roops were teasing tasha . will updt next week .

@ daya ..glad u r liking the way story is progressing but dear my writing is pretty ordinary. nakku is slowly having a deep impact on him through her silent actions even though he is well determined not to get affected by her. both of them are similar in some ways like they do take care of each other without making it obvious. baaji will always be the same , he adds the much needed spice in the story by his comments. glad u liked the rain scene even though tasha are not in love with each other still the level of comfort they share is amazing . yup dutta is getting fond of her cooking so didnt miss to have his break fast this time ..lol..thanks a lot for ur comments .

@ sinak ..thank u dear

@ suhana ..i am sure u must have enjoyed the rain scene a lot no wonder in ur display pic tasha are getting wet n romantic ..lol..thanks a lot for ur appreciation. will updt soon and plz can we cut out this thank u for pm n updt ...dear its my duty so need to thank me for it everytime.

@ usha ...dutta is slowly getting attracted towards nakku ..love will still take time to make a place in heart ...glad u enjoyed the updt . thanks dear

@ shreeya ...thank so much for reading n enjoying the updt . i am glad it made ur day .

@ ramya ..good to see u liking the updt . thanks

@ droopy asleep ... will updt u next time. hope u like the future updts as well .

@ vika ...nakku is surely changing dutta in her subtle way. thanks for ur comments .

@ yuvika ...yes dutta was happy to see AS having dinner with the family and nakku made his fav dishes which too impressed him. agree with u dutta needsto break the wall around himself but his mind is not letting him do so which is why even though he shares a husband wife relationship with nakku still he cant ignore or forget that she is his contract wife. he has been hurt so badly that now his mind doesnt allow him to trust anybody. glad u found the rain scene romantic , their chemistry is sizzling yet their relationship lack love at the moment . lets see how things change in the future .

@ mlshe .. omg u find my updts infectious ..lol..thanks

@ raj ...thank god u didnt miss the updt and read the date ..lol..i know nakku is entering his heart through his stomach ..no wonder he couldnt stop himself from having the break fast . glad ur liking the way story is progressing , hope it lives upto ur expectations. if in one day nakku has affected him so much then lets see what happens after 1 yr .

Edited by stranger2rose - 13 years ago

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spandana11

@spandana11

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Rose 😃sorry dear again I am late😕 Hope you are fine🤗 Update was awesome it got all in it emotions ,romance ,baji masti ,you got every spice added perfectly 👏👏 nakuu is taking good care of AS that is natural dutta to happy for her mother to see leading normal life ,he want to thank nakuu but he did not we all know how much gadha tries to keep away from his feelings he will fall so hard so hope he does it soon ,dining table scene ,baji phone talk very nicely written ,and nakuu cooked all according to dutta taste😳 spicy and she herself not able to eat poor girl😆 dutta passed curd for her 😳 Again dutta mono log was awesome his feelings perfectly pictured ,he was fighting himself for his feelings to nakuu as usual he was right one year was long if nakuu changed so much in one day hope he accepts that soon ,oh last scene was so cute and romantic😳 nakuu playing in rain and dutta watching it ,nakuu felt him seeing going back to room😳 co nice ,now morning scene dtta was eating BF like a child😆😆 and also felt regret for not eating before day he he😆 liked they way you pictured that😳 nakuu brought arathi for dutta and he allowed to do her as his hands were not nice😳 good one you are taking story so well rose me to enjoying it a lot thanks for writing this wonderful FF😃 now waiting how will story move eagerly waiting for next update 😳 jaldi update karo na please😃

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was superbbb yaar...
baji n roops teasing,i loved it...
tasha romance was awesome...so naku impressed dutta😉,...
looking fwd...

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Rose_Petal

@Rose_Petal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

This is for the third update...I think.
Hi Rose! Guess what? I just loved this update. It was written so beautifully. Dutta's inner conflicts battling it out while coming to his room to show that he feels sorry for her was really great. Then the best part began...Naku --she is a sherni or what! Dutta was going to go away but she grabbed him good. And then 😉...besharam...joh huwa sau huwa! But I'm still thinking about it. 😳 What I loved the most has to be when she asks him where he found the earrings and he shows her where. Poor Naku is all ☺️...great job, Rose. Keep it up!

Excuse if all this doesn't make sense...I'm still a little

Edited by Rose_Petal - 13 years ago

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Priyanka gangwar

@__priyanka__

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

rosy
totally loved the update yaar'..just superb👏👏👏
so nakku
is now taking care of her mother in law like a faithful bahu'.thats good😊😊'.and
aayisaheb health is too improving''dutta get happy to see her mother on dining table 'good to see that
he too appreciates that his whole family is happy becoz of her innocent wife,
but don't want to express it'..we know yaar our DSP is wid vry few words
'..😳😳
So nakku
prepares duttas fav. Spicy food awww that's sweet
Loved
baaji here when he uncovered all thae dishes and said "bhau aaj to sab teri
pasand ka bana h"'.. dutta tasted the food
and likes it too'.ab thodi taarif
b kardo dutta ji '..chalo atleast roops says something on his behalf as she know
that dutta will never say anything
Awww
dutta appreciates that he had the rude behavior toward nakku in the morning'..
Haaaye
dutta ji staring at nakku and caught by his AS'.LOLZZZ😆😆😆
And
after that the whole dining table scene '.was too good rosy'.hats off'.the way
u described it was mind blowing esp I liked the chapatti wala scene sooo
much''when naku was serving food for herself n was abt to pick the chapatti n
dutta too extend his hand for the same '.and tada 😲😲both have picked the same
chapatti ''haaye the stare after that wass breath taking'.
Nakkus
face become red'..bcoz of spicy food (hahahaha and I thought its becoz of that
breath taking stare'..may b she get little bit shy why'lol) she never likes
spicy food but still ate it/'.le padd gayi naa dutta ji ki daant...[|)
n then he gives not only water but also offered curd...awww how caring he is
wah i was missing that one so much,..arre apne baaj bole to the kabab m haddi ki teasing...
The dialouge by baaji was superb esp the second one which even made naku embarassed and dutta chocked "nahi raat ko nahi shinde samjhakar ab bhau apan logo ki tarah lukha nahi raha ... Raat ko uske pass or b kaam hote h" hahahaha gr8 one
in his chocked state he drink water frm nakkus glasr n roops commented "isse pyar badhta h" (so cute naa...rosy u missed it)
wah romantic scene of tasha...nakku in rain fully drenched n our dutta was staring at her when she was playing wid water like a child hahaha ... Nakku noticed him n come to the room...aww she slipped n holds duttas shoulder n dutta too wrap her (wooo isse jyada romantic kya hoga)...lightining struck n nakku burried her head on his chest in fear (or romantic bana diya) he picked her up (or romantic...) wooo it was the triple fultoo fatak update...lved it
dutta improves his mistake...by taking breakfast other morning widout nakkus saying...awww he ate the breakfast like a small child...n nakku do the tilak how sweet
dutta have the most lovable space in his heart for nakku...its other thing that he is not aware or may b don't want to b aware abt his love
lets see how their relationship get stronger n they really fall in love:)
looking forward...
Now give the other i.e 5th update too...i think u were waiting for my cmt as u said earlier that u will post next update after i do cmts on 4th update...
So waiting for next
thanks for this awesome update n sorry for being late
love u 😊

Edited by MishalsFAN - 13 years ago

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