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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ brvr ...dutta is admiring her silently but will take time to acknowledge and express it we all know why ..lol..yah baaji is cute with his one liners although he is not aware what dutta is upto in nights but still managed to hit the bulls eye ...now if dutta wants a child he has to do all this and i am sure ur not complaining ..lol..thanks for enjoying the updt
@ lekz ..dear i have not copied this story from any tamil movie ..lol..but thanks for ur appreciation
@ jagruti ..so happy to know that u found the updt amazing ..nakku is just discharging her duties sincerely which is impressing dutta a lot be it cooking for him or taking care of AS .. baaji did hit the nail at the right spot ..lol.. no wonder tasha were embarrassed ..poor dutta had nothing better to do than threaten him to keep shut .
ohh i am so glad that u liked the rain scene and didnt find it vulgar or forced ..for me tasha make a beautiful couple and i wanted to keep their relationship free of lust but at the same time it was imp for them to get close ..i am relieved that everything went out well ..thank so much for ur lovely comments
@ ranjana ...yah nakku taking care of AS n making food for dutta didnt go unnoticed by him ..baaji will be baaji ..lol..glad u ejoyed baaji roops teasing tasha n the rain scene along with the arti part ..hope u like the next part as well ..thanks
@ spandy ...hi dear no need to be sorry for commenting late ..its ok ...as long as u read n enjoy the updt i am happy ..lol..this time the part had different ingredients glad u liked the whole outcome ..be it duttas passing curd to nakku , baaji's phone talk , then his leg pulling and ofcourse dutta's monologue coz this man will not speak his mind openly ..lol..how can i forget the romantic bit and then the arti scene ...a big thanks for appreciating each n every scene so much ..will updt soon
@ bluepal ..thanks for taking out time from ur busy schedule to read n comment ..m glad u enjoyed baaji's teasing n tasha romance . hope u like the next part too
@ mimi ...hi baby ...how r u feeling now ..by reading ur comments i can make out u r much better now ..lol..thanks for appreciating the way i wrote down dutta's emotions ..hey nakku is a sherni and is well determined to give what dutta wants ..lol.. omg she didnt grab him but held his wrist ..u r making her sound like she is a wild cat who pounced on dutta lol..when ppl get married then " aur jo tan man mein ho rah hai woh toh hona hi tha" lol ..no wonder u cant stop thinking about but i wrote just 2 lines about that scene n ur calling me besharam ..lol..well i honestly didnt expect ppl to like that ear ring part so much ..but thanks for it ..
@ mlshe ...thats really very sweet of u
@ priyanka ...honestly speaking i thought u would comment after reading the next updt as well ..lol..but grt u shared ur lovely comment ..nakku is being a good wife n daughter in law which dutta cant ignore even if he doesnt express it he is getting attracted towards her .. u know ur the first one who appreciated that chappati scene i am so glad someone did coz me liked that a lot ...well baaji is a prankster he will never change ...he n roops kind of express duttas feelings indirectly ...ohh so u enjoyed the rain scene so much ...bole toh full too romantic ..lol..thanks i am glad it didnt appear cheap n all ..dutta must have looked really cute while having the break fast next morning m sure ...thanks once again for ur comments dear
Edited by stranger2rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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previous part /forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1774013/ff-kuch-luv-jaisa-last-pt-pg-72-notepg-75
Chapter 5

Since childhood nakku loved the festival of ganesh chaturthi. Those 10 ? 11 days were pure bliss for her, she would visit each and every temple in her town where lord ganesha's idol was placed and would not miss attending the evening aarti each single day and on the final day her father would carry baby nakku on his shoulders to show her the immersion of the idol. So today too she couldn't stop herself from visiting the nearby temple. She wanted to take AS's permission before leaving with roops but she was sleeping so didn't bother to disturb her.

Dutta came back after attending his meeting in the evening and found her missing. It was already 8 and she hadn't returned on top of that she had gone alone with roops without taking the guards along. He walked up and down the room restlessly, he tried calling roops on her cell but it wasn't reachable this was making him more furious. He had countless enemies who would never leave an opportunity to harm him and his family, how could she be so careless? He didn't even know which temple to go and look for her, with each passing minute his temper was rising one notch up. He threw the cell phone on the couch in anger as he couldn't get through roops.

As the clock struck 9 she entered the room excitedly with the Prasad for him. His back was facing her so she called him out " sahab ! Prasad." He turned around and gazed at her hand that had come forward to give him the sweet, he crossed his arms around his chest and stared at her. She moved her hand back slowly, " waqt kya ho raha hai kuch pata hai?" he asked bitterly. She swallowed her lump in the throat and replied " jee nau baj gaye hain ..thodi der ho gayi..woh darshan karne ke liye line mein khade khade hi do ghante nikal gaye." He narrowed his eyes and clenched his jaw firmly " tu meri patni hai , tujhe line mein khada hone ki kya zaroorat thi ?" she lifted her lowered head to defend herself " meri aayi kehti hai jitni mushkil se bappa ke darshan ho bappa utne khush hote hain." He flared his nostrils and pressed his teeth hard " teri aayi kya kehti hai ya sochti hai mujhe ussey kuch lena dena nahin hai..lekin tune is ghar ke bahar bina guards ke kadam kaise rakha?." she shivered at the way he was growling at her, tears welled up in her eyes but she pushed them back thinking that behind all his anger his concern for her was hiding she could sense that he was worried for her, after all she was not an ordinary girl anymore she was now dutta shreeram patil's wife, she had to act responsibly henceforth. She nodded her head and said " jee agli baar mein mandir guard ke saath jayegi." He raised his index finger to warn her " nahin itni bheedh (crowd) main tu sirf guards hi nahin balki tab jayegi jab main bhi saath main hoon." He was fiercely protective about his family and now she was part of it. She blinked her eyes in acceptance then brought her hand back to give him the Prasad, he let out a deep sigh, in spite of all this she didn't forget to give him the Prasad, he took it reluctantly.

In the morning before leaving for work AS stopped dutta and told him that purohit ji had come to invite them for ganesha puja at ganpati temple, since she was keeping unwell she advised that rest of the family should go and visit the temple, nakku was standing near the kitchen door and got excited at the prospect of going to the temple, she looked at his back which was facing her with the hope that he would take her out but he had something else in mind when he replied " jee AS chale jayenge abhi toh bahut din baaki hain puja khatam hone mein." Her face dropped on hearing his words and she went back to the kitchen in dismay.

He moved his hand on to the other side of the bed and found it empty, he squinted his eyes and looked around she was nowhere, where had she gone in the middle of the night he wondered. He got up and went out of the room he was about to climb down the stairs when he saw her coming up, he knotted his eye brows and asked hoarsely " itni raat ko kahan gayi thi?" She coiled the edge of her saree around her finger and answered ," woh maine akhand jyoth (a lamp which is kept illuminated for a certain period of time) jalayi hai usi mein ghee dalne gayi thi kahin bhujhe (extinguish) na ..meri aayi kehti hai.." she stopped in the middle thinking he didn't like to hear what her mother said. She looked at him he was waiting for her to complete what she was saying, she took a deep breath and continued " woh kehte hain agar diya dus din tak jalta rahe toh bappa humari manchahi iccha (wish) puri karte hain." He was amused at her belief and wanted to ask what did she wish for but then it was her life, her wish so refrained himself from doing so and went back to the room quietly.

Dutta was busy with his work and would come back home late, nakku didn't have the courage to ask him when he would take her out and slowly days went by. With each passing day she became restless and gloomy, roops saw her sad face and one evening proposed to ask him on her behalf, she dialed his number and asked " bhau mujhe aap se kuch poochna tha.." dutta closed his stressed eyes and rubbed his forehead with his left hand ," roops agar baat zaroori nahin hai toh main jab ghar lautoon phir karein abhi main kaam mein bahut busy hoon." She bit the inside of her cheek and said " theekh hai bhau." And disconnected the call. Nakku kept her hand on roops shoulder and gave her a reassuring look " koi baat nahin ..main theekh hoon." An hour later dutta called back home and informed nakku that tonight he would be late so no need to worry and wait for him.

After completing her daily chores nakku sat on the dining chair gazing at the door and the clock from time to time. Soon her eyes became heavy and she drifted off to sleep by resting her head on the table. It was midnight when he came back with his hands in his pockets thinking about his new dealer, something was not right about that man he thought he then saw her sleeping figure. He went close to her and called her out but she didn't react, he went closer and stood next to her, he shook his head in annoyance, even after being informed she was waiting for him there was no need for her to trouble herself for him like that. She was sleeping in an uncomfortable position with her hair falling on her eyes, he raised his hand and moved her hair back fixing them behind her ear, his fingers brushed her soft skin making her murmur " sahab", even in her sleep she could make out his touch and slowly she opened her eyes to find him gazing back at her. She stood up immediately and said " main apke liye khaana laati hai." He pulled out another chair and sat there waiting for the food soon she came and served him then began pouring a glass of water for him. With his eyes on his plate he asked gently " tune khaaya?" She looked at him and said hesitantly " nahin", his eyes shot up at once, "aainda (henceforth) mere liye rukne aur jaagne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai?samjhi?" This was something she couldn't comply with nor did she want to argue with him so kept quiet and took out a plate for herself ,both shared a silent meal.

She went to the kitchen to wash the dishes and after some time came out to go to her room when she saw him filling the diya which she had lit with ghee. She smiled at his concern and went to him. He was dropping a huge chunk of half molten ghee on the diya from the top, fearing this might extinguish the flame she held his hand to reduce its quantity, " sahab itna zyada nahin." He raised his eye brow and said sheepishly " woh maine ye sab pehle kabhi kiya nahin?bachpan (childhood) mein AS hi saari puja karti thi." She grinned and shook her head, " koi baat nahin." She took a step back and asked, "waise chote hote aap kya karte the?" he frowned at her question for a moment, thought about it then smirked and replied ," kuch nahin ..bus AS kab aarti khatam karengi aur mujhe Prasad mein modak (sweet)dengi iska intezaar karta tha." She narrowed her eyes in suspicion when she saw him standing next to the plate where modaks were kept ," kahin aaj bhi isiliye toh aap nahin aaye?" He followed her gaze and saw the plate then began laughing " nahin nahin main sach mein diye mein ghee dalne aaya tha." She was pleased to see him like that ," hansa karo sahab, aap hanste hue bahut acche lagte ho." He stopped smiling on hearing her and lowered his head," chal raat bahut hogayi ." she turned to leave when he glanced at the plate and picked up two pieces of the sweet, popped one in his mouth immediately and slipped the other one in his pocket. He was climbing the stairs behind her when she stopped and turned around suddenly, she pointed towards the corner of his mouth, he frowned at her ," woh thoda sa modak apke muh ke pass laga hai." And began climbing the stairs again, he rubbed his mouth with the back of his hand and kicked himself mentally on getting caught.

To be continued.
Thanks for reading

Lots of love

Rose

next part https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47585452
Edited by stranger2rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmm...dutta was worried abt naku n her security😉...
tasha scene at dinner n dutta was caught by naku while eating sweet😆...that was chooo cute...i loved it...looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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RoseđŸ€—you are back with update 😳 it was awesome ,nakuu child hood way of celebrating ganapathi festival is cute , so now to she went for mandir with out saying to dutta he he nakuu bi na ,and dutta all tensed ,concerned for nakuu safety ,he admitted it when nakuu returned that scene was very nice so guards were also not enough she have to go woth dutta only he he hope then gadha takes her soon 😳 😆oh nakuu lighted divya for festival it will burn all days till visargan , ,instead of dutta saying nakuu waited for dutta ,till he rturns liked the scene nakuu saying saab with dutta touch ,they eating meal very nice and dutta filling ghee shows how much he concerned ,scene was sweet and childish to dutta taking prasad in keeping in pocket one to he he ya gadha kabhi sudharagha nahi ,and nakuu caught him he he 😆 and for got AS asked dutta to go for mandir as she is unwell nakuu hoping he will take her to but days passing and dutta not raising the topic oh hope in next update gadha takes her this was awesome part can not wait to see tasha temple visit in next part jaldi update karo na 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update rose

so nakku go with roops without bg's and dutta 😡 on nakku for going witout bg's waise bhi bg's toh nikamme hai saath ho ya na koi fark nahi padhta 😆

modak wala scene lovely

sweet update dear

thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey..as ever very nice chapter, felt sorry for nakusha..bitchari just wanted to go for bapas darshan but yep shes no longer a normal girl she is Mrs DSP so she needs to look after herself. Could just imagine the scene between dutta and nakusha. Aw her eyes filling up at his anger but chalta hai ..after all he is Hubby so i guess he has the right to get angry more so he was just concerned. And actually looking back at the past anger phases dutta has gone though (in the serial) that wasn't too bad she should count herself lucky that there were no sarcastic phrases or vases thrown around!😉

I really want nakusha too just ask him instead of waiting for him i can understand she is a little nervous after all he did have a bit of a go at her but hes probably totally forgotten about it.
She..really sounds like she is upset just drop it in conversation Naku it will be fine.đŸ‘đŸŒ
We also have "so cute naa😆 aka roops" on the case so hopefully she will sort it out.
i think however i would want dutta to notice that there is something wrong with nakusha and ask her directly.
Aw now coming to the iconic scene when the wife waits for her husband at the dinner table..you add to the mix Nakusha and dutta and it becomes such a cute scene😳..loved it..in particular the way dutta asks nakusha if she has had dinner and tells her not to wait for him in future. (kya authority hai! but i still think nakusha will sit and wait for him every night akhir pati se pehle kaise kha saakti hai right? Correct me if im wrong...but its also a way she gets to spend so time with him.

Now here comes the soft side of patil saab..diya mein ghee purna..aw hes such a sweetheart.😍and the moment he laughs.. in my head i was thinking "thats it GO NAKU GO"..thats totally the right moment for nakusha to drop in the question.. sahab agar aap khahe toe ham kal mandir chale..?(bohot sare modak honge waha.😉.)
but no she doesn't..! she needs to learn to pick her moments and take advantage of the good mood.!
anyway chalo..at least she found duttas weakness! anything for a modak..so the perfect close to my comment has to be --"ganpati bapa moriya.!" 😆
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Edited by jagrutid - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow awesome update dear

so cute romance of tasha
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Rose :-)
loved both the updates...very very well written...firstly sorry for not coming for chp 4 before...read it now...and enjoyed every bit of it...
Specially the evident difference dutta could see that how naku made his house a home in just one day...incredible lady...
Loved the scene in rain and its after effects too...he he
and his caring attitude towards naku at the table left me pleasently surprised...hope he actually falls in love with her soon...
Chp 5...Again a very concerned side of dutta shown...regarding nakus safety...
That diya scene was so cute...and dutta churafying that sweets...i loved how he kept one in pocket...haha
for a change smiling dutta was the highlite of this update :-)
Hoping for more cute moments between tasha :-)
Update soon yaar...tc :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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liked it alot ,waiting for the next update already😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww dutta worried bout naku
da wos so sweet...u cud totaly tel he wos concernd 4 her behind all dat anger
haha naku nd her 'ayi kehti hai' lmao
aww tasha convo at the end wos super cute...
dutta stealing d parshad..
nd getin caught lyk a lil kid lol
bless him
thnx 4 pm
pls cont soon.x

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