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Posted: 13 years ago
Yaay! I caught up! And found out Dutta has to thieve in his own house -- all that talk about Naku being DSP's wife and not having to stand in line (I really loved this dialogue! Though would hate to wait in line somewhere because DSP's wife is there 😆) --where was I -- oh, and he has to steal sweets! Bahar mein Gunda aur ghar mein Gadha...but a sweet one. I admit that was adorable. Oh, yeah, before I forget...let me tell you how pleasantly surprised I was -- after all, it has been a long time -- like forever since any mention of Aai Sahib's dear old Purohitji. 😛 I really was glad to find that he wasn't completely forgotten. Now, if you would only include Suds like that every now and then that would be nice. Just a suggestion. And to sum it up finally: I loved the update! Good job, Rose.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ droopy asleep ... thanks for ur feedback , glad u enjoyed dutta stealing the modak scene agree with u unknowingly dutta is falling for her.

@ raj ..aww sorry for the short updt next one will be long . promise and so happy to know that u found the part lovely n sweet esply the caring side of dutta be it worrying for her security or filling the lamp . thanks dear

@ brvr ..dutta is a complex character his heart n mind are constantly trying to overrule him thats why sometimes he is sweet with her and other times he keeps distance with her. for describing him better i remember one song " kabhi neem neem kabhi shehad shehad ...kabhi naram naram kabhi sakht sakht ..mora piya." but thanks a lot for ur comments.

@ suhana ..hey suhana how r u ? glad u liked dutta getting worried about nakku and she trying to defend her self by using that fav dialogue of hers " meri aayi kehti hai.." lol thanks dear for ur lovely comments and no need to be sorry for posting them late.

@ aishwish .. omg u read all the chapters in one go . thats really wonderful of u thanks so much. well i try to maintain the essence of tasha as much as possible in this different story and i am happy to know that u think tasha are very much in character as far as writing close moments is concerned its very difficult to write them without making them sound vulgar yet impactful moreover in this ff where they are not in love but still share that kind of relation. thanks a lot for feeling that the intimate scenes were pure n divine . and i am pleasantly surprised that u still remember STM and found that ff brilliant , thank u dear

@ mimi ... on chapter 4 ..ofcourse baby , besharams like u n me had a grt time reading n writing that line respectively...lol.. ohh nakku didnt choke may be that time she didnt have anything in her mouth she definitely felt embarrassed n left the place and dutta didnt kick him but threatened to punch him if he opened his mouth again ..lol..now u want me to be the writer of LTL i know for ur own shameless reasons ..lol..i can well imagine what all u want to see on screen . ha ha

@ lekz ..thanks dear for appreciating the updt , yes dutta is changing slowly but still miles to go before he falls in love with nakku . will updt soon .

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MishalsFAN

*hiding behind the walls* to save my self from rosys tight glares''how can be I so late'.kab tak chupogi khambe ki aad mein ..kabhi toh aaogi bhindi bazaar mein ...iam so sorry rosy *mujhko rosy ji maaf karna galti mhare se ho gayi*😃😃😃...oye hoye such a cheap song to please me ..not happy do something better than this ..I know me so late in updating my comment'.but don't get naraz haaa'.meri problem to sunlo'''..hmm ok bolo bolo tell tell...isss badkismat ka kismet ne saath naa diya or tumhari gunahgaar ko late kar diya''..destiny not accompanied me since two three days 'on Friday I wrote my comment but it got vanished becoz of one dushman of mine '.computer was hanged yaara ''kya karti'.ohh ho i hate these computers they hang up at the wrong time .after that on my computer connection get failed that's y super duper late'''all problems coming together''..

lovely roses for lovely rosy 😊 now i am feeling a little better u know how to make me smile ..thanks a lot for the roses

so sorry rosy'.

ab to maaf karde rosy...ab b nahi .hmm forgiven u but still not forgotten everything ..k now a smile from our sher himself

😃😃😃😃 i know ab to rosy apne aap ko rok he nahi paayegi.*thud* rose falls from her chair ..what have u done ??????? mishal smiling at me now how can i not forget everything and give u a jaadu ki jhappi 🤗..yipeee finally sari mushkilo ko paar karte huye 😃😃😃 iam here to update my comment'.:😊

So here it is

Superb update rosy'.just mind-blowing👏..thanks so much dear

Awww dutta got panicked when he doesn't found nakku in the room😳😳''..thats so sweet'.iam mean he always try show rude behavior toward nakku but in reality he really cares for her'..in his deep heart he have a lovable place for her..yes he is very caring towards her thought doesnt show it but deep down he is .

(I loved😊😊 the scene when dutta shouts at nakusha as there was a kind of affirmness that dutta cares for her wife and somewhere he believes that nakku is her life partner'*here iam talking about a life partner not contracted partner*'')he shouts at her with a right of a husband'ur bang on right dear

OMG what dutta had said " nahin itni bheedh (crowd) main tu sirf guards hi nahin balki tab jayegi jab main bhi saath saath main hoon."'. *hugz rosy for this line''just loved it.lol..he doesnt trust his body guards too when it comes to her.

Super liked👏👏👏 the scene where dutta get wandered or can I say shocked after seeing the bed empty'.and just went up and was searching for her 'oh so nakku illuminated the akhand jyoth'.awww again "meri aayi kahti h" glad u liked nakku blabbering her fav dialogue ..lol..though dutta doesnt appreciate it but u enjoyed it

Awww that's so so so sweet😊😊😊 that nakku waits for dutta on dining table even after knowing that he will be late''.and slept on the table..nakku is our bhartiya nari how can she not wait for her hubby

Aaye haaye finally our dutta came back'he jagaoing his sweet wify but she'.hmmm I think she had slept ghda bech k...not ghode bech kar but ghade bech kar lolzzz that's why even after duttas call she was in her dreamland hahahaha'.

And after that the whole scene u created is mind-blowing'.bestest part of the whole update 'really awesome yaar...aww dutta getting soft n romantic is always a treat to watch ..thanks for loving it.

after having their meal duttas faint smile'.haaye that was most awaited as u know naa dutta ki smile aasani se nahi milti''..absolutely and today u showed it to me ..since then i am in la la land 😍. he churaofying modkas from the plate 😛😛😛'.and so sweetly just like a child popped one in his mouth and other one in the pocket so that nakku can not noticed that but nakkku ne chori pakad li hahahahaha'lol nakku is a smart wife afterall she is Mrs. DSP ..😛

Lovely update rosy'''👏👏👏 A big thanks once again Embarrassed

Love u😊 ..me tooo

@ mimi ... hello once again ...so u caught up with all the parts ..u deserve a clap Clap and hey dont call dutta a gunda he is a gangster yaar plzz give him some respect ..lol.. thanks for appreciating that modak stealing scene ...omg ..i didnt know u were missing AS's pruohitji so much ..lol.. thank god i included him ..ok ok u suds is not forgotten but i know how spl he is for u so his presence should also be spl n not forced so will include him at the rt time. thanks mimi baby for ur lovely comments.
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Posted: 13 years ago

previous part https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47232808

Chapter 6

She sighed while laying down the breakfast on the table as one more day passed and she didn't get to visit the temple. She was lost in her thoughts when he looked at her then turned his neck towards roops and said " roops , taiyaar rehna aaj sham ko hum sab shivji ke mandir jayenge bappa ke darshan ke liye." Her eyes stilled for a moment her ears couldn't believe what they had heard then she looked at him, with eyes beaming in excitement. He lowered his head and left for work.

As promised in the evening dutta took roops and nakku along with baaji to the temple. It was a huge temple beautifully decorated with lights as the festival was nearing towards the end a large crowd had turned up but dutta had already informed purohit ji of their visit so they didn't have to wait in the crowd. There were a number of food stall around the temple, nakku couldn't contain her happiness and began walking up the stairs when roops called her from behind " vaheni abhi nahin pehle chaat khaate hain phir darshan ko jayenge." Baaji slapped his forehead " roops tu khane ke ilava kuch soch sakti hai." Nakku came down and roops raised her head high to reply " pehle peth puja phir kaam duja." So the four of them entered the chaat stall but nakkus eyes didn't leave the big idol of lord ganesha which was visible even from far " bappa kitne sundar lag rahe hain nah ?" Dutta realized how much she believed in Him and must have missed out on seeking His blessings daily. " bhaiya zara chaar plate chaat dena." Said roops while dutta intervened and said " ek bina mirchi ke dena." Roops elbowed nakku naughtily suggesting that he remembered that she doesn't enjoy spicy food making her blush shyly. He saw their playful interaction but ignored it.

Purohit ji carried out the evening arti in their presence. The whole crowd was reciting the chants with him, nakku knew all the words by heart, since childhood she had been reciting them. Dutta stood a little far away from her and watched her closely how she was enjoying each and every moment of the arti without taking her eyes off the idol of lord ganesha. A sweet smile and a feeling of contentment displayed on her face. He was neither a firm believer nor a non believer of God, just that he believed in himself more than in anybody else. He believed in doing things himself rather than depend on some super natural power to make things happen for him. When the arti got over she looked around for him and caught him staring at her, he instantly dropped his gaze and started moving back without noticing that huge lamps were lit behind him, he was about to hit one when nakku came rushing towards him and pushed him aside. The lamp fell down and the hot oil splashed at her feet burning them a bit. She shut her eyes in pain while dutta held her by her shoulders. His forehead creased in worry on seeing her hurt because of him why did she have to come in between? His mind questioned. He made her sit on a nearby chair and baaji brought some ice for her and rubbed it softly on her feet, " vaheni ab kaisa lag raha hai?" asked roops worriedly she nodded her head slowly indicating that she was feeling better. Sometime later dutta asked baaji to get the car as close to the tent as possible. Nakku began walking slowly towards the car with the help of roops while dutta walked ahead of them dispersing the crowd.

Roops made her sit at the back seat with her legs up while she sat on the front seat. Dutta came behind to sit, he lifted nakku's legs carefully and placed them on his thighs. She instantly moved her legs back and kept them down, how could she rest her legs on his thighs? She felt his strong grip on her ankles as he lifted her legs and straightened them once again, he saw the reluctance in her eyes," main agar kuch karta hoon toh uska matlab hota hai." Stressing on each and every word of his, he continued" pata nahin raaste mein kitne ghadde (holes) hain?, inhe neeche rakhegi toh ghaadi ke jhatkon se aur chot lagegi." She didn't seem convinced with his logic instead appeared uncomfortable," main aapke upar apni taangein kaise rakh sakti hoon?" he kept a finger on his lips and glared hard to silence her, he didn't want to hear another word from her as it is he was upset to see her like this and now her unnecessary hesitation was annoying him, " baaji raaste mein koi chemist ki dukaan dikhe toh rok lena?aur ghaadi araam se chalana" She curled her toes uneasily and fidgeted with the end of her saree then looked everywhere except at him. He examined her feet thoughtfully, why did she have to intervene without any reason? He was capable of taking care of himself, he could have managed easily, he clenched his jaws and pressed his lips hard on seeing her burnt feet then raised his head and frowned at her, accusing her of hurting herself needlessly. This whole accident could have been easily averted had she not jumped in between. He shook his head in displeasure on the other hand she smiled inwardly on seeing him concerned which he was trying to hide behind his anger.

Baaji stopped the car in the middle and bought an ointment for her. On reaching the house she got down slowly, roops tried to help her by lending her shoulder so that nakku could lean on it but dutta raised his hand to stop nakku then picked her up in his arms in one swift move, she gasped in surprise and then squealed ," yeh kya kar rahe ho aap?" he took a deep breath and began walking," chaar kadam chalne mein toh takleef ho rahi hai ?kamre ki seediyaan tu chad legi ?..aaj ka din araam kar le kal se thoda thoda chalna shuru kariyo." Baaji and roops were happy to see him taking care of her. He entered their room slowly and placed her on the bed cautiously then gave her the ointment to apply it on her feet. He moved back to change himself in something more comfortable, the heavy worked kurta was hurting him before stepping into the washroom he turned around and said " aur woh diye ki chinta mat karna mein bhujhne nahin dunga ..theekh se ghee daal dunga." She gave him a grateful smile, his small small things were making a place in her heart.

He woke up rubbing his eyes and looked around for her, she was not in the room, he went out and saw her climbing down the stairs with roops holding her firmly around her waist both talking softly unaware that he was behind them listening to their conversation

" kya hua vaheni ? dard ho raha hai?" roops asked seeing her gloomy face. Nakku shook her head and replied " nahin dard toh kum hai par isey bhi kal hi jalna tha ..do din bache hain bappa ke viserjan ( immersing of the idol) mein ab toh sahab mujhe bilkul mandir nahin leke jayenge." As it is she had lost out many days to visit the temple and now after what happened yesterday she was sure he would not take her to a crowded place again. If she had to get her hurt she wished she had got on the last day.

She busied herself in the kitchen as it was difficult for her to stand for long so she took a stool and chopped vegetables while roops did the cooking as per her guidance. Soon both of them got lost in their talks when all of a sudden they heard loud noises, roops rushed out immediately and nakku too came out slowly, then what she saw surprised her completely, dutta and baaji were carrying a Ganpati idol covered with a red colored cloth. The guards followed them behind screaming " ganpati bappa morya." They kept the idol on a huge table and uncovered it, the guards showered it with flowers and colors, nakku still couldn't believe herself that her bappa was at her home and that too her husband had brought him for her. Dutta turned around to find her standing behind him with eyes filled with joy and gratitude. She kept on staring not the idol this time but him, thanking him silently for giving her this priceless moment of happiness. He didn't know that his small little gesture would have such a deep effect on her, she was hurt so taking her out in a crowded place was out of question so he bought the ganpati home unaware that it would delight her so much. She parted her lips and said softly " sahab .." he blinked his eyes and shook his head lightly indicating not to thank him, she smiled through her tears. She held the edge of her saree and raised it to his face level then began wiping off the color that had fallen on his cheeks both unable to take their eyes off each other.

" dutta ! yeh tune bahut accha kiya jo aakhri ke dinon ke liye bappa ko ghar le aaya." Said AS who was informed and brought by roops, dutta and nakku moved apart hurriedly while AS continued ," ab agar tu bappa ko laaya hai toh in do dino tak unki khoob seva karni hogi ?subha subha arti ke liye jaldi bhi uthna hoga." He nodded his head in acceptance, if he had taken up this responsibility he would fulfill it with utmost sincerity. Purohit ji began chanting the mantras to invoke life in the statue after which coconut, jaggery, modaks, beetle leaves and red flowers were offered. Nakku went back to the kitchen to make panchaamitra (honey, milk, ghee, curd and sugar all mixed together), dutta placed a garland of flowers around bappa's neck and Soon the whole family joined for the arti.

The last two days of the festival passed away in no time. Dutta had arranged a huge tent in his lawn where poor people were fed lunch and dinner for free, he would get up early in the morning though with not pleasure to attend the arti while nakku kept herself busy in decorating the idol, making modaks and ladoos , a little extra modaks knowing how much dutta liked having them in fact she was restricted to only giving out instructions the main work was actually carried out by roops and baaji. She was not allowed to strain herself by standing for long and would often find dutta glaring at her if she was caught doing so but nevertheless she enjoyed each and every minute of those remaining days. The purohitji came once again to conduct the final arti , nakku joined her hands and closed her eyes thanking bappa to grace her family with his presence at the same time seeking for his forgiveness if any ritual or custom went wrong unknowingly. Baaji and the guards picked up the idol to take it out in a procession accompanied with dancing and singing patil niwasi's to be immersed in the nearby beach. Dutta was walking behind silently and saw nakku admiring the ganpati idol one last time with tear filled eyes. He stopped near her and raised his eye brow asking her the reason for getting teary, she said innocently " bappa itni jaldi jaa rahe hain." He couldn't see her weeping and gave her a reassuring look," toh kya hua? Agle saal hum bappa ko pure dus din ke liye layenge." She wiped her tears then lowered her eyes and replied back softly " par agle saal main yahaan nahin hogi." Reminding him of the deal they had struck.

Thanks for reading

Lots of love

Rose

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Edited by stranger2rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so touching updt... dutta is really falling in love with her... he cares so much fr her... loved the updt to the core... love the flow of the story... updt sooon... thanx fr Pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww... that was so sweet of dutta and hes even rising early just to do the seva of bappa.People like dutta may appear complex or may be even complicated to many but they are actually the simplest all you have to do is just love them genuinely and they are all yours and the closing line "par agle saal main yahan nahi hogi"...such a simple line but was enough to describe the melancholic backdrop of the story. Thank you.XXX
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow! Dutta is a goner. He is just unstoppable when it is concerned to nakku. He has every small detail in mind nd is doin his best to ensure her happiness nd makeup for his obtuse behaviour.
NOw who will tell him that this is nothing but luv in its purest form? Both of them looked a perfect couple when she was wiping the color off his face. But the last line of naku reminded them both the truth of their relationship. All the euphoria of the UD came crashing down with this one line. Nevertheless, im upbeat that Dutta will not let her go so easily, with or without the contract. 😊
Thanx for the lovely UD Rose, will wait for the next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awesome tasha scenes yaar...
dutta's concern towards naku was chooo cute...
i loved it...looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
AW bless, she is so sweet and he is even sweeter? I ❤️LOVED the whole update..they are so cute together and nakusha bless her she is so innocent.."mien aapke upar apni taangein kaise rakh sakti hoon?.."
aw naku its too late now..😆
but i can understand her hesitation shes really a very traditional wife at heart..so the little things do matter in a big way to her.
I love the fact that she treats him like a husband in every way even though they maybe tied in a contract marriage.for nakusha..dutta is her husband. From the way she talks to him..to the way she looks after him and is concerned for his well-being Pyaar hai for sure and i think we can say the same for dutta too. Hes beginning to take to there relationship..and i don't think he is going to let her go..
The last line was amazing..nice reminder of the reality there..but for my DSP is a stubborn..ziddi character if he decides that he is not going to let go of nakusha..then she aint going anywhere!
okay..lovely update..looking forward to the next chapter.
thank you
jagruti

Edited by jagrutid - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great Update...he is so falling for her! But I am glad Naku is reminding him of the realities. I wonder what will happen after she gets pregnant; which i am sure she will.
Awesome story!

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