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resham di.......mujhe jahunnum acha lag ta hai..... NOT!!😆

I don't know what to write here.......so it's better I don't write.......it was nice.......I wonder if Anku di is gonna write and make him run away again!! 😆

dun worry ab anku is here so villian ki aise ki taise 😆 😆 😆

nice write ups nidhs n resham...ill continue 😳 😳

kumkum ws thinking ki kya kiya jaye 😕 ....she ws quite sad coz she wntd 2 go wid sumit...now she calls sumit...she luvs talking 2 hm 😳 😳 ...

bt she dosent tell hm tht she mite hv 2 go wid vishal 😭 ...they r talking abt wht 2 wear 2morrow...kumkum says shuld i wear an evening gown sotrs or sumthng else

sumit says u luk beautiful in everythng jaan 😳 😳 ...he realizes wht he sd...bt kumkum feels gud 😳 😳 ...she smiles n asks sumit jaan???

sumit says nahin woh aise hi kyunki jabse tum meri zindagi mein aayi ho mujhe meri jaan mili hai😳...meri zindagi khubsoorat ho gayi hai 😳 😳 😳 ...kumkum s just blushing😳 😳n she says sumit u r the best person i hv met till 2day in my life😳😃...n sumit is really very happy

thn kumkumz mom call her fr dinner n same ways sumitz mom also.....both say c u in 10 minz n laugh😆....both go n finish their dinner in a hurry...dono k parents r like kinda confusd bt thnk mayb tired honge😉

now both r dun n they bid gudnite 2 every1 n rush 2 there rooms....n both close their doors....n pick up there cell 2 call each othr....bt dono ka busy is cumng😉😉

kumkum thnks sumit ab dekho ill nt talk 2 u...and keeps her cell n lays on d bed n starts dreaming abt the party.....sumit takes her n thn they hv a ball dance n lots more😳....and suddenly the fone rings...she thnks sumit so says han bolo in a low voice

bt it ws vishal....he says kumkum sorry bt mujhe abhi us jaana hai n main 2-3 saalon tak hi aa paunga😆😆...maine tumhare parents se bhi baat kar li hai....abhi meri flite ka tym ho raha hai...maine pehle call karne ki koshish ki par it ws busy....byeee😃😃

and thn she s soooooooooo xcited n sooooooo happy.....n tabhi cell fir se bajta hai...any guesses kiska hai.....

n so am i xcited...ki villian gaya...yipeeeeeeee😳😃

maine villian ko kaafi tym k liye bhej diya....cmon guys write na😃

Originally posted by: resham_tam

Ankuuuuuuuuuuuuu, 😆

yaar tune toh mujhe mushkil mein daal diya... 😆

nways I have to think very hard now... 😆

Then only I will write...😉

Till then someone pls carry the story forward. 😊

Bt it seems, only me, anku, nidhi and rach r writing.,where r the rest. 😡

Aur jisne yeh topic shuru kiya woh insaan toh araam se neend ley rahi hai...😡 😆😆

First I will put her only in jahannum agar ab usne yeh nahi padha aur likhaaaaaa....😆

😆😆😆

c i hd 2 do tht coz ab unke pyaar ko toh aage barhna hai na😃

han only we 4 r writing....aur sab lagta hai ghaas chaba rahe hain😡

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

😆😆😆

c i hd 2 do tht coz ab unke pyaar ko toh aage barhna hai na😃

han only we 4 r writing....aur sab lagta hai ghaas chaba rahe hain😡

Anku ji.....I think i've found a way to bring him back......actually there are 2 ways......one is a bit dull maybe so I think i'll use that.....and well if no one minds me writing-I hope........so I'll write.....it'll be my first time writing here though.........................and I'm not taking anyone's side on bringing back vishal.......it's just fun to bring him in one scene and get him out in the other one so now it's the time to bring him back!! What I write might be dull or something so plz do comment and let me know if I shall write next time too!!

The phone was Sumit's.
Sumit: kaha thi tum…….mein itni daer se phone kar raha tha or tum ho ke utha ti he nahi.
Kum Kum: mein phone nahi tha ti ke app nahi utha the………mein itni daer se phone kar rahi thi or app ka phone busy hi busy, busy hi busy.
Sumit: to kyat um mujhe phone kar rahi thi.
Kum kum; haan obviously.
Sumit starts laughing.
Kum kum: ab waise maine koi joke to nahi sunaya to app haas kyun rahe ho.
Sumit: woh to joke se bhi kuch zada tha…….main bhi tumhe phone kar raha tha.
Kum kum: starts laughing and Sumit also and Sumit is thinking 'Hum dono ek jaise hi hai, who mujhe phone kar rahi thi or main use….or woh bhi at the same time…….kuch to zaroor hai uske or mere beech, kuch to hoga, dosti se to zaada hi hoga lekin kuch to hai'
Sumit: acha to phir tum mujhe phone kyun kar rahi thi?
Kum kum starts blushing and is hesitating to say something, she's thinking hard and says: who main….main….woh main kuch pooch na jati thi.
Sumit: kya poocha na chati thi. (kum Kum gets smart now)
Kum Kum: (very expertly casually she says) waise woh pooch ne se pehle mein pooch na chati hoon ke APP NE kyun phone kiya tha? (and smiles smartly)
Sumit is blushing and thinking what to say: who maine isi liye phone kiya tha ke mein pooch (he's talking slowly and thinking hard what to say so he's making his sentence longer so that he doesn't fumble with words) saku ke…….ke hum kaha mile ge?
Kum Kum surprised-coz she had thought of the same thing when Sumit asked her before: Main bhi yehi pooch na chati thi.
Sumit relaxes and is a bit surprised and thinks fast 'humari soch bhi ek jaisi hai' and smiles.
Sumit: to phir kaha mil na hai?
Kum Kum: mujhe nahi pata….jahan aap chate hai.
Sumit: school ke gate ke paas nahi…….chalo woh jana ek ice-cream shop hoti hai na road pe college se thori si door wahan mil te hai.

(I'm making it a bit short here)

They talked for a long time and were deciding everything….when to meet/ where to meet/etc….and hanged up finally after 2 hours.

The next day, Sumit was waiting there and kum kum also reached there on time. Sumit looked handsome and Kum kum very beautiful. They complimented each other…..and were making poems on the way to the college, dedicating to each other.

They had the party……people were dancing but kum kum and sumit didn't……a girl had come to ask sumit to dance but he rejected her, she was furious. Kum kum asked why did he didn't accept her. Sumit told her I had promised you that I wun leave you alone. Kum kum says a bit sotly agar app mere se nahi promise karte to app chale jaate. Sumit is just looking forward and kum kum is looking at him. They are standing next to each other and Sumit just shakes his head NO slowly and says slowly turning his head to kum kum tab bhi mein uske saath nahi jata. Kum Kum is happy but doesn't show. They talked and talked….they felt it was better than dancing and everything…they were the only ones who were enjoying the party the most coz they could talk to each other face to face , listen to each other for a long time and stay together for a long time too and everything.
After the party he dropped her home (when he was waiting at the ice-cream shop he had parked his car somewhere there and walked with kum kum to the college, after the party they both walked to the car……). She said good night and left the car. While closing the door behind sumit was looking into the steering wheel and said Kum Kum. Kum kum surprised turn back and said kya hua. He looks at her and then says nothing and they wave and he leaves with the car and she enters her home.

Normal days pass, they meet and talk to each other and are gradually getting to know each other and trying to get to know each others feelings and play around with each other and telling each other their feelings through indirect way. A few weeks also passed like that. Kum kum used to go to sumit's house and sumit in kum kum's house. Their families also got to know each other well.

9 weeks later. Sumit was thinking, lying on his back, on his bed that this week I'll tell her directly and fast 'I LOVE YOU'. This week or never. That's it.
Kum Kum was on her bed thinking when shall she tell him she loves him…..she've expressed her feelings through poems sometimes but she doesn't know if he got her message or not even his poems were similar to mines………..and so on she was thinking about Sumit.

In kum kum's house, a door bell rang it was before dinner time, Kum kum's mom opened the door and was so happy. And turned back and was telling her husband 'dekhiye kaun aya'who was sitting on the sofa reading a newspaper and at the same time taking the quest's arms and taking him into the living room.
Kum kum's mother says to both of them 'mein kum kum lo lati hoon'
She's so happy, she runs up to kum kum's room and tells her to come down there's a surprise waiting for her ownstairs. Her mother goes down and kum kum fixes her hair and everything(she was already ready, but because of lying on the bed her clothes just got a bit untidy) fast and goes down the stairs thinking that the surprised is somehow related to sumit. She goes down and enters the living room and is shocked to see someone.

(Hey I'm not that mean that I'll make you wait to guess who it is!! lolz)

She was shocked to see Vishal there.

Kum Kum surprised-in a bad very, very very/ extremely bad way-asks him a bit softly-coz she's just too shocked-: aap ne to kaha tha le do teen saal ke baad aao ge.
Vishal: haan lekin mere bhare bhai wahan a gaye the to jis kaam le liye mein wahan gaya tha who ab phir who samaal rahe hai….to un-hu (indicating his big(older) brother) ne kaha ke mein wapis india chala jao. To maine socha kea p saab ko kyun na surprise do.
Kum Kum's dad: haan wa-ke hi tumne bahut khush hone wala surprise diya hai.
Kum Kum is going back up to her room her mom says: beta dinner nahi karna kya, aj vishal ke sath hi karte hai. Chalo kum kum, mere saath kitchen mein thori madat karlo. Kum kum slowly walks to the kitchen and turns back to see vishal who was talking to her dad and then turns back to go to the kitchen.

Now continue plz……………..i know I wrote so long….i'm sorry if I did anything wrong…and thx and plz do comment…….I can never write shot…when I'm writing new ideas pop and so I have to find ways to get my ideas into place….i tried my best not to write much……so the last few paragraphs aren't in much detail!!

😆 😆 ab u brought the villan bak vishal 😆 i feel sryr for anku...she keeps bumping him off the script..nd u ppl r doin the opposite 😆 this is funny. next thing u noe she kills him, nd u guyz sumhow bring him bak..now that will be funny 😆 😆

well yah surely.....i juz bought him back so that someone elz can use their skills to make him go away again...n den someone elz makes him com back......itz fun like this....i didn't do it against anyone or anything i juz bought him back (for fun)!! It'd be so great if he dies and all n then someone can bring him back.......i've already got an idea how to bring him back!! no joke I really do have...I'm ready for dat alz!! but anku di plz dun give up on making the villain go.......it's fun dis way!!

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shaziya u gt hm back....dun worry am here....bt u were sooo fast..itni jaldi party khatam n 9 weeks also...dear thoda slow 😳 😳 😳 ....u wrote really well

okk now my turn...

kumkum is really sad....bt she cant do anythng...finally they hv dinner n desserts