fan fic.. get going frndz :D - Page 16

haha omg yeh story ab tak chal rahe hai 😆 😆 😆 daikhna ek din hun ekta kapoor ko peeche choor den gay 😆
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chalo il too join in but will ave to read fron the start 😳
keep up the gud work! 😆

i am waiting fo rthe next part pls make it fast

i am a new writer and wants to share my view with ull i have thought a lot and came to this idea i hope ull like it and leave ur comments and someone continue soon


kumkum asks sumit to take her to a place where there is no one they decide to go to a beach as it is late in the night . after reaching there
kk:kitna aacha lagta hai yaha raat mein
su:ha very romantic . common give me a hug
kk:sumit kya bol rahe ho
su: 😊 😊
and then they spend the night walking on the beach for long hours.. the night is perfectly romantic jus suited for both
after walking and spending long hours kk feels quite tired and can walk no longer
kk:arey sumit ab aur nahi mujhse nahi chala jata hai
su:kk aur thoda time kitna aacha lagta hai chalo icecream khate hain
kk:nahi sumit main bohat thak gayi hoon
su:
seeing his face she says k and starts walking .suddenly her leg gets hurt and she is about to fall when sumit catches her.he realises that she can walk no longer and hence carries her 😉
su:ab to dard nahi ho raha na
kk:tumhari bahoo mein mujhe kya hoga
and both forget eveything and jus spend time together
kk foregets tht her leg was hurting
suddenly they realise its to late
kk:arey bohat der ho gayi ab ghar chalna chahiye
su:arey haa aur tumhari tabiyat bhi theek nahi 😕
so they get into the car and start monving
sumit puts the romantic song baho ke darmiyan and both jus love it
sumit is lost in kk thoughts and then suddenly
kk:arey stop mera ghar aa gaya
ss:oh sorry
unwillingly he stops and she is about to move out when he catches her hand
su:mat jayo na pls 😕
kk:arey su kal milege
su:wada 😊
kk:ha baba
she goes and opens her door and is about to get in when he again calls out to her
she looks behind and is also lost in him 😆 👏
he spreds out his arms 😃 n she comes running slowly forgetting tht she is hurt and hugs him 👏 👏
suddenly she remembers tht she is standing outside her own house and moves back
kk:arey su ab jao
su:love u 😉
kk:i love u too 😛
and then both move away kk goes in her room and sees su from her room waves to him and he sits in his car and goes to wh

continued story at page no 21 new update

didnt any1 remeber this story i have written 1 update read it and tell me how is it

hey ambreen u did a fantastic job 😃 ...awesum story rite up 👏 👏

hey add me too re.. will update the story soon.. jus busy wit studeis.. great work all..... 😊 😊