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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

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Posted: 19 years ago

#71

👏 👏 👏 awsum resham..........ekdum mazaa aa gaya 😃
i also think tht more scenes of understanding shud b there 😳 thy shud nt fall in luv immediately 😳
lets c wat d othrs rite 😳

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*Resham*

@*Resham*

Stunner

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Posted: 19 years ago

#72

thnks anku and nidhi,

now lets see who writes......

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Rachandeep

@Rachu_1987

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Posted: 19 years ago

#73

arree vaaaah guys!!!!! 👏 uve alll done a fab job!!!!! ab meri vaari

Kumkum is in her room when her mum comes in
"beta i have some good news" she says
"kya baat hai Ma...aap kitni kush lag rahi hai" Kumkum replies
"neeche aao"
Her mum leaves, Kumkum is sitting there wondering what the big news could be. Her phone rings, she sees its Sumit, she is about to answer when she hears her fathers voice
"Kumkum neeche aao jaldi"
She reluctantly disconnects the call, Sumit wonders why she didnt answer
"kya voh mujhse naraaz hai....nahin main kuch kiya tho nahin" He tries again but Kumkum has left the phone in her room, upon her not answering he feels more sad.
As Kumkum reaches downstairs, she sees her parents accompanied by guests
"beta yeh Mr aur Mrs Sen hai, (points to a guy sitting down) aur yeh inka beta Vishal hai"
Kumkum looks at him........

ab someone else.....

Edited by rachandeep - 19 years ago

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

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Posted: 19 years ago

#74

tussi bhi kam nahi ho rachhuu jee............kya kamaal kar ditta hai 👏
kahaani mein twist............hero-heroine ke beech pyaar hone se pehle hi villain ...........ab dekhe ye amar prem katha kya mod leti hai 😳 😉 😆

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Rachandeep

@Rachu_1987

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Posted: 19 years ago

#75

😆 haan nidhi dhekte hai kya hota hai

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Ankita

@anku2cute

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Posted: 19 years ago

#76

kya re rach....kya kammal ka twist hai...chalo ill write a bit...

kk ws tensed whn she sees sum othr guy...her parents introduce hm 2 kumkum....n says beta tum dono andar jaakar baat kar lo 😛 ...

they go inside...sumit is very tensed abt wht hapnd....why she s nt picking up d call 😭 ....they sit n kumkum tells the guy my leg is disabled....will u still luv me...

he is shocked n rushes outside n tells hs parents n they go....her parents r 2 upset bt they dun show it 2 kk...they behave normal...its okk beta...tumhare liye raajkumar aayega

just listening 2 ths sumit flashes her mind...she rushes 2 her room...n thnks why sumit is in my thuts the whole day 😳 ....mayb coz he s my 1st frnd 😳 😳

now she sees there r abt 50 miss calls of sumit....she just calls hm hurriedly...n says sorry sumit woh mera fone kamre mein tha n main neeche gayi hui thi 😊 😊

he says thank goddddddddddd mujhe laga ki tum mujhse naraaz ho....acha batao kaisi ho tum...she says am okk bas isi cheez mein mann nahin lag raha

sumit also says mera bhi....both keep talking 2 each othr 😳 😳 😳 ....now they hang up coz its 2 late n on a note tht they wl meet 2morrow in d college

both lay down bt lostin thier thuts....they r thinking how both met n sooooo andd....

okkk now sum1 continue...maine villian ko raaste se hata diya 😆 😆

Edited by ankuhujulover - 19 years ago

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Sumra

@Shazia_haya

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: resham_tam

thnks shazia for this. Its nice to add a twist rather than making story very good good. Life is also nt an easy cake naa...😳

Well of coz life can never be easy, there are up and downs and left rights too!! I agreed you because if the story is all goodie then people can lose interest fast!! twists hold the audience!! I believe that!!

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Sumra

@Shazia_haya

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#78

Hey i didn't read the updtes before....so let me coment......the first update was good then the seceond update was good also but I wanted to tell you that when it said that her mom asked her to come down I knew it that theer must be a guy down there for her marriage.....but then anku ji made him run away!! lolz anku I find that part a bit funny but then all 3 updates were too good!!

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nitya

@preethi

Sparkler

Posted: 19 years ago

#79

everybody has writter really well 😛 .
i have a idea that sumit takes kk to one of the best docters in the world to get her leg proper.
if u all like this idea then we can go for it 😃

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#80

lolz anku.......vaise tumne villain ko hata kar bahut achha kiya 😆 😉 😛
atleast yahan par to su-kk ki kahaani mein koi villain nahi hona chahiye 😳 😛

[quote=preethi]everybody has writter really well 😛 .
i have a idea that sumit takes kk to one of the best docters in the world to get her leg proper.
if u all like this idea then we can go for it 😃 [/quote]

thnks preethi 😊 ........u also join in na 😳
vaise i lyk ur idea of su takin kk 2 d bst doctors 😳 , but i thnk abhi iske liye thoda jaldi ho jaayega 😳 abhi unka pyaar to shuru hone do 😳

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