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Originally posted by: ssktlk

Wow Shirley, this is so typical of MB that you have written. Hadn't thought it to turn out like this.Wish it was an EMA, but u have knocked sense into Nidhi and me as well. Rationality demands this. Nidhi can't let go and wants some memories. Wonder what kind 😉 . Thanks for your rapid updates, makes reading a lot more fun and connects well.

Originally posted by: sshirley

Mithee thank u for the replies n comments..

sorry will reply later

I am really touched that you have EST n IST both in ur phone, just for me.

Originally posted by: sshirley

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I completely agree Mithee, she is a gem of a person. I m so fortunate to have her as .. (Friend nahi bol sakti, she is more than that)

And sorry Mithee, could not reply to ur comments earlier.

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Hi Shirley.. It took me a while to write the review..the thoughts of 3 chapters were crossing one another..so had to figure out what goes where..I am going chapter wise here..

Oh that's okay. I am sorry for the delay

Chapter 1

The beginning was nice..you showed progression in the story..

Thanks

That is exactly where they stand 5 years from now..both professionally and personally..Ashu as always is at his peak...whereas Nidhi has managed to chart up her career graph..no doubt that she had the potential..but she has utilized now..and stands where she is..

hmm

On the personal front also, she seems a content lady..with a loving family, i.e., her inlaws, a caring husband whose her best friend.. she has the commitment of a lifetime..anyone would vouch for..an excellent lifepartner that is who respects and cares for her..most importantly understands her..

Hmm.. right again

What I could infer was..she may not have had a successful lovestory, which she had dreamt day and night of..but she was blessed by marital bliss..which is indeed very pure and special.

Of course!

Ashu, is the same person..the only difference being that his love for her is reflected in his soul...which he managed to guard well earlier.. His feelings are still the same..but alas the time has changed..circumstances have changed and most importantly the relations have changed.

Well understood again.

Ashu and Nidhi's meeting is unprecedented and unforeseen by both..but it comes and takes them back to the past..where the memories are so raw and fresh..its as if time hasn't passed ..

That's what happens when wounds are unhealed, isn't it? A touch and they start bleeding again.

Nidhi's anger, the hurt in her eyes is well projected as it wasn't over until it was dealt with..and that was the "d" day..

Thanks! I am glad you think I could project it well.

Chapter 2

Initially I thought that the pendrive might have some kind of proof or something to do with her professionalism..but no I was wrong here..infact those pics of Ashu and the revelation that followed..was what it turned out to be..

Which indicates that the meeting i am presuming as unprecedented was all planned..and it has been going on for 5 long years..I could understand it if she wasn't married..she might be wanting to keep herself near her love..giving it all a chance..a fair chance..

Ok, fine I am not gonna try to explain it yet again. Writing is in my hands, and how readers interpret is in their hands.

but here she's commited herself to a relationship..that was out of her will..even if that wasn't..I just couldn't relate to her taking this step. Instead I feel she should have given Rohan a chance which she didn't get herself..

There you go again.. And I am just writing a story with my full responsibility. But, I am not looking to change anyone's thoughts here. In fact, this is one and perhaps the only story on IF that has my full conviction.

Her love being nipped in the bud was painful..yes it did shatter her dreams..and the show down..that followed was ok..outburst is needed..to get over things..

Hmm

I thought after this her heart which was overpowered by his love and unfulfilled love would actually be at peace..be calm..giving her a chance to procees with her married life..but i guess that didnt happen.

Human feelings or rather what we call heart, are a very strange things, aint they? We say 'we ought to feel' X, but in reality 'we actually feel' Y.

Chapter 3

Now I'll be very frank with this one here..Its not about you..its just that I wasn't convinced with how you show it..

OK. Even I will be frank, I knew right from the beginning that not many people would understand this. And I am NOT trying to say my understanding is any better than others. In fact, I am well aware that mujhse kahin zyaada samajhdaar aur akalmand log hain is forum me. And as I said, I am not looking to change anyone's thinking here.

Nidhi wanting to break her marriage is a big step indeed..if she so wanted Ashu only..why Didn't she just go upto him and confess her feelings for him atleast once..that would have been fair for everyone here..Whatever be the outcome then..but she had to take the call then and be ready to face it..

Yes it sure is a big step..

But you tell me something.. don't we go off balance momentarily, when we find out something? She has just found out that Ashu too loved her.. she is going off-balance.

And true, she did attend all his public appearances, but I really feel that you are all reading too much into it.

Obsession toh tab hota, when she would have given him blank calls just to hear his voice, or tried to touch him inconspicuously in crowded public places, or may be gone to his house in disguise.

Waise toh there is a lot more I can say here, but rehne do.. people will misconceive whatever I say here.

We have families involved here..the family which has loved her and cared for her..accepted her as a part of their family..trusted her..placed their confidence in her..will it be right to break relations just to make another?? Taking this step now..will it be fair to all..I don't think so..

I know and agree that she is being unfair to Rohan and his parents. and I never justified that aspect at all. I am saying IT CAN HAPPEN - this situation can happen.

As far as Ashu's marriage is concerned..i dnt know the backstory..but whatever it is..Nidhi doesn't have a Right to question it..does she?? He never made any promises to he not even once..So how can she say tht 12 saal 12 second se jeet gaye..Ashu didnt give her any hope then nor did he give her now..its she who isn't accepting the truth..

Yaar that 12 saal vs. 12 second muttered by Nidhi was just a reaction.. knowing abt AshMal mrg., she instantly remembered how Mallika used to taunt her - bas itni si baat thi...

I wasn't able to connect with Nidhi here..maybe my beliefs are different..but i just cant identify with her..neither her following him everywhere after being married to another person..nor this..she decided to dissolve her marriage in a split second..it isn't some kind of game going on here na..

I know I know.. a lot of u cant connect with Nidhi, and believe me its okay... I had expected this so its no surprise to me! As you right say, it is the way you look at things.

And its not about being married..its about being committed to someone..for someone..which you have shown in the beginning itself that she very much was..

I wont debate that Deepali

This is purely my point of view..you may have something else in mind..but this surely doesn't seem right to me..

Thank you Deepali for putting across your pov so succinctly. I will let my story speak for itself.

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

Haaye Ram!!!!! This chapter another roller coaster ride...

Oh yes this entire OS is an emotional roller-coaster, esp. for Nidhi.

I am like this 🤪 And sirf ye lines yaad aa rahe hain...

'Na main bewafaa, Na usne ki bewafaai...
Hamare beech aa gayi Rabba bas teri Khudaai!!!'😭