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Shirley when do we get the next part?

Hi Shirley.. It took me a while to write the review..the thoughts of 3 chapters were crossing one another..so had to figure out what goes where..I am going chapter wise here..

Chapter 1

The beginning was nice..you showed progression in the story..

That is exactly where they stand 5 years from now..both professionally and personally..Ashu as always is at his peak...whereas Nidhi has managed to chart up her career graph..no doubt that she had the potential..but she has utilized now..and stands where she is..

On the personal front also, she seems a content lady..with a loving family, i.e., her inlaws, a caring husband whose her best friend.. she has the commitment of a lifetime..anyone would vouch for..an excellent lifepartner that is who respects and cares for her..most importantly understands her..

What I could infer was..she may not have had a successful lovestory, which she had dreamt day and night of..but she was blessed by marital bliss..which is indeed very pure and special.

Ashu, is the same person..the only difference being that his love for her is reflected in his soul...which he managed to guard well earlier.. His feelings are still the same..but alas the time has changed..circumstances have changed and most importantly the relations have changed.

Ashu and Nidhi's meeting is unprecedented and unforeseen by both..but it comes and takes them back to the past..where the memories are so raw and fresh..its as if time hasn't passed ..

Nidhi's anger, the hurt in her eyes is well projected as it wasn't over until it was dealt with..and that was the "d" day..

Chapter 2

Initially I thought that the pendrive might have some kind of proof or something to do with her professionalism..but no I was wrong here..infact those pics of Ashu and the revelation that followed..was what it turned out to be..

Which indicates that the meeting i am presuming as unprecedented was all planned..and it has been going on for 5 long years..I could understand it if she wasn't married..she might be wanting to keep herself near her love..giving it all a chance..a fair chance..

but here she's commited herself to a relationship..that was out of her will..even if that wasn't..I just couldn't relate to her taking this step. Instead I feel she should have given Rohan a chance which she didn't get herself..

Her love being nipped in the bud was painful..yes it did shatter her dreams..and the show down..that followed was ok..outburst is needed..to get over things..

I thought after this her heart which was overpowered by his love and unfulfilled love would actually be at peace..be calm..giving her a chance to procees with her married life..but i guess that didnt happen.

Chapter 3

Now I'll be very frank with this one here..Its not about you..its just that I wasn't convinced with how you show it..

Nidhi wanting to break her marriage is a big step indeed..if she so wanted Ashu only..why Didn't she just go upto him and confess her feelings for him atleast once..that would have been fair for everyone here..Whatever be the outcome then..but she had to take the call then and be ready to face it..

We have families involved here..the family which has loved her and cared for her..accepted her as a part of their family..trusted her..placed their confidence in her..will it be right to break relations just to make another?? Taking this step now..will it be fair to all..I don't think so..

As far as Ashu's marriage is concerned..i dnt know the backstory..but whatever it is..Nidhi doesn't have a Right to question it..does she?? He never made any promises to he not even once..So how can she say tht 12 saal 12 second se jeet gaye..Ashu didnt give her any hope then nor did he give her now..its she who isn't accepting the truth..

I wasn't able to connect with Nidhi here..maybe my beliefs are different..but i just cant identify with her..neither her following him everywhere after being married to another person..nor this..she decided to dissolve her marriage in a split second..it isn't some kind of game going on here na..

And its not about being married..its about being committed to someone..for someone..which you have shown in the beginning itself that she very much was..

This is purely my point of view..you may have something else in mind..but this surely doesn't seem right to me..

Dr. Babs.. I donno when I will be giving the next update?

Hi Deepa

Originally posted by Pardeshi.Mithu

Mithee, Agar aap ko padhke chakkar aa rahe hain,
toh socho, mera likhte waqt mera kya haal hota
hoga..
Jokes apart, this is the most challenging writing I
have done in fiction. I am enjoying every bit of it
and writing each word with complete conviction.

Pata chal raha hain! that is what I was saying Deepali ji ki iss baar kuch toh alag hain Frankly speaking main aapke FF padti aur bhaag jaati thi 😛 review deti hee nahi thi 😆 par iss baar raha nahi jaara bina iss thread main aaye 😳




Wat suffocation u talking about here Mithee? If
you are referring to NiHan marital life, there is no
suffocation at all. It's more like a lack of love -
that X factor is missing. But Mithee I ask you, kya
ye zaroori hai ke har shaadi ka base love ho?
sometimes, friendship is a good base too, many
times it is a better base than love.
Iske aage bhi bahut kuch likhna chahti hoon, but
that would give away my story,, plus you are way
too smart.. you will understand by reading between
the lines.

Hmmm...yes u r right dosti bhi base ho sakti hain...agree


@bold - Oh Mithee, thank you so so much.. I can't
even tell you how good that statement felt. I feel
like giving u a big big hug

🤗


U are right, jab aisa kuch hota hai jaisa ke is
situation me hua, toh we start misinterpreting the
happenings acc. to wat we want. we conveniently
settle everything in our own minds without knowing
or realizing the feasibility n the reality around us.
Chalo, chand log toh hai who are actually
understanding Nidhi here instead of judging her
with very narrow ideas of right n wrong...
I am wondering, hum sab itne righteous kab se ho
gaye. But then I guess I should not forget that we
are the same people who applaud the fact that
Sita ne agni pariksha di thi, while no one asked Ram
to do that...

Exactly! u know lajja movie main v had one scene usme Ramayan ka naatak ho raha tha, and that point comes where Sita is supposed to give agni pariksha...tab Madhuru playing the role as Sita tells main kyu doon Agni pariksha! Shurpanaaka ki naak kaati Lakshman ne aur kyuki Raavan ko badla lena tha toh usne bhi apni mardaangi ek aurat par dikhaayi...
Asli vanwaas toh maine kaata tha jo uss neech Raavan ke mehal main thi, akeli...par uski chaaya tak mujhpe na padne di...Swami aap toh poori vaanar sena ke saath the par waha main akeli thi...kis baat ki agni pariksha doon main! Agar aap ko mujhse prem hain toh aap dijiye pariksha!

Main ye sab kyu boli pata nahi par felt it like sharing...


And as of Nidhi uska Ashu ko hug karna mujhe galat nahi laga...It was a genuine reaction for me...haan agar vo room main rehkar Coogli Woogli woosh karye toh main iss thread se bhaag jaati...and thinking about starting a new life with Ashutosh main bhi wahi karti




Exactly you got it ryt.. yehi haalat hai dono ki..
@Bold - THANK YOU SO MUCH MITHEE. I take a
deep bow..
😃



And aap ke marital status ke baare me kaafi
confusion sa hai.. kabhi kunwaari, kabhi married to
mr, khan
🤣 Sach main !🤣


Chalo thanks for the update and it was ekdum
paisa vasool
You are most welcome Mithee. And paisa? Kitna
kharcha kiya ji is update pe?

Pata nahi mere phone kaa kitna net pack use hua aur kitne paise hue 🤣

Originally posted by: sshirley

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<div>well Deeps, aap creditse bach nahi sakti.. u have to share it

Yup! maine pehle hee kaha tha at the starting of this OS ki jaisa bhi hoga sab Aap par daal dungi Deepali ji... Aur taarif toh banti hain boss 😳 Aur lelo main jaldi aur muft main kisi ki taarif nahi karti...Haan! Aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge 😆

Originally posted by: sshirley

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<div>@Bold - haan mithee ye baat to sahi hai, but ye bhi sach hai ki each word I wrote was becoz I had an excellent sounding board cum concept developing partner in Deeps..

👏...👏...👏... Mujhe pata hain!... main kya jaanti nahi inhe 😉 Vaise bhi ek itna bada karz hain mere upar inka ki kya bolu... She actually made my life by that gesture of hers!!!! 🤗 I was on the verge of crying par inhone vo pal itni badi khushi main badal diya!!!! 😳

Waiting for the next update...chalo going to dhush now... bye... u know what aapke waha kya time ho raha hain aur aap kitne baje sote ho uspar nazar rakhne ke liye, maine apne phone main India aur aapka time laga ke rakha hain... everytime I see you online main ye dekhti hoon waha kitne baj rahe hongey!!! 🤣 Main naa paagal hoon shaayad thodi! 🤣

Mithee thank u for the replies n comments..

Originally posted by: sshirley

Dr. Babs.. I donno when I will be giving the next update?

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Hi Deepa

Deepali - thanks for review. will reply my late tonight

How is the cold up there??

Originally posted by: deepa17

How is the cold up there??