Drabble SS: A new Beginning CHAP-4(LAST PART) PG:26 Post:4 28/04/2017

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Now this was lovely
Yeh hoti hai determination
Apne pyaar aur rishte ko bachane keliye kuch bhi karne ka determination
Very well written
Update soon dear

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Binzzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Areh wahhh...what a great start of beautiful day with ur story...

Beautiful chapter aappi...

Loved it so muchh...

Dev humiliated but he was adamant to seek forgiveness from bijoy...n finally succeeded...they r in talking terms...

Waiting to know how is he going ask forgiveness to sona...

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AnanyaGhosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Mujhe pm nhi mila di.. And that onion wala id is my buddy list..

And beautiful chap... Wished it went on a bit long bt its okay... Progress is very good... Dev trying for forgiveness and eventually evrrything falling in place... Lets see aab sona ko kaise manata hai..

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Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Wow kash aisa show me bhi hota
Dev being stubborn and finally he apologised and bijoy ne violently react nahi kiya now it's time to woo his wife

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sumana.shesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Beautiful update :)

Superb :)

Loved it :)

Update soon :)

Thanks for the PM :)

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Loved it !!
Loved it !!
Loved it !!

Please update the next part soon ...eagerly waiting ...

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
how much i wud have loved this happenning in d show ..
amazing update aazeen
lets c how he woos sona ...
waoting for it
update soon
thanka for pm

Jo hona hi nahi hai, uski kya wishful thinking...

Thank you di...

@ bold... Like you don't know😆

next update jald hi likhne ki koshish karungi...

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
hamari wishful thinking poori ho gayi n hame update mil hi gayi

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
What a good morning wish my dear!
I never knew that you have posted the first two chapters before.
Read all three together and loved it.
Beautifully written.
If this happened in the serial it would have ended like all our Doordarshan serials of 26 or 52 episodes maximum.

You didn't know about the last two updates because I wasn't pming...

Thank you very much!

As to Indian shows getting crisp and to the point, well, I don't know if those days can be back or not... Where each show becomes iconic and not mundane and has a specific story to tell...

But thank you for the compliment anyway...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
Now this was lovely
Yeh hoti hai determination
Apne pyaar aur rishte ko bachane keliye kuch bhi karne ka determination
Very well written
Update soon dear

I wished for this determination in Dev...

We got a glimpse of that determination when dev came to BH for soha...

Well I am glad u liked it...

Thank you...