Drabble SS: A new Beginning CHAP-4(LAST PART) PG:26 Post:4 28/04/2017

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Hey Guys!
This story was requested in a form of OS from our dear Ginny Di, aka Sharica di...
When elaborated, this OS became very lengthy, and I wasn't able to write such a long work...
So finally I decided that I will break this story in a few parts... two or may be three parts...
That way you guys will get little bit to read, and I can write whenever I can...
I hope this way it is a situation that benefits all...
I hope u guys will still love me like before...
Index in this Post...
Chapter one in the next post, coming soon...😃
Love you all
Aazeen

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CHAPTER-1

"Get out!!!" Dev spoke in a fit of his anger...

After asking various times to her husband, finally Sonakshi walked out from that place, when her husband wasn't responding, instead his family stood humiliating her...

She walked steps towards the threshold of this house, where she had been welcomed as a new bride... Remembering her older times into this house, she took heavy steps towards the exit...

Trying to numb herself from all those throbbing emotions, she closed her eyes to ward off those memories, opening them to close yet again... She was blacking out...

Dev who had kept looking at his wife walking so readily out of his house, when he didn't affirm the words he had once uttered in a heated moment... Her back was making framed memories in his head as he kept looking at her... Suddenly, he wanted to stop her before she really leaves... He rushed behind her, to stop her... A few steps towards the threshold had he scurried, just to hold her arm or shoulder to stop her, when she landed straight in his saving arms...FAINTED!!!

"Sonakshi... Sonakshi???" he had picked her up in his arms and lay her on the couch on which his mother sat a few moments ago... Life was draining out of him seeing her this way, and she isn't even responding... Dev felt, he couldn't breathe seeing her unconscious.

xx--xx

"Congratulations Mr. Dixit! Dr. Sonakshi is pregnant... But please take care of the fact, that do not cause her any stress or reasons of unhappiness, considering how difficult as well miraculous her conceiving the baby is..." the doctor informed Dev as she finished reading Sonakshi's reports... Dev had rushed her to the hospital as soon as she had fainted, he couldn't wait for a doctor to arrive at his home...

Dev stood taken aback as soon as her heard the news... Just yesterday did he make love to her in Shimla... This can't be the result of the previous night... Sonakshi was pregnant well before that, and they had no idea... He stood like a statue, while his family hugged and congratulated him... While the Boses stood with mixed emotions... Asha though tried smiling to him... It is a big occasion for every parent... So, must be for Dev as well...

Dev smiled back at his mother in law, and then looked at the doctor- "When can I meet her?"

"She is conscious, a little weakness because of a new pregnancy... Otherwise she is fine, you can meet her... We will prepare the discharge papers and then you can take her home" the doctor informed.

"Sure Doctor!" Dev gave a wide smile...

"Just make sure of her stress level... Mr. Dixit, she is at a very crucial stage... It can be a threat to her life as well of the baby, if not taken care..." the doctor warned again...

Though Dev's eyes held worry, he smiled yet again... His chest broadening up with resolve... He will take the best care he can give to Sona... Not just the baby, her happiness and wellbeing counts to the most priority here...

Sonakshi opened her lethargic eyes when she realized someone is around her, to find Dev and Asha standing on the either side of her bed... Dev gave a huge smile at her... His eyes looked watery, yet they held such happiness... Sonakshi smiled back at him...

She looked at her mother when she caressed Sonakshi's hair... Asha smiled at her daughter- "I am so happy for you Shona... Pregnancy counts to be one of the most blissful moments of a woman's life... Welcome to the Mother's Brigade!" Asha gave her daughter a watery chuckle...

Sonakshi's eyes widened up listening to her mother's words... She was pregnant? That is why she felt such light headed? That is why she fainted? She looked up to Dev all surprised... It was like a dream come true!

Just then, she felt her head echoing with Dev's words a few hours ago at his home...

"Mujhe tumse shaadi karni hi nahi chahiye thi!"

"Tumse pyaar karna meri sabse badi galti thi..."

"Get out!"

Dev's words were resounding in her ears...

"Maa, mujhe ghar jaana hai..." Sonakshi spoke with a poker face.

Dev came happily forward to hug her, and take her home with him...

Sonakshi's hand in between them had made hindrance to the hug he intended... She wasn't smiling anymore...

"Maa, main aapke saath aapke aur Baba ke ghar chaloongi... Dev, main aapke saath aapki maa ke ghar nahi jaaungi... Aap mujhe apne ghar se nikaal chuke hain..." Sonakshi barked her verdict, trying to get down the bed and walked with her mother, out of the hospital room, leaving a shocked Dev behind. Who could hardly move from his spot.

--THANKS FOR READING--

Edited by Aazeen02 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting...

Finally , I am glad you took it this way ...I liked the fact , she wanted to be with her mom ...beautifully written and lovely start...I loved the way sonakshi took the decision of staying with her mom and made it very clear that he had kicked her out of his house...

Please update the next chapter soon...eagerly waiting for the next update...and please have a looong one too 😳
Edited by WeRockTheWorld - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am sorry... It is too small for my own standards too...
But I guess with all the busyness I am facing, it is better to post something, rather than nothing...
20 days I didn't write anything...
It's unfair...
so writing even three pages per update is okay instead of writing nothing.
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No pms guys...
I am already facing a lot of network issues...
It would be pleasing if u guys can inform urself and friends...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written Aazeen...👍🏼 loved it...
It came out to be more beautiful than I thought...

Thanks for taking out time dear for penning this down...

Will wait for next update...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharica

Beautifully written Aazeen...👍🏼 loved it...

It came out to be more beautiful than I thought...

Thanks for taking out time dear for penning this down...

Will wait for next update...

Thank u Ginny di...
Will bring out more...
I think right now I wasn't in a condition to write more...
Update might come sooner...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice chapter...
Nicely written...
Will b waiting for ur next chapter
Update soon 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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He let her go? Just like that? 😲 Please update soon. ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rhy2015

Very nice chapter...
Nicely written...
Will b waiting for ur next chapter
Update soon 😛

Thank u di...😃

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