Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 50

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Rasikaa my fav🤗 I love you!! You're always there to read and comment and encourage even my lamest post and you have no idea how happy that makes me.

I'm so happy to know you liked the last part. Since it was the last one, the expectations were running high and I was afraid to disappoint. I'm overwhelmed to see the response.

I'm glad to know you could connect with the little details I tried to incorporate, in Ish's behaviour and Dev's as well.

Thank you will not be enough to tell u how much your support means to me, so take a hug instead 🤗

What a beautiful ending - Life comes to a full circle with added maturity, belief, realisation, faith, trust and acceptance - cementing that bond of love forever!

The way you have brought about shortcomings (imperfections) in each of them, making them realise, accept and seek forgiveness - either through reflective perceptions or making analogies of past and current events(in their mind) -so seamless and amazingly insightful - something one can only expect from professional writers- I do hope someday you will give this a chance

The last part very much brought out in open what each of them was bottling within over a long period - Sona's accident very much took the lid off from their panted emotions! Each of them under that roof were living with their own version of guilt transcending the boundary of time, slowly but surely recognising the pain, brought about by their selfish act -unintentional, perhaps but avoidable in the relationships where communication should and must have been one of the main pillar!!

I think Arch mentioned this in her review but I will like to reiterate, that you have amazing knack of depicting a scene, sometimes you don't need words to convey a feeling-it is so difficult to bring this about when writing a story - it gets easier when it's getting translated in a visual media be it stage or tv or movie - but the way you have managed this throughout the story deserves a big standing ovation-hats off to you, my favourite from this chapter is

"She cried then, but not for herself. Not even for their baby. She cried for him, for what he had been denied. He didn't get a chance to feel a father's love neither did he get the blessing of being a father."

This is where she finally acknowledged, his pain, his sufferings, her guilt, her unfairness - making him pay for each and every rebuke of his mother without giving him chance to rectify, expecting him to be aware of her side of story- cry of anguish, washing away year's worth of misgivings, uncertainties, issues and complains! Beautifully done Malvika!

I am sorry for the delayed response - I have had a crazy day workwise and of course I will love to read epilogue and next story as well -please don't keep us waiting for too long!!🤗🤗

Originally posted by: enchanted23

What a beautiful ending - Life comes to a full circle with added maturity, belief, realisation, faith, trust and acceptance - cementing that bond of love forever!

The way you have brought about shortcomings (imperfections) in each of them, making them realise, accept and seek forgiveness - either through reflective perceptions or making analogies of past and current events(in their mind) -so seamless and amazingly insightful - something one can only expect from professional writers- I do hope someday you will give this a chance

The last part very much brought out in open what each of them was bottling within over a long period - Sona's accident very much took the lid off from their panted emotions! Each of them under that roof were living with their own version of guilt transcending the boundary of time, slowly but surely recognising the pain, brought about by their selfish act -unintentional, perhaps but avoidable in the relationships where communication should and must have been one of the main pillar!!

I think Arch mentioned this in her review but I will like to reiterate, that you have amazing knack of depicting a scene, sometimes you don't need words to convey a feeling-it is so difficult to bring this about when writing a story - it gets easier when it's getting translated in a visual media be it stage or tv or movie - but the way you have managed this throughout the story deserves a big standing ovation-hats off to you, my favourite from this chapter is

"She cried then, but not for herself. Not even for their baby. She cried for him, for what he had been denied. He didn't get a chance to feel a father's love neither did he get the blessing of being a father."

This is where she finally acknowledged, his pain, his sufferings, her guilt, her unfairness - making him pay for each and every rebuke of his mother without giving him chance to rectify, expecting him to be aware of her side of story- cry of anguish, washing away year's worth of misgivings, uncertainties, issues and complains! Beautifully done Malvika!

I am sorry for the delayed response - I have had a crazy day workwise and of course I will love to read epilogue and next story as well -please don't keep us waiting for too long!!🤗🤗

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

Malvika! This is one of those MINDBLOWING stories! How beautiful can it get? This is nothing short of perfection. Characters so real, so human, so flawed and so gorgeous!

Thank you so much for this! Loved it to the core. Please write an epilogue!!!

Originally posted by: ssimmy

So sad this story is over, but you really saved the best for last! 👏 Loved every bit of Sona's conversation with Dev.

Please please give us an epilogue, I'll love you forever ❤️