Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 36

Originally posted by: ARCH21

You have pulled me in (along with many others, I know :) ) and that's what any writer hopes for. This is a lot of effort and time investment but you have a natural flair...
Ok! Drama ahead ha ;) ... Waiting to see how you handle this. Now seems the crux of the story and am expecting intense, pain & strength...
You increase my expectations with every update 😃

The sweeter parts are appetiser but the core defines a story...

Ok! That's pressure enuf 😃 but as Dev said once, 'I trust you' ... 🤗

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Tell me about it!! I'm super nervous now.. I hope I don't disappoint.

You're right. It does take up a lot of time. More than I had previously estimated. But it's all worth it when I get to read all the wonderful comments such as yours :)

I will try my best to do justice to your expectations. Forgive me if I falter :)

Big Hug to you!!

Originally posted by: ARCH21

🤗 🤗 Totally Trust the next update will be fab!
AND I will be waiting patiently ... 😃

Malvika - take a bow gal-this is absolute gem! 👏The way you word your sentences contrasting their thoughts and yet the flow is never slackened - I am in complete awe!😳

After the big heartbreaking revelation in the end-something he was dreading every waking moment, guilt ridden and fearful to the extent of snubbing his natural instincts I am very much intrigued to find out the reason of their loss😲

She is very much aware of the missing puzzle pieces but those can wait - she needs to find her footing first- in this amazing giddy and misty bubble that surrounds her!...but alas the past comes scurrying and the bubble bursts - hope it doesn't bring those floods that have been carefully waded through opening the wounds that might not have healed fully!!

Brilliant piece of writing - Looking forward to next!❤️

-Aditi

Originally posted by: Jade0001

I'm already waiting for next update

Now it's not Shaun's fault but the writer got me heavily addicted 😆

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Malvika - take a bow gal-this is absolute gem! 👏The way you word your sentences contrasting their thoughts and yet the flow is never slackened - I am in complete awe!😳

After the big heartbreaking revelation in the end-something he was dreading every waking moment, guilt ridden and fearful to the extent of snubbing his natural instincts I am very much intrigued to find out the reason of their loss😲

She is very much aware of the missing puzzle pieces but those can wait - she needs to find her footing first- in this amazing giddy and misty bubble that surrounds her!...but alas the past comes scurrying and the bubble bursts - hope it doesn't bring those floods that have been carefully waded through opening the wounds that might not have healed fully!!

Brilliant piece of writing - Looking forward to next!❤️

-Aditi

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Beautifully written...and I like way you bring in those past events ..Please update soon ...eager to know how they lost the baby ...does this have something to do with his mom?...you care too good in creating that curiosity...a well defined plot !!

Waiting ...waiting ...waiting...pls write soon