Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

coolmeet

@coolmeet

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#371

engaging chapter... awesome write up :)
i cant believe Sona want dev to get hurt as she...
thanks for PM
continue sooon
waiting..:))

Quote

Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: Khusharni
Wait. WHAT?! Why didn't he tell her??!!! And why's he so angry?! And how are they going to fix all these problems?! No. Don't tell me it's a sad ending, I'll honestly cry so much. Gahhhbjhgrfbhhjkjj.
DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING. (Btw, amazing chapter!)

Ok ok. Lambi saans?😆 first things first, it's not a sad ending. They are fighting and yelling at each other to let the frustration out. Sonakshi is feeling hurt,betrayed and many other things whereas Dev is kindof relieved that it's finally out in the open, and he's quickly getting tired of Sonakshi behaving as if she's the only one who lost the baby. It was his child too. Hope this clears a few things out. We'll get more on this in the upcoming chapter :)

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: coolmeet
engaging chapter... awesome write up :)
i cant believe Sona want dev to get hurt as she...
thanks for PM
continue sooon
waiting..:))

Thank you😊

Sona is just really mad at Dev right now, so she yells. Things will calm down and they both will figure out where to go from here in the upcoming chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Quote

anagha90ktym

@anagha90ktym

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#374

Beautifully written. Waiting for the next update to know more about how they lost their baby. Is it because of Ishwari?

Quote

rasika_DS

@rasika_DS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#375

Ohho Sonakshi..try to understand Dev a bit..it was his child too..but her behavior was expected..he lied to her and he didn't even want to tell her about this ever..she deserved to know this truth..but she thinks he lied as he is tired of a wife crying over a dead baby..this was so insensitive Sona..
Malvika this story is reaching its end?? for sure they will figure out things and hope Sona forgives him..:) What was the reason of the miscarriage?? Uff..plz give us the next part soon..:) Fabulous piece of writing as usual..:)

Quote

ARCH21

@ARCH21

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#376

The pain of first loss, an enormous loss at that, and the instant, anger on the one person you love the most! Most natural response and while he was protecting her from feeling the pain again, he knew this was coming...

But what I loved most is how visual the entire picturization is... You can see him yank open the door and lose previous time.
Asha's eyes moving towards the door as baba entered.
Asha divided a look between her Daughter and Husband.
She stopped suddenly and the car went ahead a few steps.
And my Favourite - the sky broke then...

Loved the attention to detail. It makes everything come alive.
Easy to write a story with a focus on characters, their characterization, emotions, words & action but to build the entire screenplay is to involve the reader...
Loved it.

PS: have you seen Sultan yet? 😊

Quote

Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: anagha90ktym
Beautifully written. Waiting for the next update to know more about how they lost their baby. Is it because of Ishwari?

Thank you so much😃 Glad you liked it :) I can't reveal much but can tell you this, Ishwari is not a villain in this story, circumstances are😊

Quote

Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: rasika_DS
Ohho Sonakshi..try to understand Dev a bit..it was his child too..but her behavior was expected..he lied to her and he didn't even want to tell her about this ever..she deserved to know this truth..but she thinks he lied as he is tired of a wife crying over a dead baby..this was so insensitive Sona..
Malvika this story is reaching its end?? for sure they will figure out things and hope Sona forgives him..:) What was the reason of the miscarriage?? Uff..plz give us the next part soon..:) Fabulous piece of writing as usual..:)

Thank you so much rasika😃 beautifully analyzed. Both of them are hurting. Sonakshi is justified in her behaviour as she is feeling betrayed and she takes it out on him. Whereas Dev is helpless, on whom should he take out his frustration.. so he also yells at the person he's closest to, i.e her.

Things will calm down and they will figure things out.. together.

Will try to update soon :)

Quote

Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: ARCH21
The pain of first loss, an enormous loss at that, and the instant, anger on the one person you love the most! Most natural response and while he was protecting her from feeling the pain again, he knew this was coming...

But what I loved most is how visual the entire picturization is... You can see him yank open the door and lose previous time.
Asha's eyes moving towards the door as baba entered.
Asha divided a look between her Daughter and Husband.
She stopped suddenly and the car went ahead a few steps.
And my Favourite - the sky broke then...

Loved the attention to detail. It makes everything come alive.
Easy to write a story with a focus on characters, their characterization, emotions, words & action but to build the entire screenplay is to involve the reader...
Loved it.

PS: have you seen Sultan yet? 😊

Thank you so much Arch, you're the best😃 I'm glad you liked the style of writing. I try my best to make it as visual as possible without getting overbearing.

P.S : Yes!! I did, and the entire time I was thinking about your brilliant analysis of Anushka's character. It just made the experience of watching the movie that much more enriching.

Her pain of losing her baby, blaming salman, feeling helpless in her love for her baby and her husband alike. It also affected the way I wrote this story, as Sonakshi is dealing with a similar pain. The only difference is Anushka held salman responsible for the death of her baby.In my story, Dev is not at fault. Sonakshi is hurt and betrayed that he lied. But is it all 'only' Dev's fault? We'll soon find out :)